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Fringepaw (Lo) - CBA
File:Fringepaw.loner.png I don't... know how I feel about this. All colors are from the other image I did. Her description got swapped, so this is the main one now. —Jayce(03:46, 12/05/2018)
Can you define the shading on the white? Primarily the face, haunch and shoulder. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (03:51, 12/05/2018)
It's a bit hard to tell with the shading you got here, but if not, there should be some white on the chest. I also think the front paw furthest from us should be predominantly white, and there should be white above the paw on the front limb closest to us. And, idk, try fiddling around with more white patches and splatters? Maybe that'll make it match better. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:59, December 5, 2018 (UTC)
Echo, where you're asking me to define the shading on the white (the haunch and shoulder specifically), there isn't going to be any due to the source I'm using (I use this one on almost all of my loner images), but I can try on the face. I'll reupload in a little bit. The fact I forgot how I made the apprentice image isn't helping any. —Jayce(04:15, 12/05/2018)
Re-uploaded. Hmm. Slightly less crappy. —Jayce(04:20, 12/05/2018)
That eye makes her look surprised, lol. I still can't see the facial shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:30, December 5, 2018 (UTC)
Because most of the shading for this image in particular is on the top of the head, which is where the pattern is. I can't really just swap the head shading without ruining the source (and thus getting told to change it again). —Jayce(04:32, 12/05/2018)
It looks better now to me, at least on my phone, whereas on my PC the white seemed super stark to the rest of the body. I might have been nitpicky there, sorry! It looks good now. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (04:34, 12/05/2018)
On the apprentice image, the white on the tail tip seems to be a little bit more extended, if that's the right word. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 17:45, 12/05/2018 ) 17:45, December 5, 2018 (UTC)
I'm not sure what you mean? They're about the same length...? I have a layer with the colors before I smudge and add white flecks, and they're about the same on both images. Unless I'm totally missing what you're saying here...? —Jayce(18:00, 12/05/2018)
On the apprentice image, the white seems to reach to almost the midpoint of the tail. Not quite, but close. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 18:19, 12/05/2018 ) 18:19, December 5, 2018 (UTC)
Actually, no, it doesn't. This is what the colors look like before I smudge and add flecks. It just happens to be that there are a bit more flecks/whiter areas on that image than this one. I'll see what I can do after I get back. —Jayce(18:23, 12/05/2018)
Re-uploaded. Does this look better? —Jayce(20:56, 12/05/2018)
Looking great Jayce! The shading could be smoothed out on the legs and there should be a teensy bit of shading on the earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:37, December 5, 2018 (UTC)
What legs? There are countless other images that have even rougher shading, and also ones that lack shading on the earpink. I'm sorry, but I honestly think it's fine. —Jayce(22:38, 12/05/2018)
Yes the tail looks a lot better! It just needed a little more white. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 22:39, 12/05/2018 ) 22:39, December 5, 2018 (UTC)
Can you define the shading on the two front paws and the back paw facing towards us? —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (00:02, 12/08/2018)
Re-uploaded. Fiddled with the shading too. —Jayce(01:02, 12/08/2018)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:08, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Feathertail (Alt W) - For Approval
I actually enjoyed this one. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•02:17 Fri Dec 7
Can you define leg shading please. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:23, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
The yellow highlight on her shoulder is really kind of off-putting. Could you reduce it some? Hawkfire Happy Days ( 02:28, 12/07/2018 ) 02:28, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
That's actually a marking from the original image. It was color picked, but I'll see what I can do. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•02:32 Fri Dec 7
This is utterly stunning. While I like the yellow highlight, you should desaturate it a bit, as Hawkey said it's really off putting. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (02:49, 12/07/2018)
I think it's fine? Considering Sun said it was color picked from the image. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:35, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Nah going to agree with Hawk and Echo. That does look off to me. There are some unfilled pixels on the haunch. Also Sunjaw Fox said you can have Pebbleshine back, she doesn't have time to work on her anymore.Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Off-putting or not, they are shown on the image Sun is matching, so to remove them wouldn't make any sense. —Jayce(03:42, 12/07/2018)
I never said to remove them. Only to reduce/desaturate them. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 03:43, 12/07/2018 ) 03:43, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
I don't want it gone, I think it should be a bit more brown than yellow. Also Potato, Pebbleshine will be figured out, she'll get her image eventually and people will do it when they get around to it. ^^ —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (03:51, 12/07/2018)
The color from the image isn't brown, it's a golden color. That's what Sun was going for. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:53, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
I think it's fine, other than that maybe define the head shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 13:19, December 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina
The front paws need shading to be defined as well. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (03:44, 12/08/2018)
The brown does look out of place, and I agree with Mink about reducing or desaturating them. Appledash the light of honor 19:32, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reuploaded My tablet driver got screwed up, so this is all I am able to do right now. I am not going to mess with the golden-brown further. I took all of the colors directly from the image this is based on, so it matches. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•20:28 Sun Dec 9
Palebird (T) - CBA
lazy job ill fix up the belly and shoulder shading later david 🌈 07:40, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
This is so gorgeous, I believe the image should be named File:Palebird.tunneler.png? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 10:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Mink, the name is already correct.Heyoitpotater (talk) 14:13, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Actually, the file name is technically incorrect, Potato. The current file is Palebird.'tunneller`.png. Tunneler, with two ls than one which is what the tunnelers have been being uploaded with. SquidwardPlays 15:25, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
It's true, tunneler is misspelled in the file name. David will change it when they can. ^^ Otherwise, this image is really great! Hawkfire Happy Days ( 15:45, 12/07/2018 ) 15:45, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
It's not mispelt, perse. It's just using a different spelling- this is akin to color and colour. I've fixed the spelling for the filename to go with what we use, though. —Jayce(17:17, 12/07/2018)
Oh my apologies . I was about to leave for school and I thought the wording was correct. Define the shading on --> that leg please.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:33, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Oh and there's a teensy speck of waste on the left hind leg.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:10, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
reuploaded I couldnt see any waste david 🌈 19:13, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
CBA? Amazing as always, david. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:09, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Sorry I didn't get this sooner, gah. But this is the waste Potato was talking about. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (01:40, 12/09/2018)
Waste does not affect the quality of the image, so the CBA can continue from where Vec started it. —Jayce(02:39, 12/09/2018)
i wont bother putting a reuploaded, but its gone now. thanks for pointing it out, and also thanks vec david 🌈 03:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Stoneteller (OotS) (CG) ~ CBA
:) All colors from the healer. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:52, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
This looks awesome! Define the shading on the lower chest. It kind of blends in with the top of the foreleg furthest from us, and it's hard to tell where the chest ends and foreleg begins. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 18:59, 12/07/2018 ) 18:59, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:01, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Is it me, or is he cross-eyed? *prepares to get shot*Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
I mean, not really. It looks fine to me —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (22:43, 12/07/2018)
Can you define the shading on the tail and the foot under the tail as well. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:54, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:38, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
This is lovely! Can you maybe define the mud a bit more? It blends in super well with the black. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (03:41, 12/08/2018)
Reups Thank you! :D Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:21, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Well done. Appledash the light of honor 02:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Woollytail (T) - For Approval
Appledash the light of honor 21:56, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Define the ear pink more. This looks great, Icy! Hawkfire Happy Days ( 21:57, 12/07/2018 ) 21:57, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
The earpink is fine imho. Define the shading everywhere.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:35, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Can you define the texture? It’s super dark in his other images. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 22:38, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
I think the shading looks good, Potato? It's certainly dark enough on the main body. Any darker, it would be too dark imo. But I do believe it could be defined a bit on the hind leg furthest from us and add some more shading to the neck. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:46, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Also, I believe the white on the paws extends up the back portion of the leg a bit in the warrior. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:50, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Actually, I agree with Hawkey about the ear pink; this seems to be an issue the entire set has... I can't see the ear pink at all. —Jayce(03:31, 12/08/2018)
If it were a bit lighter it would be visible, but since it's so dark and close to grey it's difficult to see. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (03:36, 12/08/2018)
Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 18:29, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
The white still needs to extend up a bit onto the leg like how it's shown on the warrior. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:08, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Can I ask what you mean? I think they extend the same now... Appledash the light of honor 00:16, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
What Vec means is on the warrior pixel there's a very thin strip of white running up --> that hind leg. Not sure if you can see it because it has shading on it, but it's there.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:27, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Could you define the shading depth?
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:40,12/9/2018
Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 19:55, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Maybe these will help with what I'm trying say; sorry I'm so bad at it. ;u; The warrior has white here, circled in red, so the tunneler should look something like this. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
The streaks on the fur seem a little off. On most of the body, the fur is going up and down, but on the sides of the main body it's going side to side. I dunno, just seems a little odd to me. Like, if you take a red colored pencil and start going up and down on a spere, and then start going side to side, it looks off. COOLcat9352 (talk) 23:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)COOLcat9352
Re-uploaded Appledash the light of honor 23:36, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Mistmouse (T) - CBA
I chose her cause I love her name :D Hawkfire Happy Days ( 23:03, 12/07/2018 ) 23:03, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Define the shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:08, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Could you be more specific as to where the shading needs to be defined? It looks pretty defined to me. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 23:13, 12/07/2018 ) 23:13, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
Pretty much everywhere.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:06, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
imo I think it's defined enough, but I do feel like the shading could be expanded on the shoulder, neck and top portion of the tail. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:44, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reups. Played around with the definition of the shading as well. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 03:23, 12/08/2018 ) 03:23, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Comparing this to the warrior (the first in this set for colors, stripe softness, ect), it appears that the warrior's stripes are a bit softer than how you have them... which kinda makes me want to go nominate that queen, since the stripes really don't match...and it's sort of giving off a bit of a misleading air when it comes to matching. —Jayce(03:29, 12/08/2018)
Oh no. I matched my stripes to the queen because I was working with the same side, while the warrior displayed the opposite side. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 03:32, 12/08/2018 ) 03:32, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
I also want to point out that this situation also happened with Storm Pelt, and in that case you told me to match the charart that displays the side I'm working on. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 03:36, 12/08/2018 ) 03:36, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Maybe soften the stripes a bit or lower their opacity? In terms of matching the position, they seem fine since Hawkey was matching the queen's side. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (03:37, 12/08/2018)
The stripes match fine to me. Can you make the earpink a tad more visible? Appledash the light of honor 19:26, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Is this a little better? I color picked the ear pink from the warrior, but the color itself kinda blends into the base color. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 04:32, 12/09/2018 ) 04:32, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 23:37, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Flailfoot (T) ~ For Approval
First charart. I'll fix the earpink to match the warrior and elder after I post this. ---Sliverpeltis godwithshining stars like echosong 04:45, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reuploaded The earpink is fixed. Sliverpeltis godwithshining stars like echosong 04:49, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
This is really cute!! Can you define the shading a bit better and darken it? —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (04:50, 12/08/2018)
Reuploaded I darkened it? I hope you can see a difference ^-^ --Sliverpeltis godwithshining stars like echosong 04:57, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Congrats on your first charart! You sure picked a tough one; black cats are notorious for being difficult to shade. But I believe you can do it. :) The shading is still hardly visible, and you're going to have to darken it more. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:13, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thanks! I can't tabby well so I chose Flailfoot :) How's the shading? --Sliverpeltis godwithshining stars like echosong 05:19, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
This is lovely for a first! I can barely see the earpink- Potato Flakin
Oh whoops, that was Potato up there. That's an old username, and I can't find the previous one. I'll try to fix that.-Potato Flakin
Reuploaded The earpink should be slightly more visible now. --Sliverpeltis godwithshining stars like echosong 05:33, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reuploaded I found something wrong with the nose. --Sliverpeltis godwithshining stars like echosong 05:45, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Black cats are my favorite to do ;; define the leg shading on <-- back leg Malina457 (talk) 14:39, December 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina
Reuploaded This looks dark Silverfurskz 15:14, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reuploaded I forgot the nose again. Silverfurskz 15:14, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reuploaded I don't like how light the shading looks so I darkened it. Silverfurskz 15:36, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
This looks over 50% done, so I will be changing the title to "for approval" and bumping you up to an apprentice. Appledash the light of honor 19:28, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Thanks Appledash! Also, I’m on mobile so it’s hard to edit. --Silverfurskz 19:33, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Lilywhisker (Alt T) ~ For Approval
Look how disgusting that paw is ugh. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:11, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
This is gorgeous, I love the shading! Can you shapen the paw a bit more to look more broken, if that makes any sense? It looks like it's being held up in the air like the front paw instead of broken. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (05:13, 12/08/2018)
Got my username back. If you need reference for the leg, look at File:Lilywhisker.df.png.Heyoitpotater (talk) 05:38, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reups Still not happy with it but hooray Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:43, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Can you lighten the shading a little? Appledash the light of honor 19:29, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Whiteberry (T) ~ CBA
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:01, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
So lovely <3 Can you define the shading more, especially on the stomach and chest? Hawkfire Happy Days ( 16:04, 12/08/2018 ) 16:04, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
Is the nose filled in?Heyoitpotater (talk) 19:31, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
It is, I think it's just very light. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (19:32, 12/08/2018)
Re-uploaded.
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:41, December 8, 2018 (UTC)
CBA? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 15:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Sandgorse (T)~ For Approval
File:File-Sandgorse.tunneler.pngI dont know if I like the fluff tuffs or not. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Friendly reminder not to thumb your images! Reduce the pale parts on the tail, belly, chest and muzzle. For the first three, the paler parts are very thin and don't creep onto the main body very much. On the muzzle, reduce the pale parts so it doesn't reach the eyes or cheeks. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:38, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
The ear pink looks really light compared to his other images. Color pick from either of his previous images to get the correct color. Also, in addition to what Vec said, there needs to be some more stripes. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 20:47, 12/09/2018 ) 20:47, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
This needs to be renamed File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png. You are missing a letter in the file name. Also, put some bare skin on where the tufts are, being described with patchy fur means missing fur, which shows skin. If you need reference look at File:Sandgorse.star.png.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Oh, the "T" in tunneler doesn't need to be uppercase.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:59, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Re~Up Okay, and I want to know, should I edit the positioning and or the shape of the fluff tuffs? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:11, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
You probably should try to match the StarClan one. Did you dethumb this? Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Also, this looks a little darker than his other images. Maybe ask Jayce for the base color if you get stuck.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:21, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Potato Flakin, I am trying to make it mach the warrior blank, because that is how it works, do the first one, not a later one, and it is dethumbed Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
In regards to the fur tufts, make them a little shorter and smaller, if that makes sense. More, you know, tufty ^^ Also, add a little pink (the ear pink color is fine) right underneath each tuft to mimic the exposed skin. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 21:45, 12/09/2018 ) 21:45, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Re~Oops, fixed the fluff tuffs, I seem to like them now, and lowered the shading opacsity Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:00, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
I did both of Sandgorse's other images. The StarClan has more of the side you need to match than the warrior does. —Jayce(22:05, 12/09/2018)
In terms of placement, the pale parts on the belly and paws need to be receded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:56, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
There's a little waste around the ear and fur patches on the hind legs, I believe some near tip of the tail. He generally seems much duller to me, the stripes seem to be much thicker here than his other images, there should be more stripes, The pale on the face extends too far across the cheek, The pale parts of the paws does not extend as far up here as on his other images, The pale on the chest and belly should be reduced a considerable amount. The pink to show the skin where the patchy fur is is also a fairly different color here, than on his other images, and this seems a little nitpicky, I thought I'd mention it. SquidwardPlays 23:04, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Also, your image was aligned to the left. don't do that. SquidwardPlays 23:05, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Flamepelt (T) ~ For Approval
I understand now. I used his warrior for reference since that was the first in the set. I have no idea what I did with him. I feel like I threw my tablet pen around dkskjffd —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (00:10, 12/10/2018)
Plumclaw (T) - For Approval
I'm going to fix some of the issues, I just wanted to hear what you guys thought on this. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:10, December 10, 2018 (UTC)