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Sandgorse (T)~ For Approval
I dont know if I like the fluff tuffs or not. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Friendly reminder not to thumb your images! Reduce the pale parts on the tail, belly, chest and muzzle. For the first three, the paler parts are very thin and don't creep onto the main body very much. On the muzzle, reduce the pale parts so it doesn't reach the eyes or cheeks. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:38, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
The ear pink looks really light compared to his other images. Color pick from either of his previous images to get the correct color. Also, in addition to what Vec said, there needs to be some more stripes. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 20:47, 12/09/2018 ) 20:47, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
This needs to be renamed File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png. You are missing a letter in the file name. Also, put some bare skin on where the tufts are, being described with patchy fur means missing fur, which shows skin. If you need reference look at File:Sandgorse.star.png.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Oh, the "T" in tunneler doesn't need to be uppercase.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:59, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Re~Up Okay, and I want to know, should I edit the positioning and or the shape of the fluff tuffs? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:11, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
You probably should try to match the StarClan one. Did you dethumb this? Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Also, this looks a little darker than his other images. Maybe ask Jayce for the base color if you get stuck.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:21, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Potato Flakin, I am trying to make it mach the warrior blank, because that is how it works, do the first one, not a later one, and it is dethumbed Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
In regards to the fur tufts, make them a little shorter and smaller, if that makes sense. More, you know, tufty ^^ Also, add a little pink (the ear pink color is fine) right underneath each tuft to mimic the exposed skin. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 21:45, 12/09/2018 ) 21:45, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Re~Oops, fixed the fluff tuffs, I seem to like them now, and lowered the shading opacsity Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:00, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
I did both of Sandgorse's other images. The StarClan has more of the side you need to match than the warrior does. —Jayce(22:05, 12/09/2018)
In terms of placement, the pale parts on the belly and paws need to be receded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:56, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
There's a little waste around the ear and fur patches on the hind legs, I believe some near tip of the tail. He generally seems much duller to me, the stripes seem to be much thicker here than his other images, there should be more stripes, The pale on the face extends too far across the cheek, The pale parts of the paws does not extend as far up here as on his other images, The pale on the chest and belly should be reduced a considerable amount. The pink to show the skin where the patchy fur is is also a fairly different color here, than on his other images, and this seems a little nitpicky, I thought I'd mention it. SquidwardPlays 23:04, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
Also, your image was aligned to the left. don't do that. SquidwardPlays 23:05, December 9, 2018 (UTC)
You've improved so much Owlbite! Can you add some depth to his skin patches? —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (00:10, 12/10/2018)
I can't see any shading through my screen. might be just me? --Silverfurskz [09:31, 12/10/2018]
I dont get what you mean by, aligned to the left, and on the other 2, the patchy fur was a difrent color, I am not working on my computer, so I cant work now, but I can fix the problems! (Please call me TrasH, I am more used to that and was questioning who you were talking about!) Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, December 11, 2018 (UTC)
You forgot to sign! Please thin out the stripes (this was said in a comment above, not sure if you saw it). The stripes are thinner on his Warrior and StarClan.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:27, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
I agree, the stripes should be thinner and there should be more stripes added to the body. Minkclaw You're my person 22:32, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Oh, the hyphen in the file name needs to be a colon. Please lighten him up (I said this in a comment). The stripes need to be orange. Right now they're goldenrod (not sure how else to describe them). Don't forget adding depth to the skin, Echo mentioned that. Potato Flakin (talk) 22:40, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
I never said I wouldent do that, please stop repeting things that have already been said. I was typeing thet while walking to school, and didnt have time to sign it, I was at school and they emphisise no phones. and last time I did art, I used ~ and was fine, can I get a second opinion on if I should change it? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, December 11, 2018 (UTC)
Potato, you need to stop. You've been told multiple times about your conduct. Please give Owl a chance to respond before you repeat comments. Anyways, back to the image. Owl, I renamed it for you, since it needs to be File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png in order for it to work on the article. —Jayce(00:48, 12/11/2018)
I..owe an apology to you Owlbite. I have been forcing you to rush, and I felt humiliated when I learned what I was doing- I am so so SO sorry for so many things. I often have problems controlling my emotions, so please take your time with Sandgorse. Feel free to ignore me being nitpicky..Potato Flakin (talk) 04:11, December 11, 2018 (UTC)
Is it just me, or is the fur a little off from the rest of his images, and aren't the stripes sharper? Malina457 (talk) 17:05, December 12, 2018 (UTC)Malina
Plumclaw (T) - For Approval
I'm going to fix some of the issues, I just wanted to hear what you guys thought on this. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:10, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
could just be me thinking this, but the shading seems like it could use a wee bit of darkening/defining. SquidwardPlays 00:11, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Nah, I agree with you. ^ —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (00:12, 12/10/2018)
re-ups I tried but any darkening of the shading looks very awkward on my screen, hope this is okay Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:19, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Smooth out the ear pink a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:24, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
re-ups earpink is the bane of my existence. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:12, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Define the eye color and the shading on the ear furthest from us. In addition, the stomach shading looks kind of blotchy (especially near the front leg). Can you smooth it out? Hawkfire Happy Days ( 17:40, 12/10/2018 ) 17:40, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
There's an out-of-place pixel on the tail-tip that should probably be filled in. —Jayce(01:04, 12/11/2018)
What's your light source here? I can't really tell, and you should define the shading to match whatever direction the light is coming form. Something I do is draw lil sun on my shading layer telling me where the light will hit so I know where to shade. ^^ —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (19:10, 12/11/2018)
Could you define the shading on the haunch (regardless of where your light source is)?
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:40,12/12/2018
And also the face shading? Malina457 (talk) 17:07, December 12, 2018 (UTC)malina
Withdrawing. I’m swamped with stuff and I don’t want this to get declined. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 04:33, December 14, 2018 (UTC)
Pebble (CG) - For Approval
i was bored so i did another charart, and nobody else was doing her, so eh, why not. Not nearly the best i can do though, it feels kind of lackluster, especially the mud. If anyone agrees that i should fix the mud, i'll probably mess around with it then, since i'm not too happy with it anyway. SquidwardPlays 01:07, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
I think this looks good! There's shading leaking away from the lower haunch shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:16, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Reups Messed around with the mud, I'm much happier with it. also touched up lower haunch shading. SquidwardPlays 01:30, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Define the face/head shading. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 03:09, 12/10/2018 ) 03:09, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Reups SquidwardPlays 03:16, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front limbs and chest? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:46, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
The shading on the back and tail look overly dark compared to the shading on the rest of the image. Try to even out the darkness. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 17:44, 12/10/2018 ) 17:44, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Reups SquidwardPlays 22:10, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
Kill the waste outside the back.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:30, December 10, 2018 (UTC)
For reference. ^ —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (23:08, 12/10/2018)
Reups SquidwardPlays 02:02, December 11, 2018 (UTC)
The shading on the body seems very dark compared to the shading on the chest and head. It might be my screen's saturation, but can you even out the depth of the shading to match the entire body? —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (19:08, 12/11/2018)
Reups SquidwardPlays 22:46, December 11, 2018 (UTC)
The back waste has returned, kill it.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:31, December 11, 2018 (UTC)
Reference again, lmao. —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (02:51, 12/12/2018)
Define the shading depth along the back? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:48, December 12, 2018 (UTC)
Lilywhisker (T) ~ For Approval
it's really bad ik I'll fix it later ♥ Star red and black ♥<03:05, 12/14/2018>ar❄ 're rich, son" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?yo, if you can marry a sister, you're rich, son?">1780, a winter's ball <03:05, 12/14/2018>
Can you define the texture and smooth out the shading? It looks lovely! —Echobelle ♡ we cast off tomorrow! (03:09, 12/14/2018)
There's a out-of-place pixel on the tail tip that needs to be filled in. Also, did you fill in the nosepink? Right now it is looking like it's the pelt color. Good work Star!Potato Flakin (talk) 03:18, December 14, 2018 (UTC)
The shading is leaking along the belly. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:54, December 14, 2018 (UTC)