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Squirrelflight (L) - CBA
File:Squirrelflight.leader.png The Queen ugh this pattern Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•20:58 Tue Apr 9
Can you add her torn ear? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:00, April 9, 2019 (UTC)
I think this might be a Wikia thing, but her eyes seem lighter than her other images? Also, I love the bushy tail, it makes me happy. —Jayce(21:03, 4/09/2019)
Maybe smooth out the shading on the <-- front leg? It looks really sharp compared to the rest of the shading. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:05, April 9, 2019 (UTC)
I took the eye color from the deputy that tail gives me life Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•21:52 Tue Apr 9
I believe she needs a torn eartip? Maybe I'm wrong though.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:58, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
I agree that the eyes look darker on her other images - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:49,4/10/2019
Reuploaded Then the eyes need darkened on the deputy. I may also mess with the tail to make it bushier. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:38 Wed Apr 10
Could you smooth the shading on the white paw? Looks a lot more sharp there than elsewhere —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:47, 4/10/2019
I agree the tail needs to be bushier - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:07,4/12/2019
Reuploaded This is handdrawn shading not texture. And she does have the white paw, her floof just covers a lot of it Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•17:32 Fri Apr 12
can you define the shading on the body a little bit? Splook sweet creature 22:30 Fri Apr 12
can you thicken the linearart on the tail? Burntclaw 01:24, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
Can you smooth the tail/body shading just a bit? Ellie life is an illusion 02:23, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth out the ear shading. It's very sharp compared to the other bits 'n pieces of shading.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:50, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Just letting the leads know, I have an exam this Wednesday I need to finish studying for. I plan on uploading tomorrow but in case I don't do it til Thursday that is why. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•22:57 Mon Apr 15
Reuploaded I am done messing with the shading style >> Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•21:01 Thu Apr 18
She looks a bit cross-eyed - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:39,4/19/2019
Reuploaded I think I fixed it? It may have been the reflected light Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:59 Fri Apr 19
can you smooth the shading out on the tail and the chest? Burntclaw 06:46, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•20:31 Sat Apr 20
Honestly the pattern on her tail should match the apprentice's, as that came first. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:26,4/21/2019
Reuploaded This image is going to be the death of me Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:30 Mon Apr 22
CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:58,4/22/2019
gray warrior- for evauation
File:Gray warrior.pngi know theirs no shading going to add it laterWillowstep12 (talk) 13:53, April 10, 2019 (UTC) reuploaded added the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:42, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
Good first try! But can you desaturate the ear and nosepink? It's very neon as is, you should add some darker and lighter shades to the eye for gradient, the shading need darkening, and heavy expansion. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 15:06, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded is the earpink desaturated anoghtWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
Define/add shading and define your light source. I can't tell if there is shading. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•16:24 Wed Apr 10
reuploadedWillowstep12 (talk) 17:24, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
Darken the earpink, and add shading to the back foot closest to us. Connect the shading on the front leg closest to us. There should be more shading depth to the image.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:36, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
The shading could also use some smoothing, and shading on the tail either needs to be added or defined, I believe. I think the current earpink darkness is alright, but it could use some desaturation to dull it. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded smoothed shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:50, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Shading needs to be smoothed more and the depth needs to be defined, all over. Define it especially on the back paws and tail. Line art appears to be blurred by the tail and front paw closest to us. Could you possibly desaturate the earpink and nose a little too? I think a paler pink would complement the gray better. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 18:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
i wont be active for a week so please dont reject thisWillowstep12 (talk) 19:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? You only have a limit of ten days to reupload. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
yeaWillowstep12 (talk) 12:18, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded looks betterWillowstep12 (talk) 12:23, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Shading still needs to be defined and smoothed. Also please add the date for when you reserved this on the table. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:42, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Flutterkit (Ki) - CBA
File:Flutterkit.kit.png hi this is my warrior cats son Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 22:39, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
He needs to be short-furred, as all WindClan cats are given short fur unless stated otherwise.Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:55, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
reups didn't even know that was a rule but whatever. i liked it better long but its not like im allowed to argue Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 01:24, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Yeah, that's a rule we put into effect a couple years ago based on statements in the series. Given you're not super active, it's not all that much of a shock that you didn't know. There's no need to be as harsh as you were, though. —Jayce(01:33, 4/11/2019)
Brighten up the white.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Dull down the earpink slightly Malina457 (talk) 18:09, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina
reups sorry took me a bit to reup was busy. i tried but dont really know if I succeeded.. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 22:35, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
Is it just me or does he look green? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:56,4/14/2019
it doesn't look green to me. could you define the light on the tail and paws? ~ ☾Moonyy ( 11:33, April 14, 2019 (UTC) )
idk from my screen he does look a little bit green as well Burntclaw 11:36, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
it looks like a green shade as well.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
He doesn't look green on my phone or PC, Moony said it didn't either but 3 people also say it's green.. I know that I made the base a warm brown and the shading is red I've no clue why it's looking green for some people.. Orr how to make it less green for those three people. I'll re-up for light on the paws/tail like Moony said tonight though and I'll see what I can do about this weird green thingy Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 15:50, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Try #290f01 for the brown. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Sorry Potato, but in all honesty I don't really like that shade of Brown and I'd rather try something else of my own choosing before I were to try that color. No offense I just don't really like it and I'd rather try a few things of my own choosing as the artist. ;; Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 17:39, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
reups i decided to redo the shading aswell, hopefully the new shading looks alright and hopefully the green is fixed? idk whats going on with the green but i tried. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 23:10, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
The image is not showing up. Can you link with changes?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:24, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
wow, thats really weird. It showed fine when i did Desktop Preview while making the edit? Wikia what drugs you takin?? Hopefully it's fixed now. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 23:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
It's now showing up ;)Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:51, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Can you smooth the edges of the shading? Ellie life is an illusion 01:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
reups i tried scrubbing him with the blur tool, idek if it made a difference. This is as smooth as ive been able to get it Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 01:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Please don't shoot me.. but he still looks green.. perhaps opt for a darker shade of brown..? *gets shot*Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:06, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Imo looks even greener now Malina457 (talk) 05:20, April 16, 2019 (UTC)malina
I guess I'll try to touch the Brown a bit again. I'm going to play with it slowly though. I want it to still look a certain way so I'm just gonna change it slowly until it starts looking less green for people and still looks good to me. But I'll actually also take a look at the shading again and just see if I can smooth it out anymore. I actually do want to try and smooth it on the brown. If I can. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 12:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
reups i actually kind of like this better Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 22:30, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Brighten the white everywhere except for the face. It looks really gray.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:08, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
The whites fine, otherwise you run the risk of losing shading definition on it — max it is the real thing, () 21:05 Thu Apr 18 2019
I agree. CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:23, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Rootpaw (App)- For Approval
File:Rootpaw.apprentice.pngHere he is! Comments? First time trying texture. I freaking love him and his parents. Also, will remove that waste in a moment.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:46, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading, define the eye depth and add some shine to them as well. The shading appears to be leaking from the shading and on the chest next to the leg line art. Lighten the earpink too, it looks super dark. It also looks like there's some waste by the head. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
I'll fix all these things tomorrow! Ah, I was suspicious something was bugging me.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded will fix more stuffs tomorrowAv Out of sight and out of mind () 02:23, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Also, if your light is coming from the front, there some be some light on the fronts of the forelegs and the chest ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:25, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Leaking shading by the belly and haunch, waste by the tail tip and shoulder/neck Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina
Try connecting the body texture to the hindleg texture. Right now the Hindleg texture just weirdly cuts off. (Something like this, excuse my sloppiness -> [1] ) Tinystream (talk) 03:30, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
vary the texture slightly more so that it doesnt look as paintbrushy. i suggest using a smudge tool and running it in the direction of fur/drawing more texture lines. in addition, her color looks unrealistically saturated and slightly green. i suggest googling light ginger cats and color picking for a realistic base color Burntclaw 04:29, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Rootpaw should have shorthair lineart b/c it never said he had long fur--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:07, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
fur length is artist's choice when unstated. david 🌈 09:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC) Understood--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
I colorpicked off Tree's MCA. Why does that look unrealistic? Malina, can you circle where?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:05, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
IMO the image looks slightly green. Might be because of the texture/shading, but it could stand to be tweaked - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:21,4/11/2019
- I think it also has something to do with the black/blue based shading on top of yellow. I know shading tint is artist's choice but I think you'll have less problems if you used a darker orange or even red on top of yellow ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 16:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
I'll try to address all of your comments! I learned from reading an archive that red is a good shade for yellow cats (Gooseberry's queen I think). I'll reupload later. Also yep fur length is my choice, I made him to resemble his "weird" father.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:39, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
There’s some waste by the tail and ears! On the edges of the image/canvas. -Shadow It's a prosthetic 22:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)
Around the ENTIRE tail. (my bold isnt working, sorry) Malina457 (talk) 00:14, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina
this is turning out better. you need to define the shading everywhere, and also smooth it out on the tail and the belly. it appears that the shading is leaking in some places, which is probably a result of abusing the blur tool. in this case i still highly recommend the smudge tool at 10-20 px to achieve the same effect as the blur tool, but better without the risk of having the shading leaking Burntclaw 00:28, April 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:25, April 12, 2019 (UTC)
smooth shading on the backleg furthest from us --
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 03:36, 4/12/2019
Seems like the shading is leaking on the chest, legs and tail. also can you smooth out the shading on the legs and tail? the texture also needs to follow the fur flow. what you have here looks like it's crisscrossing - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:06,4/12/2019
Reuploaded redid shading with a lot of smoothing out, will reup for waste in a momentoAv Out of sight and out of mind () 22:49, April 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded waste has been killed via lassoAv Out of sight and out of mind () 22:57, April 12, 2019 (UTC)
Can u define shading on the left side of it's face? Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:31, April 12, 2019 (UTC)
There shouldn't be any shading with my source there, I think. I'll check my reference image to see if I need to place some there though.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:50, April 12, 2019 (UTC)
smooth out the shading everywhere/define the gradient. Burntclaw 01:11, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded also darkened the shading a bit.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:40, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
it still needs smoothing out - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:05,4/13/2019
Reuploaded oh StarClan halp the shading is icky nowAv Out of sight and out of mind () 02:39, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
not sure if you removed the texture but i can't really see it on my screen? also sorry to be a pain perhaps the shading could be blurred/smudged/smoothed out more ~ ☾Moonyy ( 05:09, April 13, 2019 (UTC) )
I did remove the texture- I was struggling with it. I'll blur (and possibly redo) the shading again tomorrow.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 05:17, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded waste will be gone in a jiffyAv Out of sight and out of mind () 14:19, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:22, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
define the shading on the legs, define the depth on the chest, and smooth it out slightly on the haunch Burntclaw 01:54, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
define the light on the tail - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:51,4/14/2019
Reuploaded will remove waste later.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:20, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
The edges of the shading should be smoothed and can youd define the texture? You said there was texture but I'm not seeing any at all? Ellie life is an illusion 16:25, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
I said I removed it- look under Moonyy's comment.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I'll fix that haunch shading.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:41, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded ahh much better *pats Rootpaw*Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:46, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth out the haunch and leg shading. —Jayce(17:41, 4/14/2019)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:19, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
I'm not seeing where the shading has been smoothed out. Could you try smoothing the edges? Ellie life is an illusion 15:57, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:05, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Add some light on that front leg (the upper part) and smooth out the shading there - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:02,4/16/2019
With the approval of Moss, you've been upgraded to an apprentice and this can now say "for approval" ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 13:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Shading seems to be leaking on the hind leg closest to us, and the front paw furthest away from us. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:45, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder, tail, and front paw farthest from us? Dunno if it's just me, but the shading on the front of the body looks darker than the rest. could you either darken the rest of the shading to match that or lighten that area a little? Define the shading in the ears. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:34, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Also needs blue eyes. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:19, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Thank you Vec! I'll reup later.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:14, April 16, 2019 (UTC) Wikia will not let me upload him, it doesn't say under the bottom of the file history "Upload a new version of this file". For now, look here for changes.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:50, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded at last.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:51, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading depth - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:38,4/19/2019
Reuploaded looks like he's in a sunset now. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:54, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
There's waste next to the left ear, the left leg, and in between the hind legs JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 01:28, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
About depth: you seem to be just darkening the shading in general. the image could still use a thinner, darker layer of shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:26,4/19/2019
Define the eye depth and add some light on the chest —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:31, 4/19/2019
Reuploaded 3 times aghhh Spooky you just said that when I was defining the depth XD. Can you circle where? Will define the eye depth now.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded let's hope I didn't kill his eyes with the burn tool.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:53, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
The source you seem to be aiming for resembles this; so to where that has light.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:53, 4/20/2019
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Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:24, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
define the light on the legs - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:01,4/21/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:18, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Pigeonfoot (W) ~ For Approval
ok uhm not sure about this one rip
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 23:38, April 12, 2019 (UTC)
can you define the shading depth some? Splook sweet creature 04:42 Sun Apr 14
Reuploaded
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 16:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)
Could you define the pupil? I'm having a hard time distinguishing it from the eye depth/gradience. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:50, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
dull the highlights very slightly on the back; almost looks like a diff colored dorsal stripe —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:37, 4/16/2019
Reuploaded
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 22:18, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:31, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Ouch sorry to be that person, but I feel as if the shading cuts off too abruptly where it stops on the shoulder/arm of the < front leg, perhaps have it extend upwards a bit more and taper off smoother. I also feel as if the shading on the white is a touch too dark, and the eyes could have more of the lighter color for depth, to match the app.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:33, 4/19/2019
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:37, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
The tail shading on the underside of the ^ part of the tail is leaking into the v part of the tail, if that makes sense. It looks like there's a jagged line of gray on the white that's not supposed to be there. JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 05:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:24, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Plumstone (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
~Firespring A Legend Returns 00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
For some reason wikia isn't showing jt but from the discord inage, her design should match File:Plumstone.apprentice.png also be sure to not thumb images as it messes with the format. Ellie life is an illusion 05:31, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Define the eye depth and dull the ear/nosepink, as it looks rather neon. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 06:23, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. How does it look now? ~Firespring A Legend Returns 00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
She has to match her apprentice. The body is facing a different direction granted, but the Head still the same direction and some of the side the Apprentice shows is visible. You must match her colors to that as they do not match up right now, and match basic patch placement, and smoothness. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 11:37, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink, smudge the patches, and smooth out the shading.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:03, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
I used #dd983d for the patches mixed with #844711, and black with a low opacity. #553c33 for the earpink. Eyes should be amber, base for that is #dca864 I think. The black base is just pure black. The patches need to be rougher and thinner. Nose color is #1e1616. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:03, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks for the colours, Patch. I redid the whole thing. ~Firespring A Legend Returns
Expand, define, and smooth out the shading. For the shading use a dark tint, like blue or red. Then run the blur tool or smudge tool over it to make it look pretty. You can also go to Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur, the best way to get the shading looking smooth. Smudge the patches a lot more in the direction of the fur as well.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:42, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
I'll blur the shading and I'll define the ear depth and eye depth. ~Firespring A Legend Returns
Reuploaded. What about now? ~Firespring A Legend Returns
Better. However, please expand the shading more, and define it. Her patches are lighter, sharper, and smaller.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:12, April 16, 2019 (UTC)
Some more patches should be added as well Ellie life is an illusion 04:34, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
You've still got time, but are you still working? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:39, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Thriftpaw (A) - For Evaluation
Didn't know what her eye color was, so I just guessed. Hope that's ok? --Pondleaf (talk) 12:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Good first try, but first of all your heading is actually incorrect as it needs either for approval or for Evaluation. I can't find you on the projects table so idk if this should be approval or evaluation but if needed someone can fix it. Second, your file names incorrect, we've got a file naming format! It should be File:Thriftpaw.apprentice.png rather than what you have. Also, could you define all the shading? Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 12:35, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
I've also added you to the reservation table. Make sure to claim the image you want and date it before posting another artwork to the approval page! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 13:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Define the eye depth.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:02, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
You need to match her kit, i still have the file if you need it. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:43, April 15, 2019 (UTC)
Okay, can I have the file then? --Pondleaf (talk) 07:02, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
Sure, do you have an email or discord I can send it to? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 21:11, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- For Approval
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
there's a bit of waste behind the head ~ ☾Moonyy ( 02:18, April 17, 2019 (UTC) )
next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area. ~ ☾Moonyy ( 02:28, April 17, 2019 (UTC) )
The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth. Ellie life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
define light more on the front paws please. --
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 06:39, 4/17/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:24,4/18/2019
can you also define the shading on the ear? Splook sweet creature 02:40 Thu Apr 18
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:42, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
smudge the pelt into the earpink and the shading is still really blotchy. Also, most of the shading suggests that the light is coming from over the back, but the face and the placement of the light in the eye suggests that it's coming from the front ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 06:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
there's some waste next to the ear ~ ☾Moonyy ( 07:27, April 19, 2019 (UTC) )
Reuploaded tried with the shading depth, how does this look?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:38, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
There's waste around the head, rump and the space between the belly and tail I think. JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 01:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded should be gone now!Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
smooth shading --
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 16:02, 4/20/2019
Reuploaded how is dis, Silver?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 17:02, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
There's some waste by the tail, legs and head! -Shadow hOnK :o) 01:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded waste-free!Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Shading needs to be smoothed. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:19, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded how's this?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Can you expand it on the legs and flank, and define it on the face? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded twice also defined the tail's light. There is already shading on the face, it's below the ear closest to us.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Frondwhisker (W) - For Approval
Shading looks horrendous but I guess we'll see. The colors are taken from the apprentice.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 19:42, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
There's some waste under the back foot. Also smooth out the shading a little? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 22:33, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink more.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 00:31, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
The apprentice stripes seem thicker, could you thicken them? Ellie life is an illusion 00:35, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 00:45, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
can you lighten the facial shading some? Splook sweet creature 02:42 Thu Apr 18
Reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 03:12, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Could you make the pale parts rougher and make the pale marks over her eyes more pointy? Her tail also needs some pale. She needs some more stripes on the leg closest to us and on her chest, to match what i had on the kit. Could you maybe make the texture rougher too? it looks a bit too soft (i used the pencil tool to make it) the stripes on the face could be rougher too. the stripes on the forehead are also more like a half circle on the bottom, then two other halves of a circle on the edges. I have no idea if that makes sense so if you need me to explain further or a redline for that let me know. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:50, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Could you? It'd be easier for me that way.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 03:59, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
sort of like half a circle with an "M" she also needs three little dots below her eyes. here's her kit with just the stripes, as a reference for her leg and face stripes, if that helps. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 04:15, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 23:34, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
The texture is very pencil-ey and hard edged. Could you soften it? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:21,4/19/2019
Reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 21:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Can you smooth out the shading on the hind leg? And I think the black on her nose should be expanded to touch the lines of her nose if I'm not mistaken. JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 12:41, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 00:38, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Flamepelt (Alt E) - CBA
so dumbass me goofed and used the longhaired lineart.... I'm gonna go and fix that. —Jayce(22:46, 4/17/2019)
Re-uploaded. Looked better long-furred. —Jayce(22:55, 4/17/2019)
this is cute. can you define the body shading a slight bit? Splook sweet creature 02:43 Thu Apr 18
Re-uploaded. I just redid the shading, and tweaked the coloring a bit... not sure I like it. —Jayce(16:33, 4/18/2019)
Can you expand the shading? Ellie life is an illusion 17:25, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Where? I could see the face, but I feel the main body and tail are good for now. —Jayce(17:29, 4/18/2019)
I feel the haunch could be expanded just a bit. Ellie life is an illusion 17:30, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(17:38, 4/18/2019)
Could you define the shading depth on the belly? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:34, 4/19/2019
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(16:08, 4/21/2019)
CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:52,4/22/2019
Troutclaw (E) - For Approval
I wanted a challenge! .. and anime hair. im only in it for thE HAIR. I referenced and colorpicked the star. i dont think i matched the stripes very great tho?? but if you have suggesstions on that please do ill probably fiddle with those tomorrow. i sure got that challenge. i think i can have this and flutterkit bc this is a redo? Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 02:07, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
This looks very good! The stripes appear a tad sharper/rugged on the star. Maybe try using a very small eraser and stroke horizontally on the edges? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:17, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Dawnflower (E) ~ CBA
eh - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:40,4/18/2019
Darken the base a tad? She looks white.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:03, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
I matched the other images though, so idk what I can do about it. I think it looks plenty gray to me - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:04,4/18/2019
She looks white to me too, did you take her colors from her apprentice? Her apprentice pixel looks white to me as well, only her queen is gray in my eyes. I guess it just depends on the person? JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 00:12, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
I took the colors from the old elder - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:34,4/19/2019
I colorpicked the colors off her other images, and what I got for this: f2f2f2. On the apprentice, I got eaeaea. On the queen, I got d5d5d4. The bases don't match..Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
It appears that the other images were tweaked to be lightened but that doesn't appear to be the case for the queen? I'm confused, which one should I match? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:56,4/19/2019
Since majority of her set is lightened, i feel as if the queen should be also lightened. -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 03:09, 4/19/2019
But wouldn't it make sense to have the rest darkened, since she's supposed to be pale gray? I don't know lol JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 12:55, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
I mean.. she's described as "very pale gray" which to me, seems like an offwhite/near white - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:18,4/19/2019
Meh I might be the odd one out but I feel like the queen most accurately reflects 'very pale gray', and we should have the app tweaked. But, it's not really that big of a deal; tbh you could pick since it's fairly close either way.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:28, 4/19/2019
Re-uploaded matched the queen - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:51,4/20/2019
Smooth the shading on the middle section a little, if possible :D — max it is the real thing, () 08:52 Sat Apr 20 2019
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:10,4/20/2019
Hm could you darken the shading just half a tick? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:51, 4/20/2019
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:39,4/21/2019
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:27, 4/21/2019
Bellaleaf (Q) ~ For Approval
-- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 14:49, 4/18/2019
Tail is wrong. Fixing it. -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 14:50, 4/18/2019
Reups -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 15:07, 4/18/2019
She has more tabby stripes per the KP, can you add some more since they show the same side. Ellie life is an illusion 17:27, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reups Ferk helped me with the redline. -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 03:07, 4/19/2019
Could you define the light on the ears. There's also shading leaking onto her back from the the ears. Ellie life is an illusion 08:05, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe give the stripes a slight smudge or maybe a blur? They look a little sharper than her other images - this is gorgeous Silv! — max it is the real thing, () 08:51 Sat Apr 20 2019
Reups Thank you max! --Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 09:21, 4/20/2019
Smooth the tail shading some? Also, given the source, I believe there'd be less shading on the top of the head —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:52, 4/20/2019
reups --Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 09:35, 4/22/2019
Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
redid this, because I could not make heads or tails of how to even begin tweaking it ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:38, 4/18/2019>
CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:15,4/20/2019
Sorry to break CBA, could you actually expand the shading on the haunch? Ellie life is an illusion 08:06, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
I'm gonna reupload this later but will do. ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:08, 4/21/2019>
Nectarsong (W) - For Approval
tried my best with the texture on this one ....;w; Tybaxel (talk) 00:40, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
I could be wrong but I feel like she's a little cross-eyed? Her right eye seems to be pointing a little too much to the left. JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 01:30, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
I think Lightleap had similar eyes, could be ok? Malina457 (talk) 02:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)malina
I agree with the eyes, they look cross-eyed. Ellie life is an illusion 02:05, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded Tybaxel (talk) 03:25, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
reuploaded fixed a shading error Tybaxel (talk) 15:47, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Heyo, I'm the person with the master pattern of Nectarsong, and I bring tips! For the texture, I had 3 layers. The first one is the base color on multiply (hex code is #825714), and I used a 1px airbrush and swiped in the direction of the fur. The second layer is the first layer copied. And the third layer is the base color on multiply with the opacity at 43.1%. For that, I used a 1px paintbrush and swiped in the direction of the fur. I use GIMP, and I can always send you the file if needed. Hope this helped. ♥ Star red and black ♥<17:42, 4/19/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">waving through 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">a window <17:42, 4/19/2019>
ty for your input!! i used four layers on mine and i think i did well enough recreating the texture! i’ll see if others have to say anything though Tybaxel (talk) 19:44, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
The texture should be a bit sharper/more visible underneath the shading^^ It's recreated pretty closely, for one going without a file - but you could probably grab that from Star or just adjust it slightly yourself.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:58, 4/21/2019
reuploaded Tybaxel (talk) 20:23, April 21, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:57,4/22/2019
My apologies, but the shading on the limbs (tail, legs, ect) could be defined a bit more, and I think there would be at least a little bit of light on -> leg. Not much, but to represent the light coming from <- side of the cat. —Jayce(16:11, 4/22/2019)
Nightsky (TBC) (W) - CBA
meh... ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 06:14, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Could you lighten the shading a tad and smooth the egdes. Ellie life is an illusion 07:04, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 07:09, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
could you define a little bit of depth on the chest area? more towards the chin and such, if that makes sense — max it is the real thing, () 20:58 Sat Apr 20 2019
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:53, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:21, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Rain (E) ~ For Approval
File:Rain.elder.png I forgot how i did his toeh lol -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 07:55, 4/19/2019
Define the shading on the legs and tail a bit more? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:58, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Reups -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 16:43, 4/19/2019
With your light source, the belly shading should be on the <-- side not the -->. Ellie life is an illusion 08:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
reups -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 09:25, 4/20/2019
Can you smooth the shading on the back and belly? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:59, 4/21/2019
Reups -- Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 09:37, 4/22/2019
add depth to the eye Willowstep12 (talk) 12:20, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
his eye is meant to be gone, i dont understand what you mean --Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 13:50, 4/22/2019
What Willowstep means is that since the eye is gone there should be depth to make it look like a hole, not a flat surface. Similar to One-eye's image. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 14:58, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
That can be fixed by adding some scar tissue and shading there, that should give it depth Ellie life is an illusion 18:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Jasper (KP) - CBA
That is a metal collar btw I forgot I never posted this Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•15:03 Fri Apr 19
Define the light on the tongue and shading on the collar. Also with this source, add shading to the shoulder (Moss's source). Define the shading on the ears.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:29, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shadin on the haunch and belly Ellie life is an illusion 08:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•20:38 Sat Apr 20
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:13, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Quailfeather (TBC) (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:17, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Baby! Maybe smooth out the tail shading on ^ side of the tail? I love this Malina457 (talk) 17:20, April 19, 2019 (UTC)malina
Reuploaded. Thanks. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:59, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth out the shading on the front legs a touch? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:35, 4/19/2019
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:11, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Could youj smooth the haunch shading near the top? Ellie life is an illusion 08:09, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Cedarheart (E) ~ For Approval
Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:17, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Shading's leaking away from the lineart just slightly on the tummy^^ —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:36, 4/19/2019
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:11, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth the shading, it seems to rough especially for the transition from the light to the shading. Ellie life is an illusion 23:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Mousefur (E) - CBA
I wanted a challenge and boy did I get one. I'm not satisfied with the pelt, I think she should have more lighter areas. I'll see what I can do. JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 02:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Defined some shading JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 03:01, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading on the ear closest to us?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 05:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
It should be fine since from what I see it matches her other images. Expand the stomach and front body shading please. Ellie life is an illusion 06:15, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Stomach shading is plenty fine, in my opinion, and I think maybe only add some more shading to that front leg closest to us. — max it is the real thing, () 08:46 Sat Apr 20 2019
Reuploaded - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 13:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:00, 4/21/2019
Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D Crystie Can't help loving me 14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above. Ellie life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work!Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P Crystie Can't help loving me 03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P Crystie Can't help loving me 10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 10:38, 4/22/2019l1
Define the eye depth.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
this needs much darker shading :( also, the lineart looks a little distorted, or is that just me? Tybaxel (talk) 13:37, April 22, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Brokenstar (Alt. E) - For Approval
smoosh floof. also I know it doesn't match the DF, but I have that up for tweak nom to darken it. I can match it for now if I need to just lmk — ferk was here ✦✦✦ 20:22, 04/20/2019
Are you matching Scarlet's lineart? I can't tell. Define the earpink a tad?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:45, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
Uh I don't have to match lineart. Reuploaded. — ferk was here ✦✦✦ 22:13, 04/20/2019
Uh from what I know you have to match lineart. I was made to match Burnt's Slash lineart. It should match Scarlet's. Ellie life is an illusion 22:58, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
I was told I did not have to match the line art. I spoke to multiple leads about it. There are a few other lineart tweaks that do not match between regular and alt as well; Brokenstar’s dark forests, Thistleclaw’s dark forests are two examples. — ferk was here ✦✦✦ 03:36, 04/21/2019
I think it's fine. --
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 04:16, 4/21/2019
I was told before I withdrew Poppydawn's alt by Jayce I had to match Scarlet's lineart for Poppydawn's elder above since she posted it first. Scarlet posted Brokenstar's elder first, so you should probably match hers, Ferk.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:39, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
If they spoke to the leads about it, and they were fine, this is fine Malina457 (talk) 16:10, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina
It is indeed fine as is. If you would - could you define the shading depth on the front leg closest to us? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:01, 4/21/2019
I personally think Ferk should match the lineart, especially since Potato was told to match very recently but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. Could you lighten the shading in the area behind the head, or maybe decrease the depth there? Almost looks like a dark blob. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:26, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Kitepaw (A) - CBA
File:Kitepaw.apprentice.png take two; sorry about last night, my brain was fried from work — max it is the real thing, () 20:47 Sat Apr 20 2019
Could you lighten the shading a bit? seems a bit dark --
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 04:17, 4/21/2019
reuploaded these monitors will be the death of me — max it is the real thing, () 06:12 Sun Apr 21 2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:19, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Loudbelly (E) - CBA
i love his name honestly — max it is the real thing, () 22:14 Sat Apr 20 2019
Completely optional, but perhaps soften the darker eye depth a touch?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:30, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded just rearranged it a little nicer, hope that works? — max it is the real thing, () 22:40 Sat Apr 20 2019
He got a grumbling tummy, which is honestly relatable. CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:18, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Lark (CG) - For Approval
File:Lark.cg.png David was OA of the kit and mentioned that they wanted her to be a grey tabby since we nuked the rule so here she is<3 — ferk was here ✦✦✦ 22:45, 04/20/2019
Maybe make her a little closer to pale? I love this pattern ^^ Malina457 (talk) 23:32, April 20, 2019 (UTC)Malina
Actually, she is mentioned to look like her father, so she needs to be a dark gray tabby.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:09, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Her description is "pale tabby" I disagree Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina
She shoukd be a pale tabby but I thinm what the meams by her looking like her father would be tabby design but from what I remember Stormfur was never a tabby? Ellie life is an illusion 04:10, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Looks like does not mean totally the same, unlike Hoot Jumper and Barley. She might just carry genetics like her father, pale gray is okay. --Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 04:12, 4/21/2019
Since she's a pale tabby honestly she could be made lighter - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:24,4/21/2019
Havenpelt (Q) - For Approval
File:Havenpelt.Queen.png Honestly I'm not really happy with this. Tinystream (talk) 23:05, April 20, 2019 (UTC)
I'm not seeing the image? Could reup it? Ellie life is an illusion 00:47, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Darken shading and define the light Ellie life is an illusion 00:48, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reup I may have to redo the white. Tinystream (talk) 01:28, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
could you define the light on the forepaws, they're looking quite grey at the moment ~ ☾Moonyy ( 06:11, April 21, 2019 (UTC) )
Judging by her apprentice, the eyes need to be a darker green. These look pale teal tbh.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:44, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Rain (Alt.E) ~ For Approval
File:Rain.elder.alt.png I have no idea of the light source so if I need to fix it, please be specific of where exactly to adjust/add shading.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
With this source, there shouldn't be any shading on the back. See Cloud (my art). She has a similar source to this.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Actually from the way it seems, there shohld be back shading as it looks as though its coming from the --> Ellie life is an illusion 04:09, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Yes it's meant to be coming from top -> so I think a little bit of back shading is needed.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:26, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Duskwater (E) ~ For Approval
Wow I actually like this -Shadow It's a prosthetic 01:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
The top of the head should have shading/depth shading I think, since it looks like the light is coming from below. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 23:03, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit more on the head and ears? This is really good! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:17, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 17:59, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Smallear (E) - CBA
I love his ears. JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 02:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:32, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Dappletuft (W) - For Approval
nice Splook sweet creature 04:25 Sun Apr 21
Either remove or lessen the shading on the tail tip. it looks like a flat object with the tail tip being covered entirely - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:07,4/21/2019
reuploaded Splook sweet creature 17:47 Sun Apr 21
Could you expand the shading on the back and tail a bit more? It's looking very slim imo. And add some more depth too Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:16, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded Splook sweet creature 17:11 Mon Apr 22
I'm a bit confused by your shading source on the tail. I see shading on the top and bottom of it? If its coming from where i thinm it is, some of the top needs removed. Ellie life is an illusion 18:09, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Featherpelt (Q) ~ For Approval
ugh i suck at matching tabby patterns ~ ☾Moonyy ( 06:10, April 21, 2019 (UTC) )
^ colour picked from the apprentice, tried to match that and the kit but none of her images seem to show this side well enough, hope it's okay? :/ ~ ☾Moonyy ( 06:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC) )
Yeah, it's perfectly ok to make up the side that isn't showing. ^^ As long as the overall pattern matches. And could you make the stripes a bit thicker on the bottoms where they end (not the tapered tip)? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:15, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
not quite sure what you mean, vec? do i taper the tips or make them more blunt? i think the apprentice's stripes are sharp... ? ~ ☾Moonyy ( 04:45, April 22, 2019 (UTC) )
I guess I'm kinda saying to add some more variety to the stripes thickness. It's very linear right now. Something maybe like this? Thicker on some of the ends, very fine at the tips. I was referencing the apprentice's stripes when doing this. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:32, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
aah i see what you mean. thanks, i’ll reup in the morning ~ ☾Moonyy ( 13:02, April 22, 2019 (UTC) )
Cat with rose-tipped paws - CBA
wanna hear a joke? <== Burntclaw 11:06, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Sure lol, mayhaps smooth the tail shading? Malina457 (talk) 16:08, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina
I feel like you should perhaps make the rose-tips more orangey/creamey? That pink looks a little unrealistic imo. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
I mean its told as being a rose tipped and normally rose symbolizes a pink/off red. Not to mention, the description itself isnt really realistic. Why does it have to be realistic now? Ellie life is an illusion 18:41, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
There's waste by both paws. Gopherpaw 19:11, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
reup Burntclaw 22:50, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:56,4/22/2019
Purdy (e) ~ For Approval
my hands are very tired
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 15:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
this may just be me but i think the gray on the face would look better if you smoothed it a little more? like blend it a little more into the brown Tybaxel (talk) 16:03, April 21, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Reuploaded
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 16:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
I don't think that cream fur on the back should be there, since it's meant to be exposed skin right? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:31, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 17:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Could you expand the tail stripes to reach the end of the lineart? They kinda cut off here when they expand to the other side in the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:15, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 18:26, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Breeze That Rustles the Leaves (ki) - CBA
All colors from the TB. —Jayce(16:11, 4/21/2019)
Cute baby. CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 12:13, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Fringewhisker (W) - For Approval
so. tortoiseshells. ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 20:45, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
Uh from what her page says she's spose to be white with brown spltoches? Ellie life is an illusion 20:57, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
It matches the apprentice Mink, except for the face patch, please recede it to the mid nose, its white there, good job though! Malina457 (talk) 21:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina
On the loner and apprentice the pattern is much less smudged than what you have.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
The face placement actually looks alright in my opinion, but maybe move the white on the cheek up a little bit? Sorry if this is a repeat comment — max it is the real thing, () 21:52 Sun Apr 21 2019
Ok maybe I was seeing an old version?? Cause now it looks fine, my apologies XD Malina457 (talk) 22:06, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina
Re-Uploaded! I've been trying for a bit now but if it still doesn't match, I'll work on it tommorow! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 22:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)
could you define the body shading just a tad? so cute!! Splook sweet creature 01:04 Mon Apr 22
There are three shades on brown on the image. You've got two of them that's darker and lighter, and another that's more grayish. There's supposed to be some white flecks on ---> portion of the face. I don't know if Jayce already offered you, but would you like one of the files? I did her kit a while back, and trust me, it really helped. ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
I honestly have not had the time to offer the file, but I'm always willing to send one to someone if they need it. (provided I remember to do so lmao) —Jayce(16:13, 4/22/2019)
Dangling Leaf (H) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:05, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Nuuu I was planning to do him XD. The shading on the tail is kinda making the pale turn a tad green.. is there a possibility to slightly adjust the shading on that part? To make it less green? ;)Av Out of sight and out of mind () 04:08, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 13:03, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Swallowtail (RC) (E)- For Approval
eh... ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 06:26, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Dodge (Le) - For Approval
We shall see. Mother of Ferrets 07:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Could you tweak his muzzle to look more flattened as he’s described? For inspiration, you could look at Brokenstar’s leader if that helps — max it is the real thing, () 10:32 Mon Apr 22 2019
Reuploaded - Tweaked the eyes per discord suggestion, and attempted a flatter muzzle appearance. Mother of Ferrets 11:11, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Could you give the shading on the <-- sidenof his body a bitnof curve so it doesn't appear like a straight line? As I beleive it would be more curved due to the light source im seeing? Good job on this Ellie life is an illusion 11:23, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Taper the scar at the ends a tad? Looks a little paintbrushy there.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 12:16, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Curved shading and attempted to adjust the scarring a bit more! Thanks for the compliments Mother of Ferrets 12:44, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Spotfur (W)- For Approval
an interesting challenge lol Tybaxel (talk) 14:32, April 22, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
You have Nectarsong up as well. You must choose to withdraw this or the other. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:58,4/22/2019
Ty you can post this image, you just have to wait till the other is approved Malina457 (talk) 16:08, April 22, 2019 (UTC)malina
No, they need to pick one or the other. An image being on CBA does not guarantee it will be approved. —Jayce(16:09, 4/22/2019)
I was meaning if/when the other one is they can post this then, and only then Malina457 (talk) 16:13, April 22, 2019 (UTC)malina
I don't think it's fair to let them reserve this while they alreadt have an original up, like its against the rules as far as I know. Ellie life is an illusion 18:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
Conefoot (W) ~ For Approval
Color picked from the apprentice! -Shadow hOnK :o) 17:06, April 22, 2019 (UTC)
The patches need to be sharper, per the apprentice image. Ellie life is an illusion 18:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)