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Onestar (Warrior Alt) - Declined
File:Onestar.warrioraltt.png Im not very sure if this can be made but I saw it under the characters that need art. I tried to make it as similar as possible.
Sorry if I did make a mistake of making this, im very new to the project so here it is... Kezii (talk) 01:43, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii
By the way I also used FireAlpaca if there needs to be changes. Kezii (talk) 01:45, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii
Welcome to the project! You are able to make this i believe, but since this is your first Chaart, this is for Evaluation I'm pretty sure, Don't thumb your images or align them (|thumb) (|left or |right), Put the image before any flavor text you wanna put along with it! This should be named File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png aswell. The < eye is looking a bit gray, and shading could be defined. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 02:03, May 26, 2019 (UTC)
I have the leader file from when I was doing this, I can email if you want? Ellie life is an illusion 02:56, May 26, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge/blur the earpink. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:37, May 26, 2019 (UTC)
I tried all the suggestions, fixed gray eyes, and added ear fur (to make it more similar to the alt leader) Kezii (talk) 23:14, May 29, 2019 (UTC)Kezii
Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into source mode and remove the |thumb. Also avoid thumbing by going to the file and click "Upload a new version of this file". You need to upload this as File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png, or the image won't work with the wiki's templates. The lineart also appears to be missing in some places, namely the ears and paws. Brighten up the white on both paws, and define the shading everywhere on the white. Can you also smooth out the chest shading? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:29, May 30, 2019 (UTC)
The texture, I believe, looks a little rough. Could you smooth it out?
The hind paws should be white too, and I think the hind paw furthest from us is hidden? It should be visible. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:14, May 30, 2019 (UTC)
Oh, and I use firealpaca too so if you have any specific questions, let me know :) Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:21, May 30, 2019 (UTC)
Shading could also afford some smoothing on the hind leg closest to us. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 20:55, May 30, 2019 (UTC)
idk if it’s just my phone screen, but there appears to be red around the lineart? some of it seems to be on the lineart ~ ☾Moonyy ( 00:28, May 31, 2019 (UTC) )
yeah, the colors seem to be leaking out of the lineart, and the lineart itself is red/blurred in some places. luke my last (マイラスト) 13:33 Sat Jun 1
idk if this has been said already so sorry if it has, but some of the lineart appears to be missing. ✧Winter✧ 12:58, 6/02/2019
You still have plenty of time left, but are you still working? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:54, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Declined due to lack of work.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:18, 6/07/2019
Cloversplash (W) - For Approval
Comments? I love that clover leaf. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows. Ellie life is an illusion 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail tyb 🌌 owo??? 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one??? Ellie life is an illusion 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
i agree with mink :/
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one Ellie life is an illusion 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever Burntclaw 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
I'm going to be the unpopular one here, but I think Potato and Jose were actually correct. It should be one of the leaves, not the entire plant. It explicitly says "a clover leaf", and if you look it up... you get things like a three or four leaf clover, meaning that a "clover leaf" is singular. You were correct in your statements, Potato and Jose. Please go and change the marking back to how you had it, but perhaps shrink it just a little bit. —Jayce(16:18, 6/01/2019)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
It says that the white flash is on her nose, and this looks like it's on her forehead. Could you move it down so it touches the top of the nose? Also, can you curve the haunch shading to match its shape? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Can you make the shape wider and kind of heart shaped. These are clover leaves for reference. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded me tries Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
You could do something like this maybe. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 17:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:48, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the haunch shading Ellie life is an illusion 19:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded arghhh Av Out of sight and out of mind () 19:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
could you also define the ear pink? i cant really see it espeically on the < ear Ellie life is an illusion 20:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
There should be light on the legs with this source Ellie life is an illusion 09:16, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
The source is fine- this was used on two other images. See below. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
While this source has been used, those other images have a lot more depth on the front legs so they're not all flat; if you could do that some, that'd be great.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:51, 6/02/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
The shading appears very blotchy on the haunch. Could you please smooth it, along with on the front leg closest to us? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:25, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I hate the haunch shading Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:28, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail - just a little bit, and maybe extend the shading on the back leg so it reaches <<- that way more? This looks amazing, Potato! — max it is the real thing, (00:05, 05/6/2019)
Reuploaded thanks! Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:43, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
The shading on both legs and the tail could stand to be smoothed more. There's also waste by <- that ear. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:18, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:13, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Define the depth of the eye color and smooth the haunch shading —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:05, 6/06/2019
Reuploaded *internally screams at haunch shading* Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:35, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
can you define the light on the legs, or fix the way it transitions from the top. It seems abrupt to cover the whole legs instead of equally transitioning. So maybe smoothen the top part up and add just a tad of light to them Ellie life is an illusion 12:23, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I don't want to define the light on the front leg farthest from us much more or the chest shading is going to look weird. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:26, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Blackstar (W) ~ For Approval
I'm still experimenting on the tint, the shading is sposed to look like it does btw Ellie life is an illusion 05:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Re-Ups here we go Ellie life is an illusion 06:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth out the shading? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:07,6/1/2019
Also, looking at the leader, there should be at least a scar on this side. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:36,6/1/2019
Looking at the old warrior, he didn't get his scars til he was a deputy? I asked about that before I started and I was told he didn't have them during this time Ellie life is an illusion 10:38, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
I also went to check his page for the cites of the scars but he doesn't have them?? Ellie life is an illusion 10:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Hmm unless a cite pops, it's fine as is. But, the haunch shading does need to be receded here, the source doesn't call for this much.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:08, 6/01/2019
Re-Ups Ellie life is an illusion 03:00, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth the shading on the flank and top of the haunch? There's also a spot of shading on the top part of the tail, almost near the tip, which I don't think would be there? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:30, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
With this source, you wouldn't need shading on the top of the shoulder like what you've got. Just remove the top bit, 'cause if you leave the rest, it will still make sense to show there's a shoulder there. — max it is the real thing, (00:06, 05/6/2019)
Re-Ups, I'd much rather keep the shoulder part as I have the same source on my others. Ellie life is an illusion 07:10, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
i forgot the leaking tail shading, ill reup that soon Ellie life is an illusion 07:11, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
I might redo the shading as I'm not overlu happy with it. Ellie life is an illusion 09:06, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Re-Ups, I fixed the shading Ellie life is an illusion 03:35, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
I concur with Max on the shoulder bit; due to the image being white, shading is a lot more visible, so here with the source, it shouldn't form a shoulder top when the light's right at it.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:23, 6/06/2019
Re-Ups Ellie life is an illusion 02:54, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Bluebellkit (K) - For Approval
I think I did very well with my first white cat. Comments? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
blur the shading along the tail near the point? luke my last (マイラスト) 14:48 Sat Jun 1
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Same thing as Blackstar. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
is it possible to curve the shoulder shading some more? it looks odd with it just being a straight line. david 🌈 22:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading, its really rough Ellie life is an illusion 09:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Remove waste and define the light on the tail —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:52, 6/02/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:03, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:15, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Sorry to break CBA, but I still see several issues apparent. The shading is leaking away from the lineart slightly on the haunch, and I believe that back paw that's visible would have the barest touch of light, since it's the shorthair blank, it's showing enough for there to be some. The shading on the face shouldn't go quite so far up the muzzle, and should connect > way along the jawbone, and wrap upside the head to cover the back of the head's tufts of fur. The shoulder shading is still in that awkward spot mentioned by skt earlier; I believe that could be removed entirely. The shading depth should be defined on the visible front paw/lower leg area, and there's shading leaking from the arm onto the < side of the haunch, which shouldn't be there.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:08, 6/04/2019
Reuploaded redid the shading, this looks much better. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:18, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Same thing with Blackstar, and I think there's an odd colored patch on <--- side of the haunch. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:07, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I hope it's nonexistent now. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:17, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Shading is leaking in several places. Ellie life is an illusion 09:07, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:16, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
im still seeing leaking shading on the haunch Ellie life is an illusion 12:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded it should be gone now. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:28, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Blackstar (K) - For Approval
I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smudge the black paws a bit more? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
There's some waster, and it looks almost like there's a gap in the haunch shading. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 16:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded the gap in the haunch shading is intentional, Baykit's source has the same gap. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:43, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a little overall. —Ivy ☆ 18:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
The black on the hindleg needs to be higher. As his others show it about just about a bit of his ankle wise so both would almost cover his back paws completely.Ellie life is an illusion 19:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 19:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
There's a patch of shading leaking onto <---- side of the haunch. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Its leaking on the stomach too Ellie life is an illusion 03:44, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
smooth the shading
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 12:24, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:03, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail Ellie life is an illusion 03:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:27, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Same comments as on Bluebellkit, and also smooth the tail shading —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:09, 6/04/2019
Reuploaded redid shading Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:31, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Can you taper the <--- end of the haunch shading so it doesn't end in a bulk? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:06, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:14, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Same as the other Ellie life is an illusion 13:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:19, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
smooth the haunch Ellie life is an illusion 12:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
"me? i loved him." ♥ Star red and black ♥<19:37, 6/01/2019>
Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:03, 6/06/2019
re-up ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:12, 6/07/2019>
Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:18,6/2/2019
Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit. Ellie life is an illusion 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:03, 6/06/2019
re-up Mink, can you explain? I'm not quite sure of what you're saying. ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:55, 6/06/2019>
Beetail (W) ~ For Approval
Let's try this again. Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
This should match the star and the deputy. The stripes on these seems thinner, rougher, and more bunched up together. Ellie life is an illusion 02:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
This actually matches quite well, Mink? Could you possibly define the shading depth on the chest (near the arms)? — max it is the real thing, (04:05, 02/6/2019)
The stripes don't seem to cross like this on the others unless my computer screen is showin it too dark. They're also more smudged and rougher looking Ellie life is an illusion 09:23, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
I agree with Mink. The stripes appear rougher and closer together on the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
https://www.ezimba.com/work/190603C/ezimba15349395102400.png here's the unshaded version to help with stripe placement. The colors look good - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:12,6/3/2019
i think there's a line of waste under the tail... i forgot to remove that too in mine ~ ☾Moonyy ( 06:58, June 4, 2019 (UTC) )
Reup Sorry it took so long, I've been busy. Tinystream (talk) 14:02, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
can you add more stripes to the tail? and smudge them to match the others in the set? Ellie life is an illusion 12:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
I also think tapering and adding various sizes of stripes would also help. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:06, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out Ellie life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow hOnK :o) 16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Can you also smooth the shading out? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Re-Ups Ellie life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
I think the shading could be smoothed out more. It's still very sharp, and the revision history shows only slight changes.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:25, 6/04/2019
The design was supposed to be sharp, so I'm tryng to smoothbit as much as I can while kesping the shading design. But yeah, ill fix that Ellie life is an illusion 21:45, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
I think if you lighten it just a little more, you can remove some of the sharpness - but Spooky's comment still stands, its still sharp. — max it is the real thing, (00:08, 05/6/2019)
Re-Ups Ellie life is an illusion 03:41, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
There's shading leaking away from the lineart on the belly, underneath the tail, and on the > back leg. If could nab away waste floating about and add some light to the tail tip as well, that'd be great.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:26, 6/06/2019
re-ups Ellie life is an illusion 03:30, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Cloverfoot (K) ~ CBA
i'm not sure if i should put the heading as for evaluation since i already uploaded something but it got declined rip. i really want to play sa2 luke my last (マイラスト) 13:44 Sun Jun 2
You're fine- Spooky moved you to apprentice rank cause a few years ago you were an apprentice. Smooth out the shading? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
I believe the stripes could stand to be slightly thickened on the body, and given a slightly rougher more paintbrushy feel, like the loner and rogue —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:57, 6/02/2019
re-ups tried a new brush and repainted the stripes since smudging them didn't really look good. started coming down with a really bad cough yesterday and it turns out im still bad at sa2 so theres that luke my last (マイラスト) 13:37 Mon Jun 3
I believe the stripes on the tail could stand to be thicker to match, and overall they could be just a little less sharp —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:18, 6/04/2019
re-ups tried to avoid blurring the stripes as much as possible luke my last (マイラスト) 21:06 Tue Jun 4
I think the stripes could still be softened some more. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:58, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
re-ups this is as soft as i could stand to make them honestly luke my last (マイラスト) 15:37 Thu Jun 6
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:48, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Dragonfly (Ki) ~ For Approval
imaliveiswear – Cinna dear evan hansen, 00:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
There should be a dorsal stripe and I think the stripes are more jagged. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 19:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Can you define the dorsal stripe? Im having a hard time making it out, or matbe thicken it some? Ellie life is an illusion 10:25, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:03, 6/07/2019
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 00:22, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval
okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style Ellie life is an illusion 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
i think you should darken the shading a little :O tyb 🌌 owo??? 18:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Reuploaded
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 19:35, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
there's a line of waste underneath the tail and the back paw furthest from us doesn't seem to be filled in ~ ☾Moonyy ( 07:04, June 4, 2019 (UTC) )
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:04, 6/07/2019
Reuploaded SCHOOL'S OUT!
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 00:23, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Yay Ari!! Anyways, that back paw Moonyy mentioned doesn't appear to filled in. All I see is the background. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded pftttt – Cinna dear evan hansen, 00:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Alder (Kit) - For Approval
hi. my naem squidwardo. i draw katz.
i believe this is freegame so its time to get revenge on this pattern bc if u didnt know my first charart was one of alders set that got declined. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 02:50, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Add variation to the flecks, and define the gray flecks. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:51, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
i can see the gray flecks tho Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 04:13, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
I do agree, they need defined Ellie life is an illusion 04:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Would you care for one of the files? I have the hunter, and I think I still have Jayce's old warrior. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Could you thin out the shading and possibly change the tint? It's throwing off the color and making it look extremely different. I know tint is often a choice, but this is making it look very red. —Jayce(07:46, 6/04/2019)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:04, 6/07/2019
Still working, gonna try to re-up by at least tomorrow Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 20:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Cinderfur (W) - CBA
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 20:41, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading depth? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:16, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Can you smooth out the shading as well? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 03:49, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
Better? Shading isn't something I'm great with. —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:51, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
arm shading is leaking onto the haunch a bit Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 12:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 18:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Could you define the light on the front legs, and recede it so it reaches nearer to the shoulder? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:31, 6/07/2019
reuploaded—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 02:16, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:48, 6/07/2019
Crookedstar (Alt. K) - For Approval
this was actually difficult; tweaked the mouth lineart a tiny bit, but added shading to try and show the "twist" + added some bit of a lip to show it more? — max it is the real thing, (09:00, 04/6/2019)
Could you possibly show thw tweak a bit more? I'm not really seeing it? Ellie life is an illusion 10:18, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
There’s only so much you can do with this angle - I’m gonna wait for more comments before changing anything — max it is the real thing, (10:57, 04/6/2019)
Maybe you could make his tongue poke out? I think that'll get the message across. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 14:53, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
I think the only way really to show his jaw would be to flip it but I'm not sure that's allowed? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 20:29, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
It might worth opening up a discussion for it, seeing as this alt is very noteworthy for Crooked (and for any other characters and blanks this might affect) — max it is the real thing, (23:06, 04/6/2019)
I agree. I posted a discussion here. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 15:59, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded flipped the kit for now; seeing as the discussion has been in favour of flipping the image — max it is the real thing, (01:17, 07/6/2019)
should we flip his other kit image just to make it look consistent in the gallery? Burntclaw 05:11, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Moonflower (K) ~ CBA
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:17,6/5/2019
I think there should be more stripes and they're more compact? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:39, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded pain - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:30,6/6/2019
Could you add another stripe or two in that bare patch on the back? It seems out of place from the rest of the pattern. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:07, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:54,6/7/2019
Define the shading a touch more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:20, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:07,6/7/2019
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:05, 6/07/2019
Frondkit (Ki) ~ CBA
File:Frondkit.kit.png —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:19, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Could you darken the tail shading a little bit? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:30, 6/06/2019
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:01, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:46, 6/07/2019
Cinderheart (W) - CBA
fail 100 Burntclaw 15:28, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Could you define/sharpen the tail stripes some? They seem more distinct on the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:38, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
is it possible to lighten the eyes at all? they look pitch black to me...but otherwise i think it's very cute!!!! tyb 🌌 owo??? 00:02, June 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Cpuld you smooth the shading Ellie life is an illusion 02:39, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
the shading seems pretty smooth to me Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 12:13, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
reup unfortunately, as much as i want to change the eyes, i colorpicked from the other images, so if i change it we'll need to change the rest. Burntclaw 14:23, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
The alts and axtual set share like three to four different eye colors and this seems tok be much darker than the others. I do agree though that it wouldn't hurt lightening the eye color just a tad Ellie life is an illusion 14:26, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
im sorry but im actually confused. i colorpicked the lightest eye color from the old warrior which i believe was the first image in the set and the colors seem to be the same across the mc, app, queen, and old warrior image, i rly dont see how its darker. also i dont believe i need to match the alts Burntclaw 15:20, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
The color appears to match her other images, I honestly think the eyes can be left alone. Very pretty image, btw^^ —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:50, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
It matches her other images. CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:29,6/7/2019
Dewnose (W) - For Approval
My first charart ever lol. (Hand drawn shading, not texture) Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•15:29 Wed Jun 5
Could you add some shading to the hind paw? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:37, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
I think there'd be a touch less white on the tail, basing off the apprentice —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:00, 6/06/2019
Could you smooth the shading Ellie life is an illusion 14:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Dewnose (K) - CBA
end me —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 16:07, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth and expand the shading some Ellie life is an illusion 00:47, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Anywhere in particular? Or just all over? —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:53, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
The haunch could be expanded and the tail and facial could be smoothed Ellie life is an illusion 02:39, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 05:14, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 05:30, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Brightflower (W) - For Approval
I really tried with the flat face but it still came out iffy. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:11, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Her earpink is a little too neon and doesn't match her other images in the set. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:21, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
You could probably make the muzzle look more flat by raising the nose and putting a line over her nose bridge, to give the illusion it's scrunched up. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 14:12, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - I raised the jaw as you said and it looks so much better. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth the shading transition on the visible back paw? I know it splits at the toe mark, but it still appears abrupt —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:31, 6/06/2019
Re-uploaded — ☆ paper · finches ★ 19:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the front and hind paws closest to us ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:21, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Gray Wing (K) - CBA
— max it is the real thing, (23:24, 05/6/2019)
CBA? Love this guy. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:05, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Bluestar (Alt. Ki 2) ~ CBA
I love this girl. All colors from the other alts in the set. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:19, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:08, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Dewkit (SC) (K) - CBA
File:Dewkit (SC).kit.png Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 00:32, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
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CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:08, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Doespring (W) - CBA
Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 00:32, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
can you define the shading on the front leg closest to us and aybe add just a little shading to the edge of the tail so it doesn't look flat there? david 🌈 08:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
reup boop Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 00:43, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 00:20, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Dustpelt (W) - For Approval
this was hard lol tyb 🌌 owo??? 00:46, June 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Define the shading depth on the legs just a smidge? — max it is the real thing, (04:17, 06/6/2019)
reuploaded tyb 🌌 owo??? 14:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Define the light on the tail ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:21, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded tyb 🌌 owo??? 03:25, June 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Thin out the dorsal stripe? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Ambermoon (Alt K) - For Approval
love the new blanks. Very cute Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend! . . 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Expand shading Ellie life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend! . . 23:48, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
There's some shading leaking on the tail from the haunch shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:09, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading?-Shadow hOnK :o) 02:02, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Expand the shading. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:13, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Sparkpelt (W) - For Approval
~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:21, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
There's waste around the tail Ellie life is an illusion 05:02, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:04, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
the stripes looks a bit too brown in comparison as opposed to more red. david 🌈 08:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:18, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
I think the stripes should go over the paler belly/chest. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:27, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Lightningpelt (W) - For Approval
not sure if i love this ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:46, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Could you possibly smooth out the transition between the white and the brown parts of her pelt? I always did like your version of her. .o. —Jayce(18:29, 6/06/2019)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Aspenfall (W) ~ For Approval
tried to match the old warrior, was hard since it shows a different side. i put that weird splotch of grey near the chest because i thought the old warrior patch would be sliiiiightly visible. the rest i just tried to match the style and the patch placings on the back? i also colour-picked it for everything ~ ☾Moonyy ( 07:49, June 6, 2019 (UTC) )
edit: i now see the waste oops, i'll remove that next reup ~ ☾Moonyy ( 07:51, June 6, 2019 (UTC) )
expand & darken the shading to the right of the image? luke my last (マイラスト) 20:10 Thu Jun 6
expand the white in the eye, i can barely see it ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:48, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
reups did the shading, but the pupil and white placement is the exact same as what i've used for all my other warriors, so i'd like a second opinion before i change it ~ ☾Moonyy ( 06:29, June 7, 2019 (UTC) )
Add a bit of shading at the base of the chest to connect with the > side of the cat —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:24, 6/07/2019
Cherrytail (K) ~ CBA
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:30,6/6/2019
define the depth in the shading on the haunch and face ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:49, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:08,6/7/2019
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:51, 6/07/2019
Pebbleshine (W) ~ CBA
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:54, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Hailstar (W)- For Approval
Burntclaw 15:32, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Think there's a tiny bit of shading leaking from the <--- forearm onto the haunch. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Could you bring that arm shading up to join onto the back? If that makes sense - sorry, I can redline if need be — max it is the real thing, (03:50, 07/6/2019)
reup Burntclaw 14:50, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Ivypool (Alt W) - CBA
Gotta love how she was called black. LMAO. —Jayce(16:14, 6/06/2019)
Re-uploaded. Had a request to define the shoulder shading, but I opted to define it overall. —Jayce(16:36, 6/06/2019)
Shouldn't this be short-haired? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
...yes. oops. I’ll fix it in a bit. —Jayce(16:59, 6/06/2019)
Re-uploaded. I think part of the reason I made her long-furred was that it's possible she was confused for Hollyleaf during the section in which she's called black.. I may have just forgotten I can't do that. —Jayce(18:26, 6/06/2019)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:10, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Logfur (W) - CBA
The image history of this image brings back too many memories. —Jayce(16:14, 6/06/2019)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:00, 6/07/2019
Brackenfur (Alt. W 5) ~ CBA
The last of my images. Changed the stripe pattern, but mostly kept it the same otherwise. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:23, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:09, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Quailheart (W) - CBA
— max it is the real thing, (23:26, 06/6/2019)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:11, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Appledawn (W) ~ For Approval
It's the only one of the set, so there's nothing I have to be matching, right? I also don't know if I'm happy with the eyes or texture... Warriorcat1195 To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend! . . 00:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
We recently agreed to match the old images, so this would have to match the old warrior. But I think the colors match close enough with the exception of the eye color and ear pink...the stripes should be curlier. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Could you define the shading and shading depth? — max it is the real thing, (01:05, 07/6/2019)
Define the light and the pupil in the eye ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:22, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
The stripes need to be a bit thicker. Ellie life is an illusion 02:39, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Archeye (W) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Reups Decided to remove the patch on the eye because it was hiding his beautiful arch Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:12, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Reups Forgot some pixels. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:57, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Shadowpaw (Ki) ~ For approval
File:Shadowpaw.kit.png david 🌈 07:17, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
idk if you already did this, but I was asked to make the eyes more amber when I uploaded his mca. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 13:54, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Coal (FQ) (W) ~ For Approval
coal Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 12:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Shellfur (K) ~ For Approval
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:40,6/7/2019
Rileypool (W) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 13:52, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Mudfur (W) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 13:52, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Hawkwing (K) ~ For Approval
—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:52, 6/07/2019
Dappletail (W) - For Approval
Yay managed to snag three torties! - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Can you add/expand the ginger patch on the back? this orange patch. And maybe define the stripes? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:22, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Vec means dapples^^ Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Dapplepelt (W) - For Approval
File:Dapplepelt.warrior.png - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Hate to be that person, but would she get a warrior image? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Dusk Nose (Ki) - For Approval
- JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
you need the file? also, could you smooth out the shading? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:57,6/7/2019
I think the patches are...streakier? Have more streaks in them? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Hawkwing (W) ~ For Approval
—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:05, 6/07/2019
Cloudrunner (W) ~ For Approval
—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:05, 6/07/2019
Brackenfur (Alt. Ki) ~ For Approval
I've always loved this pattern, though it can be kinda hard to match. All colors from alt. apprentice. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:07, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
I don't think there should be any pale parts on the belly? /i think/ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:40, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Sneezecloud (Alt Ki) - For Approval
It's not white, it's pale. —Jayce(17:44, 6/07/2019)
Maybe make that pale more noticeably less white? Malina457 (talk) 19:21, June 7, 2019 (UTC)malina
It's not white though, it's more of a silver. I've seen lighter on images before. —Jayce(19:28, 6/07/2019)
even so, at a glance it registers as white, and I think that's really what matters even if it is technically a very light gray. Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 19:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Not with my images, because everyone knows that I use pure white if I'm adding white. I'm not going darker than this, because it clashes with my colors and honestly ruins what I had going for this. —Jayce(19:59, 6/07/2019)
maybe try a different tint? because it does look pretty white to me Burntclaw 00:10, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Running the hex through a colourhexa, it says is a very light grey, so I don't Jayce should have to change it? — max it is the real thing, (00:16, 08/6/2019)
I was told to remove the cream on Dusk Nose because it looks white in the context. I don't see how this is different. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:20,6/8/2019
Personally, I think it looks gray enough. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 00:24, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
yeah, i was told to remove the "white" on multiple images like shade pelt and lulu, even though they both weren't actually white but they looked white. imo it should probably be changed as per past decisions, especially since its causing so much controversy. also, just because the hex is a light gray doesnt mean that how it looks in the context of the image should be disregarded, as per what you yourself said on dusk nose, max Burntclaw 00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
it doesn't even look white. it's clearly light grey. the whole point of this shit is just to dodge around the no white rule and we all know it, like feel free to nominate those to add it in if you have to lol david 🌈 00:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Berrynose (W) - For Approval
an attempt was made .. this pattern was hard to match for some reason tyb 🌌 owo??? 18:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
The earpink looks much lighter on the apprentices? Though that could be the shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:37, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Adderfang (W) - For Approval
tyb 🌌 owo??? 19:05, June 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Could you define the mottles? This is very pretty ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Whorlpelt (K) ~ For Approval
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 19:43, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Rainflower (W) ~ For Approval
like this one so much more than the old one :p – Cinna dear evan hansen, 00:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)