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Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)
Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:00, 6/09/2019
I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard. — max it is the real thing, (07:31, 09/6/2019)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)
Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:03, 6/11/2019
as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:31, 6/11/2019
Reuploaded! Is this the right one? -Shadow hOnK :o) 23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light? — max it is the real thing, (05:31, 12/6/2019)
With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that Ellie life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Add a little light to the top of the paws ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
There are also three pixels of waste between the hind paw and the front <--- paw. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Add a bit more shading depth to the haunch, it still comes off as flat-ish imo compared to the rest of the image —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:12, 6/14/2019
Still working?
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:32, June 16, 2019 (UTC) Yes sorry i just finished finals!! I'll upload asap -Shadow hOnK :o) 04:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded! -Shadow hOnK :o) 17:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
There's three pixels of waste underneath the tail, and could you maybe define the earpink? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:47, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the haunch; there's a couple places where it's still pretty saturated ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:35, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Dawnflower (K) - For Approval
We're back, baby. I changed a few things, including the shading and adding the small gap in the haunch that I forgot before. I'll upload her warrior tommorow. Comments? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:04, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shading on the face, especially around the cheek bone and smudge/blur the earpink into a pelt some so it's not such a perfect straight line ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
expand and smooth the haunch, please.
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 05:38, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth all the shading Ellie life is an illusion 15:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded this is as far I'm willing to go with the face shading, as my source doesn't call for it to go all the way up the cheekbone. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:37, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Where would the source be from, then? The seems very close to one of the two typical sources we see here - in all but the cheekbone. Unless other things give, what is here does call for it to connect, as Scarlet said.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:55, 6/11/2019
The source is Baykit's. I'll reupload in a moment. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Since your using Baykit's source, the facial shading corves all the way down so you would need to do as Scarlet said. Ellie life is an illusion 23:13, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:00, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smudge the earpink a little more into the pelt? It still looks like a straight line, — max it is the real thing, (02:05, 12/6/2019)
Also, as an addition, can you connect the jaw shading to the chest? With this source, that should all be shadow. — max it is the real thing, (05:33, 12/6/2019)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:55, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Considerong you haunch shading isn't expanded much can you either expamd that or recede the tail shadinf Ellie life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:52, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded fixing the shading. This looks better. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:46, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
There's some waste under the forepaws and tailtip. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:56, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
fill in shading at the base of the arm, where it appears to be leaking from the lineart —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:41, 6/14/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:38, June 14, 2019 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the underside of the tail and haunch, the transition's still pretty blunt ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:17, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I smudge my shading. I hope this looks better. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
So I was discussing this with a few other people and wanted to bring something up. I think the tint of the shading should be dulled. And yes, I fully realize we leave the tint up to the artist most times, but not in cases where it interferes with set matchability. This looks nice on it's own, but I've put it with the others in the set, and it clashes and makes the images appear incongruent. It can obviously still retain some form of tint, but something not quite as prominent, in my opinion, so that the set meshes well.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:13, 6/15/2019
Reuploaded No, I understand. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Cool great. I believe the shading could stand to be lightened some, and it's leaking away from the lineart at the bottom of where the arm hits the tail; both in that elbow crease and where it meets the tail tip. The shading at the side of the cheek, given this source, similar to how you've got it on Blackstar/Bluebellkit —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:59, 6/16/2019
Reuploaded rip cheek shading Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the face.
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:36, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:47, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
The earpink color here seems duller and less saturated than the app and queen, which came before the elder that has the lighter shade —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:09, 6/16/2019
Reuploaded colorpicked from the queen Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:46, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
This is definitely getting close, and good job keeping up with it. Here's a little something for you; red is waste, blue is little bits of shading that should be removed that are leaking over from whenever they were smoothed - but as are, contradict the source; green is little bits of shading that still remain sharp, and thus could be smoothed.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:15, 6/17/2019
Reuploaded woohoo Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:51, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the tail shading, and recede how high it goes on that front arm's upper section (it needn't go higher than the eye, really) —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:13, 6/17/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:24, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
The arm hasn't been receded at all - the revision history doesn't show it. The tail shading is also pretty much just as sharp as before —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:07, 6/18/2019
Reuploaded didn't like the shading so I changed the light source and tinted it blue. The source is Wrenkit's. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:59, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Why did you change the shading placement? I get that it's artist's choice, but the other source was so close to being done. Smooth the haunch shading and recede the shading on the face. It shouldn't be covering that much space. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:15, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Same as my comment on the warrior — max it is the real thing, (01:58, 18/6/2019)
Reuploaded Well.. idk what to say except I'm very very very picky on light sources. I went back to the one I had before, but kept the blue shading. Now thinking about it, I like this source better. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:40, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Missiing the connecting cheek shading here - per logic in prior comments, it does need to be there.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:05, 6/18/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
There's a tiny bit of waste it seems under the front paws — max it is the real thing, (03:30, 19/6/2019)
Bramblestar (W) - For Approval
File:Bramblestar.warrior.png Another broad-shouldered dark brown tabby tom in the books. But he's the nice one :) Hopefully I gave Icy's Bramblestar some justice. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 02:05, 6/11/2019 ) 02:05, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink a touch more and define the light on the tail ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:43, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Dsfine the shading on the paler parts I cant see it Ellie life is an illusion 11:47, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
is the pale area -> actually part of the chest? on other images it seems to be the leg. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:25,6/11/2019
I meant that to be a part of the chest, but I see what you're talking about now... should I change it? Hawkfire Happy Days ( 15:34, 6/11/2019 ) 15:34, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Personally I would, most images so far have been treating that as a front leg —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:50, 6/11/2019
Can you fill in the space between the legs? — max it is the real thing, (20:07, 11/6/2019)
Additionally, for reference, doing something similar to Apple Blossom, Star Flower, or Quick Water for the pale chest. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:19, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
The hind paw furthest from us isn't filled in, and I'm having trouble seeing the shading in general. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:07, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 14:03, 6/13/2019 ) 14:03, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Could you possibly remove the pale from the > shoulder. That doesn't look like thats a piece kf the chest. Ellie life is an illusion 00:55, June 14, 2019 (UTC)
Could you darken the shading, and desaturate the tint of it a little? It's giving off a cool effect, but I can't see it very well for such a dark cat, and the tint is throwing the colors off compared next to the set —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:42, 6/14/2019
Smudge the pelt into the earpink ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:30, 6/16/2019
Yes, sorry! I've had a really busy past few days. It'll be up today. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 19:58, 6/16/2019 ) 19:58, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I have to say I liked it better with the saturated tint... Hawkfire Happy Days ( 20:04, 6/16/2019 ) 20:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Okay that's a bit better. I made a compromise version that used a little tint but did not have a profound effect on the base colors. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 20:24, 6/16/2019 ) 20:24, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
I think there are too many tail stripes? It seems very crowded here than the other images. And they're not exactly all linear (up and down); some are supposed to be cross hatched like the apprentice and leader. And the stripes on the lower haunch seem a tad sharper, too, towards their ends. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:37, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 15:47, 6/17/2019 ) 15:47, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Could you define the tail's dorsal stripe? I'm having trouble making it out —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:07, 6/18/2019
Reuploaded. *panting from effort* Hawkfire Happy Days ( 15:37, 6/18/2019 ) 15:37, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Almost there :P I do believe, though, that the scar that runs across his shoulder would show on the >> side and run into the pale; kinda in the same location in height as the leader - since that cite is from just barely before he's made deputy, it'd count.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:20, 6/19/2019
Reuploaded. Hawkfire Happy Days ( 15:37, 6/19/2019 ) 15:37, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Birchbark (K) - For Approval
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 05:23, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading, also this really good omg Ellie life is an illusion 11:48, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Also thicken the shading behind and the elbow into the crease at the belly ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:22, June 11, 2019 (UTC)
Same as above^^ —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:57, 6/11/2019
Reuploaded i hate shading with a passion
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 02:48, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Can you smooth the belly shading just a bit to match the transition the other bits have. Ellie life is an illusion 08:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded i tried
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 02:29, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth just a tad more Ellie life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Tbh it looks fine.
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 13:07, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
The shading to the stomach and arm are more rough than the other areas. I don't think it would hurt to smooth just so it would match? Ellie life is an illusion 13:32, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
i think it could be smoothed out Burntclaw 15:14, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded i tried
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:14, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Blur the shading behind the foreleg and belly some more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 05:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
It's still pretty sharp in the areas Scarlet mentioned —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:05, 6/15/2019
Reuploaded —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 08:03, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval
These new blanks are awesome!Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:02, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reupload Of course I only notice my shading issues the moment I upload.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:14, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
With your source, there should be less shading on the tail, could you lessen that some Ellie life is an illusion 08:37, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
I had this issue with the other images... but I really think his base looks extremely greenish in tint. I think we should perhaps tweak his images to match the color of his official website icon. —Jayce(21:31, 6/12/2019)
Define the shading inside the ears and on the face ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Reupload I'm not quite sure where exactly on the tail should I remove shading. Is the new edits what you mean Ellie? Also thanks Snowed for providing the image for me!Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:50, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:12,6/16/2019
Sorry, I feel the tail shading in that section in which it was removed needs to be added back. To me, Mink's comment meant to recede how much of the tail the shading covers, because it covers too much, so add some light to the tail, therefore receding the shading. But, it shouldn't have been removed from the < section entirely, as it now contradicts the source.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:00, 6/16/2019
Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more. — max it is the real thing, (02:08, 12/6/2019)
can you define the eye depth? Splook sweet creature 02:15 Wed Jun 12
Dsfine the light source in the < ear Ellie life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more Ellie life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded lightened the shading depth Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:15, 6/13/2019
Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:06,6/15/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:14, 6/15/2019
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a bit.
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area Ellie life is an illusion 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:32, 6/16/2019
I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking Ellie life is an illusion 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc. Ellie life is an illusion 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light. Ellie life is an illusion 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
The shading can also be smoothed, too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well Ellie life is an illusion 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded herpaderpderp Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. Ellie life is an illusion 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing Ellie life is an illusion 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. Ellie life is an illusion 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded rip I tried Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits. — max it is the real thing, (01:57, 18/6/2019)
Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Extend the haunch shading Ellie life is an illusion 15:41, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Eagle Feather (K) - For Approval
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 22:04, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
saturate the earpink? luke my last (マイラスト) 22:19 Thu Jun 13
Smooth the tummy/shoulder shading a bit Ellie life is an illusion 09:26, June 14, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded i tried
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:27, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Blur the tail stripes just a touch more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:22, June 15, 2019 (UTC)\
reuploaded
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 04:50, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
The midsection shading that's alongside the haunch is leaking away from the lineart —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:07, 6/15/2019
Reuploaded —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 08:03, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Deerleap (W) - CBA
- JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 23:38, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
The stripes should be tapered some. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:56, June 14, 2019 (UTC)
I think that very thick stripe on the very end of the tail shouldn't be quite so wide, compared to the other images —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:43, 6/14/2019
Reuploaded Sorry for the delay. Also not sure why but the approval and charart pages are acting up. Sometimes they don't load, at least for me. - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 18:14, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
For lack of better words, the stripe color seems to pop off the base a lot more than it does on the other images. It's almost like the stripes are either very very slightly lighter or smoothed in more —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:30, 6/17/2019
Reuploaded - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 19:08, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:25, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Sandstorm (Alt W 4) ~ For Approval
Ellie life is an illusion 19:55, June 14, 2019 (UTC)
Think there's some leaking shading on the hind paw furthest from us, and on top of the <--- front paw. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:35, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
I'll take a look in a bit but that lightness on the hind paw is a bit of light. As the cat is sitting down so a small amount of light would most likely make it onto there however I can cover it all in shading if need be but I do have light on that area with the other cats I've used this source with. Ellie life is an illusion 13:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
If you've used this source before and the light on the hind paw was there, then it's fine. It just seemed like leaking at a quick glance lol. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Yeah, I totally get it. It's the same source as Shellfur, Cedarstar, and Blackstar. Ellie life is an illusion 20:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
The base, when compared, is darker than the rest of the alt set —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:37, 6/16/2019
The texture doesn't seem to matchup to her set either. The texture should be white, is it? Both the Que and App had it drawn on in plain white and then opacity adjusted. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 16:11, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Re-Ups, yeah it is white. I'll play with it on my next re-up. Ellie life is an illusion 16:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Fill in the back paw — max it is the real thing, (21:30, 16/6/2019)
Smudge the earpink and expand the shading more on the tail, it's a tad flat there. I also think the shading on the back leg is leaking onto the tail. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:33, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Re-Ups, redid it. All colors from the apprentice. Ellie life is an illusion 16:10, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Can you smooth the transition on top of the back leg, the shoulder, and the tail? It looks like solid lines at the moment, while in other spaces you have a really smooth transition. — max it is the real thing, (02:20, 18/6/2019)
Could you redline the areas, possibly. Ellie life is an illusion 03:27, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
In these areas, also the nose isn't filled in too. — max it is the real thing, (03:29, 19/6/2019)
Re-ups Ellie life is an illusion 20:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Sol (Alt L) ~ CBA
david 🌈 02:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
I love this.. CBA? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:14,6/16/2019
I'll likely slap this right back under, but I did notice there's some placement differences from the KP that could be altered a little bit. I think the white on both paws/lower legs could be receded a bit, and that the lowest black stripe on the > front arm should be thicker. At least on the < half of the cat, the neck should be ginger, and that a good bit of the chest should be ginger too. For a last bit, the KP's earpink also seems lighter, but if that's just a difference in shading/style of applying it, ignore that bit.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:08, 6/16/2019
reuploaded david 🌈 23:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Re-CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:57, 6/19/2019
SkyClan's Destiny gray she-cat (W) ~ For Evaluation
My first canon charart. WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 07:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
can you smooth the shading please? also there was a thumb on your image so i removed it :)
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 10:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC) whoops sorry for the double comment. the eyelashes should be removed as they are not in use to define gender anymore
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 10:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Soften up the texture a bit to match her kittypet. Good work! Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 13:46, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Dethumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left. Make the pupils less of a square, add eyeshine, and define the shading on the hind feet. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 14:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
Changed the heading from approval to evaluation since you're still a kit^^ Smooth the shading on the legs and flank, and there appears to be shading leaking from the chest and leg farthest from us, then add some to the ears. Nice job on this! —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
The eyes look like there's still lashes, that part shouldn't be there iirc Ellie life is an illusion 18:10, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 08:27, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
Even out the shading on the < front leg to remove the blotchiness, and you've got some waste outside the back —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:45, 6/16/2019
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 19:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
With this source, the back paw farthest from us would have some shading, though not completely in shadow. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
The eye color also seems different than the kittypet. Nice job doing the texture btw! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:39, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 14:41, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Define the depth in the shading and darken everywhere ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:34, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
There would be a little shading under the jaw with this source, and define the shading on the hind paw farthest from us. This may just be my screen, but there might be waste under the paws. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded WindsongRun with the wind... ❀ 18:47, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Timberfur (W) - For Approval
i didn't think i needed to make him graying since it came later in his life and the original image didn't have it. if the cite came earlier or something i can do it no problem Splook sweet creature 18:04 Sun Jun 16
There's a triangle of waste on <--- end of the tail, and a piece of line waste underneath the tail. The haunch shading can also be expanded just a bit. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:59, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
^leg shading could also be expanded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:00,6/17/2019
reuploaded solid cats are a menace Splook sweet creature 02:46 Mon Jun 17
There's some waste under the tail, and given the source, I don't think the shading on the top of the tail on the < side (our view) is needed —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:24, 6/17/2019
reuploaded totally thought i got rid of the waste last upload but i got the wrong layer Splook sweet creature 03:44 Mon Jun 17
Smooth out the haunch shading? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:18,6/17/2019
reuploaded Splook sweet creature 20:18 Mon Jun 17
Could you add some more shading along the bottom of the tail? Mostly in that gap area. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:50, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Correct me if qrong but with the light source. That bit of top tail shading should be removed up to about nearly the tip Ellie life is an illusion 03:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Alder (Ki) - For Approval
I think it's fine if I pick this back up? if its not lmk. I kind of stopped working bc i got sick and its hard for me to draw when I'm sick.. I still kind of am, but i'm feeling far better and so I created this demon. This time I got the original file for the kit. Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 23:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)
There's a bit of waste above the back Ellie life is an illusion 13:38, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
reups wasteus deletus Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 22:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
The image is not showing up. Perhaps reupload again? Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
It's now showing up. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:31, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Blossomfall (Alt W) - CBA
i think i finally made something that doesnt look disgusting after 1 hour. i tried to colorpick the old one and referenced the stripes the best i could seeing how its different sides Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 00:56, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Can you define the shading on the back section of the tail? the section furthest from us Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
reups Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 01:38, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
The eye white in the <<< eye looks gray with shading; could you make that pop out a bit? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:16, 6/18/2019
reups Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 22:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 05:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Tansypaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
File:Tansypaw.kit.pngAll colors from original image. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:18, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
I think that the other images have slightly thinner tail stripes —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:27, 6/17/2019
Cute! Super minor, but could you connect the stripe over the eye? Her other images also have seven stripes on the tail, while this has only five, can you add two more? The stripes on this also appear to be a tiny bit darker than the rest of her images; is that just my screen? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:30, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
They look darker as well. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:37, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Storm (Ro) (K) ~ CBA
OA claim from Patch —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:44, 6/17/2019
could you make it so that the texture on the head doesn't go vertically, but rather along the direction of the fur? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:16,6/17/2019
Reuploaded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:45, 6/17/2019
hm the overall effect still seems to be that the texture is flowing vertically. how does it look if you smudge the stripes along the direction of the fur? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:29,6/18/2019
Hmm. I fiddled with it for a good bit and couldn’t really come up with much. I’ve redrawn the texture there a few times, which ended with much the same is there now, and smudging the stripes more simply makes them softer than would work in the set.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:50, 6/18/2019
CBA, then? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:52, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Violet (KP) (W) - For Approval
oa claim given to me by patch, thank you
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 04:28, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
I think the white part should extend to reach the bottom of the chin when looking at the rogue. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Can youbdefine the white, it looks more reddish gray atm Ellie life is an illusion 16:32, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reups
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 06:36, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Define the shape of the tag, right now it looks like a rounded triangle ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:34, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Hawkheart (K) ~ For Approval
OA claim given to me by Patch.
Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 04:37, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Define the facial shading some? So cute! — max it is the real thing, (09:06, 17/6/2019)
Could you darken the brown some? It looks darker on the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:22, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reups Silvこころ震わせた 思い出 06:37, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Brokenstar (W) - CBA
broken warrior's in his mohawk phase but srsly why do i do these things to myself? stole the face lineart from here ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 07:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
imo, I think he can be poofier, especially on the back (which might be the only place where you could do it). Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:29, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
The eyes could stand to be more orange (per that discussion a while ago we tweaked them to be so) so the leader/df is what most of them got turned to.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:09, 6/18/2019
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:04, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Soo fluffy. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 05:32, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Ivypool (Alt. W2) - CBA
~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 07:22, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
could you deepen the shading some? Splook sweet creature 02:11 Tue Jun 18
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:51, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Hailstar (K) - For Approval
insert obligatory comment about how this was my first image etc Burntclaw 12:21, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Is the darker gray parts shading or just patches? Could younpossibly recede it if its shading on the haunch and tail some? Ellie life is an illusion 13:40, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
reup there werent dark gray patches, it was rough shading. Burntclaw 02:47, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Ivypool (W) ~ CBA
Hey it's your girl Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:44, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Are we doing Is now? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 16:28,6/17/2019
Ahh, I should've clarified that this was an OA claim given to me from Icy's warriors. Since I am the OA of the master design. My bad. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:30, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
- Not to reopen a can of worms, but do the ear tears have to match? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:24, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
I beleive it was discussed that alts don't have to match the actual lineart and vice versa iirc. Ellie life is an illusion 17:30, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
I did my best to match the queen’s torn ears but I am more than happy to go back and take a crack at it again. ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:37, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:54, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:58, 6/19/2019
Gorseclaw (RC) (Ki) ~ CBA
– Cinna dear evan hansen, 20:10, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
Define the texture a bit? ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 00:04, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
I think that little bit that's showing of the back paw under the tail would be shaded, given the source, since the tail is on top of it and would cast shadow —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:20, 6/18/2019
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 00:35, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:31, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Billystorm (W) ~ CBA
haha ready for death Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
lighten the shading on the ginger Ellie life is an illusion 01:52, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
this is so pretty! could you define the shading slightly on the < inner ear? Splook sweet creature 02:10 Tue Jun 18
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:20, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:26, 6/19/2019
Daisytoe (W) - For Approval
❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)
sharpen the mickeys a little? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:11, 6/18/2019
Define the shading a bit on > this ear? Also, she looks a tad cross-eyed. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:40, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded. These are the same sort of eyes I've used on my other recent chararts, so unless someone else takes issue with them I'd rather not change them. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 17:13, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
The eyes look fine to me. If you’ve used them before, then I don’t see a problem. —Jayce(03:31, 6/19/2019)
I think that, given the queen is from the same side and was first in set, that the most visible hind paw would have a little blob of gray settled on top.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:32, 6/19/2019
Squirrelflight (Alt W) - For Approval
File:Squirrelflight.warrior.alt.png oa claim, used vecs deputy file for everything Squidward Plays All Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 02:32, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
This looks good! There should be white on the belly and the stripes should be a bit more jagged and not a linear. What I did is use a small brush and brush tightly up and down across the blank. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:08, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Beetlewhisker (K) ~ CBA
got the stripe pattern off the old warrior, which was same side —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:36, 6/18/2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:29, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Brown and white kit ~ CBA
one of Sol’s littermates from SS-2; colors from recolored manga —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:36, 6/18/2019
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Ashfur (TC) (K) - CBA
trash baby — max it is the real thing, (09:11, 18/6/2019)
Could you lighten the shading half a tick and recede it on the haunch? With this pattern in particular, it obscures the pattern a bit —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:59, 6/19/2019
reuploaded how's that? — max it is the real thing, (08:01, 19/6/2019)
Much better^^ CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:33, 6/19/2019
Blossomkit (ShC) (K) - CBA
— max it is the real thing, (09:11, 18/6/2019)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:33, 6/19/2019
Brindleface (K) - CBA
matched to the old warrior's side — max it is the real thing, (09:11, 18/6/2019)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:22, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Poolcloud (W) - CBA
i did this like 3 times to try to make it look right Splook sweet creature 18:06 Tue Jun 18
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:23, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Cinderheart (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
Got everything from the withdrawn alt. warrior. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 19:20, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe add a touch of shading to the arm, above the tail? Just to connect it to the haunch, and to make the area look less flat. — max it is the real thing, (02:11, 19/6/2019)
Sunfish (Alt. W) - CBA
Family tree alt. Colorpicked from her icon. ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 19:20, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:24, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Berrynose (Alt W) - CBA
So, unless we start implementing a rule that states all alts need to match the main set, I technically do not need to add texture. I could give you at least five examples where some images in the character art galleries have texture, when some do not. tldr, I didn't want to add texture, so please do not tell me to add it based on rules we do not have. —Jayce(22:48, 6/18/2019)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:24, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Ivypool (K) ~ For Approval
Okay I'm back. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
Turtle Tail (Ki) - For Approval
I imagine that the tail's top part is facing us, kinda like what I did with File:Lightning Stripe.kit.png, where the dorsal stripe represents the top part of the tail. You wouldn't see any white from this vantage point. Also, this side intentionally has less coloring and more white than the other side, as seen by the rogue.. the ancient has too much black there, please disregard it and I'll fix it when I have the spare time. —Jayce(23:11, 6/18/2019)
Frecklewish (TC) (Alt. W) - CBA
literally blurred 10 pixels ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:12, June 18, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? Littlecloud's alt was CBA'd basically instantly as well for this same kind of deal. There's no need to let this sit when nothing else needs to be done to this image, as another version was just approved. And yes, I did consult two other leads, one being Patch, before I CBA'd this. —Jayce(23:15, 6/18/2019)
Redstar (k) ~ For Approval
yeah this wasn't impossible or anything.. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:07,6/19/2019
Cloudstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
tried to copy the deputy and old warrior's pattern but uhhh.. idrk what i did lmao – Cinna dear evan hansen, 15:36, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Mottlepaw (K) ~ For Approval
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:46,6/19/2019
Raven Pelt (W) ~ For Approval
File:Raven Pelt.warrior.png One of Spooky's OA claims she gave to me ^^ – Cinna dear evan hansen, 15:51, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Er... we need to use the new warrior blanks... right? Hawkfire Happy Days ( 15:52, 6/19/2019 ) 15:52, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Sorry, that was a weird trick of Fandom on my computer. It showed the old version of the file. xD Hawkfire Happy Days ( 15:53, 6/19/2019 ) 15:53, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
There's a block of waste at the corner of the tail - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 16:13,6/19/2019
Reuploaded – Cinna dear evan hansen, 17:57, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Antpelt (SC) (W) - Declined
Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•16:34 Wed Jun 19
The Antpelt pages were merged, so the SC Antpelt no longer exists. Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:43, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Declined per the reason above. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:27, June 19, 2019 (UTC)
Feathertail (W) - For Approval
Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•16:34 Wed Jun 19
Poppydawn (Ki) - For Approval
Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•16:34 Wed Jun 19