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Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Approval

Haven't been here for a while! :P Crystie Can't help loving me 13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png)Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (01:12, 22/6/2019)

Reuploaded~ :P Crystie Can't help loving me 03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears?  Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P Crystie Can't help loving me 03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <3 Crystie Can't help loving me 02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded like this? :P Crystie Can't help loving me 02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Not quite, Crystal. Not only would the shading be on top of that bend, that whole bend of the tail area would be in shadow. Can you also define the eye depth more? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:00, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now? :3 Crystie Can't help loving me 00:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste along the back, underneath the tail, and underneath the paws. Could you define the light (remove some of the shading) on the tail? Seems to be covered in just shading. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:31, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:40, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Here is a redline of what you shading should look like on the tail. Red is where it all has to be in shadow, and orange is where the light needs to be definned. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:51, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 02:52, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

The light on the tail could still be defined a bit more in the area potato mentioned. It should be the same color as the lighted parts on the main body. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:32, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 02:30, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth out the tail shading some? this is cute! Splook ^{sweet  creature} 16:53 Fri Jun 28

try and remove the waste floating around the image^^ —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 17:58, 6/28/2019

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 03:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light again on >>> this side of the tail, and it's leaking a bit there too. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 10:45, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's shading leakage along the back? ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 00:50, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

I see waste under the tail, and the light should be define on the tail again. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:10, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 01:37, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste around the image and define the light on the tail some more, try erasing the shading there on all your layers or add a highlight to help define it. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 06:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

there is waste all around the back of the body and lots of waste around the feet. The shading on the back is slightly leaking too ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 13:24, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 04:11, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shade in by the tail fold please--willowstep 14:14, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more facial shading to <--- side of the face? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:15, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:59, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there would be light on the stomach. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 01:53, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome work, you've improved a ton, Crystal! I've moved you up to an apprentice on the table^^ it might just be me, but there appears to be some shading leaking on the back. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:00, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I also see leaking shading on the back (could also be bounce light). Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

(Also gonna bump this up to "for approval" since you're getting the hang of things. You can use this heading for all future submissions from now on ^^ Also, you're almost there!) Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh TYSM guys!! I'll reupload it soon Crystie Can't help loving me 01:27, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 01:58, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the bottom of the chest, near the legs? Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:34, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

smotth out the shading on the shoulder and back area connecting to the shoulder. Also i think theres is shading leaking where the back and the tail meet ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 10:51, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 09:36, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like there's some shading leaking on the front leg from the chest and a little on the haunch. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:59, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie Can't help loving me 00:59, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's a halo of waste around the image - could you remove that? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 13:24, 7/10/2019

Reuploaded Yep! :P Crystie Can't help loving me 00:41, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

There is still waste around the image, such as behind the shoulder, underneath the front paws, and along the ---> front leg. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:37, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:56,7/13/2019

Eaglekit (WC) (K) ~ For Approval

Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and maybe reduce some of the shading on the shoulder? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:14, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the shading could be lightened slightly as well Splook ^{sweet  creature} 21:00 Mon Jul 1 

With this source, there would be shading on the jaw that connects to the neck shading. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:24, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I get the sense I'll be battling shading a lot with this image... Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the haunch and should be smoothed out more. Burntclaw 03:46, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail and arm. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:48, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:23, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking in the shoulder area, and define the shading on the ears. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:02, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I may or may not have gotten the leaking shading Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:45, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  .

CBA ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:35, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

So sorry to break CBA, but, the shading is leaking away on the belly, and the depth on the head could be defined too (as it looks comparatively lighter than other darker areas) — max ^{it is the real thing,} (22:15, 08/7/2019)

Define the shading depth on the front leg and add some shading to the ear farthest from us and the barely visible front paw. The shading could also be smoothed out a bit more. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:18, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was so close... Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:17, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Derfine the jaw/face shading, define the light on the front leg, and define the shading on the front paw farthest from us. Shading is still leaking in the belly area. Smooth out the shading on the tail. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:23, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 02:30, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

There is still shading leaking away from the lineart on that patch of belly/midsection where it meets the tail, and I also think the light on the visible front paw and lower leg could be defined —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 13:23, 7/10/2019

Reuploaded Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 19:46, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the <--- ear? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:52, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also fixed some minor issues about shading/eye color from Spooky and Vec Warriorcat1195 ^{To the Pridelands' end, Lion Guard defend!}  .  . 19:40, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 01:27, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval

Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye Burntclaw 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 21:20, 7/09/2019

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop — max ^{it is the real thing,} (00:00, 11/7/2019)

Reuploaded - JArtz11 ^{Oblivious to EVERYTHING!} 16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) ~ For Approval

original shading was a nightmare but i quite like this new look. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:29, 7/04/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <23:29, 7/04/2019>​ There's a block of waste at <-- end of the tail. And maybe add some shading on the rest of the back near the shoulder? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:47, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading tint a bit? And add just a little more where the haunch meets the tail? ❀ Gender🎕⚘🎜🎜🏵 and proud!❀ 23:49, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

re-up ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<00:35, 7/06/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <00:35, 7/06/2019>​

CBA ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 19:22, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading could be smoothed out. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:03,7/8/2019

re-up ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:43, 7/09/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <01:43, 7/09/2019>​

Could you lighten the shading over the < eye and perhaps put the eye white on top? The current shading drowns out the color —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 13:41, 7/09/2019

re-up i thought i said this but whoops ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<18:38, 7/13/2019>r ♥ 've always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?will i ever be more than i've always been?">_{waving through} 'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass?">_{a window} <18:38, 7/13/2019>​

Honeyleaf (Ro) - For Approval

Won't be able to reupload Mon-Fri because I'm going camping. Windsong^{Run with the wind... ❀} 15:23, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker and softer, looking at her deputy and loner. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:25, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups ─ gray 🦔 ^{Hmph, I'm the coolest!}‎‎ ‎ ‎‎

Expand the shading on the tail and the foreleg furthest from us. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and haunch area, bit sharp there. The shading everywhere else though looks fine. You're doing a great job so far! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste beside the hind leg closest to us. Crystie Can't help loving me 01:43, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Fallowsong (W) - For Approval

Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:29, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be my eyes, but I think the base is slightly duller on the other images. Mind color picking again? And the shading could be smoothed on the haunch. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:54, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:57, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and define the depth everywhere. You could try using a couple of other images that have already been approved for an example on how smooth it should be, if that helps. Her eyes need to be brighter. They look almost like a pale green here while on her other images they look golden. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:49, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded instant depth! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:13, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think it could be smoothed out more - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:54,7/9/2019

Reuploaded boom Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:28, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed some more. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:52, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:08, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth it out more. If you've gotten many comments repeating to smooth it, I'd suggest smoothing it out a lot more than you have been, at least just on the outer edges of the shading. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:38, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This shading hates me. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:42, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth it out a tad more on the legs, face, and neck. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:54, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:23, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch, neck, and face shading some more, particularly the areas where you applied depth. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:06, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall, it's looking a bit blotchy. —Jayce(03:51, 7/14/2019)​

Reuploaded shading is the end of me Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a bit more on the haunch and on the left shoulder (our left)? —Ivy ☆ 13:19, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Frog (K) ~ CBA

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:24, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes look a tad too dark. do you want the file? Burntclaw 04:44, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yes please ;u; Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:43, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Thanks! Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:59, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:35, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt W) ~ For Approval

Tried to match the original lineart

– Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 15:01, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading transition on the tail? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:50, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you soften the dapples a little, and maybe add more per the original warrior? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (00:02, 11/7/2019)

can you define the shading on -> side of the body? Splook ^{sweet  creature} 06:39 Thu Jul 11

Reuploaded

– Cinna ^{dear evan hansen,} 15:33, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth everywhere just a bit? Excluding the tail, and can you make the shading appear a bit smoother on the tail? It seems to end abruptly. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:42, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (Alt. K) - For Approval

 This was so fun to make! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:06, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:26, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also darkened the shading a small bit. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:38, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Minor, there's waste in front of the muzzle. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:47, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

can you add a little more shading along the haunch? Splook ^{sweet  creature} 17:48 Fri Jul 12

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:23, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the shading on the tail and haunch and define the depth everywhere. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:43, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:54, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:04, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

some leaking shading on the haunch - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:33,7/14/2019

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:48, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the tail shading and smooth it out. —Jayce(03:50, 7/14/2019)​

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Alt. W) - For Approval

Probably one of the last images before the major break. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:37, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading and add some to the belly/chest area Splook ^{sweet  creature} 01:18 Fri Jul 12

Reuploaded There was shading already there, but I defined it. I hope this looks better! Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:40, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading slightly and smooth it out on the haunch. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:25, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, definitely visible now. Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:38, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

The haunch shading could still be smoothened out Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 14:14, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:24, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch more, define the depth on the tail, ears, and lower part of the chest between the legs, and expand the shading on the front leg furthest away. I'm not sure if it's just me, but the shading looks kind of flat. I don't know if you could add some more depth to it? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:46, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, upon looking again, the shading looks fine and I think if you define the depth in the areas I suggested, that will fix the flatness I'm seeing. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:48, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:54, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out haunch and stomach shading. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:05, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the overall shading a fair bit more. —Jayce(03:49, 7/14/2019)​

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Fallowtail (W) - CBA

dropping in one more before the break tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 23:40, July 11, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It looks a little dark compared to the rest of the set Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 14:14, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 18:07, July 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:07, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

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