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Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png —Jayce(00:59, 9/27/2019)
The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading ✧Winter✧ 00:42, 9/28/2019
Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Could you darken the shading over all? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch. Windsong (talk) 09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. ~Ripple ☆ 17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)
Someone pls give me something to improve on I’m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)
Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink? Crystie Can't help loving me 14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading — max it is the real thing, (23:45, 02/10/2019)
Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)
Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Smudge the earpink as in shading or earpink and fur? --Wavetail (talk) 01:39, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
Stripes seem a touch too dark compared to the other images —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:19, 10/06/2019
Reuploaded Too light or too dark?--Wavetail (talk) 22:53, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
Too dark, I'm pretty sure she said. Lighten and smooth out the shading and the earpink still seems too... neonish? ~Ripple ☆ 04:27, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
Will do. Also, I meant if it is still too dark or if I made it too light --Wavetail (talk) 05:26, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
Try the following hexcodes for colours; #828282 for the base colour, #575759 for the stripes, and maybe #703F42 for the earpink - those should help match a little more? — max it is the real thing, (07:52, 08/10/2019)
Smooth the shading on the cheek --Moo (talk) 07:15, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:20, 10/12/2019
Recede the facial shading; it should not be touching the eye, but also curve around the neck and wrap around the jaw, like on Jayclaw's kit. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Ok lets try this again! Moo (talk) 03:36, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
Could you add some shading on the ear fluff behind the ear closest to us? Looks like it's leaking shading there. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:44, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:21, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
Recede the facial shading so it curves with the shape of the face; it shouldn't stretch all the way to the eye, but rather curve and also cover the chin —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:48, 10/06/2019
Reuploaded Moo (talk) 05:22, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
It still goes and hits to the eye; I do mean to say, that it needs to recede from there.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:09, 10/11/2019
Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:46, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
Colours are still off a little bit, and I think its mainly your shading tint that's doing it? I've repicked colours for your this time, instead of giving straight hexcodes. The nose should be black per the warrior, and the eyes need to be a paler blue than what you've got at the moment. Could you also define the shading depth a little - just add a second layer of shading that covers areas that will be darker like the "neck" and the underside of the tail and such - like this image. One last thing too, I promise, maybe smudge the earpink a little more so it's not sitting in such a straight line? — max it is the real thing, (00:52, 13/10/2019)
Reuploaded and colourpicked! Moo (talk) 08:07, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Could you define the shading depth a touch more? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Silverflame (W) - CBA
tyb 🌌 owo??? 17:11, October 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Perhaps add some more of the lighter ginger on the eyebrows? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:10, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded brightened the eyebrows just a smidge ;u; tyb 🌌 owo??? 18:45, October 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:19, 10/12/2019
Moonlight (Leader) - For Approval
tyb 🌌 owo??? 17:34, October 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Could you define the shading depth? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:01,10/7/2019
Maybe “poof”-ify the tail, like the other images have? I’m not seeing that edited tail here. —Jayce(15:35, 10/08/2019)
Darken the dark parts? ~Ripple ☆ 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
god i can't believe i forgot the poofy tail lol, clown alert...i will add the poofy tail later bc i don't have time for it atm, i fixed everything else though tyb 🌌 owo??? 18:47, October 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel
Snowbird (Ki) - For Approval
i won't withdraw this, i promise. ~Ripple ☆ 02:28, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading out a lot, but, also maybe use less? Sometimes white cats can be painfull with shading so by using less you can save yourself a lot of trouble. Also add some shading to >> that side of the cat, behind the tail — max it is the real thing, (07:59, 08/10/2019)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 14:44, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading overall and add ear shading to the ear closest to us? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:14, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
Lighten the shading just a small touch imo, seems a bit dark currently imo, given it isn't tinted —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:10, 10/11/2019
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
Can you define the shading on the foreleg? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:22, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. ~Ripple ☆ 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
I think the shading on the tail can be smoothed a bit more. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:13, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
The shading on the shoulder/above the foreleg needs to be smoothed out, and the facial shading expanded. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:29, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Swallowtail (WC) (W) - For Approval
~Ripple ☆ 03:56, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
Should I remove eye shading? ~Ripple ☆ 14:53, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
Yes, and define the light on the tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:15, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 00:59, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
Add a bit more depth to the front legs shading, and smooth it out a touch on the haunch —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:22, 10/11/2019
reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. ~Ripple ☆ 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the shoulder, and define the light (remove shading) on the tail. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:14, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Sol (K) ~ For Approval
I wanted to give myself a challenge. Tinystream (talk) 12:29, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
the patches are a lot more streaky and uniformed rather than what you have here. it looks a lil too blurry ✧Winter✧ 20:37, 10/08/2019
Bubbling Stream (K) - CBA
Mothflight kit <3 Colorpicked from her hunter image. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:19, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Added a bit of highlights. I think the hunter has some. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:31, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:22, 10/12/2019
Starlingwing (W) - For Approval
reach out your hand, and I'll make you mine. everything, everything's magic. Might have been listening to pop rock while making this. —Jayce(19:02, 10/10/2019)
Could you expand the shading a touch on the < front leg? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:11, 10/11/2019
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(17:08, 10/12/2019)
Bubbling Stream (W) - CBA
Colors from hunter. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:25, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:19, 10/12/2019
Rushtail (RC) (W) ~ For Approval
Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:08, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Stormfur (K) - For Approval
stormy baby --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 15:28, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
I think the texture should be much sharper? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:56, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:59, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
I think the base is too dark, by a little. Perhaps grab a file from Skye for the CG or whatnot —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:21, 10/12/2019
Reuploaded Colorpicked from the CG again. This should be correct. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:26, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smudge the texture ever so slightly, so it’s not so pencily? — max it is the real thing, (18:54, 13/10/2019)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 19:06, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Sandynose (Alt. W) - For Approval
--Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:21, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Shading looks a bit blotchy? Smooth it out? ~Ripple ☆ 21:06, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Just a tad softer and that appears to have done the trick. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:13, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Could you smooth it some more? It still looks a little blotchy around the side and flank area — max it is the real thing, (00:53, 13/10/2019)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:55, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Leafstar (Alt. Q) - For Approval
for her manga appearance — max it is the real thing, (20:36, 12/10/2019)
Could you dull the (what I think is) the belly bounce light? It more or less appears like shading leaking away from the lineart imo —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:22, 10/12/2019
reuploaded how's that? — max it is the real thing, (23:52, 12/10/2019)
Sandynose (Alt. K) - For Approval
sandy boy manga set now complete. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:16, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
And I forget the tail-tip. I'll add that in a moment. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:18, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:21, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Shading is leaking from the middle bit onto -> that side the "knee" area - also could you maybe the leg and the shading on the far right of the image? — max it is the real thing, (00:55, 13/10/2019)
Reuploaded I assume you meant smooth so that's what I did. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:55, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Stagleap (TR) (K) - For Approval
File:Stagleap (TR).kit.png — max it is the real thing, (23:59, 12/10/2019)
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Rabbittail (Alt. W) - For Approval
— max it is the real thing, (00:12, 13/10/2019)
Piper (K) - For Approval
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)