Talk: Charart/Approval Page

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Swallowtail (WC) (W) - CBA

~Ripple ☆ 03:56, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Should I remove eye shading? ~Ripple ☆ 14:53, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, and define the light on the tail? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:15, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 00:59, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit more depth to the front legs shading, and smooth it out a touch on the haunch —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 18:22, 10/11/2019

reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. ~Ripple ☆ 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the shoulder, and define the light (remove shading) on the tail. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:14, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink? I can't see it at all. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 20:34, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

The eyeshine in < this eye appears to be overblurred. Can you also erase a few pixels on the eyeshine so more of the general pupil shows? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:31, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the eye depth too while you're at it? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (23:41, 16/10/2019)

Still working? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (06:55, 18/10/2019)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 16:23, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the tail some more, especially along the bend closest to us? I also think the base may be slightly darker than the rest of the set? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:14, October 20, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 15:21, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, a freaking remix won me over all week. ~Ripple ☆ 02:42, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the lower jaw, if you can. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:10, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 05:18, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Her nose appears darker on her other images. Define the light on the tail and perhaps add a bit more depth to her eyes? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:27, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 22:22, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(03:45, 11/02/2019)

Berrynose (D) ~ CBA

definitely has issues; gonna tweak that when i have time (probably tomorrow) —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 19:05, 10/29/2019

Reuploaded or today —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 21:32, 10/29/2019

I feel like the texture is more overlapped in the other images and it seems too linear here? I used a mixture of darker and lighter texture overlapped repeatedly for the alt kit. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:41, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded thank you for file —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 01:34, 11/01/2019

Maybe add a little bit more depth? --Windsong (talk) 09:25, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 10:33, 11/01/2019

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:28, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt W 2) - For Approval

Matched colors/stripe style to manga. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:10, October 30, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes end in a point? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:42, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:12, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:54, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

I realize you're trying to copy what's shown here, but could you possibly make them slightly more solidified? As they are, it looks just like random scribbles. However, in the panel below what's shown in the image on her article, the stripe that we can see appears to be more like a stripe and not as scribbly. I have the same issue with this one..., the stripes really should not be as scribbled on as they are and a bit more uniform. —Jayce(15:49, 11/01/2019)​​

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:19, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you taper the stripes more to a point as well? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (05:04, 02/11/2019)

Gonna make the argument that perhaps this is what you should be aiming for - scribbled, yet solid, because I concur with skye, but we also need to match the image. That's her one for this from the german wwiki (mine) btw.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 13:55, 11/02/2019

Reuploaded There are some days where I can't stripe.. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:36, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Turtlecrawl (W) - For Approval

Hmm. All colors from Jayie's psd of the apprentice. —Jayce(16:35, 10/31/2019)​

Re-uploaded. Forgot the stripes. —Jayce(16:40, 10/31/2019)​

Can you smoothen the chest shading? It looks rather blotchy now. And on the apprentice, it appears that the ginger patches are less present on the muzzle, notably the chin is mostly black. And the color that is on the chin on the apprentice appears cream rather than orange, but you have the file, so i may be wrong. The ginger patch below the left eye should also be wider, more triangular-shaped. The ginger also appears less saturated than on the apprentice, but it if you are colorpicking from the file, it could be shading throwing it off. Sorry for the paragraph!! Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 16:59, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for comments I got before I saw this. Also, I'm not tweaking the colors, as they are directly from the layered file. It's just how Jayie shades, and I cannot match that to save my life. The colors for this are actually not what they appear to be. I'll go fiddle with it again for your paragraph though. —Jayce(17:01, 10/31/2019)

Re-uploaded. I should also probably say here too that there's a color palette included with this file, so I do know everything matches. Jayie's known for intense highlights and shading that I'm not able to mimic properly. —Jayce(17:16, 10/31/2019)

Bramblestar (Ghost) - CBA

File:Bramblestar.ghost.png rip — max ^{it is the real thing,} (20:52, 31/10/2019)

CBA? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 02:05, 11/02/2019

Stonepelt (W) ~ CBA

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:07, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the corner of the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:15, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:06, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 13:55, 11/02/2019

Sorrelstripe (W) ~ CBA

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:07, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 13:55, 11/02/2019

Flutterpaw (A) - For Approval

File:Flutterpaw.apprentice.png hi im backkk and of course i have to start my return with my son, all colors from his kit. i think im just a tiny bit rusty hhejajshdf ill get back into the groove again soon enough im sure but excuse anything kind of bad for now ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 01:21, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe dull the shading tint? It seems to mask all the white and making it appear cream a bit. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:33, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups is this better or should i adjust it some more? ^{Squidward Plays All Star.} _{I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance.} 22:21, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepaw (TC) (Apprentice) - For Approval

File:Flamepaw (TC).apprentice.png this guy is my son now tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 01:27, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you dull the highlight (?) lighter texture a bit; they seem to overtake the base and making the image lighter overall than the kit. The eyes also appear more amber/saturated on the kit as well. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:53, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded the eye color was colorpicked from the kit image, i dont know why the wiki is dulling it...i tried to fix it a little bit : ( tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 03:55, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you like the file for him if wikia keeps being a butt? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (04:21, 01/11/2019)

yea if u don't mind! i think it's fine for now though unless someone says something tyb 🌌  ^owo??? 21:19, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

just in case, I'll list the hexes here; base is #171514, and the texture is the same colour set to multiply @ 33%. Earpink is #624A45 and the nose is #230D05, and the base eye colour is #E35B22, with a dark blue to add depth. Hope those help! I used a dark blue for the shading as well, in case you wanted to match the tint at all~ :D — max ^{it is the real thing,} (04:07, 02/11/2019)

Poppycloud (W) ~ For Approval

to pay or not to pay for that first season of got ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:57, 11/01/2019>

Remove the shading on the <--- Eye? Also I just have to say im LOVING The Squirrelflight Loner Art! Moo (talk) 08:04, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

There's a line of waste underneath the tail. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:42, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you moo! ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<21:47, 11/02/2019>

Squirrelflight (Lo) ~ For Approval

File:Squirrelflight.loner.png yeet ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:59, 11/01/2019>

Is it possible for you to sharpen the stripes just a little bit? They're a little less blurred on her other images. It's not too much, though. —Jayce(15:48, 11/02/2019)

Oakheart (Alt.W2) - For Approval

fox coloured alt which I'm assuming is still valid? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (08:20, 02/11/2019)

Mudfur (Alt W) - For Evaluation

Here's my charart for Mudfur:

09:49, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles don't quite match. They're too overblurred and need to be sharper. Try looking at the old warrior for a reference. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:33, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Adding on, here are some references: this and this. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:40, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

His eye color on his other images seems greener, and darken the earpink. ~Ripple ☆ 17:47, November 2, 2019 (UTC)