Talk: Charart/Approval Page

Project Charart This is a project discussion page, where a group of dedicated editors may come together and work towards their common goal. For more information on projects, please see the community portal. This is the Project Character Art Approvals PagePlace new character art for approval here. Discussions should be routed to the discussion page, while all Art tweaks should be routed to the tweak page, and all Tweak nominations should be routed to the nominations page. Chararts needing to be done are hereHere are some guidelines all users must comply with: Make sure to follow the guidelines. The limit is 50 images. If you exceed it, your image will be immediately declined. Your image is yours until it is archived, do not reserve a new one until yours has completed CBA and/or has been archived due to other matters. If your image has been declined due to the one month limit, you must wait two weeks to reclaim your image. This gives other users the chance to work on it if they wish. If your image has gone less than five (5) days without comments, please do not ask for comments or a CBA. It is common to go a couple consecutive days without comments before a CBA is set into place. To ask before the five day timespan has passed puts your image at risk of being declined. Please do not align your images! This messes up the structure of the page. Want help or feedback on chararts? Join our Discord server and check out the #charart-help channel!

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Poppycloud (W) ~ CBA

to pay or not to pay for that first season of got ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:57, 11/01/2019>

Remove the shading on the <--- Eye? Also I just have to say im LOVING The Squirrelflight Loner Art! Moo (talk) 08:04, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

There's a line of waste underneath the tail. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:42, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you moo! ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<21:47, 11/02/2019>

There's also two pixels of waste between the hind paw and the foreleg. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:01, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:52, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

re-up oui ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<00:49, 11/08/2019>

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:02, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Lo) ~ CBA

File:Squirrelflight.loner.png yeet ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:59, 11/01/2019>

Is it possible for you to sharpen the stripes just a little bit? They're a little less blurred on her other images. It's not too much, though. —Jayce(15:48, 11/02/2019)

Still working? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:52, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

re-up ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:27, 11/08/2019>

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:02, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt W) - For Evaluation

Here's my charart for Mudfur:

Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:49, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles don't quite match. They're too overblurred and need to be sharper. Try looking at the old warrior for a reference. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:33, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Adding on, here are some references: this and this. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 15:40, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

His eye color on his other images seems greener, and darken the earpink. ~Ripple ☆ 17:47, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk}

There is waste floating all around the image. Remove the texture, the set doesn't have it, and define the pale belly. The mottles look better but some on the flank still don't quite match. They should be more rounded and there should be tiner specks mixed in as well. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:02, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add depth to the shading and add shading to <--- that ear. ~Ripple ☆ 01:48, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk} 10:02, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded removed some waste Sandy ^{My Talk} 10:13, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to < ear Crystie You captured my heart 10:24, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk} 10:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles seem too rounded and uniform compared to the alt star. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:08, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk}} 21:01, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded added some better flecks Sandy ^{My Talk} 08:08, November 4, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like Potato's comment still stands. ~Ripple ☆ 03:20, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk} 06:50, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded straightened mottles Sandy ^{My Talk} 06:57, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

The smaller flecks seem too large and the larger flecks are too round. They're more a flecked pattern instead of speckles and spots. The tail-tip should also be receded imo, and the brown seems too dark. This shows the belly color if you need it. I also should still have the files if you would like them, or hex codes too. Whichever you prefer. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 21:55, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'd like the hex codes pls! Sandy ^{My Talk} 08:27, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

The flecks are #372009, the base is #a08a6c, the earpink is #78503a, the nose is #5a4333, the underbelly is #f1e1c2, and the eyes are #0b2a0d, #0b2a0d, #499851, and #bce5c1. And there's actually faint texture sparingly through the flecks at #a08a6c at multiply and half opacity ish. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 14:42, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Also, can you add a little bit more depth? The image seems a bit flat. --Windsong (talk) 18:23, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk} 05:36, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

try to match the shapes and quantity of the speckeles from the star image. coming together nicely! ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 12:30, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

On my laptop, the layered file of the image disappeared, so I've redone it Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:56, November 9, 2019 (UTC)

Try to make the direction of shading match the direction of fur, and there is some waste to the right of his left ear. --Windsong (talk) 11:11, November 9, 2019 (UTC)

Kitescratch (W) - For Approval

had a break but i'm back now for the time being. activity will continue to be spotty because of school Windsong (talk) 13:45, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, this looks great, but I thought I reserved this before? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 14:52, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Windsong did reserve this before you, Les. I saw hers pop up in the activity feed before yours. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:54, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Nvm then! maybe remove some of the shading on the <-- foreleg? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 14:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree. That would contradict the light source because all the legs need be in shadow. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:58, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, you could have a little bit of light there and it could still make sense with the light source. Also the eyes should be a little more amber? On my current screen they look a little washed out. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (16:13, 03/11/2019)

Seconding Max with this one. There are quite a few images with sources identical, or at least similar, to this who also have shading on the legs. I personally think the image could benefit from it, because otherwise it looks like he has darker legs (kinda like Sandynose or Finleap). —Jayce(16:51, 11/04/2019)

reuploaded --Windsong (talk) 18:35, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:01, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for breaking this, but is it possible to lighten the shading? He's still looking like he's two different colors... —Jayce(02:56, 11/09/2019)

Nutwhisker (Ki) - For Approval

potato, i smudged the back shading but i couldn't do the front one because it would mess up the whole thing, so i blurred it. i think i failed at colorpicking and texture. ;-; ~Ripple ☆ 04:14, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

The texture needs to be drastically sharper but I think you're on the right track. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:39, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I added another layer of texture to make it sharper on a lower opacity. reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 06:24, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

The texture can be sharpened more, and it looks like he also has some lighter texture on his other images. Can you smudge the earpink into the pelt too? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:06, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Stormcloud (K) ~ CBA

❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 08:42, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Hey! Great job on Stormcloud ;) My image took a month and got a dec... There is a little grey patch in the ear, towards the top left/left. Could you fix that pls? The tail also appears kinda textured with the smudging. Probs shouldnt give so many tips as I myself failed XD --Wavetail (talk) 09:29, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

That is ear fur. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:49, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

re-up all it takes is practice!! any tips are taken into consideration. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 16:29, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I want to say maybe thin out the dorsal stripe above the bum a little? going by the other images, it doesn't seem that it would be so thick across that area? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (22:33, 06/11/2019)

re-up ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 15:59, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:04, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Littlekit (YS)- For Evaluation

not sure why it’s so small, I don’t know how to do this--

-Glacier () 15:24, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images. This file has to go under Littlekit (YS).kit.png. Upload your photo under here. ~Ripple ☆ 15:54, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

What program are you using?

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 16:04, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I forgot what it’s called, it probably messed up because I had to transfer it from computer to iPad, its the only way I can. How do I put it under that---Glacier () 17:29, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

To reupload over File:Littlekit (YS).kit.png, just click on the link, scroll down past the file history and flick "upload a new version of this file" and upload your image. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:42, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I don’t have acces to it now so it will have to wait for a couple hours. (When I get a chance I will have to blur the tabby markings a little bit) And I use some basic, free, beginner program for my art so...yeah...---Glacier () 17:53, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the previous version of the image, just as a head's up. You can view that here. —Jayce(17:58, 11/06/2019)​​

The blank size is far too small. Try saving from File:Kit.short.png, save it as Littlekit (YS).kit (png will automati​cally save) and then upload it under the latter name. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 18:24, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, everyone for the help (this is so hard).---Glacier () 18:31, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

The other image I copied off was pretty blurry/faded looking but I tried (I’m still pretty bad at tabbies) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Oceanpelt1532 (talk • contribs)

Reuploaded ---Glacier () 13:22, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Please remove all the excess space around your image and it's making it overall too big. Also, are you using layers? The lineart appears to be fading in some areas, such as the haunch and foreleg. Shading could also be added on the front part of the charart. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:58, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded(blurred tabby marking on face, legs, and tail, added shading to front, and removed waste---Glacier () 22:36, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

This doesn't quite match the old kit. The base is more dull and the stripes on the body are thinner. It kinda should resemble a ticked tabby. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:41, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Cinnamontail (K) - For Approval

I love her <3 Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 23:59, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 17:59, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure I I can recommend things as a kit but the eyes seem different from the warrior one. On the warrior one the eyes are a little bit greener---Glacier () 03:36, November 9, 2019 (UTC)

You can, Oceanpelt. Everyone and anyone can comment on images on this page. You just have to remember to change the heading when you comment. —Jayce(03:38, 11/09/2019)