Talk: Charart/Approval Page

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Willowpelt (K) ~ For Approval

This looks horrible I know Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:25, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the face a bit, and there's leaking shading along the face, foreleg, and haunch. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:02, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk} 08:59, December 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail. Also, the shading is leaking on the haunch and I think the face as well (I'm not sure if the light between the shading and lineart on the face is intentional, but I don't think it should be there anyway given your source). —Ivy ☆ 14:42, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pink seems to be fading on <—— side of the ear. I’m not sure if you did that on purpose but it seems like it just doesn’t fit right with the image---Glacier ()​​​​ 16:15, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

its a stylist kinda thing, ear fur doesn't have to fill the entire lineart, and adding to Ivy's comment, the depth could definitely be defined as well ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 17:34, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Similar with the warrior, the eye color needs to match the set. This looks a little too dark right now. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:39, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I referenced the eyes from the StarClan file btw Sandy ^{My Talk} 06:31, December 27, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the jaw and hind leg. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 00:20, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk} 23:28, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:35, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

I can provide a red line if you need one. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 18:51, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, please! Sandy ^{My Talk} 22:05, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

here are the spots I was talking about, hope this helps^^ —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 17:32, December 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:23, January 1, 2020 (UTC)

There's still shading leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. Add some more shading along the lower jaw, behind the ear closest to us, and the back heel/haunch area peeking out from behind. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:22, January 2, 2020 (UTC)

I probably won't get this done. I'd like to withdraw. Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:48, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

I'll take over. ~Ripple ☆ 02:54, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 04:45, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out that edge of shading on the haunch closest to the rump, please. —Jayce(05:52, 1/07/2020)​

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 15:35, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W Alt3) - CBA

first time tweaking a blank. ~Ripple ☆ 23:03, December 25, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like it would be easier to ask Vec for the lineart for Thistleclaw's regular warrior, since this is a prominent feature that Thistleclaw is named for... meaning I think they should match throughout his images. —Jayce(23:37, 12/25/2019)​​​​

alright. ~Ripple ☆ 00:33, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Except for the shoulder, tail, and legs, the texture needs to be flipped vertically. A cat's fur would naturally flow in the direction on the body, which would be down with the position of the blank. Also, darken the shading + smooth it out. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 17:38, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. the texture was pretty hard to make. ~Ripple ☆ 19:18, December 28, 2019 (UTC) 

Texture is still facing the wrong direction. You have it facing sideways, which is not flowing with the body. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:32, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 20:09, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

You did a great job with the lineart; I was afraid that you would struggle trying to interpret what is what body part with all the floof, but you did amazing! ^^ There should be some shading in the belly area poking between the haunch and shoulder in blue and there's some waste around the image as well. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:35, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. thanks vec. :D ~Ripple ☆ 22:25, December 31, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading depth a bit? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:22, January 2, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 20:26, January 2, 2020 (UTC) 

CBA? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:17, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Whitethroat (Ki) - CBA

i present to you something legendary! ~Ripple ☆ 19:57, January 3, 2020 (UTC)

Expand the shading a bit and curve it up the haunch as well, and brighten the back white paw up a bit too. Define the eye depth as well. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 19:59, January 3, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 20:06, January 3, 2020 (UTC)

Expand the belly shading. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:15, January 3, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 20:38, January 3, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 18:25, 1/05/2020

Willowpelt (W) - For Approval

I tried out some bounce light so let's see how this goes.. the shading also does not want to co-op with me. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:35, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? ~Ripple ☆ 20:37, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:45, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

can you maybe move the white on the left eye a bit? With it centered in the pupil its making the pupils in each eye look different sizes. And add some light to the chin. Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior}

Reuploaded Changes are not showing for me; just in case check the file history for the updated image. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 21:35, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading just a bit more? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:17, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

I think the shading could most be smoothened out on the chest. Also, there appears to be leaking shading on the top of the shoulder by the lineart. Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 16:50, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

That's bounce light, Egg. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:53, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Bounce light should be going down the whole length of the back then, not just the shoulder. There would also be a bit of a bounce light on the tail too. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (19:14, 06/1/2020)

Reuploaded Shading. Pain. Much. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:10, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if this is supposed to be there but the shading seems to disappear on <—— side (by the spine/back)---Glacier ()​​ 01:03, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

It's bounce light, Oceanpelt. It's intentional, and I was told to add more (hence why I reupped a while ago). --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:21, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

It should be a more uniform line, at the moment it looks quite patchy which is why it looks like leading shading. It should be one very soft line on the edge of the shading ( I normally have my base shading layer cover the area, and then have my depth layer create the bounce light). — max ^{it is the real thing,} (01:33, 07/1/2020)

Oh, what’s bounce light?—-Glacier () 06:15, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Ambermoon (W) - CBA

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:36, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(05:33, 1/07/2020)

Brackenpelt (W) - CBA

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:36, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(05:32, 1/07/2020)

Crowtail (W) - CBA

Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:36, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(05:32, 1/07/2020)

Palebird (Ki) - For Approval

All colors from the .psd file for the queen. —Jayce(03:36, 1/05/2020)​

Whitewing (W) - For Approval

— max ^{it is the real thing,} (05:04, 05/1/2020)

Whitewing (K) - For Approval

— max ^{it is the real thing,} (05:04, 05/1/2020)