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Wasptail (W) ~ For Evaluation
The stripes aren't the most matching and best I know, but I like it. I'll tweak them better after advice. Sandy My Talk 10:36, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Waste Sandy My Talk 10:39, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
Could you add some shading depth! They're very pretty!! — ☆ paper · finches ★ 19:23, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
Given your light source, flip the shading on the top of the tail to the bottom of the tail. And perhaps recede the shading on the chin and muzzle? The stripes should also be more jagged to match the apprentice. Whoops didnt see you already commented on that Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 20:07, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
The stripes should be thinner and sharper, more jagged like Egg said. Overall, I think what Thunder had originally matches better in terms of stripe style if you want to reference that ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:27, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Sandy My Talk 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
Could you give the stripes a bit of a more "fuzzy" look to match the set? I think using a rough/fuzzy brush and continually smudging back and forth will help to achieve that. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:44, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
I don't seem to have the brush in my paint program. Maybe I could just smudge the stripes? (I use Medibang paint pro) Sandy My Talk 01:56, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
If you don't have a fuzzy brush, try smudging with a 1px brush back and forth. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:59, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up I hope they're fuzzier Sandy My Talk 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
Could you define the shading on the face? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 21:26, January 10, 2020 (UTC)
Define the shading depth. It's looking good! Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 21:39, January 10, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Thanks! Sandy My Talk 23:32, January 10, 2020 (UTC)
https://vvcap.com/BU9i3RstJ here's a redline for shading that's leaking, to fix it, just use your paintbrush/pencil tool (whatever one you use) and fill it in so all the pixels are filled up to the line art. https://vvcap.com/DDz3migeT here's another reline where shading needs to be added/defined, i didn't redline the face, but could you define the shading depth there too? with the placement you're using, there shouldn't be shading on the back of the tail like you have it right now. you're doing a great job on this! —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:03, January 11, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Sandy My Talk 09:43, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
Add shading to the tail, because in the last update, it disappeared and add a little shading to the back leg closest to us. This looks very good. C: ~Ripple ☆ 03:54, January 13, 2020 (UTC)
I would darken the shading tint some - I am aware it is artist choice, usually, but when it is plopped next to the apprentice, it's a stark difference and throws off the set coherency imo. Just making it darker, with perhaps a touch more brown, should do.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:34, 1/13/2020
Maybe smooth the shading, too? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:45, January 13, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up I didn't really 'add a touch of' brown, because the shading was purple. Perhaps I should make it black/brown? Sandy My Talk 03:16, January 14, 2020 (UTC)
With your source, the shading on the top of the tail needs to be on the bottom. Smooth out the shading, and yes tint it black/brown. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 03:25, January 14, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Made the tint black. Sandy My Talk 09:53, January 14, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading more, add light to the front paws and shading to the back paws, and there's some leaking shading on the haunch. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:52, January 14, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Sandy My Talk 00:07, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front paws, I think you may have removed too much. Smooth out the shading, especially on the shoulder and haunch, and expand/define it on the face. Curve the back leg shading to the way it is positioned (example here) and do the same for <<< that ear. Also lighten the earpink, it is too dark and doesn't match the apprentice. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:12, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
Not sure if it's just me, but could you add some depth to the face. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 20:56, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Sandy My Talk 01:38, January 17, 2020 (UTC)
The shading on the legs seems a tad overblurred, which still makes the shading hard to see in that area. Also, add more shading along the face (expand it) and to help, add some shading surrounding the muzzle. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:45, January 17, 2020 (UTC)
Define shading in the ear and the shading depth on --> side. ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:52, 1/17/2020>
Re-up Sandy My Talk 23:20, January 17, 2020 (UTC)
I'm not seeing a difference. Add more shading to the legs and trace the muzzle with shading. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:34, January 17, 2020 (UTC)
Re-up Sandy My Talk 04:40, January 18, 2020 (UTC)
Birchface (Alt W) - CBA
red is not dark brown/almost black. was unsure if I needed to make him a tabby or a solid, but I can always re-add the stripes and whatnot if need be. —Jayce(22:49, 1/14/2020)
Smooth out shading by the hind leg? It doesn’t seem to fade at all, it looks unnatural.---Glacier () 03:16, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I tried, but I think it's also the texture, not quite so much my shading. I did fiddle with everything in an attempt to fix it. —Jayce(01:13, 1/17/2020)
It does look better. I think it’s the texture, it shows up weird on my iPad.---Glacier () 20:42, January 17, 2020 (UTC)
Well, I did try. Do you need me to try again? —Jayce(13:16, 1/18/2020)
Nah, it’s good. It looks better on the computer. I couldn’t do anything close.---Glacier () 15:48, January 18, 2020 (UTC)
CBA then? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:03, 1/19/2020
Riverstar (K) - For Approval
— max it is the real thing, (22:54, 18/1/2020)
So this is probably my eyes, but the ES doesn't have a pale muzzle - which means this one shouldn't have it. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:03, January 18, 2020 (UTC)
Spooky gave me the file for the ES and there was a layer for the pale muzzle, so I matched what I was given. — max it is the real thing, (23:05, 18/1/2020)
Willowpelt (K) - For Approval
this is gross Av Out of sight and out of mind () 04:17, January 19, 2020 (UTC)
Whereabouts is your light source coming from? — max it is the real thing, (07:35, 19/1/2020)
It is the source I've used on Rainwhisker, Hatchkit, Stormfur, and a few others. Should I change anything? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 13:32, January 19, 2020 (UTC)
Riverstar (Star) ~ For Approval
I struggled hardcore with the texture. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:53, January 19, 2020 (UTC)