Talk: Charart/Approval Page

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Nutwhisker (K) - CBA

I color picked from the kit but used the warrior as a reference. I also probably have to fix the shading and everything because I did this at 1am when my brain doesn’t work---Glacier ()​ 22:08, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Sharpen the texture a lot more. I'd recommend asking Finch for the warrior's file, I feel tht will help a bit. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:29, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Actually, the texture could almost stay as is considering the original kit was first in the set, followed by the apprentice (which also has a softer texture than the redone warrior). Maybe smudge the earpink a little more for now? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (22:46, 21/1/2020)

Reuploaded I already redid the texture, I softened the ear pink too---Glacier ()​ 22:51, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture, I do believe you oversmudged it. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:52, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded texture---Glacier ()​ 23:06, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looked a little to light so I darkened it---Glacier ()​ 23:17, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:44, 1/22/2020>_{way down hadestown} 01:44, 1/22/2020​

Reup---Glacier ()( )​ 02:03, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

add shading to the chin. ~Ripple ☆ 03:26, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

I’m not sure how to do that---Glacier ()​ 04:01, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Grab your paintbrush/pencil tool and trace over that area; then smudge/blur and you should have some lovely shading over there. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 04:04, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup is this what you meant?---Glacier ()​ 04:52, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, but I can barely see it. Darken it? ~Ripple ☆ 15:38, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup--Glacier ()​ 21:58, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:58, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture a little bit? Looking at the original kit, I feel like the texture lines should be a bit thicker than you have them as well. —Ivy ☆ 03:15, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Reup---Glacier ()​ 15:20, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading overall. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<01:38, 1/24/2020>_{way down hadestown} 01:38, 1/24/2020​

Reup--Glacier ()​ 19:23, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

I believe the texture should have a shaper appearance - slightly; it appears more blurred out here than on the other images.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 15:10, 1/25/2020

Reup—-Glacier ()​ 03:30, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Smudge the texture a bit. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:31, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup wow Potato that was quick —-Glacier ()​ 03:40, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

yes i fast Add more shading to the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 14:00, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reupyeet—-Glacier ()​ 15:52, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Add more shading along <<< this side of the tail. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 16:39, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit too, if you don't mind. It seems fairly blotching. —Jayce(17:06, 1/28/2020)​​

Reup ---Glacier ()​ 18:32, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup sry Jayce I just saw your comment. I forgot to save the shading laste time so I had to redo it...---Glacier ()​ 18:34, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

About my comment right above this, it was the textured I had to redo because I forgot to save it, not the shading---Glacier ()​ 00:22, January 29, 2020 (UTC)

Texture’s looking a tad too sharp, mind smudging it a bit? ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<04:13, 1/29/2020>_{way down hadestown} 04:13, 1/29/2020​

Reup I had to go so I couldn’t say reup right when I reuped it—-Glacier ()​ 02:17, January 30, 2020 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the base colour a little bit? This looks darker than the apprentice. — max ^{it is the real thing,} (04:24, 02/2/2020)

Reup—-Glacier ()​ 19:31, February 2, 2020 (UTC)

I feel like the texture lines should be slightly thinner. —Jayce(03:52, 2/04/2020)​

Sorry Jayce but that’s as thin as my tools go, my computer is broke so I have to use my tablet.---Glacier ()​ 19:12, February 4, 2020 (UTC)

Also, that tool is 1px, the same size as the line art pixels, it should be good.---Glacier ()​ 23:18, February 5, 2020 (UTC)

I agree with Jayce, the texture needs to be thinned. If you have an eraser, use a 1px size and erase some of the texture, then resmudge it. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:33, February 5, 2020 (UTC)

Reup---Glacier () 02:37, February 6, 2020 (UTC)

Can you add some shading in the ear? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:03, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup—-Glacier () 14:17, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I decided to redo the shading because I really want to show the progress I’ve made. Blurred shading is pretty hard for me and I think this looks better anyways.---Glacier () 16:36, February 12, 2020 (UTC)

I think the texture can be smudged just a little bit to match. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 18:46, February 16, 2020 (UTC)

Reup—-Glacier () 21:50, February 16, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth the texture a bit more. try using the blur tool on a low opacity over it and that should get it, just a tad, not too much. maybe add a little bit more highlight too, if you need help on where to place them let me know. if the highlights look too sharp you can use the blur tool a bit over them, if they look too bright, lower the layer's opacity a bit. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 02:55, February 17, 2020 (UTC)

Reup—-Glacier () 17:05, February 17, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:07, February 20, 2020 (UTC)

Orange kittypet (K) ~ For Evaluation

The shading and back stripe are confusing, yes. I'll fix after comments Sandy ^{My Talk} 23:00, February 8, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out shading?---Glacier () 13:23, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but the eyes look more orange than yellow. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 14:51, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

The paw pad closest to the tongue appears to be unfilled. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 20:12, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

To expand I what I said, I can’t determine the light source either. Add depth on the shading as well as smooth it out and expand it---Glacier ()​​​​​​ 00:48, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I think I need help with the light source. I know there's waste but I'll fix it later. Sandy ^{My Talk} 10:21, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm.. smooth out the shading a bit. Also, (I think this is correct) there would no shading on the back. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 02:26, February 13, 2020 (UTC)

That’s supposed to be a stripe, I’ll get the manga image when I get home---Glacier ()​​​​ 19:32, February 13, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I'm much happier with it now. Still need to fix Sandy ^{My Talk} 09:41, February 14, 2020 (UTC)

I don't think the manga depicts him with texture? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 13:52, February 14, 2020 (UTC)

He shouldn't have the texture since this is a graphic novel alt, honestly. —Jayce(18:51, 2/14/2020)​​​

Reup sorry about that. Sandy ^{My Talk} 02:03, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

Given this is solely made for a cat with only a manga appearance, in which it should match that - remove the collar, because the cat's shown without one. Remove the stripe going down the tail, because the manga also does not depict that.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 20:11, 2/15/2020

Actually, [1] it should have the stripe---Glacier ()​​ 20:46, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

It does. The dark brown. Sandy ^{My Talk} 22:12, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

I'm not seeing anything on your screencap there, Ocean.

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 23:11, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

Here's an image Ocean uploaded earlier. Spooky does appear to be correct, I see no stripe on the tail. Also, could you match the colors to the manga a bit more? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:40, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

Never mind I misread what Spooky said about the tail —Preceding unsigned comment added by Oceanpelt1532 (talk • contribs)

Repup Sandy ^{My Talk} 22:12, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

Seems like the shading is leaking on the shoulder and arm. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<05:59, 2/20/2020>

Wasptail (w) ~ CBA

—Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 03:04, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Define shading?---Glacier () 17:32, February 14, 2020 (UTC)

Perhaps define the eye depth? —Jayce(18:52, 2/14/2020)

reuploaded —Hrafnsmál ^{The raven's call} 00:14, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 16:07, February 20, 2020 (UTC)

Light gray cat - For Approval

All colors from the manga. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 03:02, February 20, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the overall shading, especially on the rump. —Jayce(18:10, 2/20/2020)