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Ghost Blanks - For Approval
File:Ghost.tweak.png Didn't feel right putting "Tweaked" as the heading on this page. I did change a couple things that were bothering me before I uploaded them (such as the far front leg, the cheek fluff on the longhaired, and the back leg placement so that it actually lined up with the other paws). Comments? — max it is the real thing, (01:10, 02/4/2020)
reuploaded don't mind me — max it is the real thing, (01:12, 02/4/2020)
The backs look pretty stiff. Could you curven the spines a bit? Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 02:05, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded also fixed some other issues per feedback — max it is the real thing, (02:26, 02/4/2020)
Maybe make the front legs a little thinner on the shorthair? WhiteStorm is back! 22:05, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
I hate saying it's fine; but this is pretty close to my original reference and I think the legs are fine as is - accounting for a generic cat build and not a "semi-foreign" one shown in the linked reference. — max it is the real thing, (22:11, 02/4/2020)
reuploaded having a fiddle don't mind me again — max it is the real thing, (22:40, 04/4/2020)
The front left paw looks like it’s facing us more than the right front paw. I’m not sure if this is intentional or not.--Glacier () 14:27, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
Matching with Max's original reference image, it would be intentional, imo. The link to that is above.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:35, 4/06/2020
^ It was intentional due to the perspective. The only thing that is facing forward is the cat's face and the chest slightly, but, to match the original ghost blanks, the front paws and such are facing away from us - also per the linked reference above as well. — max it is the real thing, (03:06, 07/4/2020)
Refugee blanks - For Approval
I'm going to fix some of the fur on the long hair once I'm on my computer, just posting them here now. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:08, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
Maybe give the paw pads more shape. Right now they just kind of look like circles with lines going through them, try to make them look more like individual shapes if that makes sense.---Glacier () 14:30, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
Gonna leave a wall instead of peppering comments here and there, sorry in advance. Would you mind making the short-haired's tail thinner? I also think the ears could stand to be made slightly smaller - some breeds have it that large, but in the interest of being a more generic cat design. Also, very broad stroke, I know, but I think the fur lines on the long-furred could stand to reach a little deeper, while they should be less deep* for lack of better word, on the short-furred. To create a bigger difference between them. Also gonna leave a few pixel removal (red)/addition (blue) suggestions here. Just the typical type stuff, smoothing and the like - take or leave, I just had time to make it.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:05, 4/06/2020
Olive (KP) - For Approval
hello. —Jayce(00:15, 4/07/2020)
Could you define the facial/chin/neck shading and smooth the shading on the white part of the tailtip?—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:04, 4/07/2020
just a small thing that bugs me, i don't think the hind paw under the body would have any light, or at least a lot less. (oreo cat tho) david 🌈 13:14, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Twigbranch (Lo) - For Approval
20 pieces of prey? Ouch. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:46, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
Can you define overall shading depth, and perhaps smudge the earpink a little bit, so that its not a hard-edged line. — max it is the real thing, (01:26, 07/4/2020)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:28, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
So, I can see that you did define the depth, but, I think the overall shading could be smoothed out, especially the area above the back leg - which also wouldn't reach that high with your current source. Try this redline for shading; the lighter red is what I'd recommend as your first layer of shading, and the darker red is where the depth is mainly required. Once that is properly smoothed out, so that it doesn't look hard-edged, which I think is what's throwing me at the moment, the depth might actually be fine at the moment. I'm also not really seeing a difference with the earpink either? — max it is the real thing, (01:35, 07/4/2020)
Reuploaded Is that better, Max? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
Can you darken the shading? I'm having issues seeing it.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:55, 4/07/2020
Reuploaded Also tweaked up her torn ear a bit. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:49, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
I would say do even more so, for darkening - if you put it next to the other images, it looks quite flat in comparison with the set.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:23, 4/08/2020
Reuploaded Ooofffff this shading. Is that good? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:37, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
When I said darker, I do mean darker. And still, darker. I'm looking at it this way; if you overshoot, that's fine, but bumping it up little by little really isn't helping in terms of my repeating comments reflecting it. The bum and the neck probably about 5% opacity more, while the rest of it's gonna be in the 10-13% ballpark.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:42, 4/08/2020
Reuploaded Do you want it darker or is this good? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:33, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
That should be fine. Can you add shading depth for these two spots on the belly, and add some shading for the neck triangle?—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:54, 4/08/2020
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 04:10, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Shading is leaking from the belly onto the back leg <—- — max it is the real thing, (06:34, 08/4/2020)
Needleclaw (W) - For Approval
tyb 🌌 owo??? 01:21, April 7, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel
Her eye colour seems a little warmer and more yellow on the apprentice and kit than what you've currently got here. — max it is the real thing, (01:27, 07/4/2020)
reuploaded i was having a little trouble with the eye color bc it was dulled in the other sprites by the wiki tyb 🌌 owo??? 01:33, April 7, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel
That's very fair; the hexcode I used for the kit is #C6902E and for the depth, I just added that on multiply, if that helps? — max it is the real thing, (01:37, 07/4/2020)
reuploaded thanks!! fixed tyb 🌌 owo??? 02:15, April 7, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel
No worries! One last thing from me I promise; on the apprentice, there seems to be a little gap of white underneath the chin and the black chest. — max it is the real thing, (02:18, 07/4/2020)
Hmm, could you curve the haunch shading to contour with the body shape a little more? Just to make the haunch appear rounder, if you get what I mean. The shading also seems to be leaking away from the linear slightly at the elbow of the << front leg.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:41, 4/08/2020
Lionblaze (Lo) - CBA
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:50, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
bruh i love this boof, do u think u could connect the fluff to the back of the head a bit more? david 🌈 02:20, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:59, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:23, 4/08/2020
Stream (Ki) ~ CBA
for my stinkbreath of a cat; she should've been like 10 this year. david 🌈 13:05, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:23, 4/08/2020
Bug (Lo) ~ For Approval
I love bug so much ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 15:47, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
Hmm, could you smooth the shading out? Seems a bit blotchy to me. Might be the light source. Given, if the light is also coming from the top as it looks like, there'd be less light on the legs, and the shading elsewhere on the body would contour more with the blank's body shape.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:26, 4/08/2020
Re-Up! I think it was the light source- hope this is better. ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 12:27, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Hmm. Better for the legs. However, I do think that generally; there is too much shading on the body; it goes higher on the flank than it would need to with a from-above source, now, as with any part of the body (top of the tail, back of the neck, ears, curving into facial shape) that is at the top of the image, needing more light.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:44, 4/08/2020
Re-Up! hope this is better?? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 19:54, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
What I'm essentially trying to convey is this; all of the red is where light would be hitting if a sun was sitting right above the cat - thus, anything within the red shouldn't be shaded. Green's where shading could be added, because it's hidden beneath the tail, and thus not getting light. Blue's a small bit of discolored lineart I noticed. I would also lighten the base the barest pinch; just to still be black but so the shading/lineart is more visible.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:02, 4/08/2020
Bumblestripe (Lo) - For Approval
I still have a little to do but want to put it up before I go offline for several hours---Glacier (17:23, April 7, 2020 (UTC))
Renamed to File:Bumblestripe.loner.png with a lowercase L per naming conventions, please continue uploading under that.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:03, 4/07/2020
Sorry, I didn’t know it mattered.---Glacier () 19:17, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
There’s a little bit of waste near the top right ear (our right). Could you also smooth out the shading on the two front legs? And there’s a fewwww pixels on the back (close to where the tail connects) where the stripe runs through that aren't as dark. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not. This is really good! 😀 Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:10, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
stripes could be smudged just a wee bit more. david 🌈 13:15, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Alderheart (Lo) ~ For Approval
my bby boi ♥ Star red and black ♥<17:46, 4/07/2020>
Smooth out the stripes a tiny bit. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:12, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
Sorry, I know it's hard to do earpink on a ginger cat, but could you define it just a tiny bit? 😀 I'm struggling to see it on my screen. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 19:44, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
i think the stripes are a bit lighter on his others images. its 1am though so i could be wrong lol david 🌈 13:16, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Lionblaze (D) ~ CBA
pain —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 21:32, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
the shading seems 2 be coming away from the lineart on the legs in a few places, just a few pixels. david 🌈 02:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded :angry: —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 02:37, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:45, 4/08/2020
Haze (Sister) - For Approval
It's nice to be back! Quarantine has me bored so I thought I'd try another image. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 22:02, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
I think the base should be lightened a little. With the darker texture on top - she doesn't look pale gray perse, overall and from color pick, more just a shade of medium gray on the lighter side.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:16, 4/07/2020
Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:04, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
define the light on the legs a bit? david 🌈 13:12, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Root (Lo) - For Approval
I really like this guy. Took aspects from Tree and Sunrise Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 23:42, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
Pretty. Would you mind darkening the shading the barest smidge, to help with the depth? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:46, 4/08/2020
reup Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 19:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
Hawk (Sister) (Sister Alt) ~ For Approval
—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:03, 4/08/2020