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Refugee blanks - For Approval
I'm going to fix some of the fur on the long hair once I'm on my computer, just posting them here now. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:08, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
Maybe give the paw pads more shape. Right now they just kind of look like circles with lines going through them, try to make them look more like individual shapes if that makes sense.---Glacier () 14:30, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
Gonna leave a wall instead of peppering comments here and there, sorry in advance. Would you mind making the short-haired's tail thinner? I also think the ears could stand to be made slightly smaller - some breeds have it that large, but in the interest of being a more generic cat design. Also, very broad stroke, I know, but I think the fur lines on the long-furred could stand to reach a little deeper, while they should be less deep* for lack of better word, on the short-furred. To create a bigger difference between them. Also gonna leave a few pixel removal (red)/addition (blue) suggestions here. Just the typical type stuff, smoothing and the like - take or leave, I just had time to make it.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:05, 4/06/2020
Re-uploaded. Big thanks to Max for providing a red line. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:47, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
The <--- cheek on the longhair looks a big squished in. Could you make the face more symmetrical? Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 14:54, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
Do you think you could give me a redline for the cheek? I'm having trouble seeing where it's looking squished. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:12, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
here you go, the redline also curves inward to show definition between the head and body Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 22:16, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks! this look better? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:51, April 10, 2020 (UTC)
I think, plz2not shoot, that the shorthaired's tail should not have the fur lines. Just - from all the other blanks we have, consistently, the short-furred version doesn't have them. Not having them here would be better for set consistency, imo. Taking those out, I also believe it could be a pixel or two thinner.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:52, 4/11/2020
Re-uploaded. :rage: —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:52, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
I feel like the ears could still be a bit smaller...I don’t know if others agree though. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 20:59, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:05, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
I think the shorthaired's tail could be a small few pixels thinner, still - from the fur removal upload, didn't see the difference.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:57, 4/12/2020
The shorthair's tail is a but lumpy as well. And the ears could stand to be a bit thinner/pointier Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 18:40, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:00, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
I don’t think the ears should be facing inwards. It seems unnatural.---Glacier () 17:05, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
It actually looks like the ears are angled backwards which is natural for cats who are fearful or aggressive. Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 17:07, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
^ that's what i was going for. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 00:00, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
Really minor, but the noses look a bit wide. Could you maybe make them slightly thinner? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:27, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:05, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
You might make the far toe on the near foot a bit smaller. Also if you're going to cats with ears back, you don't really see the same shape on the outside of the ear. The back of the ear is more of the prominent shape, while the edges are more hidden, if anything but ear fur is even visible. Like so. These are lovely, btw. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith23:15 Wed Apr 15 2020
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:22, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
I think the ears could be shrunk a little. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 13:21, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
The jaw looks very flat on the bottom and it seems kinda triangular.-Glacier () 16:16, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I don't know how to draw small cat ears. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:53, April 21, 2020 (UTC)
Very minor little thing; could you double-check that all the lineart is black? Was having a little fiddle with these for practice and noticed some of its greyed out in areas (like the head and such on the longhaired). — max it is the real thing, (01:02, 26/4/2020)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:03, April 26, 2020 (UTC)
Looks great! I was trying to make a couple designs with these, and when I was removing the white there were some patchy bits on the ears. Maybe make sure they’re completely white? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 07:22, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:09, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
Root (Ghost) - For Approval
Should I use this version or the gaussian blur version? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 07:43, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
Comparing to the loner, I believe the leg stripes should be thinner and the speckles on the main body should smaller and there are more of them in varying sizes? — max it is the real thing, (08:07, 13/4/2020)
Reuploaded I think this is better? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 09:29, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth the shading everywhere. It’s a bit dark and sharp right now. Lightening it a bit wouldn’t hurt either. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 01:27, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
I think there are supposed to be pale parts on the belly, chest and muzzle. And more speckled throughout the image at different sizes. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:33, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded I’ve fixed a few things, but I already have the paler parts done? I’ll get to work on the speckles --Eastertail Hop Hop! 02:54, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
Reup Fixed the speckles --Eastertail Hop Hop! 03:05, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
Despite the different side, I feel the haunch stripes don't really match the spirit of the swirls presented on the loner. I would also add a touch more shading to the ears. Also - something about it, when plopped next to the loner, makes this overall seem like a different color. I don't know whether you have Egg's file or not, but that might help. Might be a matter of making the shading tint just a hint warmer.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:09, 4/15/2020
I colourpicked from the loner, or at least tried to. I’ll fix what I can, but my art program doesn’t have a very good hsb tweaking system. It keeps making the colour lighter, even if i try to make it darker. If I do chararts in my other art program (which has a better hsb system), the pixel blanks come out all fuzzy D: I’m not really sure how to fix this --Eastertail Hop Hop! 23:43, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
Hmm, which art program do you use? Sandy My Talk 00:55, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
I use Medibang Paint (not pro version). --Eastertail Hop Hop! 02:59, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
Can you define the shading a little everywhere except for the legs? —Ivy ☆ 21:11, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I don't think I can help, cuz I use the pro version D: Darken the shading, maybe? Sandy My Talk 00:18, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
Reup --Eastertail Hop Hop! 03:08, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
I think there should be some speckling on the face. And can you make the speckles that you already have flow more with the stripes? There's this odd outline of negative space between the stripes and speckles (and a bit with the back lineart too); it appears like the pattern is straightforward stripes and speckles and stripes, when it should really flow together and be like stripes mixed with freckles. If that makes any sense. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:55, April 21, 2020 (UTC)
Reup I think I’ve got it. If not, could someone provide a redline please? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 23:48, April 21, 2020 (UTC)
Per my prior comment - those issues stand. The haunch stripes don't match the spirit of the loner's, despite the other side, and the shading tint clashes on this base, and making it warmer like the loner's will make the set congruent.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:49, 4/24/2020
While tint is generally a choice, in cases where it throws off images and makes it appear different than the others, the color difference should be addressed and fixed. Spooky is correct, Root's other image looks warmer than what you have here. —Jayce(06:30, 4/25/2020)
Reup Ok, I’ve downloaded a program which can properly adjust the colour. Thanks Patch for the redline for the stripes! Is this better? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 01:50, April 26, 2020 (UTC)
Hmm, I think some shading could be removed from the >> side of the ears, per source, and also to let it's color show through, since it appears much darker than the loner's with the layering on top. I think filling in some of that blank space on the flank might be beneficial; just a couple more smaller flecks. Seems from the loner that there's less blankness, overall.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:07, 4/27/2020
Reup Have I filled the blankness enough? --Eastertail Hop Hop! 22:17, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
Why did you change the shading tint in the last upload? It was fine before; and we're back to me objecting it throws the set as black, and not the warmer.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:08, 4/28/2020
Jayfeather (Loner) ~ For Approval
his pattern is difficult to replicate lol
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 06:25, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
Perhaps smooth/smudge out the edges of the stripes a bit —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:18, 4/25/2020
i see it looks hard but the pattern i think is darker then the one on the medicine cat picture Ninjago kai is fire13 (talk) 16:06, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded pain —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 05:17, April 26, 2020 (UTC)
I think he may have a dorsal stripe along his back and tail on his other images? Also the stripes appear to have some faint "fuzziness" (maybe some sort of texture I guess) over them. Overall, this is nicely done! Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:53, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded —Hrafnsmál The raven's call 05:42, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
Coco (KP) ~ CBA
File:Coco.kittypet.png —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:48, 4/26/2020
Another gray cat for your collection. CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:50, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
Brown tabby she-cat (Ro) ~ CBA
OC time Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 06:21, April 26, 2020 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:02, 4/28/2020
Mothwing (Lo) - For Approval
They're lesbians, Harold. Also, this was tough because I wasn't sure what to follow in the set - so I played it safe a matched to the apprentices + former elder. — max it is the real thing, (06:57, 26/4/2020)
reuploaded - fiddling with some things — max it is the real thing, (07:08, 26/4/2020)
Correct me if I'm wrong, but those images you reference appear slightly more "busy" with more speckles and dapples than what you have here. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:55, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded - how's this? — max it is the real thing, (22:30, 27/4/2020)
Ghost Kit Blanks - For Approval
ended up fiddling with it a little because anatomy is hard fellas. still not happy with it; so im only posting the shorthair for now to nail the anatomy down first before making a fluffy one. — max it is the real thing, (09:49, 26/4/2020)
i feel like the head should be less round and more rectangular if that makes sense? also i feel like the muzzle should be a little bit more up on its face and > this ear's line connecting to the > side of its head needs to come down a ways ✧Winter✧ 19:28, 4/27/2020
reuploaded - had a fiddle; still feeling quite 'meh' about this one — max it is the real thing, (22:57, 27/4/2020)
reuploaded - ? it's probably the perspective that's messing me up with this — max it is the real thing, (23:06, 27/4/2020)