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Harelight (Re) - For Approval
Ooh, I like this! Let's see how the first refugee goes.. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 19:29, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
Might you smooth out the overall shading? Good job! —Jayce(19:39, 5/03/2020)
Reuploaded Thanks! --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 20:53, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
Could you curve the belly shading some, and also I think the tail shading should be underneath, not on top, I think to follow along with your source? Also add a little bit more depth to the chest area. — max it is the real thing, (23:05, 03/5/2020)
Could you move the eyes so they're not bug-eyed? His other images don't have this so I don't see why he needs to. Something like Max's eye placement tutorial is what I mean.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 23:13, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded I think I got everything? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:11, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
Much better! Minor thing, but > eye has some extra pixels compared to the other eye. Could you remove those?
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 02:15, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Per the tutorial up, and other logic, given this --> source, the tail shading would definitely not extend all the way to the tip of the tail. The <<-- ear having shading on the <<-- side also doesn't make sense.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:56, 5/05/2020
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:08, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
CBA? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:51, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
Sorry for breaking CBA, but could you smooth out the shading some more, and perhaps add some more depth to it along our right side? It seems to fall a little bit flat and makes the additional chest depth look blotchy in comparison. Could you also add some shading to where the front arm sits in front/above the back leg please? — max it is the real thing, (21:21, 08/5/2020)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:08, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
Almost there! A couple more things; the little "triangle" of belly/back foot underneath the arm right at the front, that wouldn't have any light on it what so ever and would be completely in shadow (with assumingly both layers of shading to show that).
The second thing; could you add a little bit of shading >> of the muzzle/face to give it some depth? Right now without any shading there, it falls very flat compared to the rest of the image. There also probably wouldn't be as much shading at the top of the << back leg either with the current light source.
And lastly, I would personally curve the >> back leg shading a bit more to flow the blank's shape and have a little bit of shading just above where the back paw peeks out from underneath. — max it is the real thing, (23:54, 09/5/2020)
There would also be shading >> underneath the head too. Also if any of this is really confusing, please let me know and I can draw up a redline of it for you! But its basically what is in the shading tutorial, that Spooky also linked as reference earlier. — max it is the real thing, (23:56, 09/5/2020)
Reuploaded Back after a few days of burnout. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:12, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
White Rouge (Ro) - For Evaluation
This is my first charart. I tried my best and I hope you guys like it! Iceclaw111 17:24, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
The image is too pixelated and isn't the right size. It needs to be the same size as the rogue blanks. There's also no shading (which is a requirement of the project) that I can see. —Jayce(17:48, 5/04/2020)
As Jayce said, the file size is way too big; it should be 176x112 pixels but this is 611x408 pixels. Make sure to download the blank properly from the pixel blanks. This image also needs shading, to which you can view a shading placement guide on our apprentice tutorials along with other helpful information. Also do not thumb or align your image as it messes with the page layout. Also, from which book is this rogue from? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:48, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I did download the blank from the blank page, but something must have happened. Do you think I should scrap this one and try again?Iceclaw111 18:01, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
The rouge is from a clan in need. 18:02, May 4, 2020 (UTC)Iceclaw111
From my experiences with prior users who face this problem, they ultimate redo the image once they have the correct file size. And is this rogue listed on our minor characters page? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:07, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
Yes the rouge is in the minor characters page, you can go to it by looking at the reservation table then clicking on the dashed rouge link. Iceclaw111 18:12, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
I think there might be some confusion as to who this character is; if they're from a Clan in Need, they'd be listed on the above page Vec linked, which they are but, under a different description due to the coloured reprint. I'd maybe suggest looking there to see which of the linked cats under the Clan in Need heading matches this character's debut in the graphic novels (if that makes sense? I don't have a copy of these books handy). If they do match up to one listed on the minor characters for those books, I'd suggest matching to the coloured description. — max it is the real thing, (22:32, 04/5/2020)
Lets just call it the white cat with blue eyes, I will add the blue eyes in and fix the teeth up. Iceclaw111 16:19, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Oh and dont delcine it just yet because there is a background I am working on removing it. Iceclaw111 16:31, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Re Uploaded --Iceclaw111 17:10, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Re Uploaded I added some shading to the face and re did the teeth on the collar.Iceclaw111 19:50, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Iceclaw, the charart needs to be of a character from the books, whether it be named or simply a minor character. If you cannot find the colored version of this cat from the minor characters page, it will be declined. ♥ Star red and black ♥<21:09, 5/05/2020>a's your turn" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?it's your turn?">r❄ 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?are you the one i've been looking for?">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<21:09, 5/05/2020>
White BloodClan catEdit Noimage Description: long-haired white cat with blue eyes and a black tooth-studded collar[8] Rank(s): BloodClan[8] History: They are shown fighting over scraps with a white BloodClan cat when the ThunderClan patrol arrives at Twolegplace. They are promptly scared off and are seen dashing off intro the streets. That is the one. I do not know why it was called a dashed rouge, but it indeed is white. Can I change the name from dashed rouge to white rouge? --Iceclaw111 02:33, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Now its a longhaired cat --Iceclaw111 03:15, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
The shading needs a lot more definition and depth, as right now, the image is still rather flat. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 16:24, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reup I had to reupload twice due to a mistake. Added more shading. Thanks Potato! --Iceclaw111 17:10, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Changing the shading. --Iceclaw111 17:28, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
I went ahead and renamed it for you. Please continue to reupload over File:RP-2.rogue-10.png. There also appears to be missing lineart over the image. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:06, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Fixed the lineart. Thanks Vec! --Iceclaw111 15:49, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Messed with the shading, and fixed more of the lineart. --Iceclaw111 15:58, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
Please define and expand the shading. Also, I'm not sure what those gray lines are meant to be. Is it texture? ♥ Star red and black ♥<16:25, 5/07/2020>a's your turn" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?it's your turn?">r❄ 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=?are you the one i've been looking for?">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<16:25, 5/07/2020>
https://vvcap.com/FCQQvRsQw here is the redline for the teeth on the collar you wanted. Can you fix the blurred line art? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:36, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
Reup Thanks for the redline Patch. I feel as if there is something wrong with the teeh though.
Iceclaw111 19:33, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
The teeth are too large and there are still several instances of the lineart being covered accidentally throughout the image. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:05, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Finleap (Re) ~ For Approval
All colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:15, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Maybe it's just the perspective of the blank, but the kit and apprentice/alt apprentice images only have the ginger/stripes going on the foot... while the warrior and loner have it further along the haunch. I feel like it should match the original kit and apprentice images, and maybe have some of the ginger reduced, because as it is now... they don't match. —Jayce(17:23, 5/05/2020)
Reuploaded. How's this? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:34, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Part of the whisker seems to be detached.
Reduce it a bit more? Unless you want to tweak the apprentice images/kit image to reflect adding extra ginger, that is. Given you're the OA, it's entirely up to you, but if we're going by first images, there's still too much ginger on the haunch when you compare it to what was posted first. —Jayce(19:01, 5/05/2020)
I actually would like to tweak his images. The ginger on the apprentices' hind legs seems a bit low even just compared to the images' front legs, plus the shading on them could use work. I was thinking the front legs match the apprentices/kit images, while the back legs match the warrior images, which seem to be lower than the loner, but higher than the apprentices. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:33, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Then you may feel free to nominate your images, and go ahead and fix them up to however you want the pattern to look, and then we can go ahead and not comment on the ginger any further. That being said, may you smooth out the line of shading going along -> side of the neck, up to the back? It appears rather rough around the edges. —Jayce(19:38, 5/05/2020)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:55, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Did you do the underbelly shading on a different layer to the rest of it? Because similarly to another one, the shading on the underbelly looks to me like it doesn’t cover all of it, while the rest of the shading goes above it. Might be just me though --Wavetail Ya Yeet 09:13, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:03, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
I really can't see the shading on the pale near his leg anymore. Would you mind darkening it? --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:26, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 04:26, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
As mentioned on the tweak nom, could you make sure that the ginger placement matches Sandynose's? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:54, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
Could you provide a redline? That way we can just move on and not have to worry about the ginger anymore. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:09, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
Sorry for the late reply; I worked the past two days. I'd think in order to match Sandy, the ginger would have to be removed on the two haunches. The ginger on the forelegs seem good as they go up to his "elbows". Kinda like what's on Sandynose's art and Finleap's.Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:14, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. How's this? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:28, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Dark gray tom (W) - For Approval
~Ripple ☆ 22:32, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
There's some waste around the image.
—Hrafnsmál The raven's call 22:53, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 23:09, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Perhaps smudge out the earpink a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:37, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded. ~Ripple ☆ 03:01, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the overall shading; it clashes a bit too much. —Jayce(02:36, 5/07/2020)
reuploaded. --~Ripple ☆ 22:19, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
Shading could be defined a bit more, and maybe overall depth too. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:15, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Alderheart (Re) ~ For Approval
might fix the eyes ♥ Star red and black ♥<22:31, 5/08/2020>
He needs the white tail-tip. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:46, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
re-up big smart ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:15, 5/08/2020>
Just a minor thing but could you change the pupils or the eye highlights a little? They’re looking a little... bug eyed, for lack of better word. --Wavetail Ya Yeet 09:15, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
re-up ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:37, 5/12/2020>
Spotfur (Re) - For Approval
Might mess with the shading later --Wavetail Ya Yeet 01:50, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
this looks great! maybe darken the shading on the tail and add "for approval" on the heading. ~Ripple ☆ 02:06, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
Blur the markings a little-Glacier (02:47, 5/10/2020)
Reup I keep forgetting oops- --Wavetail Ya Yeet 03:19, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
From what I can tell from the apprentice, which the first in the set, and ideally the side you'd be matching to for the pattern for this image - she's got a pale underside as well as the white markings, and the transition between the two is very soft.
The stripes/spots also look a little lighter on the apprentice as well and seem to have the same soft edges to them as well. They also look smaller and there appears to be more of them, while the forehead markings seem to resemble an "M" a little more, and the pale markings and white come up a little bit higher as well. — max it is the real thing, (04:39, 10/5/2020)
Reup Not seeing the pale underside? Also added a little ‘v’ between the forehead stripes :P --Wavetail Ya Yeet 09:10, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
I concur with Max - there is a pale underside that is reflected on all of her images, a secondary light gray shade between the base and the white. It comes up slightly to outline the haunch and belly; and transitions the tail color. To which - for the tail, I think there's a touch too much white, and that the gray to white transition is too sharp, and should be smudged more.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:08, 5/10/2020
Reup I think my grey is too light for the underside I’ll probs fix that, lightened the spots a little since I forgot to before --Wavetail Ya Yeet 05:34, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Reup Is this better? I see it now lol --Wavetail Ya Yeet 05:52, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Haze (Ghost) ~ For Approval
What is shading, eye placement, and texture. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:35, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
Could I suggest adding a little shading underneath >> the front paw where it's sort of resting on top of the back leg? — max it is the real thing, (23:22, 11/5/2020)
reups yee ofc Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:17, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Stream (Ghost) - For Approval
— max it is the real thing, (23:22, 11/5/2020)
Jayfeather (Re) - For Approval
I feel like I forgot something...-Glacier (21:32, 5/12/2020)
Reup-Glacier (21:39, 5/12/2020)
Did you add the scar? I can't see it. —Jayce(21:46, 5/12/2020)
The stripes seem a bit rougher too, and it's missing a dorsal stripe Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:52, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
The eyes seem too dark compared to the set. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:15, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
I see the scar, it just seems a bit faint. --Wavetail Ya Yeet 22:32, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
Reup-Glacier (22:35, 5/12/2020)
Feathertail (R) - For Approval
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:34, May 12, 2020 (UTC)