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Beepaw (Ki) ~ CBA
File:Beepaw.kit.png ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 10:15, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the shading, and perhaps lighten it a little. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:54, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the back paw. Looks wonderful for your first charart! Storm♫ 12:27, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a tad, please.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 16:43, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
Soften the texture a little bit. Cute (: Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 23:06, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the earpink just a tad. I like this! —Ivy ☆ 23:59, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 09:48, June 15, 2015 (UTC)
Can you blur the shading a little bit more, dull down the texture some more as well, and add some shading between her front legs on her underbelly? Storm♫ 14:27, June 15, 2015 (UTC)
Why would she need more shading on her front paws and underbelly? She has enough there. I think you should lighten the shading a little more. Appledash the light of honor 17:45, June 18, 2015 (UTC)
No, between the front legs on her underbelly. There'd be just shadow there, and there's not really enough. Storm♫ 20:48, June 18, 2015 (UTC)
I'm really sorry, but I agree that it is fine. There is shading there, and there's no less than there is on a bunch of other images. —Ivy ☆ 21:11, June 18, 2015 (UTC)
Storm. The underbelly is approximately 3 pixels wide, and 5 pixels long. It does not need that much shading. Appledash the light of honor 00:05, June 20, 2015 (UTC)
Re-ups — hope I got it, I'm crap at shading, and Wikia won't let me upload the image to the correct file name… did I miss anything? ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 11:37, June 21, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the shading just a little more. —Ivy ☆ 12:32, June 21, 2015 (UTC)
Still working? —Jayce(11:42, 6/26/2015)
Withdrawn — wifi's being turned off ~IceThe Spirit and the Soul 10:59, June 27, 2015
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Can I Take over? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 13:30, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
you dont gotta ask lol Storm♫ 13:31, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
Re-ups huh❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:37, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
Cool. Could you blur/smudge the shading more and define the texture a bit? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 14:44, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
Can you darken the texture to match the apprentice? Storm♫ 14:50, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
yo ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:57, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the front legs and the texture just a tad more. —Ivy ☆ 13:47, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
blur the shading on the main body some more Storm♫ 14:43, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
I'll get to them soon ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:45, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
I'm not sure if texture needs to match, but the texture on her apprentice image is more dense :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (08:57,6/29/2015)
Oh, is it just me, or are her eyes torquoize (green)? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (12:47,6/30/2015)
They do look sort of turquoise, but I compared them to the apprentice's eyes and they seem to be the same color. So I think it's ok —Ivy ☆ 15:03, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
May i ask why theres light on ==> side of the right forleg? It should just be shading User:StormSongz/Sig 01:17, July 2, 2015 (UTC)
I can still barely see the texture... define light on all her legs though, and maybe smooth out the "right angle" formed by the shading below her head. If you understand :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (02:53,7/3/2015)
Could you erase the shading a bit and show more light on both front legs and the tail? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:59, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
Declined due to lack of work. —Jayce(00:02, 7/7/2015)
I'll take over. User:StormSongz/Sig 00:09, July 7, 2015 (UTC)
Reups User:StormSongz/Sig 00:14, July 7, 2015 (UTC)
Define the texture on the face and tail, please. Nice image! —Ivy ☆ 01:14, July 7, 2015 (UTC)
Reups Made it more visible everywhere else User:StormSongz/Sig 22:31, July 7, 2015 (UTC)
Define the facial shading- it appears a bit flat compared to the leg shading. I also think lowering the opacity of the texture just a tiny bit might be a good idea too- it's not quite as visible on the apprentice as it is on this. —Jayce(11:45, 7/8/2015)
Reups User:StormSongz/Sig 01:00, July 9, 2015 (UTC)
Can you smooth out the shading on ==> foreleg? It is a little hard edged. —Ivy ☆ 01:06, July 9, 2015 (UTC)
No. ...lol jk i hate white cats mk bye User:StormSongz/Sig 01:09, July 9, 2015 (UTC)
With this source there would be shading on the back side of the kit, User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:14, July 9, 2015 (UTC)
reups :) User:StormSongz/Sig 20:14, July 10, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shape of the ear pink, please? I can see it, but it just kinda looks like it's overtaking the entire ear...unless that's my eyes. I think I need to get my eyes checked again. —Jayce(12:22, 7/12/2015)
Define the shading around the head~neck area, and smooth out the tail shading a tiiiiny bit? And perhaps lighten her main body up/define light, as she kind of looks silver/pale gray atm. Lovely and extremely cute though^^ No you don't, not as much as I do. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (13:36,7/12/2015)
Reups She's already pure white. I cannot lighten it any further. I blame the texture lol User:StormSongz/Sig 14:04, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
What a cute lump of fur. CBA? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (00:23,7/15/2015)
Mumblefoot (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
Oh.My.Gosh.I've failed terribly at the ragged fur xD. PoppyShine (talk) 04:57, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
There are 2 flecks of waste near the chest fur. Please remove it. Also, should he have patchy fur, or not, as that's what's depicted in the other images? And there's a fleck of waste underneath the tail.~User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:30 June 26 2015
I don't think he gets ragged fur as that may be only for his elder rank. Correct me if I'm wrong. Also define the shading on the main body. Hey poppy, I was wondering if you want to, would you be willing to be my apprentice? If so let me know on my talk page, and then file out a request on the mentor program page. Storm♫ 05:35, June 26, 2015 (UTC)
Of course ^-^. PoppyShine (talk) 05:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Also on the front front, facing us, there looks like there is some waste under there. Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:49 June 26 2015
Yeah I think he doesn't get the ragged fur, since he was a young warrior. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:59, June 26, 2015 (UTC)
I think the shading could be defined everywhere, not just on the main body. Also, blur the earpink. —Ivy ☆ 12:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)
The second fur tuft thing on the chest isn't coloured in. This is amazing for your first(?) charart! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:56, June 26, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded it.I removed the waste,blurred the earpink, and defined shading.PoppyShine (talk) 00:10, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
The ragged fur still needs to be removed...? —Ivy ☆ 00:22, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
Not trying to argue but, isnt ragged fur part of a cat's trait that they recieve when they are kits, take Raggedstar and Reedfeather for example. PoppyShine (talk) 00:27, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Honestly, I'm not sure we'll know for certain until GC comes out, so for now the ragged fur needs to be removed. If I'm correct in assuming the ragged fur cite was only for his elder rank. Storm♫ 00:42, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
Ok.PoppyShine (talk) 00:54, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Define the shading everywhere some more and smooth it out a bit? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:58, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
There is a faint patch of waste between the front leg and back leg( facing us). Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56// talk~ 03:39 June 28 2015
Reuploaded it. I removed the ragged fur and defined the shading,and erased the waste. PoppyShine (talk) 00:41, June 29, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Define the shading on the two legs furthest from us. —Ivy ☆ 19:45, June 29, 2015 (UTC)
Define your light source and expand the shading. Look at some of mine for reference. if you need further help, I can send you a tutorial. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:28, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Hope this is better.PoppyShine (talk) 02:20, July 1, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
I still can't see your light source. Did you look at Fox's examples? If you didn't, I recommend that you do. —Ivy ☆ 23:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
You also still appear to only be shading along the edges of the lineart. Follow the apprentice tutorials as specified User:StormSongz/Sig 01:24, July 2, 2015 (UTC)
Smooth out the earpink. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (08:16,7/2/2015)
Ok, reuploaded it. :3 PoppyShine (talk) 06:11, July 3, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Poppy all youre doing is shading along the edges of the lineart. What you need to do is shade inside the actual blank. Please look at other examples. User:StormSongz/Sig 11:50, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
I'm sure she is trying - I remember I had a hard time with shading placement on my first image. I would try the warrior blank redline from the apprentice tutorials, the third blank on the fifth row of redlines (not the one at the top). —Ivy ☆ 14:30, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I tried the best I can >.< --PoppyShine (talk) 00:53, July 4, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
I'm really sorry to have to say this, but I still can't see your light source. Maybe try shading placement like him. In order to follow that light source on this image, remove the chest and muzzle shading, and add light on <--- side of each leg. Also, remove the shading on the top of the tail. The shading itself looks good, so don't be discouraged! :) —Ivy ☆ 01:49, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
Maybe smudge/blur the highlight a bit more? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:58, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded. PoppyShine (talk) 23:46, July 5, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Better, but the placement is still off in a few places. The shading still needs to be removed on the muzzle, chest, and top of the tail. Also darken the rest of the shading. —Ivy ☆ 23:38, July 6, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the ear-pink a little more. User:Dappledlight/Sig11:05 Tue Jul 7
You should try defining the light source more, which means which /direction/ the light is shining the cat in (beautiful). If you want him to be shone from the right[1], fill the shading like this[2](as a reference). If you want him to be shone on the left like this[3], fill it like this[4] or to look like this[5](fill like this[6]. Keep in mind that don't be afraid to expand the shading a bit, as the blur tool kinda "shrinks" it. Hope that helped :) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (13:04,7/9/2015)
Reuploaded. Look closer and you may see the differences. PoppyShine (talk) 19:55, July 9, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Oops, forgot to remove shading. Here, look closely. PoppyShine (talk) 19:58, July 9, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Are you sure the changes are showing, because I can't see any. I still can't see your light source and the shading placement looks the same. Are you following the examples for shading placement? —Ivy ☆ 23:06, July 9, 2015 (UTC)
Yeah, but look closely at the shading, i darkened it and it looks more expanded. I dont know where to put the light source. PoppyShine (talk) 00:09, July 10, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
It's just basically one side without shading which is the direction light is shining from, and the shading is on the other side. Say if light is shining from the left(which means the shading is on the right)the shading should take up about 1/3-1/2 of main body, 1/4-1/3 for the head, and about 1/2 for the legs and tail. For now the legs are all in shadow while the body shading still needs to be expanded. Again hope it helped =) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (10:50,7/10/2015)
Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(13:04, 7/14/2015)
Yes, almost got it just a few more tweaks and its done.PoppyShine (talk) 17:54, July 14, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Reuploaded. Done! Shine like the Sun Stars in the Sky
Why is the top of the head lighter than the rest of the image? Also, I still cannot see your light source. Look at Bramble's advice and the examples again, you're doing good =) —Ivy ☆ 22:34, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the two legs closest, and the shading on the two legs farthest, as they do not have any shading at all on them User:StormSongz/Sig 22:36, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
Also you still yet appear to only be shading along the lines of the lineart. Please look at some examples, the tutorials, or like Ice said, look at Bramble's advice. User:StormSongz/Sig 22:39, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
You're getting better^^ I suggest, considering what's easiest for you atm, is to just remove all the shading on his back(the right side) and just fill in the legs. If you don't understand, see Graymist's shading placement for reference. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (00:15,7/15/2015)
Darkstripe (Alt.DF3) - CBA
Sziri the goat sails away ツ 12:04, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
theres a random pixel by his tail. david 🌈 14:45, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
Maybe blur the stripes a tad? Lovely job, as always. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:40, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
I don't think they need to be blurred, personally. Maybe smudged a bit to give it a fur texture look, but that's just a suggestion. Anyway, add shading to the bottom of the chin? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:07, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
Buutiful :D Define light on the shoulder^^ I think the stripes are fine. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (07:49,7/4/2015)
Re-ups Thanks:) I smudged them a bit Sziri the goat sails away ツ 16:31, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
Possibly smooth the shading a liiiiiittle bit more? User:StormSongz/Sig 03:35, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 19:47, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
Comments? Sziri the goat sails away ツ 11:14, July 8, 2015 (UTC)
It hasn't quite been three days yet (you still have like eight and a half hours according to the wiki clock), but anyways, can you define the shading itself on the tail..? The depth could probably be a bit more visible. —Jayce(11:40, 7/8/2015)
Re-ups I hope its okay now,cuz i'm going on a 7 day holiday and wont be able to work in this :p Sziri the goat sails away ツ
The whole tail should be in shadow. User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:16, July 9, 2015 (UTC)
The tail is fine. Appledash the light of honor 19:51, July 13, 2015 (UTC)
Agreed with Icy. CBA? —Jayce(13:05, 7/14/2015)
Shredtail (OTS) (DF) ~ CBA
File:Shredtail (OTS).df.png i will face god and walk backwards into hell ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 18:52 Thu Jul 9
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I believe the whole tail should be shaded. Beautiful image! —Ivy ☆ 23:08, July 9, 2015 (UTC)
...on the warrior, half of the tail is shredded. I went off that. I can't do anymore, otherwise they won't match. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:46 Fri Jul 10
Shaded, not shredded. maybe you should put the timestamp on your signature page or smth ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (09:25,7/10/2015)
What are you talking about...? It doesn't matter how the tail is shaded on that image??? This is a different blank and has a different source. Also, her timestamp is fine and it is in a subpage. —Jayce(09:34, 7/10/2015)
Oh gosh, my apologies. I read that comment like, immediately after waking up and thought it said shredded. x.x Anyways, I'd rather keep the shading as is. If I add anymore it'll just look flat and/or the stripes will end up disappearing... note to self make sure you're actually awake before replying to comments, ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 11:49 Fri Jul 10
It's possible to shade the whole tail and not make it look flat or making the stripes look faded. A shading layer of depth can easily be added to your shading base. Either way, with this light source the tail should be entirely in shadow. User:Burntclaw/Sig 22:59, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
I'm honestly trying, but it just looks odd. The image already has 3 layers of shading on the main body alone, with another 2 or 3 on the tail. Whenever I try to put any more shading on the tail it just turns into a black blob. Clearly still a tail, but it really bugs me.
Besides, this is a pixel image of a cat. Why does it need to be 100% accurate shading-wise?? If you want that, we should just start using photographs instead. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 12:35 Sun Jul 12
Of course it doesn't have to be 100% accurate??? :/ But with this source, the whole tail should be shaded. Other people have shaded tails (with dark colors) like this and still manage to make it not flat. But your image is put on the approval page for a reason- to improve. Honestly, if critiques are rejected because an image doesn't have to be 100% accurate, then why have the approval page? Any image can be put on an article regardless of good or bad in quality. User:Burntclaw/Sig 16:02, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
the tail is fine >.> everyones just parroting other users now and its getting really irritating. theres been a couple other DF cats approved with shading like this, so can we stop it? david 🌈 18:32, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Honestly, I agree with skt and berry. Ever since a user pointed this out, its became a necessity on these blanks. Yes, the approval page is here to improve the art, but why are we going to get so bent out of shape over a tail's /shading/? These are pixels, after all. Also, with this color of a cat, it is difficult to fully shade something and not have it look flat. Just because some users have managed it, doesn't mean others will have the same ability to do so.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 21:20, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
This is too pretty for a cat with half his tail missing fur. CBA? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (00:12,7/15/2015)
Frecklewish (TC) (Alt.W3) - CBA
She was called pale brown. —Ivy ☆ 00:13, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading, and if she's pale brown I think she could be lightened slightly. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:25, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped Lightened the base a little bit. —Ivy ☆ 01:41, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
Could you lighten her up just a tad more please? I think pale brown should be much lighter than this. User:Burntclaw/Sig 23:27, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 23:34, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
Oh my gawd this is gorgeous! Maybe define the earpink just a tad, I know it's there, but it doesn't stand out too much for me to seperate it from the main pelt color :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (13:49,7/12/2015)
Re-upped Thanks! —Ivy ☆ 14:04, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Love those spots. Define the shading on the top o' the head? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:48, July 13, 2015 (UTC)
Lighten the shading on her front paws. Appledash the light of honor 19:50, July 13, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 20:22, July 13, 2015 (UTC)
CBA? This is pretty. —Jayce(13:09, 7/14/2015)
Hootwhisker (W) - CBA
The apprentice doesn't have texture, it's just how it's smudged. I can't match Sorrel's style and it's not required to anyways. —Jayce(09:27, 7/11/2015)
Could you smudge the earpink a little? User:Burntclaw/Sig 23:28, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I can do that. —Jayce(01:19, 7/12/2015)
He seems... darker than the apprentice? >.> Define shading on his leggies a slight ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (12:05,7/12/2015)
Why the ">.>"...???? Re-uploaded. I color-picked from a different spot this time. —Jayce(12:20, 7/12/2015)
Smooth and pretty as a pancake (lol). CBA? ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (13:46,7/14/2015)
Mistystar (Alt.Q) - For Approval
Why so ugly O,.o ;; User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:05, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Can you define the shading on the front legs some, and blur the shading on the leg least visible please? And its not ugly :P User:StormSongz/Sig 00:08, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Also smooth out the shading on the face User:StormSongz/Sig 00:10, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
reupped really not happy with this tbh User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:22, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading everywhere but the legs, please. —Jayce(13:08, 7/14/2015)
Cedarstar (W) ~ For Approval
I wasn't sure whether he'd have the 'graying with age' muzzle; but then I guess a warrior can be quite old before promotion/retirement. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:33, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Gasp :o wheres his white chest D: User:StormSongz/Sig 00:36, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Also brighten the earpink a bit. It should match User:StormSongz/Sig 00:36, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
I'll do the earpink later. Uh, it's not a chest, it's his underbelly?? I wasn't sure what to do about the white, since there's more on the StarClanner's chest, but not as much on the leader. (I'll nominate that in a sec) It does say 'white underbelly' in the desc. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:37, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
At least pull the white up a little bit to match in between the legs on the leader charart? User:StormSongz/Sig 00:42, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:48, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Y'know, given that he's really dark gray, he should be darkened. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:33, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
Reups I didn't darken it too much ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:05, July 13, 2015 (UTC)
Do you think you could darken him just a tad more? He was described as very dark gray. —Ivy ☆ 00:21, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
I think its personally fine as is, if sorrel darkens it more itll look too black User:StormSongz/Sig 12:56, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
A little more wouldn't hurt, honestly. If he's called "very dark gray", chances are he's only a few shades from black, if that. Also remove the graying muzzle- the cite for his warrior rank was found before the cite for the graying muzzle... and the cite was when he was a leader anyways. —Jayce(13:06, 7/14/2015)
Reups colour-picked from Storm's on the tweak page ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:06, July 14, 2015 (UTC)