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Squirrel (cat) (Ki) - Declined

[[File:File_Squirrel_(cat)_kit.png.png]] Okay since sombody is working on Moon I rebranded by Charart as Squirrel since they're also gray.Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit, since it looks too magenta and not a natural gray color. The shading needs to be defined a bit as well. And remember, don't thumb your images! Just go into source and remove the |thumb from the file name. There is a lot of waste around the character so make sure to remove that, and make sure "For Evaluation" is in the title. Sorry if this is lot to you --Greenflower Like three six () 22:20, September 6, 2019 (UTC) 

Oh crud! Ur right I 4got 2 put "For Evaluation"Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and  I removed the thumbnailBluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

This should also be uploaded as File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png. --Greenflower Like three six () 22:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bte I tired remeoving the wast with the eraser but It won't go away! It's not ven visable when I edit the Charart on Paint.netBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I'll keep tryingBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! My bad The wast is visable on Paint.net it's just hard 4 me 2 c!Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:36, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn't use Paint, I would use GIMP or FireAlpaca to make images instead since they're way better in quality and can make the image look better (both are free). --Greenflower Like three six () 22:37, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I c there's still waste! Dang It! I'll fix that imediately! 

Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:32, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a lot more and expand it. The shading is far too overblurred, probably as a result of Gaussian Blur (which is not recommended as it causes shading to leak), so it could be sharpened some, retrace it with a 4px paintbrush or pencil and smudge it with a 6-10px brush at 40% strength. The lineart is also overblurred, to fix just erase on your shading layers, and the blurriness will be gone. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:34, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 11:43, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Please continue to reupload over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 23:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo the Charart since I merged the layers on Paint.net before I began to edit the Charart on Gimp Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:32, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

What kind of shading should I use to shade my Charart? Bluedragon64 (talk) 13:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Most people use blurred, smudged, or drawn-on shading. A small other note - please change the earpink to something a little less purple/neony.โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:19, 9/07/2019

Reupoladed! Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:44, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Remember, don't thumb your images. Just go into source editor and remove the |left. Another way to avoid this is to upload from Squirrel (cat).kit.png instead of going back and doing the posting process again. Also, you have a extra .png in the file name so remove that.

As for the image, the earpink is still neon, darken it or desaturate it some. It also needs expanding quite a bit. Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The shading needs to be expanded everywhere except the chest, and smoothed out a lot. Also, add a thinner, darker layer of shading so the image has some depth. --Greenflower Like three six () 12:53, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

How do define your light source? Bluedragon64 (talk) 14:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

If you need help with a light source I'd recommend checking the apprentice tutorials, since they were recently updated with new sources =) --Greenflower Like three six () 14:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'm consulting a Gimp apprentence totorial for shading. But I don't know what it means when the tortorial tells me to draw the bits with penicl  "where the image is in shadow". Can u plz explain what that means? Bluedragon64 (talk) 20:58, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

A light source is where the light and shading are supposed to be on an image. Say if the light source was ^, the shading would be on the back, and if down it would be on the flank more. Does this help? --Greenflower Like three six () 21:00, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:20, 9/12/2019

Yes but I'm preoccupied with school and homeworj which is more important. So I'm currently on a bit of a haitus sorry! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

When you get back, smooth, define and darken the shading. There's some waste by the ear. Make the earpink a grayish-pinkish color, and this is optional, but if you want, add eyeshine. โ€”Ripplewater   19:12, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Make sure to say reuploaded on the approval page when you make changes to an image! Now recede the shading some, smooth it out a lot, and erase the shading on the top of the head and tail. --Greenflower Like three six () 21:32, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Also like to add one that you need to say reuploaded down here, not up in the title. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:59, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

As what's been stated multiple times, reupload your image over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png.

โ€”Hrafnsmรกl The raven's call 00:00, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

FARTS! I THOUGT I DID, BUT IDK HOW!!!!!Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:29, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Nevermind i just figured out how to reuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:33, September 16, 2019 (UTC) 

I'm sorry I didn't do it sooner. I thought I did reupload the orignal file but i was wrong.Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:33, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to user is banned. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 01:08, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 19:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:F90E8E81-0527-41FF-8DDB-B84A4C394572.png|left]] I tried ;( Anything to improve on? Wavetail (talk) 08:02, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Should I give her grey points? Wavetail (talk) 08:08, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Milkripple has this character and is doing it... also just some tips: Smooth shading, add a light reflection in the eye, smooth the foot markeing, smudge the earpink and make it dull Moo (talk) 08:20, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

As pointed out, a user is already working on this image which is posted above as they have it reserved on the reservation table. I'm afraid I'm going to have to decline it for that reason, sorry! โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (08:23, 20/9/2019)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 15:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sandgorse (W) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:Sandgorse.warrior.png]] - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 01:38,9/11/2019

Soften the stripes a bit, please. I actually blurred them a bit when I made his pattern. โ€”Jayce (17:59, 9/11/2019)โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹

Re-uploaded blurred them - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 23:06,9/11/2019

I feel like the stripe style does not match. It seems like for the other images, and this is what I did for his tunneler, that a rounded brush was used with minimal tapering to the ends (I used an airbrush if I recall correctly). Here they seem too sketch-like and uneven. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 18:44, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 00:20,9/13/2019

I've gotta say, that I'm thinking Vec's comment still stands a bit. She's right, I used a rounded brush, and these stripes still look too squared off. I'm sorry, this was one of my favorite sets of mine and I'm so nitpicky about it ;;;; โ€”Jayce (06:27, 9/13/2019)โ€‹

Re-uploaded I can't get this to look right to save my life - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 04:03,9/14/2019

Add some shading to <--- this ear. โ€”Ripplewater   19:21, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

This is looking better, but it still looks sketch like and thin on the haunch ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 16:39, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 04:30, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Not really. Tons of schoolwork. Withdrawing - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 18:08,9/21/2019

Archiving โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:17, 22/9/2019)

Sedgecreek (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Sedgecreek.kit.png]] jeez o petes this was hard to match, took pattern from apprentice Snowdapple โ„ 16:41, 9/19/2019

Would you care for the file or hex codes? I think the stripes should be a tad darker, and there should be more variance with the tail stripes (ex. the third tail stripe from the tip down should have a "bulge" on one side, along with a few of the lower ones). ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 18:31, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

On her other images I think the stripes look slightly softer than what you have. --Greenflower Like three six () 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Yes please! Also will smooth them later im currently at hospital Snowdapple โ„ 02:48, 9/20/2019

lSorryfor off track comment but are you ok? Moo (talk) 08:17, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

reups sorry for the scare guys lmao, my phone was dying last night. but basically im ok (thanks for the concern!) my bf scratched his eye p bad at work had to be there for him, but ye Snowdapple โ„ 21:18, 9/20/2019

I think the stripes on the haunch could be a bit thinner and streakier, kinda like with a paint brush sorta feel. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 19:43, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reups I feel if I blur them too much the stripe will look weird compared to the rest of the image. Snowdapple โ„ 15:50, 9/22/2019

on the apprentice, the stripes on the flank are thinner and are little lighter it seems? the tail stripes also should be less uniform and have smaller bands as well as the thicker ones in the middle and towards the base โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:29, 22/9/2019)

Perhaps try to smudge them or use a different brush? I used a watercolor brush and then the smudge tool/eraser to refine them Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 14:32, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

reee withdrawing. Snowdapple โ„ 20:37, 9/23/2019

Archiving. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:48, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (K) ~ Withdraw

[[File:Tawnyspots.kit.png]] Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 17:52, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 22:45, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 04:00, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt W) ~ Declined

[File:Mudfur.warrior.alt.png]] ~Firespring A Legend Returns

Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. --Greenflower Like three six () 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? ~Firespring A Legend Returns 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? โ€”Jayce (06:22, 8/29/2019)โ€‹

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). ~Firespring A Legend Returns 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? ~Firespring A Legend Returns 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). --Greenflower Like three six () 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. Snowdapple โ„ 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry Snowdapple โ„ 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, sorry for the long wait, like Moo said I lost my pen and Vec (may have been Jayce I can't remember) gave me an extension. I didn't want to put it off any longer so I did it with a keyboard. Anyway, I did all the suggestions (or most) that you guys said, what do you think? ~Firespring A Legend Returns

Looking good Firespring! Hmm, curve the shading on the haunch more (let me know if you need a redline) and there's waste outside the tail. The coloring on the nosepink and mottles are still a little off (nose should be #1b1411, the mottles should be #493522). --Greenflower Like three six () 23:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? ~Firespring A Legend Returns

You're getting there! I think the shading could be smoothed a bit, and the mottles look sharper on the alt star (try running a low opacity sharpen tool or a low sharpen filter on the mottles, beware of color pixels). You could also use a low opacity pencil and draw over the mottles, which will make them sharper as well. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:12, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear. โ€”Ripplewater   00:23, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? Also, there already is shading on the ear. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 00:28, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is it me, or am I seeing texture on the image? If it's texture, it needs to be removed as the alt star doesn't have any. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:31, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Removed texture. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 00:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading on --> that ear but not on <-- this ear. โ€”Ripplewater   01:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added shading to left ear. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 05:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a some more on the body โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (09:37, 07/9/2019)

Reuploaded. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 21:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the back leg and smooth it out on the shoulder and haunch more. --Greenflower Like three six () 21:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 21:30, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading on the < ear; helps with flatness โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:08, 9/08/2019

Still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:16, 9/12/2019

My comment on there not being any lighter mottles in the tail tip still stands. Snowdapple โ„ 17:53, 9/14/2019

Reuploaded. Yes, still working. Sorry for the wait. How's this? ~Firespring A Legend Returns 05:51, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

you need to remove all lighter mottles in the tail tip. There shouldn't be any light in the dark at all Snowdapple โ„ 13:30, 9/15/2019

Add shading to <--- that ear and to where the haunch meets tail. โ€”Ripplewater   19:24, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 21:14, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading overall, add/expand it on the tail and add some to the back half of the tail. Add some more shading along the ---> part of the shoulder; at least some part of it would be in shadow. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 01:43, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

^^^ especially the haunch, chest, and shoulder Moo (talk) 05:29, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

still need to remove the lighter mottles on the tail tip... Snowdapple โ„ 02:38, 9/22/2019

adding on. the front paws are not one solid color. the mottles need to be more strung out and span sizes, not just one size. Snowdapple โ„ 02:40, 9/22/2019

Still working? โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:23, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:17, 9/27/2019

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:41, 9/28/2019

Sorreltail (W) ~ Declined

[[File:Sorreltail.warrior.png]] My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. Windsong (talk) 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. --Greenflower Like three six () 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Windsong (talk) 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^ โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:52, 9/03/2019

reuploaded Windsong (talk) 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the chest? It looks rather flat there Eggheart!๐ŸฅA True Warrior 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Windsong (talk) 15:17, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if this doesn't quite match the pattern placement of the queen's tail, which is what it should most reflect since both are on the same definite side; vs, the star is angled and thus not the best to match this blank to โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:37, 9/10/2019

reuploaded --Windsong (talk) 17:54, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading any more on the tail? Snowdapple โ„ 20:59, 9/14/2019

Still working? โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 19:41, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Yes. reuploaded --Windsong (talk) 19:13, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ginger patches on the bottom forelegs should be lowered a bit. And the orange patch on the shoulder could be rounded/smoothed a bit more. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 14:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little shading to the >> ear just to help it not look flat. Also, still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:18, 9/27/2019

Declined due to lack of work โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:42, 9/28/2019

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:20, 9/29/2019

Wetfoot (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Wetfoot.kit.png]] comments? Snowdapple โ„ 02:33, 9/29/2019

We aren't up to the "W" characters yet, and unless I'm mistaken this isn't an Oa claim? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (02:35, 29/9/2019)

oof thats my bad then.. Snowdapple โ„ 02:37, 9/29/2019

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:20, 9/29/2019

Heathertail (K) - Declined

[[File:Heathertail.kit.png]] My lovely Heathertail <3 Crystie Can't help loving me 12:08, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are inconsistent in color, on < that side they are light and on the other side they are darker. They are also too overblurred and need to be sharper to match the set. Add a tiny bit of light to the back leg closest to us, near the toe and add some more shading along the foreleg. --Greenflower Like three six () 21:39, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry but can this be declined? My school's having activies soon so I don't think I'll be able to upload this... :'( Crystie You captured my heart 12:47, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Declined as per user request. โ€”Jayce (17:47, 10/03/2019)

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:19, 10/03/2019

Smokehaze (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Smokehaze.kit.png]] โ€”Ripplewater   05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (09:30, 07/9/2019)

There's waste near the ear furthest from us. Also, could you remove the shading above the nose, and add some to the chest? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 16:36, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened. But I'm confused where us the light source? Moo (talk) 22:56, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is something similar to this. With this source there would be a tiny bit of light on < this back leg, near the toe line. --Greenflower Like three six () 02:06, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ah right. Lighten the shading? Moo (talk) 05:11, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, Vec, could you give me an extension with this and Sasha? My tabletโ€™s lost. --โ€”Ripplewater   04:35, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

We can give you an extension until the 18th, but if you do not find it before then, we would have to decline this. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 18:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   01:28, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a little perhaps? Maybe expand it onto the shoulder, then smooth it by the base of the tail, face, and haunch. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:12, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be smoothed all out in general Snowdapple โ„ 21:00, 9/14/2019

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   21:33, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading more on the tail, remove a bit of the shading on the haunch, and expand the shading behind the front leg closest to us (including the shoulder) Snowdapple โ„ 13:32, 9/15/2019

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   15:16, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Remove some of the shading on the tail. The shading should not cover the whole thing but rather half of it length wise. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 16:38, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   05:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Also remove some of the shading on the back leg closest to us- with the source there would be a tiny bit of light shining on it, at least remove it to the little line near the haunch. --Greenflower Like three six () 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   08:58, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Wrong back leg Ripple- I mean the one closest to us. --Greenflower Like three six () 12:06, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   17:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

areas circled in red are some handy dandy places to add some shading โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:31, 22/9/2019)

The shading on the ear still looks very flat; try adding some more depth there? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 14:27, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   15:29, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

here is a redline; in red is waste, and in blue is where you should remove shading ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 18:43, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded, thanks, vec. โ€”Ripplewater   17:18, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

the shading is leaking away above the tail on the leg; and you could also add some shading to the foot possibly - I think it would be in shadow with this source? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:35, 02/10/2019)

withdrawn. โ€”Ripplewater   03:55, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:11, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Jayclaw (K) - Declined

[[File:Jayclaw.kit.png]] Comments? Moo (talk) 07:03, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit. --Greenflower Like three six () 12:53, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I also think the earpink should be duller to match. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 18:32, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch. --Windsong (talk) 20:14, September 21, 2019 (UTC) 'Bold text'reuploaded --Moo (talk) 02:21, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

texture could still be defined, on my screen it looks nearly absent โ€”Hrafnsmรกl The raven's call 03:44, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if itโ€™s just my current screen, but his eyes should be more of grey-blue, theyโ€™re looking a little purple at the moment โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (11:31, 22/9/2019)

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 07:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

The texture could still be darker, and the earpink and eyes are still a bit too neon I believe. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 14:32, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

To me the earpink and eyes look very similar to the warrior? But texture can be fixed --Moo (talk) 23:12, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 03:39, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color on the warrior looks more like a bluish gray than the blue on here. I think the base on the warrior also appears to be a few shades lighter. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:29, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Who owns the file? Do you know? I think some hex codes would be fab --Moo (talk) 00:28, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the facial shading to curve the shape of the face; reaches too far outwards. Also, Tybaxel should have the warrior's file still โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:21, 9/27/2019

I'm still working I'm just waiting for a file :) --Moo (talk) 01:37, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think Tybaxel has the file? You should ask her. โ€”Ripplewater   02:36, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

I did some picking; maybe try #646f7b for the eyes, #666667 for the fur, and maybe use a blue-black for shading, like #222223? Might help match until you get ahold of the files, โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (01:08, 03/10/2019)

Alright, as per the rules, this needs to be declined. While I know you were waiting for a file, you were still able to work on this image and colorpick in the meantime. Max also gave you colors, but you still haven't uploaded it. The rules do state "one week without uploads", and you've had that plus a couple extra days. I'm extremely sorry, but I do need to enforce the guidelines set by PCA. โ€”Jayce (02:57, 10/05/2019)

Dangit I was just coming to Reupload now. Oh well, The Rules must be Reinforced. --Moo (talk) 03:11, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving so Millie can re-reserve. โ€”Jayce (03:32, 10/05/2019)

Boulder (Alt W) - Withdrawn

[[File:Boulder.warrior.alt.png]] In my defense, this side was not ever done, so artist's choice there. I matched everything else to the corresponding side Snowdapple โ„ 23:44, 10/02/2019

Actually, this side was done and approved years ago, so there is at least a reference. Regardless, the stripes should be a bit less pointed and more rounded off, imo. A different side doesn't mean we can completely disregard the other image. And maybe make the stripes a tiny bit softer, not too much though. โ€”Jayce (01:44, 10/03/2019)

oof didnt see that bit, sigh.. alright ill have to redo it then Snowdapple โ„ 01:51, 10/03/2019

mmmm withdrawing. dont have the motivation for him Snowdapple โ„ 13:56, 10/05/2019

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:44, 10/05/2019

Wetfoot (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Wetfoot.kit.png]] Time to try this again Snowdapple โ„ 16:51, 10/05/2019

We're not at the w's yet, and this isn't yours to claim... since you weren't an OA (and even then, you lost your claims due to our ruling), this means you do need to wait until we allow the w images to be posted. โ€”Jayce (17:04, 10/05/2019)

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:44, 10/05/2019

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Leaf (SqH).kit.png]] โ€”Ripplewater   00:44, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

another Himalayan, I see Lighten the shading, smooth it out as well, and blur/smudge the pale parts. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:46, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

^ adding to potato's comment; smudging them would probably work better to work with the flow of fur on the blank โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (06:34, 19/9/2019)

sorry potato. reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   15:22, September 19, 2019 (UTC) 

I haven't seen Himalayans with lighter parts before... if you're going to make the image match their parent's, wouldn't it make sense for the darker parts to be the points, and the lighter parts the base? โ€”Jayce (15:32, 9/19/2019)โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹

Oh. Alright. I made the parts lighter because I didn't want it to seem as if I copied Potato's design. โ€”Ripplewater   15:35, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Just like to let you know you can do something similar to my design for Squirrel, just maybe do a darker gray and make the hue different than what I have. =D --Greenflower Like three six () 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   00:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pale parts and lighten them some, since I can't see the shading at all in those places. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Damn. Has this been approved? I wanted to put up a Leaf image. I spent ages... -Wavetail (talk) 07:55, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

it hasn't been approved yet, but this is only for critiques of the image. that said, can you lighten up the points some, they look black right now. david ๐ŸŒˆ 07:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Am I allowed to do that? How...? Also, I put up my own. Should I remove it? Wavetail (talk) 08:10, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

When I tried to smudge, the darker parts got white... the smudge tool hates me. Sorry for being such an unstable person. reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   09:05, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and expand it on the face. --Greenflower Like three six () 12:09, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   17:50, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Remove some shading on the foreleg (should only encompass half of the limb like the tail) and same thing with the ear closest to us. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 19:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   15:37, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more depth to the ear shading? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 14:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   15:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

likewise red is waste, and blue is where you should remove shading. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 18:45, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   17:06, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink a bit more โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:45, 9/30/2019

shading is also leaking away from the lineart above the tail โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:36, 02/10/2019)

Still working? โ€”Jayce (17:46, 10/03/2019)โ€‹โ€‹

reuploaded. ye. โ€”Ripplewater   03:53, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink is still pretty much as sharp as before - I meant, smooth the transition between it and the base, so it's not so clearly a line โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:39, 10/05/2019

withdrawn. no motivation, sorry. โ€”Ripplewater   16:17, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:25, 10/06/2019

Sol (K) ~ Declined

[[File:Sol.kit.png]] I wanted to give myself a challenge. Tinystream (talk) 12:29, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

the patches are a lot more streaky and uniformed rather than what you have here. it looks a lil too blurry Snowdapple โ„ 20:37, 10/08/2019

Still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:33, 10/15/2019

Declined due to lack of work. โ€”Jayce (20:12, 10/15/2019)

I'd like to try this? Snowdapple โ„ 21:15, 10/15/2019

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:52, 10/16/2019

Tallstar (Lo) - Withdrawn

[[File:Tallstar.loner.png]] OA is Skt; redone to match official art. --Greenflower Like three six () 22:19, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the lineart towards the tailtip, and brighten the white up to match the deputy above? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (22:32, 11/10/2019)

Fixed --Greenflower Like three six () 22:42, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us needs to be white to match the deputy. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:14, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed --Greenflower Like three six () 23:19, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

The patch style doesn't seem to have the same sharper/smudgy thing the deputy has going โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:31, 10/11/2019

Fixed *intense screaming in background* --Greenflower Like three six () 03:32, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

The base colour here seems darker than the deputy, which has a more bluish/greenish tint from the colour pick. โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (20:46, 12/10/2019)

Actually sorry I just can't read colour it seems, if you add highlights maybe, it might help match the base colour better โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (20:46, 12/10/2019)

Fixed No need for highlights- just some hiding layers, colorpicking, and switching base colors appears to have done it. โ€”Preceding unsigned comment added by Potato Flakin (talk โ€ข contribs)

So sorry for the amount of comments, but, the colour still seems off to my eyes? It might be worth asking Burnt for the deputy file, it might help? I was colouring picking the dep before it was giving me those green/blue blacks I mentioned in a previous comment that I said to disregard, but, I think it might actually be right? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (00:58, 13/10/2019)

Fixed There we go... --Greenflower Like three six () 01:48, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

I have the deputy's file and there's no texture. there's only some on the white. also, there should be some white on his chest - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 02:29,10/13/2019

Fixed --Greenflower Like three six () 02:41, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for more commenting, but the base should be much darker (0b1213) - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 02:44,10/13/2019

Fixed --Greenflower Like three six () 04:33, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge that white a little more? It's still a bit too soft. โ€”Jayce (05:00, 10/13/2019)โ€‹โ€‹

Fixed --Greenflower Like three six () 15:12, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

One of the back feet (look at the other images) is not white. He's got three white and one black.โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:44, 10/13/2019

Fixed I think I got the right leg.. bad pun Potato bad pun --Greenflower Like three six () 18:15, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

White amount on the tail patches is too small; see leader for how it looks on this side, since that also reflects the deputy/official art โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:07, 10/13/2019

Fixed --Greenflower Like three six () 19:13, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

The white on the face goes too high up the forehead in comparison to the other images, and the white also seems a bit duller/grayer overall, and the patches too smoothly smudged.โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:13, 10/14/2019

Fixed Those white patches are going to be the end of me. --Greenflower Like three six () 22:59, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

I believe all the paws should be white? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 02:36, October 15, 2019 (UTC)

I was told to remove the paw white on the back leg because it contradicted his artwork. --Greenflower Like three six () 02:42, October 15, 2019 (UTC)

Yes thatโ€™s right. Paws means at least two, so three works, and thatโ€™s what the leader/dep have now. Otherwise - dull those texture lines on the white. I donโ€™t think think it should even have it tbh. Thatโ€™s probably whatโ€™s making it look gray.โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:17, 10/15/2019

(smudging style is what it appears to be on the others, if minimal texture at all; stylized smudging) โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:18, 10/15/2019

Fixed I just deleted the white texture layer. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:11, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

I think the white on the hind leg closest to us needs to be on the other hind leg, to match the deputy. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:01, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed --Greenflower Like three six () 01:28, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

The leader does also have a patch on the back leg closest to us too, near the knee. โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (07:58, 16/10/2019)

this needs to have texture. im not seeing any and the patch smudge style still doesnt quite match the rest Snowdapple โ„ 13:02, 10/16/2019

I think the patch on the back needs to be bigger too - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 20:36,10/16/2019

Withdrawing I can't work with these patches and I don't want this anymore. Someone else may have him. --Greenflower Like three six () 21:25, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:16, 10/16/2019

Boulder (W.alt) ~ Withdrawn

[[file:boulder.warrior.alt.png]] whats your handshake? wahh wahh?? โ€ mei โ€ GOGOBEBE 03:12, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes should be less smudgy to match the alt. rogue โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (03:15, 17/10/2019)

re-up i hate guassian blur with my life, also idek if it showed up โ€ mei โ€ GOGOBEBE 03:20, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference. --Greenflower Like three six () 03:30, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Just gonna toss this here for reference, as this side was done and approved once before. While it's not quite in use right now, using it as a reference might be a good thing. โ€”Jayce (03:36, 10/17/2019)โ€‹โ€‹

reup โ€ mei โ€ GOGOBEBE 15:25, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure it quite matches the reference, which seems to have more, thinner stripes โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:09, 10/18/2019

withdrawn not feeling up to doing charart, ill just focus on PB โ€ mei โ€ GOGOBEBE 15:07, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 15:40, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

Tallstar (Kp) - Redone

[[File:Tallstar.kittypet.png]] uh here... Moo (talk) 22:58, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the deputy- he needs three white paws and a white tail-tip. The patch style doesn't quite match the set either. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:05, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

also needs texture Snowdapple โ„ 23:12, 10/16/2019

Fox stated previously its not texture; I think its just the shading style and possibly highlights that are giving that effect. There is some very minor texture on the white though, going by a previous comment. โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:13, 16/10/2019)

regardless it still needs to match the style of whatever preceded this image, in my opinion it is considered texture, just because i also do that kind of "shading style" where i basically just drag it around the image to make it look like texture, but it's still texture Snowdapple โ„ 23:15, 10/16/2019

It's not texture, it's a stylized shading. Millie is not required to match shading style. โ€”Jayce (23:17, 10/16/2019)โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹

O.o Moo (talk) 23:18, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:26, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

The white should not stretch all the way up the forehead. I also think the colors still look slightly off- the base should be #0b1213, the white should be #d9dada. The patch style still doesn't seem to match the set, maybe try a combo of smudging/sharpening the patches to see if that works? I think the shading tint could be dulled back a bit as well. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:30, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

just a reminder that shading tint is artist's choice, so if Millie doesn't wish to change it, she doesn't have to. also the tail needs to be tweaked to be longer too, per his name and all. โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:37, 16/10/2019)

fox commented on a prior Tall redo section that there was indeed texture on the white on the deputy's file -- that it wasn't entirely just styling from shading. that does need to be added to a degree โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:52, 10/16/2019

Sorry for the confusion! There is texture on the white. Looking at burnt's file most other things are just highlights - Fox ๅƒ•ใŸใกใฏใฒใจใคใฎๅ…‰ 00:12,10/17/2019

this needs all white paws, not just three Snowdapple โ„ 23:10, 10/18/2019

No, since the master pattern (the deputy) only has 3 white paws. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:12, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

While it is the master pattern, you cannot see the other paw. Plus his description says white paws. Snowdapple โ„ 23:13, 10/18/2019

btw there's waste all around the image where there's white. Also disregard the paw comment moo Snowdapple โ„ 23:34, 10/18/2019

He needs a long tail. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:24, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

Depending on what gets done with the nomination, he might not need any white paws. Please do not archive or make changes until the nomination is said and done. โ€”Jayce (03:10, 10/19/2019)โ€‹

I think sadly Im gonna have to Withdraw, There is a lot of disagreements with this, and honestly I sadly don't think im experienced enough. Whoever gets this next have fun <3 Moo (talk) 20:48, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:53, 10/23/2019

Acorn Fur (W) - Withdrawn

[[File:Acorn Fur.warrior.png]] mistakenly called a warrior in Shadowstar's life โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (05:58, 23/10/2019)

withdrawn for now โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (01:28, 24/10/2019)

Archiving โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (05:20, 24/10/2019)

Shredtail (W) - Declined

[[file:shredtail.warrior.png]] colorpicked off drโ€ mei โ€ GOGOBEBE 16:27, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the chest shading just a smidge? i'm having a hard time seeing it โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (22:12, 19/10/2019)

Still working? โ€”Jayce (17:46, 10/23/2019)

Declined due to lack of work โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:59, 10/24/2019

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 14:03, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (DF) ~ Redone

[[File:Hawkfrost.df.png]] โ€”Hrafnsmรกl The raven's call 22:51, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

The texture seems more defined/sharper on the others in the set - could you tweak that? I also think some shading on the earpink might be good, it seems to stick out some. The belly white could also be just a bit more streaky smudgy โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:12, 10/17/2019

Still working? โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:57, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded yeah sorry โ€”Hrafnsmรกl The raven's call 19:15, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, small thing, I think the stripes seem to be of a darker color on the other images - that or they're sharper so they pop out more. These seem to blend a little too much โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:51, 10/23/2019

When I did the stripes for Tiger's master design; the stripes were pretty much just drawn on and barely smudged at all (that's what texture's for haha) - hopefully that helps? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (22:12, 23/10/2019)

reuploaded better or nah โ€”Hrafnsmรกl The raven's call 00:44, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe adjust the texture a little bit to get that effect max described of looking smudged but not being so very much โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:58, 10/25/2019

Archiving (withdrew on user request) โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:37, 10/25/2019

Snowbird (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Snowbird.kit.png]] i won't withdraw this, i promise. โ€”Ripplewater   02:28, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a lot, but, also maybe use less? Sometimes white cats can be painfull with shading so by using less you can save yourself a lot of trouble. Also add some shading to >> that side of the cat, behind the tail โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (07:59, 08/10/2019)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   14:44, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading overall and add ear shading to the ear closest to us? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 23:14, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a small touch imo, seems a bit dark currently imo, given it isn't tinted โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 01:10, 10/11/2019

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the foreleg? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 15:22, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. โ€”Ripplewater   00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading on the tail can be smoothed a bit more. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 15:13, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. โ€”Ripplewater   18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the shoulder/above the foreleg needs to be smoothed out, and the facial shading expanded. --Greenflower Like three six () 18:29, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the facial shading is fine as is - but, the rest of Potato's comment still stands. Also, curve the shoulder/neck shading to our right if your light source is coming from our left? (if that doesn't make sense - I can send a redline your way :D) โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (07:53, 16/10/2019)

Define the light on the tail. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:34, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (06:55, 18/10/2019)

reuploaded. a redline would be lovely, max. โ€”Ripplewater   16:14, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference on tail light. It still looks gray. --Greenflower Like three six () 16:20, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

accidentally said reuploaded before uploading the image, sorry. but i did now.  โ€”Ripplewater   16:21, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

here ya go! that's roughly where shading should be with this source, lots of soft, round edges to show off the shape of the cat :D โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (22:10, 19/10/2019)

Still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:39, 10/23/2019

Declined due to lack of work.โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:40, 10/26/2019

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:56, 10/27/2019

Stormcloud (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Stormcloud.kit.png]] First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png โ€”Jayce (00:59, 9/27/2019)โ€‹โ€‹โ€‹

The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. --Greenflower Like three six () 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. --Greenflower Like three six () 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

My art program doesnโ€™t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe

โ€”Hrafnsmรกl The raven's call 01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe itโ€™s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading Snowdapple โ„ 00:42, 9/28/2019

Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesnโ€™t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading over all? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if itโ€™s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch. Windsong (talk) 09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. โ€”Ripplewater   17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Someone pls give me something to improve on Iโ€™m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink? Crystie Can't help loving me 14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (23:45, 02/10/2019)

Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11 Oblivious to EVERYTHING! 01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudge the earpink as in shading or earpink and fur? --Wavetail (talk) 01:39, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Stripes seem a touch too dark compared to the other images โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:19, 10/06/2019

Reuploaded Too light or too dark?--Wavetail (talk) 22:53, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Too dark, I'm pretty sure she said. Lighten and smooth out the shading and the earpink still seems too... neonish? โ€”Ripplewater   04:27, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Will do. Also, I meant if it is still too dark or if I made it too light --Wavetail (talk) 05:26, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Try the following hexcodes for colours; #828282 for the base colour, #575759 for the stripes, and maybe #703F42 for the earpink - those should help match a little more? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (07:52, 08/10/2019)

Smooth the shading on the cheek --Moo (talk) 07:15, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:20, 10/12/2019

Recede the facial shading; it should not be touching the eye, but also curve around the neck and wrap around the jaw, like on Jayclaw's kit. --Greenflower Like three six () 18:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I took so long, school term started and I had lots of homework --Wavetail (talk) 08:11, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink so its not such a straight line, and add some shading/define shading on the collar? โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (07:54, 16/10/2019)

Smooth out the shading everywhere, try a 7px brush for small spaces and a 10px brush for bigger spaces at 40% strength. --Greenflower Like three six () 23:34, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I donโ€™t think it looks like I smudged/blurred the shading... โ€”Wavetail (talk) 01:05, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference. Maybe do what I said multiple times, then reup again? --Greenflower Like three six () 01:09, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reup This will take... a while, to say the least โ€”Wavetail (talk) 22:55, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you recede the dorsal stripe just a bit? Seems to thick in comparison to the rest of the set. Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 16:29, October 21, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:03, 10/23/2019

Still working, just very busy due to school term starting. โ€”Wavetail (talk) 22:07, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Is this what you meant? โ€”Wavetail (talk) 00:46, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm can you smooth the tail shading and recede how much there is on the haunch a little bit? Also - sidetone - I do think you got what they meant โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:13, 10/25/2019

Declined due to the one month limit. โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (22:47, 28/10/2019)

Archiving. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:23, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Myrtlepaw (A) - For Approval

[[File:Myrtlepaw.apprentice.png]] LET'S GO TST! --Greenflower Like three six () 00:03, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

I just realized Bluestar reserved this before me.. Hey Blue, if you still want this, I'll give her up. --Greenflower Like three six () 00:05, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, I would, please. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:05, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, you may have her =) --Greenflower Like three six () 00:06, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:57, 10/29/2019

Tallstar (Star) ~ withdrawn

[[File:Tallstar.star.png]] Redone to match official art. OA was Mounty Snowdapple โ„ 00:06, 10/19/2019

reups quietly <.< Snowdapple โ„ 00:14, 10/19/2019

the base colour should be #0b1213 for the black, to match the other images, and the white is a bit bluer - try #CAD8E5 with pure white highlights to make the textured appearance. Could you also define the shading depth in the >> ear? It's looking rather flat in comparison to the other areas. โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (03:05, 19/10/2019)

Depending on what gets done with the nomination, he might not need any white paws. Please do not archive or make changes until the nomination is said and done. โ€”Jayce (03:10, 10/19/2019)โ€‹โ€‹

as title says. cya Snowdapple โ„ 21:10, 10/30/2019

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:48, 10/31/2019

Tawnypelt (A) - Declined

[[File:Tawnypelt.apprentice.png]] OA is me Burntclaw 14:33, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

White needs to be white. This was a main reason for her images being done. Could have sworn I said that, but Fox must have not told you. โ€”Jayce (15:47, 10/17/2019)โ€‹โ€‹

I also think the brown could be darker to make it more black? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 17:14, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

reup it is supposed to be white Burntclaw 01:51, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

still looks brown, and if it's supposed to be mostly matching to the tug and whatever art, the patches are much too smudged in comparison. the patches on the tail also don't really seem to match. david ๐ŸŒˆ 06:34, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

Im sorry hut why exactly does it have to match to the T to the official art? Cant burnt have a tiny bit of freedom with th pattern? Snowdapple โ„ 08:03, 10/18/2019

the entire point of the nomination was to match it to the art. that's what it says on the tweak page, and the only reason it was nominated to begin with was that she's one of the very few with an actual consistent pattern that was decided to be matched to. david ๐ŸŒˆ 08:06, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

As per David. That was why I brought it up, and the pattern needs to be matched. That was one of the requirements of it being redone. There isn't any creative freedom this time. โ€”Jayce (15:03, 10/18/2019)โ€‹โ€‹

I'm kinda confused about which style and which colors I should match, because these colors+style do directly come from the icon image (which has the smudgy style that I matched to). in addition, the facial patterns all differ from each other between the images. ill get to the body pattern and tail Burntclaw 15:34, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

The white needs to be brightened a lot more, btw. She is very clearly shown with pure white in her images. Anyways, I did say on the nomination that Echo's alternate warrior should have been the master pattern for this. I'm not sure why this was never mentioned in the approved redo list, but this is very much what should be done. This was the reason her set was nominated and approved to begin with. Colors aside, the placement and general layout of the image is what we're trying to go for here. I'm not sure which icon you're matching, but in this case it should be what's shown here, which is pretty much the best side view we'll get of her. The excessive smudging in this case contradicts what she's shown as, given that the pattern appears to be less smudged and more... pretty solid, for lack of a better word here. โ€”Jayce (02:09, 10/19/2019)โ€‹โ€‹

Declined due to lack of work as per guidelines. โ€”Jayce (02:07, 11/02/2019)

Archiving โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:38, 11/02/2019

Poppyfrost (K) - Declined

[[File: Poppyfrost.kit.png]] Colors picked from Sorreltail's kit Moo (talk) 08:24, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you dull the shading tint some, and maybe smudge the blotches a bit more? Vec I am Iron Man! ๐Ÿ‘พ 19:04, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sure! I just cant get on my computer for a few hours! Moo (talk) 23:36, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:53, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

There should be more variation in the dapple size and shape, and the patches should be sharper than what you've currently got too - if you'd like I have sorreltail's warrior file handy (which is the master design/colours) โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (22:47, 11/10/2019)

I dont think i know how to make them sharper and still looknatural... Moo (talk) 22:18, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Just give it a go, it doesn't hurt to just just try it - after all, this place is for constructive criticism so we'll be able to help you to get it looking right if it needs it. Again, I can offer the file I mentioned above that might help getting it to look right. โ€” max โœ‚๏ธ (01:05, 13/10/2019)

Thanks! Reuploaded! Moo (talk) 08:42, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

The patch placements have some differences from Sorreltail's kit, notably on the face/bum etc โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:43, 10/13/2019

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:13, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

From Sorrel's kit, this is missing the ginger patch on the << side of the haunch, and I believe the white eartip on the << ear could be defined โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:35, 10/17/2019

Still working? โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:17, 10/21/2019

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 20:46, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Add/define the orange on the tail. Also, remove the white eartip, as Sorreltail's warrior, the first in the set, doesn't have it. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 05:57, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 04:00, October 26, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the tail needs to be defined; the previous upload has now made it a little flat. --Greenflower Like three six () 22:12, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on her face. โ€”Ripplewater   22:24, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:35, 11/02/2019

Declined due to lack of work.โ€”spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:54, 11/09/2019

Archiving. โ€”PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 21:02, November 11, 2019 (UTC)