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Squirrel (cat) (Ki) - Declined

[[File:File_Squirrel_(cat)_kit.png.png]] Okay since sombody is working on Moon I rebranded by Charart as Squirrel since they're also gray.Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit, since it looks too magenta and not a natural gray color. The shading needs to be defined a bit as well. And remember, don't thumb your images! Just go into source and remove the |thumb from the file name. There is a lot of waste around the character so make sure to remove that, and make sure "For Evaluation" is in the title. Sorry if this is lot to you --Boo!flower Human no more 22:20, September 6, 2019 (UTC) 

Oh crud! Ur right I 4got 2 put "For Evaluation"Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and  I removed the thumbnailBluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

This should also be uploaded as File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png. --Boo!flower Human no more 22:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bte I tired remeoving the wast with the eraser but It won't go away! It's not ven visable when I edit the Charart on Paint.netBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I'll keep tryingBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! My bad The wast is visable on Paint.net it's just hard 4 me 2 c!Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:36, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn't use Paint, I would use GIMP or FireAlpaca to make images instead since they're way better in quality and can make the image look better (both are free). --Boo!flower Human no more 22:37, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I c there's still waste! Dang It! I'll fix that imediately! 

Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:32, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a lot more and expand it. The shading is far too overblurred, probably as a result of Gaussian Blur (which is not recommended as it causes shading to leak), so it could be sharpened some, retrace it with a 4px paintbrush or pencil and smudge it with a 6-10px brush at 40% strength. The lineart is also overblurred, to fix just erase on your shading layers, and the blurriness will be gone. --Boo!flower Human no more 23:34, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 11:43, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Please continue to reupload over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo the Charart since I merged the layers on Paint.net before I began to edit the Charart on Gimp Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:32, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

What kind of shading should I use to shade my Charart? Bluedragon64 (talk) 13:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Most people use blurred, smudged, or drawn-on shading. A small other note - please change the earpink to something a little less purple/neony.spooky a black scaredy cat! 20:19, 9/07/2019

Reupoladed! Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:44, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Remember, don't thumb your images. Just go into source editor and remove the |left. Another way to avoid this is to upload from Squirrel (cat).kit.png instead of going back and doing the posting process again. Also, you have a extra .png in the file name so remove that.

As for the image, the earpink is still neon, darken it or desaturate it some. It also needs expanding quite a bit. Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The shading needs to be expanded everywhere except the chest, and smoothed out a lot. Also, add a thinner, darker layer of shading so the image has some depth. --Boo!flower Human no more 12:53, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

How do define your light source? Bluedragon64 (talk) 14:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

If you need help with a light source I'd recommend checking the apprentice tutorials, since they were recently updated with new sources =) --Boo!flower Human no more 14:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'm consulting a Gimp apprentence totorial for shading. But I don't know what it means when the tortorial tells me to draw the bits with penicl  "where the image is in shadow". Can u plz explain what that means? Bluedragon64 (talk) 20:58, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

A light source is where the light and shading are supposed to be on an image. Say if the light source was ^, the shading would be on the back, and if down it would be on the flank more. Does this help? --Boo!flower Human no more 21:00, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? spooky a black scaredy cat! 20:20, 9/12/2019


Yes but I'm preoccupied with school and homeworj which is more important. So I'm currently on a bit of a haitus sorry! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

When you get back, smooth, define and darken the shading. There's some waste by the ear. Make the earpink a grayish-pinkish color, and this is optional, but if you want, add eyeshine. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  19:12, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Make sure to say reuploaded on the approval page when you make changes to an image! Now recede the shading some, smooth it out a lot, and erase the shading on the top of the head and tail. --Boo!flower Human no more 21:32, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Also like to add one that you need to say reuploaded down here, not up in the title. --Boo!flower Human no more 23:59, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

As what's been stated multiple times, reupload your image over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png.

Danny GVivaLaVida 00:00, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

FARTS! I THOUGT I DID, BUT IDK HOW!!!!!Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:29, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Nevermind i just figured out how to reuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:33, September 16, 2019 (UTC) 

I'm sorry I didn't do it sooner. I thought I did reupload the orignal file but i was wrong.Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:33, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to user is banned. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:08, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 19:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:F90E8E81-0527-41FF-8DDB-B84A4C394572.png|left]] I tried ;( Anything to improve on? Wavetail (talk) 08:02, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Should I give her grey points? Wavetail (talk) 08:08, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Milkripple has this character and is doing it... also just some tips: Smooth shading, add a light reflection in the eye, smooth the foot markeing, smudge the earpink and make it dull Moo (talk) 08:20, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

As pointed out, a user is already working on this image which is posted above as they have it reserved on the reservation table. I'm afraid I'm going to have to decline it for that reason, sorry! max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (08:23, 20/9/2019)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sandgorse (W) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:Sandgorse.warrior.png]] - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:38,9/11/2019

Soften the stripes a bit, please. I actually blurred them a bit when I made his pattern.   Shepard   ( 17:59, 9/11/2019 )​​​​

Re-uploaded blurred them - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:06,9/11/2019

I feel like the stripe style does not match. It seems like for the other images, and this is what I did for his tunneler, that a rounded brush was used with minimal tapering to the ends (I used an airbrush if I recall correctly). Here they seem too sketch-like and uneven. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:44, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:20,9/13/2019

I've gotta say, that I'm thinking Vec's comment still stands a bit. She's right, I used a rounded brush, and these stripes still look too squared off. I'm sorry, this was one of my favorite sets of mine and I'm so nitpicky about it ;;;;   Shepard   ( 06:27, 9/13/2019 )

Re-uploaded I can't get this to look right to save my life - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:03,9/14/2019

Add some shading to <--- this ear. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  19:21, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

This is looking better, but it still looks sketch like and thin on the haunch ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:39, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 04:30, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Not really. Tons of schoolwork. Withdrawing - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 18:08,9/21/2019

Archiving max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (23:17, 22/9/2019)

Sedgecreek (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Sedgecreek.kit.png]] jeez o petes this was hard to match, took pattern from apprentice Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 16:41, 9/19/2019

Would you care for the file or hex codes? I think the stripes should be a tad darker, and there should be more variance with the tail stripes (ex. the third tail stripe from the tip down should have a "bulge" on one side, along with a few of the lower ones). ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:31, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

On her other images I think the stripes look slightly softer than what you have. --Boo!flower Human no more 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Yes please! Also will smooth them later im currently at hospital Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 02:48, 9/20/2019

lSorryfor off track comment but are you ok? Moo (talk) 08:17, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

reups sorry for the scare guys lmao, my phone was dying last night. but basically im ok (thanks for the concern!) my bf scratched his eye p bad at work had to be there for him, but ye Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 21:18, 9/20/2019

I think the stripes on the haunch could be a bit thinner and streakier, kinda like with a paint brush sorta feel. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:43, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reups I feel if I blur them too much the stripe will look weird compared to the rest of the image. Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 15:50, 9/22/2019

on the apprentice, the stripes on the flank are thinner and are little lighter it seems? the tail stripes also should be less uniform and have smaller bands as well as the thicker ones in the middle and towards the base max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (23:29, 22/9/2019)

Perhaps try to smudge them or use a different brush? I used a watercolor brush and then the smudge tool/eraser to refine them Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:32, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

reee withdrawing. Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 20:37, 9/23/2019

Archiving. —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 14:48, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (K) ~ Withdraw

[[File:Tawnyspots.kit.png]] Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:52, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:45, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:00, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt W) ~ Declined

[File:Mudfur.warrior.alt.png]] ~Firespring A Legend Returns

Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. --Boo!flower Human no more 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? ~Firespring A Legend Returns 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad?   Shepard   ( 06:22, 8/29/2019 )

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). ~Firespring A Legend Returns 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? ~Firespring A Legend Returns 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). --Boo!flower Human no more 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, sorry for the long wait, like Moo said I lost my pen and Vec (may have been Jayce I can't remember) gave me an extension. I didn't want to put it off any longer so I did it with a keyboard. Anyway, I did all the suggestions (or most) that you guys said, what do you think? ~Firespring A Legend Returns

Looking good Firespring! Hmm, curve the shading on the haunch more (let me know if you need a redline) and there's waste outside the tail. The coloring on the nosepink and mottles are still a little off (nose should be #1b1411, the mottles should be #493522). --Boo!flower Human no more 23:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? ~Firespring A Legend Returns

You're getting there! I think the shading could be smoothed a bit, and the mottles look sharper on the alt star (try running a low opacity sharpen tool or a low sharpen filter on the mottles, beware of color pixels). You could also use a low opacity pencil and draw over the mottles, which will make them sharper as well. --Boo!flower Human no more 00:12, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  00:23, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? Also, there already is shading on the ear. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 00:28, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is it me, or am I seeing texture on the image? If it's texture, it needs to be removed as the alt star doesn't have any. --Boo!flower Human no more 00:31, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Removed texture. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 00:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading on --> that ear but not on <-- this ear. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  01:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added shading to left ear. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 05:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a some more on the body max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (09:37, 07/9/2019)

Reuploaded. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 21:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the back leg and smooth it out on the shoulder and haunch more. --Boo!flower Human no more 21:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 21:30, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading on the < ear; helps with flatness spooky a black scaredy cat! 23:08, 9/08/2019

Still working? spooky a black scaredy cat! 20:16, 9/12/2019

My comment on there not being any lighter mottles in the tail tip still stands. Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 17:53, 9/14/2019

Reuploaded. Yes, still working. Sorry for the wait. How's this? ~Firespring A Legend Returns 05:51, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

you need to remove all lighter mottles in the tail tip. There shouldn't be any light in the dark at all Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 13:30, 9/15/2019

Add shading to <--- that ear and to where the haunch meets tail. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  19:24, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Firespring A Legend Returns 21:14, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading overall, add/expand it on the tail and add some to the back half of the tail. Add some more shading along the ---> part of the shoulder; at least some part of it would be in shadow. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:43, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

^^^ especially the haunch, chest, and shoulder Moo (talk) 05:29, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

still need to remove the lighter mottles on the tail tip... Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 02:38, 9/22/2019

adding on. the front paws are not one solid color. the mottles need to be more strung out and span sizes, not just one size. Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 02:40, 9/22/2019

Still working? —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 14:23, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.spooky a black scaredy cat! 16:17, 9/27/2019

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 18:41, 9/28/2019

Sorreltail (W) ~ Declined

[[File:Sorreltail.warrior.png]] My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. Windsong (talk) 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. --Boo!flower Human no more 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Windsong (talk) 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^ spooky a black scaredy cat! 15:52, 9/03/2019

reuploaded Windsong (talk) 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. --Boo!flower Human no more 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the chest? It looks rather flat there Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Windsong (talk) 15:17, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if this doesn't quite match the pattern placement of the queen's tail, which is what it should most reflect since both are on the same definite side; vs, the star is angled and thus not the best to match this blank to spooky a black scaredy cat! 19:37, 9/10/2019

reuploaded --Windsong (talk) 17:54, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading any more on the tail? Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 20:59, 9/14/2019

Still working? —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 19:41, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Yes. reuploaded --Windsong (talk) 19:13, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ginger patches on the bottom forelegs should be lowered a bit. And the orange patch on the shoulder could be rounded/smoothed a bit more. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little shading to the >> ear just to help it not look flat. Also, still working? spooky a black scaredy cat! 16:18, 9/27/2019

Declined due to lack of work spooky a black scaredy cat! 18:42, 9/28/2019

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 13:20, 9/29/2019

Wetfoot (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Wetfoot.kit.png]] comments? Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 02:33, 9/29/2019

We aren't up to the "W" characters yet, and unless I'm mistaken this isn't an Oa claim? max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (02:35, 29/9/2019)

oof thats my bad then.. Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 02:37, 9/29/2019

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 13:20, 9/29/2019

Heathertail (K) - Declined

[[File:Heathertail.kit.png]] My lovely Heathertail <3 Crystie Can't help loving me 12:08, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are inconsistent in color, on < that side they are light and on the other side they are darker. They are also too overblurred and need to be sharper to match the set. Add a tiny bit of light to the back leg closest to us, near the toe and add some more shading along the foreleg. --Boo!flower Human no more 21:39, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry but can this be declined? My school's having activies soon so I don't think I'll be able to upload this... :'( Crystie You captured my heart 12:47, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Declined as per user request.   Shepard   ( 17:47, 10/03/2019 )

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 23:19, 10/03/2019

Smokehaze (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Smokehaze.kit.png]] —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (09:30, 07/9/2019)

There's waste near the ear furthest from us. Also, could you remove the shading above the nose, and add some to the chest? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:36, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened. But I'm confused where us the light source? Moo (talk) 22:56, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is something similar to this. With this source there would be a tiny bit of light on < this back leg, near the toe line. --Boo!flower Human no more 02:06, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ah right. Lighten the shading? Moo (talk) 05:11, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, Vec, could you give me an extension with this and Sasha? My tablet’s lost. --—MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  04:35, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

We can give you an extension until the 18th, but if you do not find it before then, we would have to decline this. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  01:28, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a little perhaps? Maybe expand it onto the shoulder, then smooth it by the base of the tail, face, and haunch. —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 14:12, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be smoothed all out in general Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 21:00, 9/14/2019

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  21:33, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading more on the tail, remove a bit of the shading on the haunch, and expand the shading behind the front leg closest to us (including the shoulder) Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 13:32, 9/15/2019

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  15:16, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Remove some of the shading on the tail. The shading should not cover the whole thing but rather half of it length wise. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:38, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  05:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Also remove some of the shading on the back leg closest to us- with the source there would be a tiny bit of light shining on it, at least remove it to the little line near the haunch. --Boo!flower Human no more 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  08:58, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Wrong back leg Ripple- I mean the one closest to us. --Boo!flower Human no more 12:06, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  17:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

areas circled in red are some handy dandy places to add some shading max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (23:31, 22/9/2019)

The shading on the ear still looks very flat; try adding some more depth there? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:27, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  15:29, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

here is a redline; in red is waste, and in blue is where you should remove shading ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:43, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded, thanks, vec. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  17:18, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

the shading is leaking away above the tail on the leg; and you could also add some shading to the foot possibly - I think it would be in shadow with this source? max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (23:35, 02/10/2019)

withdrawn. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  03:55, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 14:11, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Jayclaw (K) - Declined

[[File:Jayclaw.kit.png]] Comments? Moo (talk) 07:03, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit. --Boo!flower Human no more 12:53, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I also think the earpink should be duller to match. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:32, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch. --Windsong (talk) 20:14, September 21, 2019 (UTC) 'Bold text'reuploaded --Moo (talk) 02:21, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

texture could still be defined, on my screen it looks nearly absent —Danny GVivaLaVida 03:44, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if it’s just my current screen, but his eyes should be more of grey-blue, they’re looking a little purple at the moment max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (11:31, 22/9/2019)

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 07:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

The texture could still be darker, and the earpink and eyes are still a bit too neon I believe. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:32, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

To me the earpink and eyes look very similar to the warrior? But texture can be fixed --Moo (talk) 23:12, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 03:39, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color on the warrior looks more like a bluish gray than the blue on here. I think the base on the warrior also appears to be a few shades lighter. —PatchfeatherHail Satan, welcome Year Zero 14:29, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Who owns the file? Do you know? I think some hex codes would be fab --Moo (talk) 00:28, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the facial shading to curve the shape of the face; reaches too far outwards. Also, Tybaxel should have the warrior's file still spooky a black scaredy cat! 16:21, 9/27/2019

I'm still working I'm just waiting for a file :) --Moo (talk) 01:37, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think Tybaxel has the file? You should ask her. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  02:36, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

I did some picking; maybe try #646f7b for the eyes, #666667 for the fur, and maybe use a blue-black for shading, like #222223? Might help match until you get ahold of the files, max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (01:08, 03/10/2019)

Alright, as per the rules, this needs to be declined. While I know you were waiting for a file, you were still able to work on this image and colorpick in the meantime. Max also gave you colors, but you still haven't uploaded it. The rules do state "one week without uploads", and you've had that plus a couple extra days. I'm extremely sorry, but I do need to enforce the guidelines set by PCA.   Shepard   ( 02:57, 10/05/2019 )

Dangit I was just coming to Reupload now. Oh well, The Rules must be Reinforced. --Moo (talk) 03:11, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving so Millie can re-reserve.   Shepard   ( 03:32, 10/05/2019 )

Boulder (Alt W) - Withdrawn

[[File:Boulder.warrior.alt.png]] In my defense, this side was not ever done, so artist's choice there. I matched everything else to the corresponding side Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 23:44, 10/02/2019

Actually, this side was done and approved years ago, so there is at least a reference. Regardless, the stripes should be a bit less pointed and more rounded off, imo. A different side doesn't mean we can completely disregard the other image. And maybe make the stripes a tiny bit softer, not too much though.   Shepard   ( 01:44, 10/03/2019 )

oof didnt see that bit, sigh.. alright ill have to redo it then Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 01:51, 10/03/2019

mmmm withdrawing. dont have the motivation for him Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 13:56, 10/05/2019

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 19:44, 10/05/2019

Wetfoot (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Wetfoot.kit.png]] Time to try this again Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 16:51, 10/05/2019

We're not at the w's yet, and this isn't yours to claim... since you weren't an OA (and even then, you lost your claims due to our ruling), this means you do need to wait until we allow the w images to be posted.   Shepard   ( 17:04, 10/05/2019 )

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 19:44, 10/05/2019

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Leaf (SqH).kit.png]] —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  00:44, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

another Himalayan, I see Lighten the shading, smooth it out as well, and blur/smudge the pale parts. --Boo!flower Human no more 00:46, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

^ adding to potato's comment; smudging them would probably work better to work with the flow of fur on the blank max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (06:34, 19/9/2019)

sorry potato. reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  15:22, September 19, 2019 (UTC) 

I haven't seen Himalayans with lighter parts before... if you're going to make the image match their parent's, wouldn't it make sense for the darker parts to be the points, and the lighter parts the base?   Shepard   ( 15:32, 9/19/2019 )​​​​​​

Oh. Alright. I made the parts lighter because I didn't want it to seem as if I copied Potato's design. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  15:35, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Just like to let you know you can do something similar to my design for Squirrel, just maybe do a darker gray and make the hue different than what I have. =D --Boo!flower Human no more 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  00:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pale parts and lighten them some, since I can't see the shading at all in those places. --Boo!flower Human no more 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Damn. Has this been approved? I wanted to put up a Leaf image. I spent ages... -Wavetail (talk) 07:55, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

it hasn't been approved yet, but this is only for critiques of the image. that said, can you lighten up the points some, they look black right now. david 🌈 07:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Am I allowed to do that? How...? Also, I put up my own. Should I remove it? Wavetail (talk) 08:10, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

When I tried to smudge, the darker parts got white... the smudge tool hates me. Sorry for being such an unstable person. reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  09:05, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and expand it on the face. --Boo!flower Human no more 12:09, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  17:50, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Remove some shading on the foreleg (should only encompass half of the limb like the tail) and same thing with the ear closest to us. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  15:37, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more depth to the ear shading? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  15:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

likewise red is waste, and blue is where you should remove shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:45, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  17:06, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink a bit more spooky a black scaredy cat! 01:45, 9/30/2019

shading is also leaking away from the lineart above the tail max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (23:36, 02/10/2019)

Still working?   Shepard   ( 17:46, 10/03/2019 )​​

reuploaded. ye. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  03:53, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink is still pretty much as sharp as before - I meant, smooth the transition between it and the base, so it's not so clearly a line spooky a black scaredy cat! 13:39, 10/05/2019

withdrawn. no motivation, sorry. —MilkRipple (THIS IS THE HEIGHT OF LUXURY!!!)  16:17, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 22:25, 10/06/2019

Sol (K) ~ Declined

[[File:Sol.kit.png]] I wanted to give myself a challenge. Tinystream (talk) 12:29, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

the patches are a lot more streaky and uniformed rather than what you have here. it looks a lil too blurry Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 20:37, 10/08/2019

Still working? spooky a black scaredy cat! 00:33, 10/15/2019

Declined due to lack of work.   Shepard   ( 20:12, 10/15/2019 )

I'd like to try this? Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 21:15, 10/15/2019

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 00:52, 10/16/2019

Tallstar (Lo) - Withdrawn

[[File:Tallstar.loner.png]] OA is Skt; redone to match official art. --Boo!flower Human no more 22:19, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the lineart towards the tailtip, and brighten the white up to match the deputy above? max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (22:32, 11/10/2019)

Fixed --Boo!flower Human no more 22:42, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us needs to be white to match the deputy. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:14, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed --Boo!flower Human no more 23:19, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

The patch style doesn't seem to have the same sharper/smudgy thing the deputy has going spooky a black scaredy cat! 23:31, 10/11/2019

Fixed *intense screaming in background* --Boo!flower Human no more 03:32, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

The base colour here seems darker than the deputy, which has a more bluish/greenish tint from the colour pick. max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (20:46, 12/10/2019)

Actually sorry I just can't read colour it seems, if you add highlights maybe, it might help match the base colour better max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (20:46, 12/10/2019)

Fixed No need for highlights- just some hiding layers, colorpicking, and switching base colors appears to have done it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Potato Flakin (talkcontribs)

So sorry for the amount of comments, but, the colour still seems off to my eyes? It might be worth asking Burnt for the deputy file, it might help? I was colouring picking the dep before it was giving me those green/blue blacks I mentioned in a previous comment that I said to disregard, but, I think it might actually be right? max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (00:58, 13/10/2019)

Fixed There we go... --Boo!flower Human no more 01:48, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

I have the deputy's file and there's no texture. there's only some on the white. also, there should be some white on his chest - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:29,10/13/2019

Fixed --Boo!flower Human no more 02:41, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for more commenting, but the base should be much darker (0b1213) - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:44,10/13/2019

Fixed --Boo!flower Human no more 04:33, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge that white a little more? It's still a bit too soft.   Shepard   ( 05:00, 10/13/2019 )​​

Fixed --Boo!flower Human no more 15:12, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

One of the back feet (look at the other images) is not white. He's got three white and one black.spooky a black scaredy cat! 16:44, 10/13/2019

Fixed I think I got the right leg.. bad pun Potato bad pun --Boo!flower Human no more 18:15, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

White amount on the tail patches is too small; see leader for how it looks on this side, since that also reflects the deputy/official art spooky a black scaredy cat! 19:07, 10/13/2019

Fixed --Boo!flower Human no more 19:13, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

The white on the face goes too high up the forehead in comparison to the other images, and the white also seems a bit duller/grayer overall, and the patches too smoothly smudged.spooky a black scaredy cat! 21:13, 10/14/2019

Fixed Those white patches are going to be the end of me. --Boo!flower Human no more 22:59, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

I believe all the paws should be white? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:36, October 15, 2019 (UTC)

I was told to remove the paw white on the back leg because it contradicted his artwork. --Boo!flower Human no more 02:42, October 15, 2019 (UTC)

Yes that’s right. Paws means at least two, so three works, and that’s what the leader/dep have now. Otherwise - dull those texture lines on the white. I don’t think think it should even have it tbh. That’s probably what’s making it look gray.spooky a black scaredy cat! 03:17, 10/15/2019

(smudging style is what it appears to be on the others, if minimal texture at all; stylized smudging) spooky a black scaredy cat! 03:18, 10/15/2019

Fixed I just deleted the white texture layer. --Boo!flower Human no more 00:11, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

I think the white on the hind leg closest to us needs to be on the other hind leg, to match the deputy. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:01, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed --Boo!flower Human no more 01:28, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

The leader does also have a patch on the back leg closest to us too, near the knee. max s̨hout́ ̨at ͠th̢e ҉devi͞l͢ (07:58, 16/10/2019)

this needs to have texture. im not seeing any and the patch smudge style still doesnt quite match the rest Hauntdapple☠️ It's spooky time ☠️ 13:02, 10/16/2019

I think the patch on the back needs to be bigger too - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 20:36,10/16/2019

Withdrawing I can't work with these patches and I don't want this anymore. Someone else may have him. --Boo!flower Human no more 21:25, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving spooky a black scaredy cat! 22:16, 10/16/2019

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