Tri-colored kittypet - Declined
I know this is late with comments, but we're all super busy and I won't count this against you for upload times... but could you try and give a bit of shape to the back leg shading? It seems too straight, for lack of a better term, and I feel like it should curve with the body a bit more. Possibly lighten the shading a bit too? It seems like there's an additional color in places like the front arm and back legs. —Jayce ( 05:03, 2/28/2020 )
Could you maybe add some more shading lines on ---> foreleg, right along the lineart. There just appears to be a noticeable gap in the shading that appears to be "leaking". Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:15, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
It seems like you just lightened the shading and expanded it a bit, but didn't really give it shape like I asked about. It's still too straight-forward and doesn't curve with the body/muscles of a cat. —Jayce ( 04:28, 3/02/2020 )
I'm not sure if its a requirement, but, I think the lineart tweak for the head shouldn't have it closed off from the rest of the body like that? Maybe something a little more like this to show that the head is a part of the body.
I think the stomach and neck shading should be more rounded than what it currently is, if that makes sense? Something like this, maybe? Also, the redline shows to add some shading to the arm that would technically be in shadow with your current source? — eilish ゴジラ (04:34, 15/3/2020)
Sorry Ocean, but, I'm afraid I have to decline this both due to the one-month limit on images, and, lack of work as there has not been a new upload in ten days. Because it's being declined for the one month limit, you can't reclaim this image unless someone else has given it a go. — eilish ゴジラ (20:14, 22/3/2020)
Sparkpelt (W) ~ Withdrawn
I think the base is off - try pulling from Sparkpelt's kit section above on this page. Also, has redo permission per the tweak page - we're aiming for an exact a copy as possible, which for some of these (lmao) is just reusing the same image basically. Per Bramble/Hawk/Tiger precedence on spitting image.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:04, 4/12/2020
If I may ask, why exactly did you just upload Patch's version of Firestar's image without proper credit? Unless I'm missing something here, I'm not seeing any credit nor anyone asking Patch for permission to use her image. Exact copy or not, I do not see any attribution here and I am not liking that. It's also against the rules and counts as theft, if credit is not given nor permission asked. —Jayce ( 04:52, 4/13/2020 )
Honestly, since this is just Patch's image, I know you aren't intending to steal her image, but it doesn't sit right with me that you're doing the redo; thus taking credit for it whether intentional or not, when Patch could just do it herself since it's her image originally. This may be an unpopular opinion, but can you just let Patch do this redo since it's her image? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:40, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
A cat like Spottedleaf (Medicine cat) - Declined
Is this good? Just want you guys to give me some tips. Sorry that there is some white marks outside of the lines. I did a sloppy job making the background transparent. Its kind of like Spottedleaf, so I guess I will just call this cat my version of her. This was made at 11:12, on April 21 2020 Cateyes10 AKA Nimblespark [[File:Cateyes10.personal.png]] 02:15, April 22, 2020 (UTC)
Declined. We only accept art that is of a canon character who needs an image; and Spottedleaf doesn't currently need any art. You can check out some characters articles from the recent books to see if they have some art to do though^^ there's plenty. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:15, April 22, 2020 (UTC)
Oh, I thought it was for evaluation! Sorry!
Cateyes10 AKA Nimblespark [[File:Cateyes10.personal.png]] 02:17, April 22, 2020 (UTC)
Lioneye (Ghost) - Withdrawn
The colors seem almost neon compared to the rest of the set? The stripes could also be at different sizes too since some of them appear to be thinner and taper off. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:43, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
I'd recommend looking at the rogue for stripe placement and size, adding onto Vec's comment. Also, having done the kit myself, this set has the slightest bit of texture to it as well - very faintly.
The shading for the legs and such around the belly wouldn't reach that high if the source is coming from our top right. Could you also perhaps smooth it out some or lighten it? Its looking quite blocky and blotchy, perhaps due to the darkness. — eilish ゴジラ (23:06, 16/4/2020)
The base colour looks considerably lighter when compared to the rest of the set - also I'd like to reiterate my comment about the set having the slightest texture as well (but it might help to fix the base colour first). Also the stripes could stand to be smudged a little as well and could use with some darkening too. — eilish ゴジラ (01:48, 20/4/2020)
Though tint can be artists' choice, that extends to set-matching rules where applicable. In this case, the ghost sticks out like a sore thumb out of the other images because of the shading tint, so, formally gonna ask you to get it somewhere in range of the other images.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:13, 4/20/2020
Could you address Spooky's comment about the shading tint? As I also agree, the colours look washed out a little without the warmer tint (which should also be in the file I gave you :D) — eilish ゴジラ (22:58, 22/4/2020)
I think the stripes could stand to be a little less smudgy, per the original kit's style (which was the purpose of the set redo). I also think the back leg stripes could be a little thinner too, but, that might fix itself by making the stripes less smudgy. — eilish ゴジラ (04:25, 24/4/2020)
Dark gray tom (W) ~ Declined
Define the shading on the face and ears. Also please add some depth to the eyes (lighter and darker blues in a sort-of gradient). Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 01:25, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
Add some more shading to the << ear, and reduce the amount of shading on the haunch, if you would. The shading on the front legs also appears quite blotchy —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:21, 4/15/2020
I think more light could be added on the tail; and also, more light/less shading on the haunch, which should curve with the back, vs just going straight down.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:31, 4/20/2020
Tawnypelt (refugee) ~ withdrawn
Darktail (Ghost) ~ Declined
Darktail (U) ~ Declined
Dawnpelt (G) ~ Declined
You need to reserve art on the reservation table, and another user has already reserved this. I strongly suggest you refer to the guidelines of the project. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:13, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
Snow (Q) ~ Declined
I've changed the heading to for evaluation as this is your first image you've posted for the project as a kit, and it's not quite up to over 80% complete yet. When its considered so, then the heading will be changed.
You also need to reserve this on the main Charart page on the reservation table so people know that you're working on it and such - which is all listed in the project guidelines.
I've also renamed this to File:Snow (Sister).queen.png per our image guidelines. Please continue to reupload over that file instead. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:17, May 17, 2020 (UTC) ok i will re nameNinjago kai is fire13 (talk) 18:22, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
You’re not uploading over the current images. Just naming them Snow (Sister).queen.png does not mean they are the same. You’re making a bunch of unneeded new image files. —Sleekfang 19:02, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
Jayfeather (Re) - Withdrawn
[[File:Jayfeather.refugee.png]] I feel like I forgot something...
I feel like he is a bit darker, only a tad bit. Also could you shade a bit more?
Reup redid the herbs too, didn’t like the way they looked before. They looked to neon and it didn’t look like they were actually in his mouth
I feel as if the stripes on his forehead are a bit long. Maybe you could shorten them a bit?
Iceclaw111 Its Spring! 15:24, May 14, 2020 (UTC)
I feel like they match his images well, can someone give a second opinion?
Reup rounded off the edges of the herbs, it was bothering me
The stripes seem a bit more rougher on the other images, instead they seem smooth here. And they appear to have some faint lighter texture over them too on the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:59, May 16, 2020 (UTC)
I think the scar could also taper a little more at the tips of it; basically have them end in sharper points so it doesn't just look like a single brush stroke imo. It could also a lighter pink as well; likely the same shade as the earpink because in the old medicine cat that showed it, it was depicted that way? — eilish ゴジラ (04:20, 17/5/2020)
I agree with Vec. The stripes should be way rougher.
Berrynose (W) - Withdrawn
I know this is meant to be a redo, but I think the image should at least resemble what it was beforehand. The tail should be more stumped, like what it was before. The earpink seems far too dark, and he's missing his shredded ear. There's also waste littered around the image. Shading could also stand to be smoothed out.
I'm also of the opinion that the previous lineart was fine, and probably should've been used due to that factor. The base also looks way too bright compared to the alternative warrior; which holds the master colours for this set. Match the above colours Thunder mentioned, and the base to that one please. — eilish ゴジラ (07:40, 22/5/2020)
There's no cause to use a different shading tint than before, also, than Tyb had before. It now stands out among the rest of the set, which is all extremely consistent.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:44, 5/22/2020
Actually, I'm going to bring up a prior precedent issue. I think this should be the alt warrior exactly, because this is what this is nommed for. However, that is Skye's image, and they should have been the one to have this, because someone who isn't the OA tweaking an active person's image is illogical. The reason this set was nominated was to match the alt warrior. Nothing will ever quite match the alt warrior for this image, the actual warrior, as much as the og artist of the alt warrior taking that image and altering it to be this one. Prior case is this, with Sparkpelt's, where Patch, as Firestar's OA, was ceded this claim because she should have had it from the get-go. In a wrap, I think this should be withdrawn and given to Skye for that reason, as it cannot satisfy 'matching the alt warrior' while being a newly made image while holding the same blank.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:00, 5/22/2020
Kitescratch (Lo) - Declined
[[File:Kitescratch.loner.png]] I can’t seem to get it to be the right size without messing it up. This was as small as I could make it and it’s really blurry. Being on an iPad sucks. —Sleekfang 18:38, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
The issue almost certainly stems from you being on an ipad over a computer. None of the other artists here (to my knowledge) use an ipad for art.
That being said, for your first image, this isn't terrible. He still needs his torn ear and the pupils could be shrunk so it doesn't look like he's stoned. There's also a weird white glow around the image. The earpink comment from Ripplewater also still stands.
I don't know if it's because it's an ipad (I know of two users that use mobile devices for chararts), but it's definitely too big. Unfortunately, resizing tends to make it blurry, and I'm not sure how to fix this issue. Anyways, add more shading and define what's already there. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<22:34, 5/19/2020>
Star, can you tell me which two users those are? Maybe they could help figure this out. I’ll address the other comments once we can get the image to be the right size. If this doesn’t work, I do have a computer I can use, but my dad is on it for most of the day for work due to quarantine and I’d have to redo the image. —Sleekfang 22:36, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
White Rogue (Ro) - Declined
[[File:RP-2.rogue-10.png]] This is my first charart. I tried my best and I hope you guys like it! Iceclaw111 17:24, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
The image is too pixelated and isn't the right size. It needs to be the same size as the rogue blanks. There's also no shading (which is a requirement of the project) that I can see. —Jayce ( 17:48, 5/04/2020 )
As Jayce said, the file size is way too big; it should be 176x112 pixels but this is 611x408 pixels. Make sure to download the blank properly from the pixel blanks. This image also needs shading, to which you can view a shading placement guide on our apprentice tutorials along with other helpful information. Also do not thumb or align your image as it messes with the page layout. Also, from which book is this rogue from? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:48, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I did download the blank from the blank page, but something must have happened. Do you think I should scrap this one and try again?Iceclaw111 18:01, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
The rouge is from a clan in need. 18:02, May 4, 2020 (UTC)Iceclaw111
From my experiences with prior users who face this problem, they ultimate redo the image once they have the correct file size. And is this rogue listed on our minor characters page? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:07, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
Yes the rouge is in the minor characters page, you can go to it by looking at the reservation table then clicking on the dashed rouge link. Iceclaw111 18:12, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
I think there might be some confusion as to who this character is; if they're from a Clan in Need, they'd be listed on the above page Vec linked, which they are but, under a different description due to the coloured reprint. I'd maybe suggest looking there to see which of the linked cats under the Clan in Need heading matches this character's debut in the graphic novels (if that makes sense? I don't have a copy of these books handy). If they do match up to one listed on the minor characters for those books, I'd suggest matching to the coloured description. — eilish ゴジラ (22:32, 04/5/2020)
Lets just call it the white cat with blue eyes, I will add the blue eyes in and fix the teeth up. Iceclaw111 16:19, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Oh and dont delcine it just yet because there is a background I am working on removing it. Iceclaw111 16:31, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Re Uploaded --Iceclaw111 17:10, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Re Uploaded I added some shading to the face and re did the teeth on the collar.Iceclaw111 19:50, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
Iceclaw, the charart needs to be of a character from the books, whether it be named or simply a minor character. If you cannot find the colored version of this cat from the minor characters page, it will be declined. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<21:09, 5/05/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<21:09, 5/05/2020>
White BloodClan catEdit Noimage Description: long-haired white cat with blue eyes and a black tooth-studded collar Rank(s): BloodClan History: They are shown fighting over scraps with a white BloodClan cat when the ThunderClan patrol arrives at Twolegplace. They are promptly scared off and are seen dashing off intro the streets. That is the one. I do not know why it was called a dashed rouge, but it indeed is white. Can I change the name from dashed rouge to white rouge? --Iceclaw111 02:33, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Now its a longhaired cat --Iceclaw111 03:15, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reup I had to reupload twice due to a mistake. Added more shading. Thanks Potato! --Iceclaw111 17:10, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Changing the shading. --Iceclaw111 17:28, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Fixed the lineart. Thanks Vec! --Iceclaw111 15:49, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded Messed with the shading, and fixed more of the lineart. --Iceclaw111 15:58, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
Please define and expand the shading. Also, I'm not sure what those gray lines are meant to be. Is it texture? ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<16:25, 5/07/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<16:25, 5/07/2020>
Reup Thanks for the redline Patch. I feel as if there is something wrong with the teeh though.
Iceclaw111 19:33, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
I suggest deleting the current lineart since it's already blurry and uploading a clean one. your layers should also be in multiply mode, i think. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ) 23:48, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
Ginger RiverClan Kit (Ki) ~ Withdrawn
[[File:ASIR.kit-1.png]]Not sure of the image name, but I think it's good? In case you're wondering, it's the orange kit seen on the fourth page found here, which is also where I got all the colors from. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:07, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
Maybe wait until someone has a copy of the book before publishing it (feel free to keep it reserved). None of the pages are up yet, including the minor characters, and for all we know this character could be named later in the book. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:12, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
Bumblestripe (Re) - Withdrawn
Re uploaded I see now. I took away the leaking shading from the front leg and darkened some spots, especially where the light doesn't reach, such as between his front legs. Did that make it better or worse? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:28, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
Get rid of the pink by the torn ear, and I believe it should be the other ear torn
- There are a couple of unfilled pixels on the image, please fill them in. - The stripes on his other images appear to be more jaggedy. - Please define and darken the shading. It also appears to be leaking away from the lineart. - Define the eye depth. - What's your light source? I can't exactly tell right now.
Let me know if you have any questions! ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<16:09, 5/30/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<16:09, 5/30/2020>
I see the unfilled in pixels. I will fill them in. For the stripes I will make them more jagged. And I will define the shading and darken in. Does eye depth mean add shading to the eye? And my light source is coming from the top right corner, shining down onto his back. - --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:17, May 30, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
And I am sorry for my questions, but by making the stripes more jaggedy, would it work if I smudged them in the right places. Or just redo the stripes to make them jagged? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:42, May 30, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat
I don't quite know how to describe eye depth, but take Alderheart's refugee as an example. See how there's a wide range of colors there, thus giving it depth? The same should be applied here, of course, while sticking to Bumblestripe's eye color on his other images.
As for the light source, there are a few things that could be fixed/adjusted. I'll provide a screenshot later. Also, I think for the stripes you should redo the stripes to be more jagged, and smudge them slightly, as that is how it appears it was done on his other images. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<19:41, 5/30/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<19:41, 5/30/2020>
Dawnpelt (Re) ~ Declined
- Don't thumb or align your images.
- I believe the refugee in the file name needs to be lowercase.
- You need to match Dawnpelt's other images--she has a lot more stripes.
- Speaking of stripes, they should be blurred.
- This image also needs shading.
- Define the eye depth.
- As far as I can tell Dawnpelt doesn't have any ear tufts--remove those please.
Just going to add, Raven; make sure you comment when you reupload the image so that people can tell when you've made changes. Just simply comment with something along the lines of '''reuploaded''' ~~~~ to allow people to see. — eilish ゴジラ (23:17, 18/6/2020)
Smooth out your shading, add more shading, and erase the waste that’s leaking out of the line art where you added shading. Make sure to refer to this chart for shading placement. Also, what program are you using? —Sleekfang 17:33, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
Raven, you still aren’t uploading your images correctly. Stop making new images that have similar names, and actually reupload over the Dawnpelt refugee file that you should be uploading over. Multiple users, including me, have already told you how to reupload over a file, and I’m honestly confused as to why you continue to ignore this and create new images. —Sleekfang 20:17, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
I GIVE UP YOU GUYS ARE STRESSING ME TO MUCH MAKE SOMEONE ELSE DO DAWNPELT!
There’s no need for all caps. We’re trying to be reasonable and help. If you are unwilling to take criticism, that is your problem. But the rules of the project and how we do things here are clear. Just because we wouldn’t accept your image how it is now does not mean we were being mean or unreasonable. —Sleekfang 19:20, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
Quick Water (Re) - Withdrawn
The texture should be darker and more paint brush-like. The nose shouldn't be pink but instead black to match the set. The white on the chest should extend upwards to reach the chin and kinda around below it (see warrior and es image). I also think a little bit of white can be added on the lower parts of the haunches per the ancient, hunter and rogue. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:30, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
Gonna have to keep hammering in that the texture does not match. Perhaps try using a different brush and it appears to vary in different opacities? It also isn't as linear as you have here. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:52, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading on the backleg closest to us, and define the shading depth there? The texture also still doesn't appear to match; try using multiple layers with different opacities to match the style? — eilish ゴジラ (23:15, 18/6/2020)