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Tri-colored kittypet - Declined

[[File:Tri-colored.kittypet.png]] Wow I did this quick---Glacier () 02:22, February 22, 2020 (UTC)

Remove the collar, the manga image does not illustrate this guy with it. This is beautiful, Oceanpelt^^ --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 02:26, February 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup, thank you! Oh god I forgot to even fill up the collar. I had quite a bit of trouble shading the area where the collar was.-Glacier () 02:47, February 22, 2020 (UTC)

I know this is late with comments, but we're all super busy and I won't count this against you for upload times... but could you try and give a bit of shape to the back leg shading? It seems too straight, for lack of a better term, and I feel like it should curve with the body a bit more. Possibly lighten the shading a bit too? It seems like there's an additional color in places like the front arm and back legs. Jayce  ( 05:03, 2/28/2020 )

Reup-Glacier () 22:17, February 28, 2020 (UTC)

Could you maybe add some more shading lines on ---> foreleg, right along the lineart. There just appears to be a noticeable gap in the shading that appears to be "leaking". Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:15, March 2, 2020 (UTC)

It seems like you just lightened the shading and expanded it a bit, but didn't really give it shape like I asked about. It's still too straight-forward and doesn't curve with the body/muscles of a cat. Jayce  ( 04:28, 3/02/2020 )

Reup--Glacier () 18:17, March 3, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and lighten it, now we're back to where it looks like they have an additional color on them. Jayce  ( 20:46, 3/03/2020 )

I'm not sure if its a requirement, but, I think the lineart tweak for the head shouldn't have it closed off from the rest of the body like that? Maybe something a little more like this to show that the head is a part of the body.

Could you also define the earpink colour a little bit? eilish ゴジラ (20:52, 06/3/2020)

Reup I totally forgot about the ear pink lol. And thanks Patch for the help with the shading—-Glacier () 23:09, March 7, 2020 (UTC)

Could you address the note about the collar/head lineart in my previous comment? eilish ゴジラ (04:51, 08/3/2020)

Might need a day, lost tablet :(---Glacier () 19:16, March 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup---Glacier () 21:46, March 11, 2020 (UTC)

One last thing I think, could you smooth the shading on the neck where the collar used to be. eilish ゴジラ (22:23, 11/3/2020)

Reupstruggling noises—-Glacier () 22:27, March 11, 2020 (UTC)

I think the stomach and neck shading should be more rounded than what it currently is, if that makes sense? Something like this, maybe? Also, the redline shows to add some shading to the arm that would technically be in shadow with your current source? eilish ゴジラ (04:34, 15/3/2020)

Forgot about this and am working on it now, might be a day—-Glacier () 01:48, March 20, 2020 (UTC)

Sorry Ocean, but, I'm afraid I have to decline this both due to the one-month limit on images, and, lack of work as there has not been a new upload in ten days. Because it's being declined for the one month limit, you can't reclaim this image unless someone else has given it a go. eilish ゴジラ (20:14, 22/3/2020)

Ok, I was just about to withdraw it due to personal reasons—-Glacier () 00:12, March 23, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:06, 3/23/2020

Sparkpelt (W) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:Sparkpelt.warrior.png]] OA is Scarlet, Tweaked to match Firestar's warrior pattern, by Patch. ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 14:20, April 12, 2020 (UTC)

I think the base is off - try pulling from Sparkpelt's kit section above on this page. Also, has redo permission per the tweak page - we're aiming for an exact a copy as possible, which for some of these (lmao) is just reusing the same image basically. Per Bramble/Hawk/Tiger precedence on spitting image.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:04, 4/12/2020

Re-Up! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 20:35, April 12, 2020 (UTC)

The colours still look off? The above kit seems to have darker stripes as well? eilish ゴジラ (20:51, 12/4/2020)

Re-Up! yeah my copy paste was changing the colors ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 01:47, April 13, 2020 (UTC)

If I may ask, why exactly did you just upload Patch's version of Firestar's image without proper credit? Unless I'm missing something here, I'm not seeing any credit nor anyone asking Patch for permission to use her image. Exact copy or not, I do not see any attribution here and I am not liking that. It's also against the rules and counts as theft, if credit is not given nor permission asked. Jayce  ( 04:52, 4/13/2020 )​​​​

I'm very sorry! I've added credit- I really didn't mean to steal! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 12:43, April 13, 2020 (UTC)

Honestly, since this is just Patch's image, I know you aren't intending to steal her image, but it doesn't sit right with me that you're doing the redo; thus taking credit for it whether intentional or not, when Patch could just do it herself since it's her image originally. This may be an unpopular opinion, but can you just let Patch do this redo since it's her image? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:40, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

If that is the concensus, I am fine with that. It is Patch's image, so I understand if Patch does the redo. ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 12:53, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

I think it's probably best. This was basically just all for paper trail anyways - to upload all of Firestar's, so.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:35, 4/15/2020

Alright! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 13:02, April 16, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:18, 4/16/2020

A cat like Spottedleaf (Medicine cat) - Declined

File:Cateyes10.personal(4).png

Is this good? Just want you guys to give me some tips. Sorry that there is some white marks outside of the lines. I did a sloppy job making the background transparent. Its kind of like Spottedleaf, so I guess I will just call this cat my version of her. This was made at 11:12, on April 21 2020 Cateyes10 AKA Nimblespark [[File:Cateyes10.personal.png]] 02:15, April 22, 2020 (UTC)

Declined. We only accept art that is of a canon character who needs an image; and Spottedleaf doesn't currently need any art. You can check out some characters articles from the recent books to see if they have some art to do though^^ there's plenty. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:15, April 22, 2020 (UTC)

I see

Oh, I thought it was for evaluation! Sorry!

Cateyes10 AKA Nimblespark [[File:Cateyes10.personal.png]] 02:17, April 22, 2020 (UTC)

Lioneye (Ghost) - Withdrawn

[[File:Lioneye.ghost.png]] yeet --Glacier () 15:16, April 16, 2020 (UTC)

The colors seem almost neon compared to the rest of the set? The stripes could also be at different sizes too since some of them appear to be thinner and taper off. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:43, April 16, 2020 (UTC)

I'd recommend looking at the rogue for stripe placement and size, adding onto Vec's comment. Also, having done the kit myself, this set has the slightest bit of texture to it as well - very faintly.

The shading for the legs and such around the belly wouldn't reach that high if the source is coming from our top right. Could you also perhaps smooth it out some or lighten it? Its looking quite blocky and blotchy, perhaps due to the darkness. eilish ゴジラ (23:06, 16/4/2020)

Patch gave me a redline. I’m working on fixing the stripes now-Glacier () 00:34, April 17, 2020 (UTC)

Reup :lazy: :is very lazy: I might redo the shading later I just want this up here now---Glacier () 01:43, April 20, 2020 (UTC)

The base colour looks considerably lighter when compared to the rest of the set - also I'd like to reiterate my comment about the set having the slightest texture as well (but it might help to fix the base colour first). Also the stripes could stand to be smudged a little as well and could use with some darkening too. eilish ゴジラ (01:48, 20/4/2020)

Would you like the kit file, if that helps with colours? eilish ゴジラ (01:49, 20/4/2020)

Oh yeah I forgot about the texture. And the kit file would be nice if you have it! (Btw my drawing program doesn’t allow anything but psd, png, jpg, and mdp)-Glacier () 04:23, April 20, 2020 (UTC)

Though tint can be artists' choice, that extends to set-matching rules where applicable. In this case, the ghost sticks out like a sore thumb out of the other images because of the shading tint, so, formally gonna ask you to get it somewhere in range of the other images.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:13, 4/20/2020

The stripes appear to be smudged out more on the others as well. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<17:23, 4/22/2020>

Reup thanks to max for a redline for the stripes---Glacier () 22:53, April 22, 2020 (UTC)

Could you address Spooky's comment about the shading tint? As I also agree, the colours look washed out a little without the warmer tint (which should also be in the file I gave you :D) eilish ゴジラ (22:58, 22/4/2020)

Reup-Glacier () 00:08, April 23, 2020 (UTC)

I think the stripes could stand to be a little less smudgy, per the original kit's style (which was the purpose of the set redo). I also think the back leg stripes could be a little thinner too, but, that might fix itself by making the stripes less smudgy. eilish ゴジラ (04:25, 24/4/2020)

Reupi don't like the stripes Like this Im fixing them-Glacier ()

I need to withdraw this. Sorry ---Glacier () 23:26, April 24, 2020 (UTC)

Declined. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:14, April 25, 2020 (UTC)

Dark gray tom (W) ~ Declined

[[File:PC.warrior-3.png]] Is it a bit too black? Sandy My Talk 00:45, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

WOAH! ur art has improved a lot! darken the shading. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  00:57, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face and ears. Also please add some depth to the eyes (lighter and darker blues in a sort-of gradient). ⓌⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡICouldn'tSayIt To Myself 01:25, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Looks awesome!!! Could you maybe smooth the shading on the haunches? It’s looking a bit patchy. --Eastertail Hop Hop! 02:12, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Thanks!! Reup Sandy My Talk 00:40, April 15, 2020 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the << ear, and reduce the amount of shading on the haunch, if you would. The shading on the front legs also appears quite blotchy spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:21, 4/15/2020

Reup Sandy My Talk 00:53, April 16, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the shoulder and belly area? It's looking quite blotchy at the moment. eilish ゴジラ (04:41, 16/4/2020)

Reup Sandy My Talk 00:17, April 18, 2020 (UTC)

I think more light could be added on the tail; and also, more light/less shading on the haunch, which should curve with the back, vs just going straight down.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:31, 4/20/2020

Still working? eilish ゴジラ (00:28, 24/4/2020)

Declined due to lack of work.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:07, 4/27/2020

Archiving spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:07, 4/28/2020

Tawnypelt (refugee) ~ withdrawn

[[File:Tawnypelt.refugee.png]] might withdraw this idk how i fele about it :/ david 🌈 14:56, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

yes i spent 2 hours finishing this yes im withdrawing it not even 10 minutes after david 🌈 15:05, May 2, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:03, May 3, 2020 (UTC)

Darktail (Ghost) ~ Declined

[[File:Darktail.Ghost.png]] —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ninjago kai is fire13 (talkcontribs)

Darktail hasn't been confirmed to be a ghost or in any residence. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 00:44, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

how did you fix it!  i tried to make a Unknown residence one but its realy hard to makeRavenblaze always Burning like fire   02:24, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

Declined due to Darktail not having any confirmed residence. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:54, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 14:44, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

Darktail (U) ~ Declined

[[File:Darktail.Unknown.png]]

Yep i realy want to make sure that i can make a Darktail —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ninjago kai is fire13 (talkcontribs)

Darktail has absolutely no confirmed afterlife of any sort, so he doesn't get this blank. —Danny GVivaLaVida 01:38, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

Declined due to Darktail not having a confirmed afterlife residence. Please do not make any art for characters who do not have those confirmed ranks. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:38, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 14:44, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (G) ~ Declined

[[File:Dawnpelt.Ghost.png.png]] —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ninjago_kai_is_fire13 (talkcontribs)

You need to reserve art on the reservation table, and another user has already reserved this. I strongly suggest you refer to the guidelines of the project. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:13, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving eilish ゴジラ (04:13, 17/5/2020)

Snow (Q) ~ Declined

[[File:Snow (Sister).queen.png]] before you say it i asked Vec if i could do this <Ravenblaze always Burning like fire and i asked if it could be on Reservation table

Shade the image. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 04:03, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

also, make the pupils smaller and less blurry and make the earpink less neon-ish. this is looking good —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  04:08, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

I've changed the heading to for evaluation as this is your first image you've posted for the project as a kit, and it's not quite up to over 80% complete yet. When its considered so, then the heading will be changed.

You also need to reserve this on the main Charart page on the reservation table so people know that you're working on it and such - which is all listed in the project guidelines.

The earpink could also be smudged a little bit as well; building upon Ripple's comment too - have you colourpicked from her other images? eilish ゴジラ (04:12, 17/5/2020)

Re Up what do you think the eyes look bit werid but i think i got the ears wellNinjago kai is fire13 (talk) 18:17, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

I've also renamed this to File:Snow (Sister).queen.png per our image guidelines. Please continue to reupload over that file instead. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:17, May 17, 2020 (UTC) ok i will re nameNinjago kai is fire13 (talk) 18:22, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

I don't know if i shaded it so i will try one more time before Re upNinjago kai is fire13 (talk) 18:27, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Re up i know i Did put to much Shade but i can Put lessNinjago kai is fire13 (talk) 18:46, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Please don't thumb the image. Also, add more depth to the eyes, and shade the cat. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<18:48, 5/17/2020>

Adding on to that, please remove the shading from the background. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<18:49, 5/17/2020>

Upload over the current image, don’t make another one. —Sleekfang 18:52, May 17, 2020 (UTC) Hi Sleek I need some help on this how do i make a re up?Ravenblaze always Burning like fire

Go to the image (File:Snow (Sister).queen.png) and, at the bottom, click ‘upload a new version of this file.’ —Sleekfang 18:59, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

You’re not uploading over the current images. Just naming them Snow (Sister).queen.png does not mean they are the same. You’re making a bunch of unneeded new image files. —Sleekfang 19:02, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Sorry i am still new to this thingRavenblaze always Burning like fire

Whoops i did not see that before?Ravenblaze always Burning like fire

Declined due to user being banned by the administration for COPPA violation. I'll let someone else clean up these several revision uploads.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:11, 5/17/2020

Archiving. —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 02:59, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Re) - Withdrawn

[[File:Jayfeather.refugee.png]] I feel like I forgot something...

-Glacier (21:32, 5/12/2020) Reup

-Glacier (21:39, 5/12/2020)

Did you add the scar? I can't see it. Jayce  ( 21:46, 5/12/2020 )

The stripes seem a bit rougher too, and it's missing a dorsal stripe Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:52, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

The eyes seem too dark compared to the set. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 22:15, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

I see the scar, it just seems a bit faint. --Wavetail Ya Yeet 22:32, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Reup

-Glacier (22:35, 5/12/2020)

Maybe define the shading or darken it a little bit? Juniperclaw (talk) 03:55, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

I feel like he is a bit darker, only a tad bit. Also could you shade a bit more?

Iceclaw111, April showers bring May showers 16:10, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

Make sure to put your comments at the very end, and try not to repeat comments, as Juniperclaw already mentioned the shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:20, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

The stripes need a bit more texture if you know what I mean? Iceclaw111, April showers bring May showers 16:20, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

Reup redid the herbs too, didn’t like the way they looked before. They looked to neon and it didn’t look like they were actually in his mouth

-Glacier (20:38, 5/13/2020)

I feel as if the stripes on his forehead are a bit long. Maybe you could shorten them a bit?

Iceclaw111 Its Spring! 15:24, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

I feel like they match his images well, can someone give a second opinion?

-Glacier (15:50, 5/14/2020)

They seem fine to me; I think it's just a perspective issue here. The other images don't have as much room on the head as these blanks do. Jayce  ( 15:53, 5/14/2020 )​​​

Reup rounded off the edges of the herbs, it was bothering me

-Glacier (16:24, 5/14/2020)

Maybe add some shading to the herbs? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:25, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Reup

-Glacier (16:32, 5/14/2020)

The stripes seem a bit more rougher on the other images, instead they seem smooth here. And they appear to have some faint lighter texture over them too on the other images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:59, May 16, 2020 (UTC)

I think the scar could also taper a little more at the tips of it; basically have them end in sharper points so it doesn't just look like a single brush stroke imo. It could also a lighter pink as well; likely the same shade as the earpink because in the old medicine cat that showed it, it was depicted that way? eilish ゴジラ (04:20, 17/5/2020)

maybe duplicate the stripes layer and put it on a lower opacity to make them look a little rougher? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  04:25, May 17, 2020 (UTC)

Reup

-Glacier (21:32, 5/19/2020)

The edges of the stripes could be rougher Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:01, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

I agree with Vec. The stripes should be way rougher. 

Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 16:06, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

The stripes also look a bit like sandpaper. Could you make them look like fur? Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 16:53, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

I agree, there’s some strange texture on the stripes. --Wavetail Ya Yeet 02:37, May 21, 2020 (UTC)

Since a holiday and my birthday is coming up in a couple days I’m not gonna be able to work on this at all. Need to withdraw-Glacier (02:05, 5/23/2020)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:28, May 25, 2020 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) - Withdrawn

[[File:Berrynose.warrior.png]] oa is tyb, nominated to remove texture. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  04:46, May 22, 2020 (UTC)

I know this is meant to be a redo, but I think the image should at least resemble what it was beforehand. The tail should be more stumped, like what it was before. The earpink seems far too dark, and he's missing his shredded ear. There's also waste littered around the image. Shading could also stand to be smoothed out.

Danny GVivaLaVida 04:50, May 22, 2020 (UTC)

I'm also of the opinion that the previous lineart was fine, and probably should've been used due to that factor. The base also looks way too bright compared to the alternative warrior; which holds the master colours for this set. Match the above colours Thunder mentioned, and the base to that one please. eilish ゴジラ (07:40, 22/5/2020)

There's no cause to use a different shading tint than before, also, than Tyb had before. It now stands out among the rest of the set, which is all extremely consistent.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:44, 5/22/2020

Actually, I'm going to bring up a prior precedent issue. I think this should be the alt warrior exactly, because this is what this is nommed for. However, that is Skye's image, and they should have been the one to have this, because someone who isn't the OA tweaking an active person's image is illogical. The reason this set was nominated was to match the alt warrior. Nothing will ever quite match the alt warrior for this image, the actual warrior, as much as the og artist of the alt warrior taking that image and altering it to be this one. Prior case is this, with Sparkpelt's, where Patch, as Firestar's OA, was ceded this claim because she should have had it from the get-go. In a wrap, I think this should be withdrawn and given to Skye for that reason, as it cannot satisfy 'matching the alt warrior' while being a newly made image while holding the same blank.spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:00, 5/22/2020

that's alright with me, withdrawn —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  00:08, May 23, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:38, May 25, 2020 (UTC)

Kitescratch (Lo) - Declined

[[File:Kitescratch.loner.png]] I can’t seem to get it to be the right size without messing it up. This was as small as I could make it and it’s really blurry. Being on an iPad sucks. —Sleekfang​​​​ 18:38, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

could you make the earpink more gray-pink instead of neonish-pink? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  18:59, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

Re-Up Is this better? Oh, the image size changed. Huh. —Sleekfang​​ 19:30, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

yes, is there any way you can make the lineart less blurry? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  19:47, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

When I make the image smaller to upload it, it becomes super blurry. I don’t know how to upload it in finer detail without it being way too big. —Sleekfang​ 19:54, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

The issue almost certainly stems from you being on an ipad over a computer. None of the other artists here (to my knowledge) use an ipad for art.

That being said, for your first image, this isn't terrible. He still needs his torn ear and the pupils could be shrunk so it doesn't look like he's stoned. There's also a weird white glow around the image. The earpink comment from Ripplewater also still stands.

Danny GVivaLaVida 21:40, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

I don't know if it's because it's an ipad (I know of two users that use mobile devices for chararts), but it's definitely too big. Unfortunately, resizing tends to make it blurry, and I'm not sure how to fix this issue. Anyways, add more shading and define what's already there. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<22:34, 5/19/2020>

Star, can you tell me which two users those are? Maybe they could help figure this out. I’ll address the other comments once we can get the image to be the right size. If this doesn’t work, I do have a computer I can use, but my dad is on it for most of the day for work due to quarantine and I’d have to redo the image. —Sleekfang​ 22:36, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

When you fix your problems with the image size and other things, add more shading to the belly. Iceclaw111 Its Summer! My Claws Have Melted!☀️

Add some more depth. And I don’t you problem is from being on an IPad, Wavetail, Ripple, and I use an IPad.-Glacier (23:35, 5/19/2020)

Alright, I’m on a computer now and am using GIMP, but I’ve never used it before. Does anyone have some good tutorials for making chararts on GIMP? —Sleekfang 00:43, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

here’s some top quality tutorials!-Glacier (02:37, 5/20/2020)

Still working? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:39, May 27, 2020 (UTC)

Nah, I think I’m going to pass this on while I learn to use GIMP, sorry. —Sleekfang 01:46, May 27, 2020 (UTC)

Declined per user request. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:54, May 27, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:16, May 28, 2020 (UTC)

White Rogue (Ro) - Declined

[[File:RP-2.rogue-10.png]] This is my first charart. I tried my best and I hope you guys like it! Iceclaw111 17:24, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

The image is too pixelated and isn't the right size. It needs to be the same size as the rogue blanks. There's also no shading (which is a requirement of the project) that I can see. Jayce  ( 17:48, 5/04/2020 )​​​​​​

As Jayce said, the file size is way too big; it should be 176x112 pixels but this is 611x408 pixels. Make sure to download the blank properly from the pixel blanks. This image also needs shading, to which you can view a shading placement guide on our apprentice tutorials along with other helpful information. Also do not thumb or align your image as it messes with the page layout. Also, from which book is this rogue from? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:48, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I did download the blank from the blank page, but something must have happened. Do you think I should scrap this one and try again?Iceclaw111 18:01, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

The rouge is from a clan in need. 18:02, May 4, 2020 (UTC)Iceclaw111

From my experiences with prior users who face this problem, they ultimate redo the image once they have the correct file size. And is this rogue listed on our minor characters page? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:07, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

Yes the rouge is in the minor characters page, you can go to it by looking at the reservation table then clicking on the dashed rouge link. Iceclaw111 18:12, May 4, 2020 (UTC)

I think there might be some confusion as to who this character is; if they're from a Clan in Need, they'd be listed on the above page Vec linked, which they are but, under a different description due to the coloured reprint. I'd maybe suggest looking there to see which of the linked cats under the Clan in Need heading matches this character's debut in the graphic novels (if that makes sense? I don't have a copy of these books handy). If they do match up to one listed on the minor characters for those books, I'd suggest matching to the coloured description. eilish ゴジラ (22:32, 04/5/2020)

Lets just call it the white cat with blue eyes, I will add the blue eyes in and fix the teeth up. Iceclaw111 16:19, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Oh and dont delcine it just yet because there is a background I am working on removing it. Iceclaw111 16:31, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Re Uploaded --Iceclaw111 17:10, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Re Uploaded  I added some shading to the face and re did the teeth on the collar.Iceclaw111 19:50, May 5, 2020 (UTC)

Iceclaw, the charart needs to be of a character from the books, whether it be named or simply a minor character. If you cannot find the colored version of this cat from the minor characters page, it will be declined. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<21:09, 5/05/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<21:09, 5/05/2020>

White BloodClan catEdit Noimage Description: long-haired white cat with blue eyes and a black tooth-studded collar[8] Rank(s): BloodClan[8] History: They are shown fighting over scraps with a white BloodClan cat when the ThunderClan patrol arrives at Twolegplace. They are promptly scared off and are seen dashing off intro the streets. That is the one. I do not know why it was called a dashed rouge, but it indeed is white. Can I change the name from dashed rouge to white rouge? --Iceclaw111 02:33, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now its a longhaired cat --Iceclaw111 03:15, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

The shading needs a lot more definition and depth, as right now, the image is still rather flat. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 16:24, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I had to reupload twice due to a mistake. Added more shading. Thanks Potato! --Iceclaw111 17:10, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changing the shading. --Iceclaw111 17:28, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

I went ahead and renamed it for you. Please continue to reupload over File:RP-2.rogue-10.png. There also appears to be missing lineart over the image. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:06, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the lineart. Thanks Vec! --Iceclaw111 15:49, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Messed with the shading, and fixed more of the lineart. --Iceclaw111 15:58, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Please define and expand the shading. Also, I'm not sure what those gray lines are meant to be. Is it texture? ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<16:25, 5/07/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<16:25, 5/07/2020>

https://vvcap.com/FCQQvRsQw here is the redline for the teeth on the collar you wanted. Can you fix the blurred line art? —PatchfeatherOut of the Silent Planet 23:36, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Reup Thanks for the redline Patch. I feel as if there is something wrong with the teeh though. 

Iceclaw111 19:33, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

The teeth are too large and there are still several instances of the lineart being covered accidentally throughout the image. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:05, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Reup --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! 16:48, May 14, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I love the shading now. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 19:55, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

ReupGonna shade the head next --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 20:25, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Reup --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 20:34, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Darken the shading more, especially on the tail. Unless this cat is depicted with texturr, it shouldn't have it. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 20:36, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I removed the texture and darkened the shading. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 21:04, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

why does it look blurry? the lineart and shading seem to be on the same layer? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  21:07, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Yes they are on the same layer, should I change that? --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 21:26, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Yes. If you shade on the lineart layer, you risk blurring the lineart. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 21:53, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

I suggest deleting the current lineart since it's already blurry and uploading a clean one. your layers should also be in multiply mode, i think. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  23:48, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit, and maybe define the shading a little more on the tail. – Ivy 12:59, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

I will get to work on it today. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 13:37, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Reup What do yall think? --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 23:28, May 19, 2020 (UTC)

Lineart is still blurry; can you please fix that? eilish ゴジラ (23:35, 19/5/2020)

Good job, it’s looking good! Try putting a lineart layer on top of everything and remove the white so you can see what’s under, that should help. --Wavetail Ya Yeet 02:21, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

How do I do that on GIMP Wavetail? --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 02:23, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

reups Better now? --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 03:09, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

The lineart is still covered on the tail, haunches and legs. Make sure your lineart layer is at the top and nothing covers it. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:02, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

It is, and in gimp it looks all good, but it wont save. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 14:24, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope it is better. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 14:50, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

The lineart is still very blurry. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 15:19, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Shoot! I forgot the earpink! --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 15:25, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

reup --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 15:35, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

The lineart is still blurry on the head and stomach. I also believe hink you should check for waste. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 15:55, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded I think it is all good now. I hope y'all like my style of shading, its different. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 16:04, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking overall. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 16:06, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Can I have a second opinion? I already cleaned up the waste. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 16:13, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

No, leaking shading is not waste. The shading is leaking away from the lineart. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 16:16, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

So you want me to shade closer to the lineart? --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 16:18, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixing minor things. --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 16:21, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Yes. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 16:28, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reup Better? --Iceclaw111 Its Spring! My Claws Are Melting!☀️ 16:39, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

smooth out the shading to make it look less blotchy —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  20:11, May 20, 2020 (UTC)

Still working? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:18, May 28, 2020 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:15, June 2, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:30, June 2, 2020 (UTC)

Ginger RiverClan Kit (Ki) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:ASIR.kit-1.png]]Not sure of the image name, but I think it's good? In case you're wondering, it's the orange kit seen on the fourth page found here, which is also where I got all the colors from. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:07, June 2, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe wait until someone has a copy of the book before publishing it (feel free to keep it reserved). None of the pages are up yet, including the minor characters, and for all we know this character could be named later in the book. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:12, June 2, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, I can wait (I'm getting the book as soon as possible tomorrow). Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:17, June 2, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:30, June 2, 2020 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Re) - Withdrawn

[[File:Bumblestripe.refugee.png]]--Silverfeather Be Happy! 11:55, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

looks pretty good, maybe add some depth to the shading. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  15:48, May 29, 2020 (UTC)

The shading is also leaking away from the lineart on some places, namely the front leg closest to us. This is really good <3 --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 15:57, May 29, 2020 (UTC)

Thank you. Is there any apprentice tutorials on depth in shading? And I am very sorry, but what does leaking away mean? - --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:09, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Leaking away from the lineart means it's coming away from it. And yes, there are shading guides in the app tutorials! --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 16:13, May 29, 2020 (UTC)

Re uploaded I see now. I took away the leaking shading from the front leg and darkened some spots, especially where the light doesn't reach, such as between his front legs. Did that make it better or worse? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:28, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Wait. It says that there is already an existing photo there, the one that I entered in before. What do I do about that? - --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:30, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Nevermind. Fixed it. --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:31, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

i would suggest checking out the shading placement section —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  16:51, May 29, 2020 (UTC)

Re uploaded Worked on shading --Silverfeather Be Happy! 17:38, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

that's better. ^^ now that the light source is fixed, could you add more depth and smooth out the shading more? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  18:10, May 29, 2020 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear to match his description and other images. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:27, May 29, 2020 (UTC)

Re uploaded - --Silverfeather Be Happy! 22:16, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Get rid of the pink by the torn ear, and I believe it should be the other ear torn

-Glacier (22:20, 5/29/2020)

some stripes look too overblurred and some other stripes need to be smudged —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  22:30, May 29, 2020 (UTC)

Re uploaded --Silverfeather Be Happy! 23:07, May 29, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

- There are a couple of unfilled pixels on the image, please fill them in. - The stripes on his other images appear to be more jaggedy. - Please define and darken the shading. It also appears to be leaking away from the lineart. - Define the eye depth. - What's your light source? I can't exactly tell right now.

Let me know if you have any questions! ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<16:09, 5/30/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<16:09, 5/30/2020>

I see the unfilled in pixels. I will fill them in. For the stripes I will make them more jagged. And I will define the shading and darken in. Does eye depth mean add shading to the eye? And my light source is coming from the top right corner, shining down onto his back. - --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:17, May 30, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

And I am sorry for my questions, but by making the stripes more jaggedy, would it work if I smudged them in the right places. Or just redo the stripes to make them jagged? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 16:42, May 30, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

I don't quite know how to describe eye depth, but take Alderheart's refugee as an example. See how there's a wide range of colors there, thus giving it depth? The same should be applied here, of course, while sticking to Bumblestripe's eye color on his other images.

As for the light source, there are a few things that could be fixed/adjusted. I'll provide a screenshot later. Also, I think for the stripes you should redo the stripes to be more jagged, and smudge them slightly, as that is how it appears it was done on his other images. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<19:41, 5/30/2020> 've been looking for" data-rte-attribs=" style title=are you the one i've been looking for">show yourself, i'm ready to learn<19:41, 5/30/2020>

Re uploaded There's something unique about the stripes I just can't put my finger on... --Silverfeather Be Happy! 01:20, June 1, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Maybe smooth out the shading? There’s also some waste above his back by his torn ear and a white pixel by the same ear. —Sleekfang 14:58, June 1, 2020 (UTC)

Re uploaded --Silverfeather Be Happy! 18:22, June 1, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

The shading is very blotchy and is leaking away from the lineart in several places, such as the haunch, tail and face. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:35, June 2, 2020 (UTC)

Would you like me to shade closer to the lineart? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 00:43, June 3, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Unless you're trying to use a bounce light pattern, then you need to shade on the lineart at all times. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 00:44, June 3, 2020 (UTC)

Re Uploaded Hmm... is the leaking shading better? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 01:45, June 3, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Re Uploaded Removed waste from tail --Silverfeather Be Happy! 14:52, June 4, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Re Uploaded Smoothed out shading on ears --Silverfeather Be Happy! 14:57, June 4, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

smooth out the stripes? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  00:00, June 10, 2020 (UTC)

Re Uploaded Better? --Silverfeather Be Happy! 01:11, June 10, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

could you smooth them out more? —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  02:34, June 10, 2020 (UTC)

Could you give me a tip on how to do that? Smudging ins't really seeming to smooth it out. I'm really sorry if I am bad at this. --Silverfeather Be Happy! 14:47, June 10, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Actually, I am going to withdraw this image. I'm sorry. --Silverfeather Be Happy! 17:57, June 11, 2020 (UTC)Silverykittencat

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:48, June 12, 2020 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Re) ~ Declined

[[File:Dawnpelt.refugee.png]] So What Do Yall Think of It!Ravenripple13 (talk) 23:08, June 17, 2020 (UTC)

  • Don't thumb or align your images.
  • I believe the refugee in the file name needs to be lowercase.
  • You need to match Dawnpelt's other images--she has a lot more stripes.
  • Speaking of stripes, they should be blurred.
  • This image also needs shading.
  • Define the eye depth.
  • As far as I can tell Dawnpelt doesn't have any ear tufts--remove those please.

Sorry if this is a lot, let me know if you have any questions! ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<23:12, 6/17/2020>

Please continue to reupload over File:Dawnpelt.refugee.png, and remove the image backdrop shading. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:13, June 17, 2020 (UTC)

i Am Freaking out but okay sorry it won't let me put my sig but its me Ravenripple13 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ravenripple13 (talkcontribs)

Can you define the pupils more? She also seems a little cross-eyed. --Summerflower Cool for the Summer 23:25, June 17, 2020 (UTC)

It's okay, no worries. You're doing great so far ^^ As long as you address the critiques, then it'll be a breeze. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:26, June 17, 2020 (UTC)

Add some shading and her stripes should be more spaced out on her back as well. Maybe more blurred? Juniperclaw (talk) 00:22, June 18, 2020 (UTC)

Just going to add, Raven; make sure you comment when you reupload the image so that people can tell when you've made changes. Just simply comment with something along the lines of '''reuploaded''' ~~~~ to allow people to see. eilish ゴジラ (23:17, 18/6/2020)

Smooth out your shading, add more shading, and erase the waste that’s leaking out of the line art where you added shading. Make sure to refer to this chart for shading placement. Also, what program are you using? —Sleekfang 17:33, June 19, 2020 (UTC)

Raven, you still aren’t uploading your images correctly. Stop making new images that have similar names, and actually reupload over the Dawnpelt refugee file that you should be uploading over. Multiple users, including me, have already told you how to reupload over a file, and I’m honestly confused as to why you continue to ignore this and create new images. —Sleekfang 20:17, June 20, 2020 (UTC)


I GIVE UP YOU GUYS ARE STRESSING ME TO MUCH MAKE SOMEONE ELSE DO DAWNPELT!

Ravenripple13 (talk) 19:01, June 21, 2020 (UTC)

There’s no need for all caps. We’re trying to be reasonable and help. If you are unwilling to take criticism, that is your problem. But the rules of the project and how we do things here are clear. Just because we wouldn’t accept your image how it is now does not mean we were being mean or unreasonable. —Sleekfang 19:20, June 21, 2020 (UTC)

Declined due to user withdrawing. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:17, June 22, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 11:39, June 23, 2020 (UTC)

Quick Water (Re) - Withdrawn

[[File:Quick Water.refugee.png]] —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  22:11, June 8, 2020 (UTC)

Add/define the texture. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:18, June 8, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  22:20, June 8, 2020 (UTC)

The texture should be darker and more paint brush-like. The nose shouldn't be pink but instead black to match the set. The white on the chest should extend upwards to reach the chin and kinda around below it (see warrior and es image). I also think a little bit of white can be added on the lower parts of the haunches per the ancient, hunter and rogue. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:30, June 8, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  22:43, June 8, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit more? It's definitely more visible on her other images. – Ivy 23:15, June 8, 2020 (UTC)

reuploaded —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  23:30, June 8, 2020 (UTC)

Gonna have to keep hammering in that the texture does not match. Perhaps try using a different brush and it appears to vary in different opacities? It also isn't as linear as you have here. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:52, June 12, 2020 (UTC)

reup —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  20:20, June 12, 2020 (UTC)

Perhaps expand the shading? The face and main body look a little flat. ♥Star♥ bisexually me, mon amour<22:04, 6/17/2020>

reup —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  23:35, June 17, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the backleg closest to us, and define the shading depth there? The texture also still doesn't appear to match; try using multiple layers with different opacities to match the style? eilish ゴジラ (23:15, 18/6/2020)

withdrawn, i'm sorry. —Ripplewater (uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɥʇ)  15:36, June 23, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 22:42, June 24, 2020 (UTC)

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