Yellow tabby rogue (Ro) - Withdrawn[]
[[File:SS-3.rogue-6.png]] In honor of Dandelionkit’s dead kit file. rip ♡ Dharma ♡ «00:09, 11/3/20»
Poor Dandelion. but anyway, might you smooth the shading on the >---- leg in the front? It kinda ends abrupty. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3 05:44, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
Nope actually ignore that. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3 19:07, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
can you lighten the shading? —Cypressduskツ(text) 08:39, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
Sorry Cypress, I respectfully disagree. The shading is fine imo. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3 17:40, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
It could be lightened just a smidge. 17:43, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded ♡ Dharma ♡ «2:54, 11/6/20»
the light source is a bit conflicting, seeing as the shading on the legs is going <-- way, but on the face, its going --> way. —Cypressduskツ(text) 06:42, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Reup ♡ Dharma ♡ «7:28, 11/8/20»
I hate to be that one person, but i’m gonna withdraw due to being hung up on other images. ♡ Dharma ♡ «22:48, 11/9/20»
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:38, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Sunshine (Ro) ~ Declined[]
[[File:Sunshine.rogue.png]] Leaky shading will be fixed. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
Add some shading to the face/head. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:42, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Reups Do I need to smoothen the shading? And I know that the head shading is different I forgot what color I used for the tint ;-; User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig4 17:50, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Which direction is your light source? Because if it's meant to be coming from above (which I think your body indicates) then the shading on the head should be more below the head? I hope that makes sense I'm not to good at light sources :( — ☆ paper · finches ★ 20:09, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
My light is on the <--- back leg. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
Reups X2 fixed the leaking shading by the ear and smoothened the overall shading. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2 20:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Reups X3 added texture User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig4 20:56, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Depending on the light source, the face shading should be flipped. 20:58, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Do I have to flip my face shading since my light is on the bottom? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
I would flip the head shading horizontally. So more of the muzzle, chin and forehead are covered. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 21:08, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
I actually hate to be that person, but Sunshine's not a rogue. She's a Sister. The rogue images were only given to the original Sisters when they were first introduced because they were called rogues in the blurb for Squirrelflight's Hope. The cite on her page doesn't say rogue anywhere. The Sisters are their own group and I don't think they would warrant a rogue images. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:31, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
That's okay. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig4 00:04, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
Archiving. — max it is the real thing, (20:33, 11/11/2020)
Dandelionkit (K) ~ Withdrawn[]
[[File:Dandelionkit.kit.png]] I know that the shading is horrible and will tweak later. Same goes for the stripes. Thoughts? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
Reuploaded fumbled with shading and added paler muzzle. How does it look? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig4 22:00, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
The shading is leaking on the top of the tail, and where is your lightsource coming from? ♡ Dharma ♡ «6:49, 11/12/20»
the stripes should be a bit thicker, i think. ~ Fawn Happy Times() 03:11, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
The colors appear slightly off, especially for the paler parts, stripes and maybe earpink, but I think I gave you the file? Perhaps double check those. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:00, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
Withdrawing due to finding interest in a new image sorry ;-; User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig4 05:53, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
Archived. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:54, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
Tumblekit (Star) ~ Declined[]
[[File:Tumblekit.star.png]] woag a kitten after my year-long disappearance Snowtail Christmas! 04:02, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
This is already reserved and Lark still has another day to post it, I think. —Jayce(04:08, 11/18/2020)
Oh, really? I looked on the reservation table and didn't find it at the time. I'll ask about it though --Snowtail Christmas! 04:46, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
Either way, their reservation is still valid until the end of the day and this is declined for now. Please make sure to double check the reservation table; Crtl F is a wonderful thing. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:15, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
Yep, alright! I’ll leave this to be taken off if Lark uploads theirs. Snowtail Christmas! 22:05, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:44, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Cheddar (ghost) - Declined[]
File:Cheddar.ghost.png I hope this general design is alright, since she didn't have much of a description. I also noticed that I'm still listed as a kit on the project member list, but I believe I was supposed to be promoted to apprentice? If someone could update that, I would appreciate it! Aethalcyon (talk) 22:33, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
So unforunately, due to her description only being "a she-cat", we can't actually give her an image unless a proper pelt description is given as anything would be based on assumption. Due to that, I'll have to decline this image unfornately, sorry! But, I will fix up your listing in the project :D — max it is the real thing, (22:36, 19/11/2020)
Oh, ok, good to know. Thanks! Aethalcyon (talk) 22:48, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:04, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
Gray striped BloodClan cat (BC) - Withdrawn[]
[[File:RP-2.bc-11.png]] This is my charart. —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 17:47, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
kits start with the heading of "For Evaluation". And smooth the shading. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
The shading is also leaking everywhere, and there is a dot of waste to the right of the —-> ear. ♡ Dharma ♡ «22:47, 11/9/20»
There's waste in a lot of places. ~ Fawn Happy Times() 07:30, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded , I smoothed the shading, erased the dot of waste to the right of the ear, I also think I got most of the waste as Fawn said, tell me if I got the leaking shading, I'm kinda confused on that part. User:Doestrike/Sig2 13:51, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
a basic indicator of leaky shading is blank pixels of shading along the lineart. just add more shading along the lining and you’ll be golden ^.^ a good buffer against leaking is to paint outside the lineart on your shading layer before blurring/smudging. —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 15:33, 11/10/2020
So just add more shading alongside the lineart? User:Doestrike/Sig2 15:35, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
other than that, shading could be expanded and smoothed everywhere and added to the face/ears and the -> shoulder. earpink can be desaturated just a couple of ticks. —autumn xmas bells are ringing! 15:36, 11/10/2020
Ok, I'll work on that! User:Doestrike/Sig2 15:40, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded - This any better? I added shading to the shoulder, smoothed/expanded shading pretty much everywhere. User:Doestrike/Sig2 00:16, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
Shading could still use some smoothing out. — max it is the real thing, (04:20, 12/11/2020)
shading is still leaking in some places. ~ Fawn Happy Times() 13:01, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
there is some waste near the back --> leg. ~Banana Spirit Flying Higher(21:39, 11/12/2020)
A claw on > this paw isn't filled in. Av Out of sight and out of mind (22:04, 11/12/2020)
Reuploaded. I filled the claw in, where is the waste at the back of the leg though? And is the leaking shading better? User:Doestrike/Sig2 15:17, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
There's still leaking shading alongside the --> front leg and the --> back leg. Shading could also use some smoothing out, and it could use some depth. ♥ Star red and black ♥<16:45, 11/13/2020>
To emphasize on Star's point, a layer of thinner shading would help with the depth. Lmk if you'd like a reference. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
Reuploaded Better? I will work on the depth more. User:Doestrike/Sig3 21:46, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
Shading could be smoothed overall and make sure to add some shading along the face, ears and in the mouth a bit Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:27, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
there is some unfilled space at the top of the tongue. ~Banana Spirit Flying Higher(12:59, 11/17/2020)
^the top teeth haven’t been filled. Snowtail Christmas! 04:56, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
Reups Better? User:Doestrike/Sig3 02:17, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
shading can still be smoothened quite a lot. ~ Fawn Happy Times(04:35, 11/19/2020)
Could you expand the shading on the belly and face? And also add some shading to the tongue, claws and teeth on the collar. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 17:33, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
can you add some eye depth? Shading is also leaking in some places like the <-- foreleg. also, i think there needs to be more shading depth. ~Banana Spirit Flying Higher(11:51, 11/22/2020)
also, i think shading can be defined, and add some shading to the ears? ~Banana Spirit Flying Higher(07:21, 11/23/2020)
Still working? I figure a nudge due to everyone being busy with the holidays might help here. —Jayce(00:38, 11/25/2020)
Yep, I'm still working on it, I've just been busy because of the holidays. User:Doestrike/Sig3 16:06, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
I apologize if this has already been stated, but can you add some shading to the earpink? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Think I'm gonna withdraw...—Døestrikechapsrubpage() 22:30, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
Archiving. —Jayce(16:56, 12/2/2020)
Solid Golden BloodClan Cat - Declined[]
[[File:RP-2.bc-4.png]] bad bad bad. ~ Fawn Happy Times() 12:15, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
The eye color should be a lightish blue/cyan color. It definitely should not be that dark. If you look at the official art, you'll see that the eye color is a light shade of blue. User:Doestrike/Sig2 15:38, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
I think the shading could be expanded a little bit and smoothed out. —Ivy ☆ 16:20, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
i colorpicked the eye color through the rogue image? ~ Fawn Happy Times() 20:07, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
Try adding some gradience from the official image in the eye, then. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:04, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
I think you've uploaded this in the wrong file, this is the rogue file. ~Ripple ☆ 04:13, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
Fixed this one up for you; please continue to reupload over File:RP-2.bc-4.png. — max it is the real thing, (04:19, 12/11/2020)
reups? ~ Fawn Happy Times() 13:01, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
I'd add a thinner layer of shading to give it some depth, and smooth the shading still. Try using a 5-10px blur tool. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig4 18:05, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
there's a lot of waste leaking outside the lineart from the shading madie the wicked witch of the west 21:06, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
reups ~ Fawn Happy Times() 21:34, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
there's still a lot of waste around the legs, tail, and head madie the wicked witch of the west 22:05, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
reups i believe? ~ Fawn Happy Times() 11:34, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
I do not think the tail shading has to cover the whole tail, I think you can erase some at the top of the tail, but what do I know? User:Doestrike/Sig2 15:27, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
reups. it was leaking a bit. ~ Fawn Happy Times() 22:25, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
I feel if the pupils are a bit dialated - could you fiddle with the left one? (our left, cat's right). The shading needs to be expanded, smoothened and have more depth. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望 23:41, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Add some shading to the lower chest and the flank/low belly. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:16, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
make the teeth a different color from the tongue, and there is waste both from the shading and leaking out of the collar tooth, claws, around the -> front paw, on the <- side of the head, and a few pixels between the -> ear and the back madie the wicked witch of the west 19:45, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
reups. i didnt really get the teeth bit? the teeth is white, and the tongue is a pinkish color. i've redone the shading too. ~ Fawn Happy Times() 11:18, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
The shading looks pretty good! Can you smoothen it out a tad? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
I would say it should be smoothened by a lot, and the shading should have depth. Shading also needs to be placed on the collar and the fur between the head line and collar. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望 21:09, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
are we talking about the same teeth? the teeth in the mouth appear to be the same color as the tongue, is what i meant. if they are different colors, my apologies, it's probably just the way my screen shows colors. madie the wicked witch of the west 22:07, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
^^The teeth in the mouth don’t appear coloured to me either, they look to be the same as the tongue? Snowtail Christmas! 04:55, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
reups oh yes i was a bit confused about the teeth bit. that should be fine now? there was depth, i guess it just wasnt clear. ive also lowered the opacity of the layer a bit. ~ Fawn Happy Times(05:44, 11/18/2020)
This is looking really good! Can you expand the shading just about everywhere except the tail? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:21, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
reups is it a bit overblurred? ~ Fawn Happy Times(11:15, 11/19/2020)
reups fiddled with leg shading. ~ Fawn Happy Times(11:18, 11/19/2020)
Add some depth to the eyes? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:05, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
reups ~ Fawn Happy Times(06:44, 11/21/2020)
smooth out the shading on the --> foreleg and the back madie the wicked witch of the west 15:33, 22 November 2020 (UTC)
reups better? ~ Fawn Happy Times(21:32, 11/24/2020)
theres waste around the image madie the wicked witch of the west 01:12, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
reups think that is it for the waste? ~ Fawn Happy Times(05:29, 11/25/2020)
Can you add some shading to the belly? Also, for future reference, I would recommend having a look at the shading charts to help with some basic placement guides and whatnot. — max it is the real thing, (00:57, 26/11/2020)
there is shading on the belly? ~ Fawn Happy Times(06:09, 11/26/2020)
i believe you're looking at a different part of the image. the part i'm assuming max means is the unshaded area that falls between the arm and the hind leg, which would be the belly. i can redline it if you want? madie the wicked witch of the west 06:11, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
oh, i see now. thanks, ill work on it. ~ Fawn Happy Times(07:50, 11/26/2020)
this should have a lighter muzzle to match the rogue and official art. also, i believe one of the claws on the <-- paw is filled in with pink? could you also add/define shading on the claws? madie the wicked witch of the west 18:04, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
reups? ~ Fawn Happy Times(08:14, 11/27/2020)
there is waste around the image, and the uppermost claw on the <-- paw is still pink :P also, i believe the eye color is leaking out of the eyes and onto the face a little bit? madie the wicked witch of the west 08:53, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
reups. ~ Fawn Happy Times(13:14, 11/30/2020)
Define the shading depth everywhere but the tail, and define the light on > this back leg. Av Out of sight and out of mind (17:09, 11/30/2020)
Maybe darken the shading to the right of the upper teeth on the collar? —Døestrikechapsrubpage(14:49, 3 December 2020 (UTC))
reups? ~ Fawn Happy Times(08:58, 12/07/2020)
Fawn, did you accidentally lighten the shading instead of darkening it? You need to darken it a few ticks, as the image is now considerably flat and lacking shape. Av Out of sight and out of mind (16:24, 12/07/2020)
reups? ~ Fawn Happy Times(09:03, 12/11/2020)
You need to smoothen the shading a lot. —Sakura ✧.* (16:20, 11 December 2020 (UTC))
Hasn't this hit the one month limit? ♡ Dharma ♡ «19:38, 12/11/20»
I think so? —Sakura ✧.* (19:59, 11 December 2020 (UTC))
reups i think it was smoothened enough. ~ Fawn Happy Times(22:20, 12/11/2020)
add/define the shading on the <-- ear madie the wicked witch of the west 23:51, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
reups, better? ~ Fawn Happy Times(01:17, 12/12/2020)
The shading still needs to be smoothened, to the point where it looks like a gradient. —Sakura ✧.* (01:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC))
there's waste around the image, also could you add some shading to the <-- collar tooth? madie the wicked witch of the west 01:57, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
Declined due to the one month limit. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:56, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Archiving. —Jayce(16:49, 12/14/2020)
Ginger kittypet (KP) - Declined[]
[[File:DOTC-2.kittypet-2.png]] ♡ Dharma ♡ «23:32, 12/17/20»
I believe Cypress reserved this before you. Pretty though —Sakura ✧.* (00:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC))
Oh. I that case you can decline this :T ♡ Dharma ♡ «1:05, 12/18/20»
Declined as per above. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:55, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Archiving. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 03:21, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
Snow (Sister) (Lo) ~ Withdrawn[]
[[File:Snow (Sister).loner.png]] Thank you Vec for your help! User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
I think you could add more shading depth. But this is really good! ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望20:54, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
Everywhere? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
Overall, but especially on the legs. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望21:02, 17 November 2020 (UTC)~
Reups Thanks Coral! The depth was there, just made it a little more visible. —Sakura ✧.* () 21:12, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
could you expand the shading on the farthest hind leg? madie the wicked witch of the west 23:12, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
Reups la la laaa —Sakura ✧.* () 23:29, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
smudge the ear shading a bit? madie the wicked witch of the west 02:56, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
sorry, meant ear pink*, not shading madie the wicked witch of the west 02:57, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
Reups is this better? —Sakura ✧.* () 03:03, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
Reups x 2 I fidgeted with the back leg shading. —Sakura ✧.* () 17:06, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
the overall shading can be smoothened out a bit, and expanded on the legs. ~Banana Spirit Flying Higher(07:23, 11/23/2020)
Reups x3 More fidgeting with shading. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig3
smoothen the shading on the hind leg furthest away from us. ~ Fawn Happy Times(04:28, 11/19/2020)
Reups it was kinda smooth already but hope it's better. —Sakura ✧.* () 04:41, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
expand the shading on the foreleg furthest away from us just a tad?~ Fawn Happy Times(11:43, 11/19/2020)
Can I have a second opinion on that please? —Sakura ✧.* () 17:10, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
True, Fawn. Star, the shading on the right forepaw could be smoothened, and over the shading on the legs could be expanded. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望17:12, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
It could be expanded just a tad. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:17, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Okay just to confirm: Smoothen the shading on the right forepaw and expand the shading on the legs a tad. —Sakura ✧.* () 17:20, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Reups it may look like nothing happened but I did my best to smoothen the shading and expand it a tad. —Sakura ✧.* () 23:17, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
reups x 2 we might have overblurred shading... User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
It's not overblurred, but I do think it could be expanded on places like the neck. Perhaps kind of like how Buster's loner is shaded. —Jayce(18:47, 11/21/2020)
Reups thanks jayce for the reference :) User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
shading can be expanded on the foreleg furthest away from us. ~Banana Spirit Flying Higher(11:44, 11/22/2020)
Why was this image reverted? The image needs the shading, half of this looks like a blank canvas and there's no shading on the head or ears or even shoulders, when there really should be to bring out the muscles and shape of the cat. —Jayce(18:26, 11/22/2020)
Sorry about that User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Reups looks like the shading leaked. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
smooth the shoulder shading madie the wicked witch of the west 05:00, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
Reup this didn't make much of a difference and I still have a feeling like it's overblurred. I'll tweak it more later. —Sakura ✧.* () 21:05, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
shading is leaking in a lot of places. ~ Fawn Happy Times(08:48, 11/26/2020)
Can I have a second opinion please? —Sakura ✧.* () 15:40, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
some places i can see it leaking are the tail, the neck, shoulder, and a bit on the belly, towards the haunch. also, smooth the shading depth specifically out a bit? madie the wicked witch of the west 20:49, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
The shading could overall be darkened a fraction. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望03:05, 30 November 2020 (UTC)
Reup —Sakura ✧.* (03:29, 30 November 2020 (UTC))
Can you add a little more shading to the <—- back leg? ♡ Dharma ♡ «7:21, 12/1/20»
Reups This looks bad I'll smoothen the shading when I can. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
In my opinion, you just need to on the back leg farthest from us. It looks fine everywhere else. Av Out of sight and out of mind (16:50, 12/02/2020)
Reuploaded I still feel like that back leg is off... —Sakura ✧.* (17:53, 2 December 2020 (UTC))
reups x 2 fidgeted with the back leg more. —Sakura ✧.* (00:22, 4 December 2020 (UTC))
lighten the shading on the front leg closest to us? and maybe a tad on the back of the neck as well madie the wicked witch of the west 00:52, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded is this better? —Sakura ✧.* (01:26, 6 December 2020 (UTC))
i think the leg shading can still be a bit more expanded. ~ Fawn Happy Times(09:04, 12/11/2020)
Reuploaded User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2 16:01, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
Given your source, I don't believe there should be shading placed on the top of the neck. The shading could also be expanded on the hind leg closest to us, and you could expand the shading on the front leg to reach up to the shoulder. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 18:03, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded i'll smoothen the shading in a minute. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Reuploaded x 2 I now feel like I overblurred the shading. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
the only place it looks overblurred to me is the closest front leg, erase some of the shading on it to define the light source a bit better madie the wicked witch of the west 23:35, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Weird! I don't think I blurred it at all. maybe I smudged it too much, giving it that overblurred look. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Reuploaded again I'll smooth that shading out in a sec. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Reuploaded smoothened that shading out. —Sakura ✧.* (17:13, 14 December 2020 (UTC))
Define the neck and face shading a bit? —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 19:21, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
I didn't add any shading to the neck, so may I get a second opinion please? —Sakura ✧.* (20:01, 14 December 2020 (UTC))
The chest and face shading could be defined everso slightly - I'm pretty sure Doe meant the chest, where you've already got some shading. — max it is the real thing, (20:30, 14/12/2020)
Reuploaded, is this better? —Sakura ✧.* (20:35, 14 December 2020 (UTC))
Instead of blurring it, I think you could just sharpen it a little instead. Also, looking between the upload differences, the front leg that's outstretched, looks a little blotchy now. — max it is the real thing, (20:38, 14/12/2020)
Reuploaded I think the depth is making it appear blotchy. White cats are more difficult than I thought. —Sakura ✧.* (20:45, 14 December 2020 (UTC))
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:39, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
shading can be smoothened on the front leg closest to us ~ Fawn Happy Times(01:33, 12/15/2020)
Reuploaded it's going downhill for me —Sakura ✧.* (01:56, 15 December 2020 (UTC))
The shading looks a little blotchy on the ——> back leg and the ——> front leg. ♡ Dharma ♡ «02:38, 12/15/20»
shading can still be smoothened out quite a bit. ~ Fawn Happy Times(04:28, 12/15/2020)
Reuploaded —Sakura ✧.* (04:44, 15 December 2020 (UTC))
Withdrawing due to technical difficulties —Sakura ✧.* (16:19, 16 December 2020 (UTC))
Sol (App) - Withdrawn[]
[[File:Sol.apprentice.png]] —Cypressduskツ(text) 10:24, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
I believe the tail tip needs to be more white like on the other images? ♡ Dharma ♡ «14:49, 12/8/20»
Actually, the white everywhere looks very gray, and needs to be brightened up. I also think the shading could be defined a tad on the non-white. Av Out of sight and out of mind (17:31, 12/08/2020)
reuploaded —Cypressduskツ(text) 17:53, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
There's a bit of waste on his back. ~Ripple ☆ 20:16, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
There's also some around the tail and paws, as well as the head. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望20:43, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded —Cypressduskツ(text) 05:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
There is still waste around the paw. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2 05:25, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
there is also waste outside the tail poof and the -> ear madie the wicked witch of the west 05:57, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded —Cypressduskツ(text) 10:49, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
the white looks a bit gray, mind brightening it a tad? madie the wicked witch of the west 19:29, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
The orange also looks a little brighter on his other images. —Jayce(20:02, 12/9/2020)
Can you define or darken the shading on the belly? —Sakura ✧.* (20:10, 9 December 2020 (UTC))
I feel like the texture is making the base look darker then it should be? ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望22:39, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
reuploaded for the ginger - but there isnt any shading on the belly, my light source is coming from below. and for the white, on my file, i actually have pure white, its just that the wiki is messing up the colors, so may i have a second opinion about that? —Cypressduskツ(text) 15:31, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
The white should be a creamier color - I don't believe I actually used pure white at all on the kit. I suggest making the shading tint red rather than black (think that's what you're using?) to help match to the set better since they all have a red tint. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:50, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Withdrawn, sorry. —Cypressduskツ(text) 13:40, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:39, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
Minor characters/Ravenpaw's Path (BC) - Withdrawn[]
[[File:RP-1.bc-2.png]] I hope I named the file right? Also, I will mess with the shading a bit more. —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 14:35, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
The shading should be expanded much more. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望14:38, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Yeah, I'm going to expand it more and stuff like that. —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 14:43, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Reups? I didn't get all the shading, but is this going in the right direction? —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 14:49, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Pretty good for a beginner! Can you smooth the shading out a lot? —Sakura ✧.* (16:19, 8 December 2020 (UTC))
Expand shading even more. Also, could you make sure that you add shading depth? And could you make your first layer of shading much lighter to give the imprerssion of the depth? ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望16:22, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
How do I add shading depth? Do I just make a second darker layer of shading? Yeah, I've never done that before. —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 16:29, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
You have a light first layer, then the second layer of shading should be dark enough that the image looks 3D. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望16:33, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Ok, I'm going to focus on smoothing/expanding my shading before adding the second layer, unless you disagree? —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 16:36, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Reups? Better? I lightened the opacity, and smoothened the shading, though I might have to smooth it more. (P.S I haven't added the shading depth yet, will do that) —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 17:21, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
I've renamed this to File:RP-1.bc-2.png, please continue to reupload over that. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:23, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Define the shading and shading depth everywhere, and define the stripes. Av Out of sight and out of mind (17:31, 12/08/2020)
Expand the shading everywhere as well. And yes, it must be smoothen with a high ocpacity. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望18:09, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Reups? I think. I smoothened it as well. I will get to the depth and defining the stripes/shading later. —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 18:55, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
reupsx2. Still need to do the above. —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 18:56, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
shading is leaking in lots of places? ~ Fawn Happy Times(20:42, 12/08/2020)
Could I get a second opinion please? Also, if so, where? Because you should know by know that I suck at identifying where my shading is leaking? —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 22:48, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
On the legs. And if you can, smudge the earpink. ♡ Dharma ♡ «22:58, 58, 12/8/20»
if this isnt part of what you are going to get to later (apologies if it is) but can you still expand the shading? its a bit flat at the moment. ~ Fawn Happy Times(04:28, 12/09/2020)
I'm going to add shading depth when I can, so that will help. —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 13:59, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
Reups. Sorry for not uploading in a while, had some stuff going on, but I added shading depth, so is it better? —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 15:29, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
reupsx2 —Døestrikechapsrubpage() 19:33, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Can you smudge the shading? —Sakura ✧.* (20:19, 14 December 2020 (UTC))
add shading to the <-- ear and blend the earpink some madie the wicked witch of the west 21:27, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Added shading to the ear and smudged the earpink, Starshine, I already smudged the shading, do you have any specific places in mind, or do you think all places could use a little more smudging? —Døestrikechapsrubpage(21:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC))
Smudge it a bit more everywhere except the earpink User:Star that Shimmers on water/Sig
Forgot to actually upload, so reups. —Døestrikechapsrubpage(21:46, 14 December 2020 (UTC))
there's waste leaking out of the claws and one of the paw pads on the <-- paw isnt filled in madie the wicked witch of the west 19:22, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
actually, i believe this one shouldn't have claws at all? madie the wicked witch of the west 20:17, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
Sorry if this is a repeat comment, but the shading could be expanded and smoothed overall. Have a look at the shading placement chart, to get a basic idea of where your shading could be placed. — max it is the real thing, (23:09, 17/12/2020)
Still working? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:13, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
I think I'm gonna withdraw sorry. —Døestrikechapsrubpage(00:17, 24 December 2020 (UTC))
Archiving. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:09, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
Snowfur (Star) - Withdrawn[]
[[File:Snowfur.star.png]] oa is fernflight (i think?); tweaked to match the base to the set —Cypressduskツ(text) 16:05, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
The shading is a bit blotchy. Or is it just my screen? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
The lineart on the --> shoulder seems blurred? ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望20:45, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Recede the shading on the tail and flank. Av Out of sight and out of mind (17:22, 12/14/2020)
imo the flank shading is okay, but I do agree about the tail shading needing a bit of tweaking... it is rather dark at the base of it. —Jayce(17:23, 12/15/2020)
Still working? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:22, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
Withdrawn sorry. —Cypressduskツ(text) 08:30, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
Archiving. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:26, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
Tri colored kittypet (KP) - Declined[]
[[File:WR.kittypet-2.png]] I tried to match the pattern. Will remove waste later. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望18:29, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
I think the head lineart and the chest lineart could be smoothed a little; have a look here for inspiration? — max it is the real thing, (00:13, 16/12/2020)
there's a bit of waste outside the white front legs, and a speck between the tail and the hind leg. madie the wicked witch of the west 23:22, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
Reups That was part of my comment when I posted Madie^^ ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望02:04, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
my bad, i hadn't realized when i posted :P could you maybe define the shading on the --> front leg? madie the wicked witch of the west 02:36, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
I think the black stripe on the hind leg should be more horizontal? The shading on the pawpads could be defined as well. Aethalcyon (talk) 18:47, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Reups, yup yup totally fine. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望03:24, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
So I did a little bit of digging and I believe they have a black collar? It's not super noticeable but it's there. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:19, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
Reups, my bad I don't have the manga copies. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望03:34, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
Could you add a little bit of light to the muzzle, and also define the depth on the brown of the belly? — max it is the real thing, (22:26, 23/12/2020)
One week without uploads. Sorry Coral, but I do have to decline this based on the rules. Feel free to repost, or if someone else wants this, they can take it and post after the section is archived. —Jayce(15:27, 12/29/2020)
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:28, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Striped Golden Kittypet (KP) ~ For Approval[]
[[File:WR.kittypet-1.png]] hm. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 17:47, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
This needs to match the graphic novel appearance. All colors should match the colored version as well. Av Out of sight and out of mind (18:22, 12/23/2020)
shoot, i didn't see that photo, ill match it in a second, thanks! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 05:47, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
can you link the colored version? I'm currently on mobile and won't be home any time soon. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 05:48, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
I'm trying to find the colored version, I'll get back as soon as I can. Av Out of sight and out of mind (05:49, 12/24/2020)
Look at these magical images. There you go, Brambleshade. Av Out of sight and out of mind (06:00, 12/24/2020)
Still working on this? —Jayce(15:26, 12/29/2020)
Declined due to lack of work. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:31, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:11, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
ginger kittypet (KP) - Declined[]
[[File:DTC-1.kittypet-2.png]] gee i sure do love having school and a physics test on christmas —Cypressduskツ(text) 07:21, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
I've renamed this to File:DTC-1.kittypet-2.png, so please continue to reupload over that :D Also, could you taper the stripes at the ends somewhat? They look rather paint-brushy at the moment. — max it is the real thing, (07:25, 25/12/2020)
Could you perhaps define the light in the ear? —Jayce(19:25, 12/25/2020)
And perhaps make the stripes thicker, and maybe add some kind of pattern to it, if that makes any sense at all? Like, a rule to how you might draw the stripes. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望20:59, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
add some shading to the shoulder? madie the wicked witch of the west 01:42, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Still working? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:30, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Declined due to lack of work. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:38, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
I'll take over. Av Out of sight and out of mind (04:54, 1/03/2021)
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:50, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
Red tabby BloodClan cat (BC) - Declined[]
[[File:RP-2.bc-5.png]] ~ Fawn Happy Times(13:39, 12/14/2020)
I thought you had to wait till the other one was archived? User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Yes, you're generally supposed to wait... but I don't know if Fawn was completely aware of that. Everyone gets one chance, so bear this in mind whenever you post another image. You need to wait until the withdrawn/declined/approved image is archived before you take another one. —Jayce(16:48, 12/14/2020)
The eyes seem to be darker than on the rogue (the middle color is the base). Also, the cream tail-tip should stretch all the way to the last black stripe like so. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:11, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Also, the claws should be removed, as this cat is shown without them. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:36, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a little bit overall. —Ivy ☆ 21:27, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
you forgot the get rid of the dew claw on the <-- front paw :) madie the wicked witch of the west 01:08, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
reups ~ Fawn Happy Times(01:30, 12/15/2020)
There should still be a line to indicate there is a dewclaw there on that outstretched paw - shown here and on other BloodClan cat's edited to remove their dog teeth claws. — max it is the real thing, (01:33, 15/12/2020)
Can you give the stripe descending from the shoulder a pointy tip? ♡ Dharma ♡ «05:48, 12/15/20»
The stripes on the flank should stretch down to the stomach; right now they're parallel to the stomach and heading towards the shoulder. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:09, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
they look a bit cross-eyed madie the wicked witch of the west 23:06, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
reups havent really fixed vecs comment yet ill fix soon. ~ Fawn Happy Times(06:52, 12/17/2020)
add some shading at the bottom of the chest, like the area between the front legs? madie the wicked witch of the west 01:18, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
reups was this what you meant?~ Fawn Happy Times(12:45, 12/25/2020)
My comment still stands. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 18:33, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(15:29, 12/29/2020)
Declined due to lack of work. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:45, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:36, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
Ginger rogue (Ro) - Declined[]
[[File:DTC-1.rogue-2.png]] I'll fix the leaking shading in a second. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
the light source on the hind legs should be flipped to the other side, and could you smooth the texture a bit? this looks nice! madie the wicked witch of the west 20:59, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded for the leaky shading, and thank you madie! I'll get to that later today :) —Sakura ✧.* (21:03, 18 December 2020 (UTC))
There's a stray pixel over the back, towards the hind legs. And I think the shading beside the haunches could be smoothed a bit? Aethalcyon (talk) 22:12, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
there is waste around the head, tail and paws. ~ Fawn Happy Times(23:00, 12/18/2020)
You need to expand the shading everywhere, and add depth. ~Coralflame暗黒 絶望23:05, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
The lightsource is going different ways on the back and front legs ♡ Dharma ♡ «23:11, 12/18/20»
I've renamed this to File:DTC-1.rogue-2.png, please continue to reupload over that. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded —Sakura ✧.* (16:04, 19 December 2020 (UTC))
add some shading on the ears, and the shading still needs to be flipped on the farthest hind paw madie the wicked witch of the west 16:35, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded —Sakura ✧.* (17:49, 19 December 2020 (UTC))
Maybe add some shading to the face and smooth out the texture? It stands out a lot. ♡ Dharma ♡ «21:08, 12/19/20»
Reuploaded how's this? There is texture but it's barely visible—Sakura ✧.* (23:05, 19 December 2020 (UTC))
There isn't any eye color for some reason ♡ Dharma ♡ «13:11, 12/20/20»
Reuploaded the white is the eyeshine, but I made the eyes darker so that should help. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Could you smooth out the earpink a bit? ~Ripple ☆ 22:25, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
is there any shading on the ear closest? it appears flat madie the wicked witch of the west 22:26, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded —Sakura ✧.* (23:10, 21 December 2020 (UTC))
The shading depth could be defined overall? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:21, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded i'll fix the shading depth in a second —Sakura ✧.* (18:06, 22 December 2020 (UTC))
Just popping in to say, Starry, generally the idea when you say reuploaded, is that you've addressed the comments presented to you. Seeing as within your last two uploads, it was only Vec's that needed addressing, it is more advised that you address that before anything else (unless of course, you saw other issues). In future, make sure you're addressing the comments as they're presented to you as it makes the approval process easier for yourself - speaking from moons of experience. — max it is the real thing, (07:08, 24/12/2020)
Reuploaded vec's comment is addressed now (I think) User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
The shading should reflect the contour of the muzzle and not sit at the bottom. A good example would be this image, which follows the shape of the muzzle and makes it 3D. Av Out of sight and out of mind (01:28, 12/29/2020)
Reuploaded —Sakura ✧.* (01:48, 29 December 2020 (UTC))
define the light on the farthest front leg a bit? madie the wicked witch of the west 03:31, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
Really thinking there should be some shading in that ear with the ear pink. It stands out a lot and ears are generally not very flat on cats. —Jayce(15:27, 12/29/2020)
Reuploaded I shaded the earpink, but may I get a second opinion on the light please? —Sakura ✧.* (18:15, 29 December 2020 (UTC))
Can you make the earpink a little darker and more saturated to match the pelt color more? Looking good! :) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (19:44,12/29/2020)
Reuploaded Thank you Bramble! User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2
Could you add a bit of shading depth on the belly? ~Ripple ☆ 23:57, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
Reuploaded brought back the texture as well. —Sakura ✧.* (00:29, 1 January 2021 (UTC))
define the shading depth on the front leg farthest from us madie the wicked witch of the west 01:05, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Reuploaded I think I got it ^^ —Sakura ✧.* () 05:33, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
The shading depth could still be defined overall and the light on the <--- foreleg Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:53, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
I also think the shading in the middle could be receeded somewhat, as I don't think it needs to be up so high as the rest of your shading doesn't extend that much. — max it is the real thing, (21:23, 04/1/2021)
Still working, Starry? — max it is the real thing, (21:40, 08/1/2021)
Over one week without uploads... pretty sure this'll be declined, as per the rules. Unless I'm mixing up things again. —Jayce(07:31, 1/10/2021)
Archiving. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:54, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
Pure white she-cat (star) ~ Declined[]
[[File:Se-10.star-9.png]] Yes the shading did come out blotchy, I'll fix it.
—Sakura ✧.* (20:11, 18 January 2021 (UTC))
maybe smudge the earpink a little? this is cute! *ﾟ furze *ﾟ °ₒ uwu ₒ ° 20:15, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
Sorry to say, but this character wasn't given a rank. They were just seen as a regular rank-unspecified cat mingling with the cats who were tending to the large ginger tom, and that was before the starclan cats appeared. In the direct text, it says "and a pure white she-cat stood there watching, her pelt ruffled." (Ts, page 1-2.) It never outright states her rank when she appears, and that's the reason why i removed the reservation. ♡ Dharma ♡ «20:31, 1/18/21»
Oh, will this be declined? —Sakura ✧.* (22:06, 18 January 2021 (UTC))
Yes, per my statement above. ♡ Dharma ♡ «22:41, 1/18/21»
Archiving. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:23, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
White BloodClan cat (Ro) - Withdrawn[]
[[File:TS-2.rogue-1.png]] Pain. Av Out of sight and out of mind (03:03, 1/16/2021)
could you smooth out the shading depth on the belly? madie the wicked witch of the west 03:45, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind (02:36, 1/18/2021)
Can you perhaps curve the shading for the haunch and shoulder to show that it's there? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:42, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
Reuploaded Av Out of sight and out of mind (02:37, 1/20/2021)
Sorry to break CBA, but I think the shading on the haunch and shoulder could be more smoothed out. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (01:17,1/21/2021)
The shading for the shoulder/hips could also be tapered a bit. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:20, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Per the new description, this needs to be short-haired and have scars over the face. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 23:31, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
Withdrawing Busy with other things. Av Out of sight and out of mind (02:44, 1/22/2021)
Archiving. ♡ Dharma ♡ «15:38, 1/22/21»
White kit (Kit) - Withdrawn[]
[[File:TS-1.kit-1.png]]
First one! I hope it's good. I'll fix the shading in a sec -Lavender A light in the dark 20:29, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
i can't really tell where the light is coming from, are you referring to a shading template? *ﾟ furze *ﾟ °ₒ uwu ₒ ° 21:34, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
Smoothen the shading, and add some light on the tail? Hailsnow (talk) 21:53, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
Will withdraw, I want to do a different image. -Lavender A light in the dark 20:02, 31 January 2021 (UTC)