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Tweaking

Alderheart (MC) - Tweaked

OA was me, tweaked to match the stripes better. I had a hard time with the stripes, so any further suggestions for them are welcome. I'd also like permission to fix the shading a little bit as it's kind of sloppy and doesn't really have a lot of depth. —Ivy ☆ 03:14, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

^Permission granted for the shading Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 03:31, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. So sorry that it took me so long to reupload; I completely forgot about this. —Ivy ☆ 13:14, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

Spiderleg (W) - Tweaked

OA is me, tweaked to recede haunch shading and lighten it some ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 14:28, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading could be receded more —spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 22:06, 5/06/2020

Re-Up! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 13:01, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe fix up the light source on the haunch, tail and <--- foreleg? Shading seems a bit overblurred and the light source isn't as clearly defined too; also there are areas where it appears shading is leaking onto other areas as if it's overblurred Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:36, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Re-Up! not sure about this- might change it later? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 17:33, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

I'm really not sure why the shading was added back to cover the haunch so extremely; the tweak was voted in for removing shading from the haunch, because there was too much, and we're back to even more than the og. Fixing it in other ways, per Vec, wouldn't result in doing the opposite of the tweak reasoning.—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 23:18, 5/10/2020

Re-Up! hope this is better? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 00:13, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Compared to the set, he now looks too light. Can you darken him more to match better? --Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 00:10, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

The shading is still very blotchy too Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:31, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Re-Up! better? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 23:26, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) - Tweaked

OA is me, tweaked to fix shading and eye color. I just redid the shading. --Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 01:14, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth the tail shading some? Looks much better overall.—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 14:24, 5/07/2020

Reuploaded Thank you! I'm pretty happy with it too :) --Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 22:21, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add a little more depth to the chest shading, and smooth out the back leg shading near the knee area some as well? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (21:18, 08/5/2020)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 22:46, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the top of the back leg shading anymore, its still quite abrupt imo — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (00:31, 10/5/2020)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 22:58, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth the haunch, top shoulder and tail shading a bit more? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:32, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 23:29, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Berrynose (Re) ~ Tweaked

OA is me, tweaking to match Alt warrior. Might define the shading or smth?? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 23:31, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead and define the shading. Removing the texture made it awfully flat. —Jayce(23:36, 5/12/2020)

Re-Up! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 02:11, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

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-==[[Sasha]] (K) - Tweaked==
-[[File:Sasha.kit.png]] OA is me, tweaked to match manga. I'm not sure if this includes adding the leg stripes, since that may be a PC discussion to match her manga appearance... if anyone thinks I should add the leg stripes, let me know and I will gladly do so. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:17, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-Could you define the depth of the shading? the darkness itself is pretty good for now, but I'm having issues seeing any real depth for it. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|01:28, 5/05/2020}}
-'''Reuploaded''' {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:32, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-I can barely see any difference in the upload history. Please give it more depth. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|02:05, 5/05/2020}}
-Could you also lower the collar tag a bit so it's not defying the laws of gravity by sticking straight out? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:07, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-the collar should be much thinner than it is here. [https://vvcap.com/w7Gu2zthb the tail also has a much more smudgy effect, and fades out towards the base of the tail.] {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 07:31, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-As I said on the warrior, there is a [http://vvcap.com/AzZL6uVQN coloring issue] here, and this needs to match the alt kittypet in terms of colors. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|22:49, 5/06/2020}}
-'''Reuploaded''' Everything was colorpicked from the alt kittypet, but I tried again and I think this is better? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:02, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
-'''Reuploaded''' Okay. Everything matches to the kittypet now. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:45, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
-Where’s your light source coming from? {{Diablo./Sig2|22:39, 07/5/2020}}
-Light source is [[:File:Rainwhisker.kit.png|this]] - it may be hard to tell because of the collar. I'm free to change the shading if anyone wishes. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:41, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
-Still doesn't really answer what I was asking; because it does look like its coming from multiple sources because of the face and bum shading - its not the collar that's throwing me. It'd probably be easier to have the light coming from >> our right side.
-So you'd having something like [https://vvcap.com/img/kznaqzOuU.png this as your shading], perhaps? Also this looks a little washed out for some reason, not sure if its wikia being a butt or maybe the shading tint is throwing off from the other images a little? {{Diablo./Sig2|21:18, 08/5/2020}}
-'''Reuploaded''' And that I shall do. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:54, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
-Add a little bit of shading >> underneath the collar to give it the illusion that its actually sitting on top of a 3D object; and could you also smooth out the back leg shading and maybe add a small layer of additional depth? {{Diablo./Sig2|01:40, 09/5/2020}}
-Also the eyes should also be blue; per the cite on her page. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:52, 09/5/2020}}
-'''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:58, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
-==[[Sasha]] (W) - Tweaked==
-[[File:Sasha.warrior.png]] i'm the oa, it was tweated to match manga as well. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 00:26, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-'''reuploaded. darkened the fur color because she seemed too yellow imo. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 00:32, May 5, 2020 (UTC)'''
-The shading on the rump of the tail appears to be one giant block. Could you possibly fix that? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|01:28, 5/05/2020}}
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 02:12, May 5, 2020 (UTC)'''
-Shouldn't this be matching to kit, above, in terms of placement of markings and such? {{Diablo./Sig2|04:45, 05/5/2020}}
-oops, i forgot her paws weren't colored. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 05:02, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-if its being matched to the instory then like the kit the tail should have a more smudged effect + fades out somewhat towards the base of the [https://vvcap.com/w7Gu2zthb tail]. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 07:32, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 18:26, May 5, 2020 (UTC)'''
-I'm not seeing any change per what david suggested through your upload history? Could you either define what they suggested to do, or double check your export? {{Diablo./Sig2|22:31, 05/5/2020}}
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 22:37, May 5, 2020 (UTC)'''
-I don't see much difference between the versions. Follow what david suggested, and actually do it this time. If you're having issues you can DM someone. There's also waste lying around the image.
-{{User:ThunderStar321/Sig}}
-:43, May 5, 2020 (UTC)
-'''reuploaded. better? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 22:59, May 5, 2020 (UTC)'''
-There's [http://vvcap.com/fm9y3up49 loads of blurred lineart], and also a [http://vvcap.com/AzZL6uVQN coloring issue]. This and the kit are supposed to match the alt kittypet in coloring, and they do not. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|22:48, 5/06/2020}}
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 23:18, May 6, 2020 (UTC) '''
-The earpink and nose pink should be the lighter colour the kittypet has as well. Also could you smooth out the chest and shoulder shading? {{Diablo./Sig2|22:22, 07/5/2020}}
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 23:47, May 8, 2020 (UTC)'''
-Can you smooth out all the shading, and can I ask why change the tint? To me it washes out the colour and makes it different to the kittypet's colours - the previous tint was fine as is. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:39, 09/5/2020}}
-The eyes should be blue per the cite from her page; also this still looks darker than both the rogue and kit, can you please match the base colour. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:53, 09/5/2020}}
-i will starting matching colors later today, i will change back the tint as well. --{{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 04:50, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 22:48, May 9, 2020 (UTC)'''
-Can you smudge the tail more so its a smooth transition, like the kit and rogue both have? Also, the shading tint still seems a little bit off from what I gave to you and it could also do with some smoothing every. I'd also suggest adding in a second layer to give it more depth on the chest and on the back paws that would be in heavy shadow seeing as they are "tucked" underneath the body. {{Diablo./Sig2|23:50, 09/5/2020}}
-forgot to match the shading. ;-; --{{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 00:25, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 18:48, May 10, 2020 (UTC)'''
-Looking at the revision differences, I see the tint has changes, but the rest of Max's comments remain unaddressed. Please do those things.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|23:15, 5/10/2020}}
-'''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 21:00, May 11, 2020 (UTC)'''
-Smooth out the shading. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 21:18, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
-'''reuploaded, do you see a difference? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 21:46, May 11, 2020 (UTC)'''
-Still not seeing a difference in the upload history apart from the shading being darkened. I feel like I should clarify what shading depth is; as I said in my previous comment; add a second layer of less shading in areas where the light wouldn't be as strong from your chosen light source. [https://vvcap.com/d3g8niEfu You'd be looking at something like this] in terms of placement; the lighter red being the first layer of shading while the darker red is that second layer of shading to give the image more depth.
-The tail part of my comment still stands, it could be a smoother transition still. {{Diablo./Sig2|22:42, 11/5/2020}}
-'''reuploaded, better? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 00:00, May 12, 2020 (UTC)'''
 ==[[Alderheart]] (MC) - Tweaked==
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 '''Reuploaded''' {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:29, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
-==[[Fernpelt]] (A) - Redone==
-[[File:Fernpelt.apprentice.png]] Redone to match new pattern {{User:Eggheart/sig}} 00:26, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
-==[[Berrynose]] (Alt K) ~ Tweaked==
-[[File:Berrynose.kit.alt.png]] OA is me. Tweaked to match the alt warrior. Fixed the shading up too. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:55, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
-==[[Berrynose]] (K) ~ Redone==
-[[File:Berrynose.kit.png]] OA is Juniperbriar. Redone to match the alt warrior/alt kit. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:55, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
-==[[Finleap]] (A) ~ Tweaked==
-[[File:Finleap.apprentice.png]]OA was me, tweaking to match ginger on Sandynose. I also redid the shading, which I mentioned on the nomination. Comment? {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:27, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
-Smooth out the shading on the rump and haunch, please. It's very sharp-edged. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:29, 5/12/2020}}
-'''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:46, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
-==[[Finleap]] (Alt W) ~ Tweaked==
-[[File:Finleap.warrior.alt.png]]OA was me, tweaking to match ginger on Sandynose. Comment? {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:27, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
-Smooth out the shading, please. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:30, 5/12/2020}}
-'''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:46, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
 ==[[Berrynose]] (Re) ~ Tweaked==
 [[File:Berrynose.refugee.png]] OA is me, tweaking to match [[:File:Berrynose.warrior.alt.png|Alt warrior]]. Might define the shading or smth?? {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 23:31, May 12, 2020 (UTC)
 Yeah, go ahead and define the shading. Removing the texture made it awfully flat. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|23:36, 5/12/2020}}
 Re-Up! {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 02:11, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

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