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− | [[File:Sasha.kit.png]] OA is me, tweaked to match manga. I'm not sure if this includes adding the leg stripes, since that may be a PC discussion to match her manga appearance... if anyone thinks I should add the leg stripes, let me know and I will gladly do so. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:17, May 5, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Could you define the depth of the shading? the darkness itself is pretty good for now, but I'm having issues seeing any real depth for it. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|01:28, 5/05/2020}} |
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+ | Can you darken the ears + tail to match the others in the set? {{Diablo./Sig2|22:46, 18/5/2020}} |
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− | I can barely see any difference in the upload history. Please give it more depth. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|02:05, 5/05/2020}} |
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+ | Correct me if I'm wrong, but the nomination didn't state any issues with the shading for this image? Unless of course some of it was lost during the colour tweak; but even then, can you match the original shading placement that it had before? {{Diablo./Sig2|00:05, 20/5/2020}} |
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− | Could you also lower the collar tag a bit so it's not defying the laws of gravity by sticking straight out? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 02:07, May 5, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | + | Re-Up! yeah I was having trouble matching the shading and making sure the colors looked right- but I ''think'' it's better now {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 01:17, May 20, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | + | I'm not sure if it's the base color or highlights... but this seems really shiny, for lack of a better term, and almost plastic-like. Is it possible to fiddle around with the shading/highlights? If not, I totally get that. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|18:46, 5/20/2020}} |
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− | + | Re-up! tried to lower the intensity of the highlights, hope it was effective {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 19:53, May 20, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | The shading seems very...overwhelming? Maybe fiddle with it so it's not overbearing, like maybe lowering the opacity a bit and removing some since it seems to to overshadow the whole image. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:37, May 25, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' Okay. Everything matches to the kittypet now. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:45, May 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Where’s your light source coming from? {{Diablo./Sig2|22:39, 07/5/2020}} |
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− | Light source is [[:File:Rainwhisker.kit.png|this]] - it may be hard to tell because of the collar. I'm free to change the shading if anyone wishes. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:41, May 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Still doesn't really answer what I was asking; because it does look like its coming from multiple sources because of the face and bum shading - its not the collar that's throwing me. It'd probably be easier to have the light coming from >> our right side. |
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+ | [[File:Berrynose.ghost.png]] i've lost the file for his warrior, so someone else is welcome to give that a shot. {{User:Tybaxel/Sig}} 22:00, May 19, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel |
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− | So you'd having something like [https://vvcap.com/img/kznaqzOuU.png this as your shading], perhaps? Also this looks a little washed out for some reason, not sure if its wikia being a butt or maybe the shading tint is throwing off from the other images a little? {{Diablo./Sig2|21:18, 08/5/2020}} |
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+ | Could you make it a little more saturated to match the set? The base you've currently got looks a little duller when compared to the set side by side. {{Diablo./Sig2|07:39, 22/5/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' And that I shall do. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:54, May 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Add a little bit of shading >> underneath the collar to give it the illusion that its actually sitting on top of a 3D object; and could you also smooth out the back leg shading and maybe add a small layer of additional depth? {{Diablo./Sig2|01:40, 09/5/2020}} |
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− | + | The base still seems a little off when sitting beside the rest of the set; though it might be the shading, I'm not sure? {{Diablo./Sig2|00:02, 25/5/2020}} |
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+ | ''reuploaded'' I think its the shading because i colorpicked from several pixels and the base didn't really change much. I tried to alter the color to match though {{User:Tybaxel/Sig}} 00:46, May 27, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:58, May 11, 2020 (UTC) |
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+ | [[File:Berrynose.deputy.png]] Had the file, making the adjustments was just layer removal/color update.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|22:46, 5/22/2020}} |
− | + | Maybe smooth the shading some? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 01:36, May 25, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | The shading on the rump of the tail appears to be one giant block. Could you possibly fix that? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|01:28, 5/05/2020}} |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 02:12, May 5, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | Shouldn't this be matching to kit, above, in terms of placement of markings and such? {{Diablo./Sig2|04:45, 05/5/2020}} |
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− | oops, i forgot her paws weren't colored. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 05:02, May 5, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | if its being matched to the instory then like the kit the tail should have a more smudged effect + fades out somewhat towards the base of the [https://vvcap.com/w7Gu2zthb tail]. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 07:32, May 5, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 18:26, May 5, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | I'm not seeing any change per what david suggested through your upload history? Could you either define what they suggested to do, or double check your export? {{Diablo./Sig2|22:31, 05/5/2020}} |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 22:37, May 5, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | I don't see much difference between the versions. Follow what david suggested, and actually do it this time. If you're having issues you can DM someone. There's also waste lying around the image. |
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− | 22:43, May 5, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''reuploaded. better? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 22:59, May 5, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | There's [http://vvcap.com/fm9y3up49 loads of blurred lineart], and also a [http://vvcap.com/AzZL6uVQN coloring issue]. This and the kit are supposed to match the alt kittypet in coloring, and they do not. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|22:48, 5/06/2020}} |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig}} 23:18, May 6, 2020 (UTC) ''' |
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− | The earpink and nose pink should be the lighter colour the kittypet has as well. Also could you smooth out the chest and shoulder shading? {{Diablo./Sig2|22:22, 07/5/2020}} |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 23:47, May 8, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | Can you smooth out all the shading, and can I ask why change the tint? To me it washes out the colour and makes it different to the kittypet's colours - the previous tint was fine as is. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:39, 09/5/2020}} |
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− | The eyes should be blue per the cite from her page; also this still looks darker than both the rogue and kit, can you please match the base colour. {{Diablo./Sig2|01:53, 09/5/2020}} |
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− | i will starting matching colors later today, i will change back the tint as well. --{{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 04:50, May 9, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 22:48, May 9, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | Can you smudge the tail more so its a smooth transition, like the kit and rogue both have? Also, the shading tint still seems a little bit off from what I gave to you and it could also do with some smoothing every. I'd also suggest adding in a second layer to give it more depth on the chest and on the back paws that would be in heavy shadow seeing as they are "tucked" underneath the body. {{Diablo./Sig2|23:50, 09/5/2020}} |
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− | forgot to match the shading. ;-; --{{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 00:25, May 10, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 18:48, May 10, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | Looking at the revision differences, I see the tint has changes, but the rest of Max's comments remain unaddressed. Please do those things.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|23:15, 5/10/2020}} |
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− | '''reuploaded. {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 21:00, May 11, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | Smooth out the shading. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 21:18, May 11, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''reuploaded, do you see a difference? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 21:46, May 11, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | Still not seeing a difference in the upload history apart from the shading being darkened. I feel like I should clarify what shading depth is; as I said in my previous comment; add a second layer of less shading in areas where the light wouldn't be as strong from your chosen light source. [https://vvcap.com/d3g8niEfu You'd be looking at something like this] in terms of placement; the lighter red being the first layer of shading while the darker red is that second layer of shading to give the image more depth. |
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− | The tail part of my comment still stands, it could be a smoother transition still. {{Diablo./Sig2|22:42, 11/5/2020}} |
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− | '''reuploaded, better? {{User:Ripplewater/Sig2|}} 00:00, May 12, 2020 (UTC)''' |
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− | ==[[Alderheart]] (MC) - Tweaked== |
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− | [[File:Alderheart.mc.png]] OA was me, tweaked to match the stripes better. I had a hard time with the stripes, so any further suggestions for them are welcome. I'd also like permission to fix the shading a little bit as it's kind of sloppy and doesn't really have a lot of depth. {{User:Ivybreeze/Sig}} 03:14, May 6, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | [[File:Spiderleg.warrior.png]] OA is me, tweaked to recede haunch shading and lighten it some {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 14:28, May 6, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | I think the haunch shading could be receded more {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|22:06, 5/06/2020}} |
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− | Re-Up! {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 13:01, May 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Maybe fix up the light source on the haunch, tail and <--- foreleg? Shading seems a bit overblurred and the light source isn't as clearly defined too; also there are areas where it appears shading is leaking onto other areas as if it's overblurred {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 15:36, May 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | I'm really not sure why the shading was added back to cover the haunch so extremely; the tweak was voted in for ''removing'' shading from the haunch, because there was too much, and we're back to even more than the og. Fixing it in other ways, per Vec, wouldn't result in doing the opposite of the tweak reasoning.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|23:18, 5/10/2020}} |
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− | Compared to the set, he now looks too light. Can you darken him more to match better? --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 00:10, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | The shading is still very blotchy too {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:31, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Re-Up! better? {{User:Lesbian Disaster/Sig}} 23:26, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | ==[[Frostclaw]] (W) - Tweaked== |
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− | [[File:Frostclaw.warrior.png]] OA is me, tweaked to fix shading and eye color. I just redid the shading. --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 01:14, May 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Can you smooth the tail shading some? Looks much better overall.{{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|14:24, 5/07/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' Thank you! I'm pretty happy with it too :) --{{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:21, May 7, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Could you add a little more depth to the chest shading, and smooth out the back leg shading near the knee area some as well? {{Diablo./Sig2|21:18, 08/5/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:46, May 8, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Can you smooth out the top of the back leg shading anymore, its still quite abrupt imo {{Diablo./Sig2|00:31, 10/5/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 22:58, May 11, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Can you smooth the haunch, top shoulder and tail shading a bit more? {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:32, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | '''Reuploaded''' {{User:Potato Flakin/Sig}} 23:29, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | ==[[Fernpelt]] (A) - Redone== |
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− | [[File:Berrynose.kit.png]] OA is Juniperbriar. Redone to match the alt warrior/alt kit. {{User:VectorSigma101/Sig}} 16:55, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | ==[[Finleap]] (A) ~ Tweaked== |
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− | [[File:Finleap.apprentice.png]]OA was me, tweaking to match ginger on Sandynose. I also redid the shading, which I mentioned on the nomination. Comment? {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:27, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Smooth out the shading on the rump and haunch, please. It's very sharp-edged. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:29, 5/12/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:46, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | ==[[Finleap]] (Alt W) ~ Tweaked== |
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− | [[File:Finleap.warrior.alt.png]]OA was me, tweaking to match ginger on Sandynose. Comment? {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:27, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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− | Smooth out the shading, please. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|20:30, 5/12/2020}} |
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− | '''Reuploaded'''. {{User:Bluestar11796/Sig}} 20:46, May 12, 2020 (UTC) |
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Tweaking
Sasha (KP) -Tweaked
OA is Hawkfire98, Tweaked to match mangas. I tried to keep the shading the same, but idk if I suceeded.. ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 22:56, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
Can you darken the ears + tail to match the others in the set? — max it is the real thing, (22:46, 18/5/2020)
Re-Up! also fiddled with the shading some ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 13:20, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
Correct me if I'm wrong, but the nomination didn't state any issues with the shading for this image? Unless of course some of it was lost during the colour tweak; but even then, can you match the original shading placement that it had before? — max it is the real thing, (00:05, 20/5/2020)
Re-Up! yeah I was having trouble matching the shading and making sure the colors looked right- but I think it's better now ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 01:17, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
I'm not sure if it's the base color or highlights... but this seems really shiny, for lack of a better term, and almost plastic-like. Is it possible to fiddle around with the shading/highlights? If not, I totally get that. —Jayce(18:46, 5/20/2020)
Re-up! tried to lower the intensity of the highlights, hope it was effective ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 19:53, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
The shading seems very...overwhelming? Maybe fiddle with it so it's not overbearing, like maybe lowering the opacity a bit and removing some since it seems to to overshadow the whole image. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:37, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
Re-Up! I hope it's close enough to the original shading? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 17:04, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
Berrynose (Ghost) - Tweak
i've lost the file for his warrior, so someone else is welcome to give that a shot. tyb 🌌 owo??? 22:00, May 19, 2020 (UTC)Tybaxel
Earpink should be darker to match Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 05:08, May 20, 2020 (UTC)
Could you make it a little more saturated to match the set? The base you've currently got looks a little duller when compared to the set side by side. — max it is the real thing, (07:39, 22/5/2020)
reuploaded tyb 🌌 owo??? 20:40, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
The base still seems a little off when sitting beside the rest of the set; though it might be the shading, I'm not sure? — max it is the real thing, (00:02, 25/5/2020)
reuploaded I think its the shading because i colorpicked from several pixels and the base didn't really change much. I tried to alter the color to match though tyb 🌌 owo??? 00:46, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
Berrynose (D) ~ Tweaked
Had the file, making the adjustments was just layer removal/color update.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 22:46, 5/22/2020
Maybe smooth the shading some? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 01:36, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
Thriftear (A) - Tweaked
Given permission to tweak from Tyb. Tweaked to match texture style on kit. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:08, May 27, 2020 (UTC)