Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

This is the Project Character Art Tweaks PagePlace tweaked character art for approval here. Discussions should be routed to the discussion page, while all New Art should be routed to the approval page, and all Tweak Nominations should be routed to the nominations page.
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Tweaking

Skystar (L) ~ Tweaked

—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 19:36, 6/13/2018

same as millie, could you thicken the lineart just a little in a few places? david ^🌈 21:33, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:13, 6/15/2018

Dawnpelt (Q) - Redone

Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{20:18 Wed Jun 13}

The eye color looks different from the star's.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 20:20, 6/13/2018

There's more space in the StarClan image to add color; I think it's fine. —Jayce(20:22, 6/13/2018)

I took it from the rogue for both, which was first in the set. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{20:23 Wed Jun 13}

The stripes on < leg on the star look thinner than the ones here ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:21, 6/14/2018 )

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{22:29 Thu Jun 14}

Houndleap (W) ~ Tweaked

OA was me. Tweaked to add <--- ear tip back. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:19, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I know it isn't what it's up for but is it possible to soften the shading on the closest foreleg somewhat? david ^🌈 21:32, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I see it too, and I tried? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:54, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) ~ Redone

Redone to match. Again, look at this shading. How wonderful it is ughhh Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:53, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good! Would you add a bit of depth to the eyes, and perhaps make the shading a liiiittle less reddish? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:37, 6/14/2018 )

Reups Thanks haha Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 13:49, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the pale parts^^ Also, I think there wouldn't be quite so many spots on the tail, to match the other images c: —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:24, 6/14/2018

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-why-can-I-not-be-happy-with-this-ups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:46, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) - Tweaked

Tweaked to remove white from face, most recent OA is Ivystripe. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:42, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I know this isn't what it's up for, but could you perhaps add a slight amount of light to the tail? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:25, 6/14/2018

Re-uploaded. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Millie (W) ~ Tweaked

—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 15:56, 6/14/2018

can you maybe thicken the lineart on the tear just a bit? david ^🌈 21:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:09, 6/15/2018

Barley (Ro) - Redone

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:25, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (D) - Redone

Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:05, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Snipe (Ro) ~ Tweaked

tried to keep the black as accurate to the dark grey areas as possible. david ^🌈 23:28, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I don't think it was nominated for this, but do you mind defining the shading overall, especially on the legs? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:48, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (Star) - Redone

The shading looks very...weird, so I will probably redo it. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 00:21, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the spots a bit. Would you like the file for one of his other chararts? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:47, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, that would be excellent. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 03:44, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Palebird (Ki) ~ Redone

david ^🌈 04:56, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Princess (Ki) - Tweaked

brown paw. OAs: spooky, bbun, and paleclaw madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}