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Discussion
Take it to the discussion page
For Approval
Take it to the approval page
Tweaking
Mothwing (MC) ~ Tweaked
OA is Sorrel. I tried - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:03,3/24/2019
I know this is probably going to be a pain in the butt to do, but are you able to add some light to her body? The image looks far darker than the rest of her set because of the amount of shading. If you're not able to, that's totally fine and I'll live. =P —Jayce(19:33, 3/25/2019)
I honestly agree, the shading could be lessened some. Ellie life is an illusion 21:22, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
Can you define the dapples as well? I'm not seeing any..Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:13, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded nothing much I could do about the dapples because they're the same opacity and if I add more it's going to look crowded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:12,3/26/2019
Re-uploaded hmm tried something - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:50,3/26/2019
Can you smooth the edges of the shading where it was removed on the body? Ellie life is an illusion 01:51, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded yikes i tried - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:04,3/26/2019
Sandynose (kp) ~ tweaked
tweaked to remove stripes. – Cinna dear evan hansen, 16:09, March 24, 2019 (UTC)
I'm still seeing the stripes, could you check about uploading the changes elsewhere? —Jayce(00:21, 3/25/2019)
without the stripes the image's shading looks hard edged. could you lighten and smooth it out? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:38,3/25/2019
Mousefur (Star) - Redone
Was not able to tweak, so I did ask about redoing it under the condition I kept the coloring. —Jayce(00:21, 3/25/2019)
might be just me but could you make the texture on the face and arms flow in the direction of the body so that it doesn't look flat? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:38,3/25/2019
I'm slightly confused, I do almost all of my StarClan texture like this. Why is this now suddenly an issue...? I'm not saying I won't do it, I'm just asking for clarification since this hasn't been something brought up before. —Jayce(19:32, 3/25/2019)
Think the texture is fine, but there's some waste in the bigger eye (on the eyeshine) and I'm going to get shot for this, but can you define the pupil in the opposite eye? It seems overun by eyeshine. If not, it's totally fine, you are more experienced than me :)Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:17, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
i kinda agree with the texture– maybe make it curve slightly more along the shoulder? Burntclaw 23:24, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
Which shoulder? We technically can see both. Again, I'm not objecting to doing any of the critiques, just making sure of what I'm doing here. Also, I did take the eyes pixel-for-pixel from the previous StarClan image, because I was quite fond of them. I'm not sure what you mean by waste, Potato, could you elaborate? —Jayce(23:37, 3/25/2019)
Re-uploaded. Hmm, tried a few things, and I'm liking this a lot more. —Jayce(23:52, 3/25/2019)
This might be nitpicky, but she seems pretty dark. I know a google search isn't much, but none of the colors that come up when you search dusky brown are nearly as dark. Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 14:45, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
This was the base coloring of her original StarClan image...it's not too far from some of the results I'm getting. o.O —Jayce(18:29, 3/26/2019)
Dappletail (Star) - Redone
-Rustle it takes a leap of faith18:08 Mon Mar 25 2019
Could you upload the changes elsewhere? I'm still seeing the old version. —Jayce(19:32, 3/25/2019)
Looks stunning when I checked the file history! Anywho, expand the shading on the paws, and is it possible to blur/smudge the shading since it looks a little hard-edged? If not it's cool. :)Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:20, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
can you make her dappled? Burntclaw 23:23, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
Changes. Also, she is dappled. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith22:53 Tue Mar 26 2019
Whitefang (A) - Tweaked
There we go. —Jayce(05:14, 3/26/2019)
With that light source, there should be some light on the chest Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 14:37, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
ive had multiple images approved with this source, so i think its fine. that and it seems to be coming from the top so the head could be blocking the chest light. david 🌈 18:17, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
I just had an image recently done with this exact same light source and it was perfectly acceptable. Most of my apprentice images have this without any light on the chest. —Jayce(18:27, 3/26/2019)
Hmm.. if it's coming from the top, then the top of the head shouldn't be in shading. I thought it was coming from the left Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 18:43, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
But I've been using this exact same source for over seven years with no problems. All of my apprentices images have this exact lighting pattern, including one I just posted. I'm sorry, but I'd rather not change it, considering I actually do not have the file for it and it's going to be ten times harder than it seems. —Jayce(18:48, 3/26/2019)
Sandynose (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to remove stripes. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:26, March 26, 2019 (UTC)