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fox commented on a prior Tall redo section that there was indeed texture on the white on the deputy's file -- that it wasn't entirely just styling from shading. that does need to be added to a degree {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|23:52, 10/16/2019}} |
fox commented on a prior Tall redo section that there was indeed texture on the white on the deputy's file -- that it wasn't entirely just styling from shading. that does need to be added to a degree {{User:Spookywilloww/Sig2|23:52, 10/16/2019}} |
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Poppyfrost (K) - Redone
Colors picked from Sorreltail's kit Moo (talk) 08:24, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
Could you dull the shading tint some, and maybe smudge the blotches a bit more? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:04, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
Sure! I just cant get on my computer for a few hours! Moo (talk) 23:36, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:53, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
There should be more variation in the dapple size and shape, and the patches should be sharper than what you've currently got too - if you'd like I have sorreltail's warrior file handy (which is the master design/colours) — max it is the real thing, (22:47, 11/10/2019)
I dont think i know how to make them sharper and still looknatural... Moo (talk) 22:18, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Just give it a go, it doesn't hurt to just just try it - after all, this place is for constructive criticism so we'll be able to help you to get it looking right if it needs it. Again, I can offer the file I mentioned above that might help getting it to look right. — max it is the real thing, (01:05, 13/10/2019)
Thanks! Reuploaded! Moo (talk) 08:42, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
The patch placements have some differences from Sorreltail's kit, notably on the face/bum etc —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 16:43, 10/13/2019
Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:13, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
Frogtail (A) - Redone
OA is Icy; redone to remove mottles. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:42, October 10, 2019 (UTC)
your source is a little confusing, maybe remove the section going across the flank, and it should be all good? maybe also define the depth just a little bit on the face, and neck area — max it is the real thing, (04:15, 11/10/2019)
Fixed --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:25, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
Until/if you can get that other nom to pass, this needs the texturing the rest of the set has.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:11, 10/12/2019
Fixed --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:15, October 12, 2019 (UTC)
Try to even out the texture - seems uneven with lines of it ending at somewhat random points, which results in it looking a little blotchy.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 17:10, 10/13/2019
Fixed Ahh, so much better. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 18:15, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth and even out the shading - the varying opacities of it seem to make it also look blotchy.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:10, 10/14/2019
Fixed --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:17, October 14, 2019 (UTC)
Define the lightsource? I'm having trouble seeing it on the shoulder and forelegs. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:35, October 15, 2019 (UTC)
The lightsource is this, without the crossing haunch shading. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 02:43, October 15, 2019 (UTC)
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the base colour looks a little darker than the warrior on my current screen? also im not sure how that source works, but, is a little conflicting with/without the haunch shading - but now knowing what source you are using, define the light on the muzzle because in the pic you linked, its a lot clearer and same with the light on the legs. — max it is the real thing, (08:47, 15/10/2019)
Fixed I added back the crossing shading to make the source less confusing. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 00:11, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
there should be a little less shading on the chest from that source, and it appears the shading is coming away from around the front arm closest to us (the shoulder and elbow area) — max it is the real thing, (23:12, 16/10/2019)
Fixed --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:27, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
Tallstar (D) - Redone
color picked off the image directly Burntclaw 03:56, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
Should he have the white paws and tail-tip? I know the image doesn't have them, but he's still described with them. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 04:37, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
Also, he needs a long tail. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 04:39, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
Adding on - he's also cited with a white tail tip — max it is the real thing, (04:41, 11/10/2019)
Brighten up the white; he doesn’t look black-and-white at all. —Jayce(07:38, 10/11/2019)
reup will add long tail and fix other issues when i come back from class. also, this is what happens when you solely match his image and ignore his description... Burntclaw 12:24, October 11, 2019 (UTC)
Smooth the tail tip and new paw whites slightly; seem a bit sharp —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:31, 10/11/2019
reup Burntclaw 20:33, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
There's waste around the tail-tip. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:43, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
Maybe extend the canvas so the tail tip isn’t abruptly cut off? — max it is the real thing, (21:10, 16/10/2019)
Sorreltail (Q) ~ Redone
All colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:17, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
Poppyfrost (W) ~ Redone
All colors from other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:17, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
Tallstar (R) ~ Redone
OA was me. redone to match official art - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 20:34,10/16/2019
the belly on the deputy only seems to be on >> this side of the image, with black being under the front arms? — max it is the real thing, (23:08, 16/10/2019)
can you add some shading on the << front paw and smooth it on the >> front paw? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:53, 10/16/2019
Tallstar (Kp) - Redone
uh here... Moo (talk) 22:58, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
This needs to match the deputy- he needs three white paws and a white tail-tip. The patch style doesn't quite match the set either. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:05, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
also needs texture ✧Winter✧ 23:12, 10/16/2019
Fox stated previously its not texture; I think its just the shading style and possibly highlights that are giving that effect. There is some very minor texture on the white though, going by a previous comment. — max it is the real thing, (23:13, 16/10/2019)
regardless it still needs to match the style of whatever preceded this image, in my opinion it is considered texture, just because i also do that kind of "shading style" where i basically just drag it around the image to make it look like texture, but it's still texture ✧Winter✧ 23:15, 10/16/2019
It's not texture, it's a stylized shading. Millie is not required to match shading style. —Jayce(23:17, 10/16/2019)
O.o Moo (talk) 23:18, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:26, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
The white should not stretch all the way up the forehead. I also think the colors still look slightly off- the base should be #0b1213, the white should be #d9dada. The patch style still doesn't seem to match the set, maybe try a combo of smudging/sharpening the patches to see if that works? I think the shading tint could be dulled back a bit as well. --Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:30, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
just a reminder that shading tint is artist's choice, so if Millie doesn't wish to change it, she doesn't have to. also the tail needs to be tweaked to be longer too, per his name and all. — max it is the real thing, (23:37, 16/10/2019)
fox commented on a prior Tall redo section that there was indeed texture on the white on the deputy's file -- that it wasn't entirely just styling from shading. that does need to be added to a degree —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:52, 10/16/2019
Sorry for the confusion! There is texture on the white. Looking at burnt's file most other things are just highlights - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:12,10/17/2019