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Runningnose(MC) ~ Redone

Was told to redo. Ew...Comments?...Maple♥legs^{Mischief brewing} 02:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons, and make the ear pink bigger. —Jayce() 02:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, the patches... Try looking at Spiderstar for what patches ought to look like on short-furred cats. And could you go back to the old pattern? I'd rather not have to redo the MCA unless absolutely necessary. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 02:29, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, define the shading so it actually shows up on the white, please. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 02:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please go back to the old pattern. Redoing doesn't necessarily mean changing the pattern. There's no reason to redo his other images. Anyways, darken the gray to match and darken the shading all together. Paleh Send help 18:30, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, me and another SM chat (not gonna mention names unless she tells me to) think this should be auto-declined, as it's not 80% complete. Paleh Send help 20:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

It's at least over 50%. Maple, you have a week from the upload date (2:08 AM Wikitime on the 23rd) to get this over 80% before it's declined. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:45, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, are you working on this or not? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

No i'm not, 'cause of the car wreck, im spending so much time in and out of hosspitals, and only have one arm...i cant work on this, 'yall, i'm sorry. Maple♥legs^{Mischief brewing} 01:07, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

If this is up for grabs for people to take over, I will. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 05:50, 27, 02, 2012

Sorry to hear about that, Maple. Okay, DJ, you go ahead and take over. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 12:46, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

DJ, are you going to work on this? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 17:46, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Actually I won't, sorry guys. Just due to the limited acess I have on the wiki these days, I don't exactly have the time. :c ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 06:12, 01, 03, 2012

Oooh oooh I'll take it! 8D *goes to reserve* Paleh Send help 07:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This was so much fun. XD Went a bit overboard with the nose, but I think it should be fine. And bleh, those patches..... x.x But meh. XD Comments? Paleh Send help 07:17, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely <3. Darken the haunch shading. ^Sil_ver^hmm 12:01, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oohh, this is beautiful <3 Blur the earpink. --Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 15:47, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the shading a bit. Much better. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 20:36, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but can you just make the nose a bit more subtle like his other images? xD If not, its fine. ;3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:48, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Nooo I like the nose as it is :P llwildheart™l07:12 Sun Mar 4

Cedarheart (W) - Tweaked

Blurred the highlights, fixed blurred lineart, and eye wasn't in depth. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak from Atelda, I think. (This is my first tweak so please tell me if I'm doing this right.) --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?}19:12, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around. oblivion^Audience? 01:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?}01:59, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Also, I fixed the heading for you. —Jayce() 02:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't match his description at the moment. It says he's a dark grey tom, and now he looks like a light grey one. :3 When I nominated it, I was told to redo the colour too. User:Maplefern/Sig 02:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Cinder? —Jayce() 18:20, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I can't. I still have to work on editing a cat without totally redoing it..sorry could someone take over? --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?}01:07, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Changing heading. If another user wants this, they can have it. If not, it'll be archived. —Jayce() 05:22, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. --Leafstrike-- 17:58, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid shading and colour. --Leafstrike-- 21:03, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:32, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked

I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. User:Shadewing/Sig 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. —Jayce() 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^Sil_ver^hmm 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? --Leafstrike-- 02:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Redstar (L) - Redone

Stripes needed to be redone <3 OA was Hawktalon, with a redo by Cloudy, and a tweak by moi. oblivion^Audience? 02:52, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Add some stripes on this <--- flank and some shading at the bottom please! ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Ah, to see such a crappy image redone. It fills my heart with joy~ 8D —Jayce() 03:29, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the white muzzle and paws. False reference :3 Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 03:32, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 04:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful~ 8D ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. (SO BEAUTIFUL~) Sunnyfrost 22:07, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit? c: Sky ^{Seedlit Proxy} 22:43, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky, I refuse to thicken the stripes. They're thin and I like them c: oblivion^Audience? 04:24, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink <3 Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 15:39, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 03:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit dark for a reddish cat...maybe lighten it or use a lighter color, like a light orange? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:04, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 02:44, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading. --Leafstrike-- 19:22, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading looks fine. Can you define the earpink just a tiny bit more, though? Rainlegs 19:26, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think it's a little too dark. And I noticed that while most of the shading is tinted red, the leg shading is tinted grey. Fix that along with the haunch shading? --Leafstrike-- 02:03, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 02:55, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone

Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? Ivyheart ^=P 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. oblivion^Audience? 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 Ivyheart ^=P 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. Ivyheart ^=P 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Alt. SC) ~ Redone

File:Whispering Breeze.sc.alt.png I love this blank. XD And this is probably the only time I'll ever use it for the project, too. D: Anyway, she's a bullseye tabby! I'll take out the white if anyone wants me to, it's based on personal preference. Comments? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 22:11, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, the white chest is fine. Blur the stripes on the haunch a bit. Beautiful Shelly <333  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:45 Wed Feb 29

Could you blur the stripes just a tad..<3 Nice job Shelly!! --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?}01:31, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 00:28, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I was told I could take this over, 'cause Shelly's leaving (D:), so I redid it. Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 16:19, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. Lovely, Elo. <3  Stoneclaw    21:03, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 02:54, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Waste in between the legs. And blur the shading a little? 8D Sky ^{It's a bunny. Not Nidorino.} 03:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone

Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. ^Sil_ver^hmm 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3} 12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunnyfrost 21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^hmm 21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky ^{It's a bunny. Not Nidorino.} 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Withdrawn

File:Tigerheart.warrior.alt.pngNeeded to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. —Jayce() 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (RC) (E) - Redone

Original artist was Minnowclaw, with a redo by Scarletwind. The stripes were unrealistic. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 22:21, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

The brown stripe at the end of the tail is very hard-edged, please blur/smudge it. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3} 22:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sky ^{Seedlit Proxy} 02:17, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:18, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more visable. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 01:09, 03, 03, 2012

Poppydawn (W) - Tweaked

Me gusta :P OAs were Night Shine with a redo by that nerd Ivystripe. Her stripes were unrealistic. I did deleted those off my .xcf file and made brand-spanking new ones! Iveh Yo! 19:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Epical. Define the earpink.  Stoneclaw    19:54, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank ya kindly ^^ Iveh Yo! 20:00, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a tad? --Leafstrike-- 20:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, it's far too dark. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 00:55, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Bootiful Ivy! <3 Tone down the "highlights" or such/blur the shading at the edges, mainly the chest and haunch. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 01:15, 03, 03, 2012

Sorry Sunny, but I think the earpink looks okay. :3 Ivyheart ^=P 04:08, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was just told to define the earpink so I'm not touching it Iveh Yo! 23:45, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (D) - Redone

His stripes were unrealistic. OA was Nightshine, with a redo by Mintstar and a tweak by Leafstorm. oblivion^Audience? 02:58, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge and define the the earpink. Lovely Loonie <3  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:47 Sat Mar 3

Nettlesplash (KP) ~ Redone

OA was Mistypebble, and I made it to match the warrior image. —Jayce() 04:55, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:15 Sat Mar 3

Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 05:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Too epic, Cloudy. <333  Stoneclaw    19:27, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Stoneh~<3 —Jayce() 19:31, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Is it only me, or is it that his eyes look off? He looks like he's dizzy. --Leafstrike-- 20:38, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

That's just how I have the colors placed. I'll switch them around, if you like. —Jayce() 20:42, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? —Jayce() 20:49, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Ki) - Redone

File:Tigerheart.kit.png Redone to match the apprentice and warrior images. OA was Echomist. I did the apprentice one, so I already know the style and the opacity for all the layers and all that, so this wasn't too hard. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 00:46, 04, 03, 2012

Pebbleheart (W) - Redone

OA was me and then redone by me. Stripes were unrealistic. I just took the layers from his MC charart and laid them over a warrior lineart. Comments? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:00, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (L) ~ Redone

I might have gone a little over board on the patches o3o OAs were Yai-Girl, Shimmerpool and tweaks by Ivy and Shelly. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:42 Sun Mar 4

Oh, dear lord. You expect me to match /that/? Can you dumb it down just a little bit? You kinda went a little over the top...but I /do/ like it. 8D —Jayce() 04:43, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dear god, Mountainheart! You've really outdone yourself this time... Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more on his shaded ear. ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye, Sir! Thank you so much 8D I tried blurring the patches but it looked really bad x.x I'd rather not change them.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:01 Sun Mar 4

Eh, that's fine. What matters is that you tried. xD —Jayce() 05:05, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (A) ~ Redone

OA is Purplemoon, and was redone to match the other images. All colors are from his warrior/kittypet, so I'm not changing them. This includes the ear pink. Oh, guess what? This one's the right size now. xD —Jayce() 05:05, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (W) ~ Redone

W00t join.me 8D OAs were Bramble and Flamingomom3 I think. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:34 Sun Mar 4