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Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone

Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? Ivyheart ^=P 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. oblivion^Audience? 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 Ivyheart ^=P 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. Ivyheart ^=P 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight/lighter part/thing a bit bigger? 8D Sky ^Gatlocke 11:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Don't hate me, but she still looks like a light-brown cat Iveh Yo! 00:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmkay, I'll try my best, I'll upload soon x3 *doesn't hate you* Ivyheart ^=P 02:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe have the colors a bit closer to Brightheart or Flowerstar? don't hurt me!*hides* ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 00:12, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Scarlet, it's fine. XD I'm really sorry, I don't know what the problem is but whenever I try to make it more ginger, it looks so unnatural... Did my best, though. :3 Oh, and Sky, where? Ivyheart ^=P 05:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Meh, it was just a preference, I just thought the lighter part looked a little small on the shoulder. Sky ^{Molto bene} 23:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Ivy. It was just a preference, feel free to ignore it. Define the ear-pink a bit ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, uh, sorry. x3 Can choo define the neck shading if it's there, or is that whole bit shaded? x.x Sky ^{Molto bene} 23:52, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone

Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. ^Sil_ver^hmm 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3} 12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunnyfrost 21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^hmm 21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky ^{It's a bunny. Not Nidorino.} 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?)Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) ^Sil_ver^hmm 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^hmm 00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky ^{Molto bene} 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. —Jayce() 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* Dazzy 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P—Jayce() 09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky ^{Molto bene} 12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone

File:Tigerheart.warrior.alt.pngNeeded to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. —Jayce() 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over C: Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D: Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:03 Sun Mar 4

Blur it, too. —Jayce() 22:32, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match all that well. It seems like the alt apprentice's stripes were based off the normal warrior image, so using that as a ref on what it'd look like from this angle might help. Paleh Send help 15:27, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I tried to match the warrior; I didn't suceed. Withdrawing because I don't want to get frustrated Dx Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 20:59, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.  Stoneclaw    00:54, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brightsky (Q) ~ Redone

She was fun to make... ginger cats rock. 8D Rainlegs 03:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I thought the file name said queer xD Blur the shading. Sky ^Gatlocke 03:30, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? I still say this is Brightheart is her past life <3 Iveh Yo! 03:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

And define the eye colour. --Leafstrike-- 17:57, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to add a few more stripes on the face? Sky ^{Molto bene} 11:35, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and legs, define the shading on her tail, and blur the patch on her belly as well. <3. Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 04:36, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Finchstar (L) - Redone

Too lazy to list why it was redone. XD Check the tweak nominations page. OA was Nightfall101. Changes aren't showing. I had two versions of these, so if you guys want to see the other, I can upload it and you can just compare the archives. Comments? Paleh Send help 00:11, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Show us the other version. --Leafstrike-- 00:41, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Well reuploaded so you could see it, but you can't actually see it yet.... XD *slaps wiki lag* Mayb I'll put up the two archives side by side Paleh Send help 00:57, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

There. The one on the left is the one people on chat seem to like more, but I can't decide. Paleh Send help 00:58, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I like the one on the left <33333333  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:59 Tue Mar 6

The left one~ Ivyheart ^=P 02:05, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Left one it is. o3o Now, actual comments for improvement? XD Paleh Send help 02:54, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the whites parts looks kinda reddish-brown. Maybe make a separate layer of shading for the paws and chest and shade with black/gray? Just my opinion. Maybe smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:40, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit =3 Dazzy 08:49, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Typo Queen, are you still working on this? —Jayce() 08:58, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Q) - Tweak

OAs were me and Sandstar12. Reason being unrealistic stripes. To be honest, I raged when I tried to copy my own stripes on her tail. So sorry if some look out of place because I kind of gave up XD Iveh Yo! 05:09, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur where the 'highlights' meet the shading on the belly. 8D Lovely~  Stoneclaw    20:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on her haunch a bit. This is pretty... ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!} 00:02, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (SC) - Redone

Because stripes. OA was was Scarlet and me. llwildheart™l08:04 Wed Mar 7

Define the earpink a tad. Sky ^{Molto bene} 11:31, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yup yup. Comments? llwildheart™l00:07 Fri Mar 9

Clovertail (W) ~ Redone

OA was Blackclaw09 and it needed to be redone because the shading was blotchy and highlights needed to be brightened. Also, I see the brown on her leg, I'll fix it in the next Upload. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:01, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

he earpink is much to big, so make is smaller. Darken the shading, and blur where the white meet the brown just on the neck above the chin. Looks great!  Stoneclaw    23:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, and the white on the back paw. There is also some brown mixed in with the white on the front paw (the one closest to us), and can you lighten the shading on the legs just a tad? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

What's up with that ear pink, Rowan? Did you try it like the leader images? Define the shading, darken it, and define the highlight (or whatever it is) on the haunch, 'cause it looks like it's all shading. —Jayce() 04:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks neat to me. :P Can you blur that top part of the white? And (if possible, otherwise disregard this) make the white curve with the body a bit? Sky ^{Molto bene} 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and make the earpink less gray and more pink. Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 14:02, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried to make the earpink like the queen on my past one. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white area more white it looks gray, also make it match the queen more, and lighten the image. Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 23:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (W) - Tweaked

I've been telling myself to tweak more chararts. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Night Shine. Shading had to be darker. ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading. oblivion^Audience? 00:53, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:56, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her shoulder. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!} 12:14, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define "highlight" on the shoulder, blur the earpink, and lighten the entire image to match. Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 22:51, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:26, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like there isn't any flecks on her shoulder, which doesn't match her queen. Maybe add some? oblivion^Audience? 01:53, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:45, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Q) - Tweaked

OA was Sandy with a tweak by Night Shine. Shading needed to be darker and defined. ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and tail. Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 13:55, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:25, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Whitefang (W) - Tweaked

OA is me, and I re-did the shading...and that's all I'm doing. —Jayce() 00:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur da shading. oblivion^Audience? 00:31, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww. I liked the darker shading. XD —Jayce() 00:37, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it then o3o. Lots. >:C oblivion^Audience? 00:38, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. —Jayce() 00:46, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading.  Stoneclaw    00:50, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 00:57, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur he shading on the muzzle and chest/neck Weylon _{Distinctly Unique.} 01:57, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 02:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 22:47, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

No. I'm quite partial to the darker shading. —Jayce() 22:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Erase a bit of shading on the face and the haunch, perhaps? Dazzy 08:48, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Quite honestly, I thought it was fine. But, I know if I didn't fix it, you guys would continue to harp on it. _-_;; —Jayce() 08:56, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Redone

I liked the elder better. OA was me, technically, and it needed to match the loner. —Jayce() 01:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch just a tad? ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:59, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 02:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and it looks like there's a white/gray spot on the haunch. Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 22:46, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ear pink is fine. If I blur it, it'll be almost non-existent. I fixed the haunch though - it was just a highlight I'd forgotten to lower the opacity on. Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 22:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. Sky ^{Molto bene} 12:16, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes and maybe define them a bit =3 Dazzy 14:58, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not adding more stripes, because if I do, then it looks clutter, and won't match the loner. —Jayce() 20:46, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (E) - Redone

Because stripes. OA was me and Sandy at some point, I think. Comments? llwildheart™l00:24 Fri Mar 9

Can you blur them just a tad? These look a little sharper then the others. —Jayce() 00:28, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Howzabout smudging them like you did on the older version? 8D Bloo!^yo 01:19, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Uh.. I suck at smudging... but I will try. Will be updated tonight. llwildheart™l01:31 Fri Mar 9

Reuploaded. I tried and failed at the smudging, so I just blurred it. llwildheart™l07:18 Fri Mar 9

Make the muzzle more gray and less cream~ This is beautiful <3 Dazzy 15:01, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. llwildheart™l06:27 Sat Mar 10

Mothwhisker (E)- Tweaked

Tweak patched cause they were too neon. OA=Ashshadow Bloo!^yo 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink match the patches' colour? Or do the other way around... --Leafstrike-- 03:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) ~ Redone

This one's just eh. OAs were Nightshine and Mistystar. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:00 Fri Mar 9

Make the shading a teensy weensy bit lighter on the haunch/tail? :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig

Re-uploaded I changed some other things too. Looks waaay better x.x  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:38 Sat Mar 10

Rushtail (RC) ~ Redone

Redone to match the warrior OA's were Nightshine and myself. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:26 Sat Mar 10