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Crowtail (Star) - Redone

I love Crowtail. —Jayce(11:28, 7/12/2015)

So do I. Define facial/head shading if there is any, maybe define eye depth, lovely^^ also make those tail stripes stand out more if you meant for them to be the same shade as those on her body, I can't see them properly o.o might be my screen or my eyes though. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (14:57,7/13/2015)

The stripes are done using the exact same process as I did on the elder. They're not meant to stand out. I'll reupload with the shading later, though. —Jayce(05:07, 7/14/2015)

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked the eyes a bit and added some shading to the ears. —Jayce(12:24, 7/14/2015)

Mistystar (L) ~ Tweaked

did someone reserve this for me or something, i dont remember reserving it lmao, but anyway she needed to be dark david ^🌈 06:34, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

She looks way too black. Lighten it a bit User:StormSongz/Sig 12:53, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

And while youre at it, define the shading User:StormSongz/Sig 12:54, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded im only lightening it a bit, otherwise ill get complaints of it being too light as usual. ._. david ^🌈 19:01, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink a little, please. And that goes for all I,ages of the same set on this page. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:46, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded david ^🌈 10:37, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Dull the nose pink please User:StormSongz/Sig 22:33, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the ear pink could be dulled (or at least shifted more towards grayish) a bit more on all her images... —Jayce(07:48, 7/15/2015)

i did dull the nose pink, bu if people want both duller then ok ill do it next upload. david ^🌈 09:36, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded id really rather not change the nose, just because its specifically described as pink. david ^🌈 10:30, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't the nose be the same color as the kit, as it did come first (since the queen, warrior, and deputy all really dont have nose pinks, and she wasnt leader until like Fading Echoes, and Bluestar's Prophecy came before that, and the cite is from Bluestar's Prophecy anyway)??? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:24, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (K) ~ Tweaked

 Needed to be dark blue gray, OA was Shelly. Right, I don't know if I need to match Skt's color - his seems too black and not blue enough, so I've decided to do it on a new shade first... correct me if I should like wait for him to re upload or smth. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (16:10,7/13/2015)

yes, you do. it doesnt matter if you think its too dark, I had it up first. >.> david ^🌈 18:58, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, it doesn't matter in the least if you didn't like what his shade was. Since David's was posted first, his coloring comes first. It's dark blue-gray, which is what she's cited as- just because it's "too black" doesn't mean you're not required to match it. —Jayce(12:57, 7/14/2015)

re-ups Just thought dark blue gray cats didn't look that dark, that's all.

The shading is practically gone now.... where did it go? —Jayce(14:23, 7/14/2015)

Vanished under the sunlight through the shadows if it makes any sense at all. Okay hands up, I got lazy. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (16:23,7/14/2015)

Dull the nose pink, please. —Ivy ☆ 22:21, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups What a bright nose >.> ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (00:10,7/15/2015)

Mistystar (A) - Tweaked

OAs were Rowanflight and Paleclaw, tweaked to darken. —Ivy ☆ 20:25, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped in response to Fox's comment. —Ivy ☆ 00:12, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

brighten the earpink a bit more User:StormSongz/Sig 03:23, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 12:46, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you match the nosepink on the kit please? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:25, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Tweaked

I was the OA of the redone blank version - it needed darkening. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 22:10, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the tail, if there is any? —Jayce(15:37, 7/14/2015)

Reups yup ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:09, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Halftail (Star) ~ Tweaked

Before you ask; yes, there is a version without the bit of bone/with a curvy bit at the end. I just have this a try to see what it'd look like. OA was Raven, and it was tweaked to add damage to the tail. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 11:33 Tue Jul 14

Re-uploaded for Berry, since she's on her iPad. and this is what she said she did:

[3:42:37 AM] [Berry]: i just did what david suggested and made the lineart between the tail and bone more transparent and added a scar sorta thing to the skin

so yeah have fun with that. —Jayce(07:45, 7/15/2015)

Mistystar (D) ~ Tweaked

I'm actually having to agree with Bramblesnow here and say that skt made the image too dark. The image that Bramblesnow posted is probably the darkest a blue-gray cat can get. But anyway, OA's were Sandstar12, tweakers Scarlet, Paleclaw, and Shelly User:StormSongz/Sig 15:21, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Stop complaining about the colour of the image. David's right; if it wasn't this dark, eventually someone would come forth and complain that it's too light. Anyways, define the shading a touch. I'm having a hard time seeing it. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 15:24 Tue Jul 14

Enough. Who cares how dark it is? David posted his first, so we are going with his darkness, whether you like it or not. If I see any more complaints, I will start to decline images. —Jayce(15:28, 7/14/2015)

Reups... User:StormSongz/Sig 15:32, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Cedarstar (Star) ~ Tweaked

Tweaked for shrinking white and darkening. OA was A Beautiful Oblivion User:StormSongz/Sig 15:43, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Please change the eye style back to what was here on this version. Eye style is artist's choice and should not be changed without permission. —Jayce(15:44, 7/14/2015)

my bad User:StormSongz/Sig 15:59, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blackstar (D) ~ Tweaked

Now it got worse... OA was Vixenblaze, tweaked to define light source and add pupils. Do I have the permission to redo the shading? I can't use the same source because the point is changing the light source, so I don't know what to do ...I left it as icky as it is just for now. ;-; ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (09:01,7/15/2015)

To tell you the same thing I told Storm, do not change the eyes without permission. The eyes were fine in the previous version. Just because one person said it does not mean the tweak needs to be done. The previous version did in fact have pupils, and just because it was only a pixel or two of color does not mean it needs to be changed. —Jayce(09:04, 7/15/2015)

Oops. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (09:51,7/15/2015)

Halftail (Alt W) ~ Tweaked

OA was Teldy, with a tweak by Paleh. Tweaked to add damage to the tail. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 10:18 Wed Jul 15

also thanks to david for uploading this for me ;;; ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 10:18 Wed Jul 15