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Mistystar (L) ~ Tweaked

did someone reserve this for me or something, i dont remember reserving it lmao, but anyway she needed to be dark david ^🌈 06:34, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

She looks way too black. Lighten it a bit User:StormSongz/Sig 12:53, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

And while youre at it, define the shading User:StormSongz/Sig 12:54, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded im only lightening it a bit, otherwise ill get complaints of it being too light as usual. ._. david ^🌈 19:01, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink a little, please. And that goes for all I,ages of the same set on this page. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:46, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded david ^🌈 10:37, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Dull the nose pink please User:StormSongz/Sig 22:33, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the ear pink could be dulled (or at least shifted more towards grayish) a bit more on all her images... —Jayce(07:48, 7/15/2015)

i did dull the nose pink, bu if people want both duller then ok ill do it next upload. david ^🌈 09:36, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded id really rather not change the nose, just because its specifically described as pink. david ^🌈 10:30, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't the nose be the same color as the kit, as it did come first (since the queen, warrior, and deputy all really dont have nose pinks, and she wasnt leader until like Fading Echoes, and Bluestar's Prophecy came before that, and the cite is from Bluestar's Prophecy anyway)??? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:24, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

i looked at the dates, and no, the latest tweak of the kit before this was a day after the latest tweak of the leader, so it should have matched the leader. david ^🌈 13:29, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Please dull down the earpink, it stands out too much as it is at the moment. User:Burntclaw/Sig 17:57, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

im gonna say no, i think its dulled enough as it is ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ david ^🌈 18:03, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

She looks almost black and not dark blue-gray...could you lighten her just a few more shades? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 18:24, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

shes about as dark as any dark grey cat? like hootwhisker for one. you guys want dark cats or not? david ^🌈 18:27, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

yes, we want dark cats, it's just that she almost looks black. if you don't want to fix it fine <_< Appledash ^{the light of honor} 18:29, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Hi there dulling down the earpink isn't a hard thing to do and dark cats have earpink as a reddish and very dark color especially that your image is near to black(the shade is fine, people stop being picky), and right now it stands out like neon so I ask you to please dull it down. User:Burntclaw/Sig 19:04, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

dont talk to me like i dont know how to use an art program, thanks. grey cats tend to have brownish skin, which is what i did in the last upload. :/ but fine, whatever, picky pca wins again right? david ^🌈 19:18, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded theres your damn dullness >.> david ^🌈 19:32, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

... skt, no one thinks you dont know how to use an art program. (Far from it, actually.) Please, calm down. Snapping at everyone just because they're trying to make the image better by commenting isnt really necessary. If more than one person sees fault, then its obvious that the comment should be considered. As for the image, do you mind smuding the earpink just a tad? If you believe its fine, then ignore me I guess.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys}

well it sure as hell sounded like it to me and you arent changing my mind on it. but whatever, re-uploaded david ^🌈 09:46, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Everyone knock it off. Burnt, don't talk to David like he's ten and doesn't know how to use an art program (because wow that sure seemed condescending because he didn't agree with you). Icy, stop getting annoyed just because he doesn't want to lighten it up. She's dark gray, not light or medium. There was nothing wrong at all with the shade he picked. I said this before at least twice- the shade is fine. Breeze, he wasn't snapping at everyone- he was saying something about PCA being pick- which some of the users are extremely picky. And David, chill a bit, please. Everyone's getting hostile as of late and seriously? It's just a pixel. The ear pink didn't really need to be dulled anymore than it already had been. Different monitors, phone screens, and tablet screens show different things- while it may have looked off to you guys, it certainly didn't look that way to myself or the tweaker of the image. —Jayce(11:17, 7/16/2015)

Mistystar (K) ~ Tweaked

 Needed to be dark blue gray, OA was Shelly. Right, I don't know if I need to match Skt's color - his seems too black and not blue enough, so I've decided to do it on a new shade first... correct me if I should like wait for him to re upload or smth. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (16:10,7/13/2015)

yes, you do. it doesnt matter if you think its too dark, I had it up first. >.> david ^🌈 18:58, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, it doesn't matter in the least if you didn't like what his shade was. Since David's was posted first, his coloring comes first. It's dark blue-gray, which is what she's cited as- just because it's "too black" doesn't mean you're not required to match it. —Jayce(12:57, 7/14/2015)

re-ups Just thought dark blue gray cats didn't look that dark, that's all.

The shading is practically gone now.... where did it go? —Jayce(14:23, 7/14/2015)

Vanished under the sunlight through the shadows if it makes any sense at all. Okay hands up, I got lazy. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (16:23,7/14/2015)

Dull the nose pink, please. —Ivy ☆ 22:21, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups What a bright nose >.> ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (00:10,7/15/2015)

Actually, as said by skt above, can you match the nose pink on the leader? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:33, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

I would basically just revert it then. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (16:24,7/15/2015)

Not trying to be a pain, but can you match the leader's nose pink color? Because this is brighter, and it looks a little too bright... —Ivy ☆ 00:17, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (A) - Tweaked

OAs were Rowanflight and Paleclaw, tweaked to darken. —Ivy ☆ 20:25, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped in response to Fox's comment. —Ivy ☆ 00:12, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

brighten the earpink a bit more User:StormSongz/Sig 03:23, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 12:46, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you match the nosepink on the leader please? User:StormSongz/Sig 13:25, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Colorpicked off leader's nosepink —Ivy ☆ 18:22, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Tweaked

I was the OA of the redone blank version - it needed darkening. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 22:10, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the tail, if there is any? —Jayce(15:37, 7/14/2015)

Reups yup ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:09, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also I am aware that the nose isn't pink like on the others so I'll fix that in a bit. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 20:27, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

her nose doesnt need to be pink though, these blanks arent made with nosepink in mind. david ^🌈 20:33, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Should I just leave it? ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 18:18, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

yeah its fine, no one expects it to be filled, especially as it isnt a hugely prominent feature. david ^🌈 18:21, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Halftail (Star) ~ Tweaked

Before you ask; yes, there is a version without the bit of bone/with a curvy bit at the end. I just have this a try to see what it'd look like. OA was Raven, and it was tweaked to add damage to the tail. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 11:33 Tue Jul 14

Re-uploaded for Berry, since she's on her iPad. and this is what she said she did:

[3:42:37 AM] [Berry]: i just did what david suggested and made the lineart between the tail and bone more transparent and added a scar sorta thing to the skin

so yeah have fun with that. —Jayce(07:45, 7/15/2015)

I actually think there shouldn't be the bone showing, as the skin will grow over it. Don't ask, even a bird wouldn't leave its bone exposed to the air while not getting any infection. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (15:04,7/15/2015)

Well, given that his tail was just...brutally ripped off, I think there'd be something there- they also don't have the medical means necessary to properly heal skin like that. —Jayce(15:13, 7/15/2015)

He would probably have died from infection if so, but it's a fiction story... I think with medication or not, creatures learn to save themselves. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (16:04,7/15/2015)

Mistystar (D) ~ Tweaked

I'm actually having to agree with Bramblesnow here and say that skt made the image too dark. The image that Bramblesnow posted is probably the darkest a blue-gray cat can get. But anyway, OA's were Sandstar12, tweakers Scarlet, Paleclaw, and Shelly User:StormSongz/Sig 15:21, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Stop complaining about the colour of the image. David's right; if it wasn't this dark, eventually someone would come forth and complain that it's too light. Anyways, define the shading a touch. I'm having a hard time seeing it. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 15:24 Tue Jul 14

Enough. Who cares how dark it is? David posted his first, so we are going with his darkness, whether you like it or not. If I see any more complaints, I will start to decline images. —Jayce(15:28, 7/14/2015)

Reups... User:StormSongz/Sig 15:32, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Dull the ear pink a tad, please. —Jayce(15:06, 7/15/2015)

Reups User:StormSongz/Sig 17:14, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/smooth out the shading a bit. —Jayce(11:19, 7/16/2015)

Reups User:StormSongz/Sig 22:38, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Cedarstar (Star) ~ Tweaked

Tweaked for shrinking white and darkening. OA was A Beautiful Oblivion User:StormSongz/Sig 15:43, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Please change the eye style back to what was here on this version. Eye style is artist's choice and should not be changed without permission. —Jayce(15:44, 7/14/2015)

my bad User:StormSongz/Sig 15:59, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

are we tweaking his entire set? If so, can you please dull down the ear pink? It seems... super bright right now. —Jayce(15:08, 7/15/2015)

Reups User:StormSongz/Sig 17:14, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Dull it down a little more, please. Also, while we're at it, could you please define the light on the tail? —Jayce(11:32, 7/16/2015)

Reups User:StormSongz/Sig 22:38, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (W) ~ Tweaked

I'm struggling to interpret the OA's as pages have gone missing? Apparently, OA is Sandstar, Redone artists are Icestorm and Shelly and a no-idea-what-they-did by Appledash? It says for approval on a tweak page? Anywho, darkened the fur.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 04:17, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

What did you do to the ear pink??? That wasn't part of the tweak nomination. —Jayce(05:58, 7/16/2015)

Sorry I forgot to mention it was too blurred to extract from a png file, and since the colour was changed slightly on the other images anyway I thought I'd just redo it. You want me to try to match it to how it was before?Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 06:06, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, please. I'd have asked you to make the ear pink a bit smaller anyways- I think it's taking up far too much of the ear and leaking down onto the pelt a bit more than it should be. —Jayce(11:20, 7/16/2015)

she looks just a litte too blue compared to the other images. david ^🌈 11:30, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Runningnose (L) ~ Tweaked

he has....beautiful emo eyes david ^🌈 11:51, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Life is horrible. My nose won't stop running. My name is Runningnose, and I'm emo. Don't judge. can you lighten the midriff shading just a tinnyyy bit? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 14:33, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Crowtail (W) - Redone

OA is Darkhallows, with a couple redos by me. Kept the ear pink and pale parts from the previous image but everything else is redone. —Jayce(12:01, 7/16/2015)

can u define the tail shading, i cant see any david ^🌈 12:03, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can try lmao. —Jayce(12:09, 7/16/2015)

Troutclaw (E) ~ Redone

♪hey now, hey now, this is what dreams are made of♪. oa was scar, later redone by me. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 15:38 Thu Jul 16