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Tweaking

Pearnose (MC) ~ Tweaked

Pearnose.mc ready for round two? Queen Beebs 01:08, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

should have said this before but the pale parts are far too blurred and dont blend in as well as they did in the original. david 🌈 08:39, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i try all the tiime Queen Beebs 01:55, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

idk but it seems too hardedged. Maybe smudge it a bit more? User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you... lighten the herbs and perhaps define light on them? yummy dark-seaweed Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~14:59,10/2/2015

The herbs don't need to be lightened. Herbs can be any different color. Appledash the light of honor 20:19, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Sunnytail (D) - Redone

Sunnytail.deputyspitting in younger me's face w/this new and improved ray of sunshine (: ROO 22:09, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me or if her shoulder shading is a bit... off?? I mean that always happens to me so idk me no like this black lines Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~09:41,9/30/2015

Smooth out the shading, i can see the smudge marks. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:54, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

The shoulder shading looks fine. Appledash the light of honor 21:32, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw that is lifted up - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:49, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Frost (Ro) ~ Tweaked

Frost.rogue shadin david 🌈 21:55, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Can you thin out the shading on the face a little if you get what I mean Appledash the light of honor 21:58, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded shut the hell your mouth david 🌈 15:24, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? bcprincess a giant woman 19:10, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

im trying to define it.....and its not very dark. david 🌈 17:41, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

smooth it out on the haunch, please. User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:49, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded' david 🌈 11:48, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) ~ Redone

Bramblestar.deputy Round 2 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:14, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. So brambleclaw's warrior doesn't really go down and rise again. It's basically straight. Can you fix that? Appledash the light of honor 13:13, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Thin the stripes a little and define the pale bit on the tail? bcprincess a giant woman 19:08, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

@Appledash, could u clarify, please? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:30, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Ok so his chest is basically like goes down to the neck, and rises from the chest. On Brambleclaw's warriors, it's a straight line, and doesn't rise. I'm horrible at explaining tbh. Appledash the light of honor 11:39, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (L) ~ Tweaked

Mistystar.leader david 🌈 05:18, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

can you smudge the tail shading? User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:59, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

no, blur it smooth out the shading where the gap between the two arms as well Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~15:19,10/1/2015

reuploaded david 🌈 22:57, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Make the shading sharper, and define it on the shoulder and forehead. Also, lighten it on the base of the tail, and thicken the shadnig out. It looks too thin right now. Appledash the light of honor 01:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded im not making it sharper.....people will just tell me to smudge it again. and this shading is nearly the exact same as the shading from the previous version, AND its around the same as runningnoses. no one had problems with those. and the tail shading is the exact same shade as the rest. david 🌈 11:44, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Miststar (D) ~ Tweaked

Mistystar.deputy OAs are Sandstar, Paleclaw, Shelly, and StormSongz. Tweaked to be lighter. When I changed the color the shading all but disapeared, and so I had to redo it. Ugh, this is terrible. bcprincess a giant woman 14:21, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add more depth to the shading and smooth it out. Also possibly thin it where it meets the midriff, and define it on the tail and all paws. Appledash the light of honor 01:08, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups bcprincess a giant woman 14:40, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, please. Appledash the light of honor 20:17, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups bcprincess a giant woman 21:41, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Tweaked

Mistystar.queen OA of the new blank was moi. I simply put the old colour back, but I also smoothed the shading on the belly, since it was that blocky type I used to do. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:43, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Smooth / blur it. Appledash the light of honor 01:08, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I actually personally think that the shading darkness and hardness is good as it is now. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:47, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I have to agree with Icy.. but I think if she smooths it out a bit more, she wouldn't have to lighten it. The transition is a bit rough. Jayce  ( 11:39, 10/2/2015 )

Mistystar (A) ~ Tweaked

Mistystar.apprentice Second try. Why did Mistykit even get declined??? Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~05:56,10/2/2015

I'm not sure, but since Burnt said you were a bit confused, it's alright. It's never really explicitly said in the guidelines, but it's two images on the tweak page as a time, and while you can reserve more than two on the nominations page, you can only post two and reserve two on the table. Jayce  ( 09:03, 10/2/2015 )

Yea I know. It was just that I declined both this and warrior after hearing that, but then the kit got declined too, so I was confused. Stealth already made it clear that she made a mistake so it's been solved. I was just worried that I did something else wrong =P Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~14:49,10/2/2015

Thistleclaw (Ki) ~ Redone

Thistleclaw.kit I totally ruined it. >< OA is Nightshine, Redone artist is Ivystripe and tweakers are Ashshadow and me. Tweaked tom match description. Many credit and thanks to Burntclaw for sending in the apprentice file, and that made my life much easier. :) Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 08:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

K so I smudged my white patches with a 10 px bristle brush and i did not smudge or blur the texture- i used a paint brush and added dark and light tones to show the light hitting the fur and the shadows to give his fur a "bristling" effect. Nice image, anyway =) User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the texture on the white please. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

why does he have white paws? hes only speicifed white and grey on his face and shoulders. david 🌈 11:03, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

nvm, cite got found david 🌈 12:06, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

He looks like hes still mottled, is that intentional? User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

That's texture. There is tabby stripes I promise, it's just harder to see because it's a tiny image.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more please, with a hard edged one px brush - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I have to turn the internet upside down to get a better smudge tool ><Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:21, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Silverstream (K) ~ Tweaked

Silverstream.kit OAs were Twidye and Thistleshine. Tweaked to define shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:02, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) ~ Redone

Thistleclaw.warrior oa's include bramble, mintstarr, shelly, silver, and jayce who was awesome enough to give me this and upload for me ;-; Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 11:06 Fri Oct 2

This should use the old linear art- it wasn't nominated for a linear tweak. Very pretty btw, maybe try erasing a little bit of the texture on the edge of the paws and the face so that it would look less grey. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:36, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Jayce told me they didn't mind me using new lineart; I'll change it if you want it, but... Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 12:19 Fri Oct 2

idk but I was told to do it in the past... So... User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:20, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I literally don't care either way. Given that it's explicitly stated he was named after his spiky fur, I think the more spikyness, the better. I was going to say that on the other images, but the apprentice was archived before I got the chance. Jayce  ( 12:25, 10/2/2015 )

Should I nominate the apprentice? User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:26, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

If you believe it should be, yes. I mean, given that ragged fur can change over time, I don't think you'd need to 30000% match Berry's style, but he could use more spiky fur. Anyways, Berry, could you define the ear pink? I actually didn't think he had any the first time I saw this. Jayce  ( 12:30, 10/2/2015 )

Littlecloud (K) ~ Redone

Littlecloud.kit *flails* OA was Skye. Redone to redo lol User:Winterflurry/Sig 00:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (DF) - Redone

Thistleclaw.df Okay, so I may have slightly overdone the fluff. But I'm really happy with this. OA was me. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:26, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Waste on the back - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:30, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:37, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the white on the face, it looks grey. Smooth out the texture and shading on the shoulder. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:42, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the fur tuffs more "spiky" like sharp ended? For now it's more like ragged than actually spiky. Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~07:50,10/3/2015

Flowerpaw (Star) - Redone

File:Flowerpaw.star.png OA is Stormsongz, redone to match. If Storm wants it, i will surrender this. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you can change the eyes. Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~07:47,10/3/2015

Every redone image of mine I had the eyes redone too...? User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ccccccrap bleh I thought this was tweaked omg sorry I'm just too dumb to even look Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~08:04,10/3/2015

Um im sorry?????? This is still mine, it is still the third Storm 13:03, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Ki) ~ Tweaked

Mistystar.kit Second try, tweaked to define shading Cheryl You're so Gorgeous ~06:00,10/3/2015

Thistleclaw (A) - Tweaked

Thistleclaw.apprentice He has Xanthe fur! User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:19, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Fluff up his butt and the base of histail a bit. It looks a bit weird to have it flat and then...poof. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:37 Sat Oct 3

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