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Foxleap (Alt W 2) - Redone
Define the shading on the legs. Needletail🐾The crazycatlady 04:13, May 29, 2018 (UTC)
Ashfur (Kit) - Redone
The spots on the back should be denser. There should be more variation in spot size and shape, especially on the back, and there should be variation in terms of the darkness of the spots (as in there should be darker spots on the back. In addition, there should be some curve to your stripes: they shouldn't just be straight lines.
Shading wise, I can't see where your source is coming from. The legs tell me it's coming from --> but the face tells me otherwise. It should also be defined and the leaking on the face and legs should be fixed. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:01,5/29/2018
Well actually quite a portion of the back is visible, i.e. the shaded portion. I still think your spots need to be denser there to match, like the warrior image. I think you could do this by adding translucent "dots" through the spots (if you look closely you can see that this is present in his other images and I think that's what makes it look "dense"). Even if you disagree that there is a back shown I still think you should add them to match. The spots on the chest need to be less opaque and smaller. In fact they look like dots on his other images. Also, the facial stripes need to be added back, because they appear on his other images. Lastly on the other images, you can see that the stripes have less opacity than yours do right now. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:51,5/29/2018
Via opacity wise, I have the file for the star and every single color is at the same opacity. So I am not sure what you want to do about that. Also, can I ask what you mean by "translucent dots"? Like, what would I have to do? Appledash the light of honor 09:55, May 29, 2018 (UTC)
I apologize for my poor word choice; it's quite difficult to describe so I'll do my best to explain.
If you look closely on the warrior image, there are a lot of tiny freckles scattered throughout the image, which gives the pattern an overall dense appearance. Currently all of your spots are roughly the same size, but if you look at his other images you can see quite a variation there (a lot, actually) with different opacities. And speaking of opacity, if you color picked from the star, I can see that they are at the same opacity, but my comparisons are based mainly on the warrior image, which is what I matched. If you look at the warrior image, it's clear that the stripes are much less opaque than the spots. I hope this clarifies. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:48,5/29/2018
Whichever came first; but I'd say that the colors and patterns on the warrior and star match relatively well, just that the opacity of the leg stripes is visibly different. But again, I did not make the star image, Jayce can disagree if I'm wrong, because I'm basing my comments on surface observations. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:27,5/29/2018
The warrior came first, and I agree with Fox about the leg stripes^ ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (19:44, 5/29/2018 )
I gave Icy the file for the StarClan, due to me not having the warrior one. All colors are the same, due to me having the warrior file at one point in time. The only thing that might be different are the leg stripes, but it's way too minor here to make a difference. Layer opacity doesn't work the same on every image, so you'd probably have to tweak that, Icy. Plus, as it being a different side than the warrior, the StarClan has some creative freedom that the rest of these images do not have. —Jayce ( 19:49, 5/29/2018 )
Heavystep (W) ~ Tweaked
Define the shading slightly? Needletail🐾The crazycatlady 00:36, May 31, 2018 (UTC)
Crookedstar (A) ~ Tweaked
Define the dorsal? I can't rlly see it. Needletail🐾The crazycatlady 03:58, May 30, 2018 (UTC)
Mousefang (Lo) - Redone
Mousefang (Ki) - Redone
Define the leg shading? Needletail🐾The crazycatlady 00:37, May 31, 2018 (UTC)