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Dappletail (Star) - Redone
-Rustle it takes a leap of faith18:08 Mon Mar 25 2019
Could you upload the changes elsewhere? I'm still seeing the old version. —Jayce(19:32, 3/25/2019)
Looks stunning when I checked the file history! Anywho, expand the shading on the paws, and is it possible to blur/smudge the shading since it looks a little hard-edged? If not it's cool. :)Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:20, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
can you make her dappled? Burntclaw 23:23, March 25, 2019 (UTC)
Changes. Also, she is dappled. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith22:53 Tue Mar 26 2019
Could you define the dapples, then? I can't tell they're even on her pelt. —Jayce(23:15, 3/26/2019)
Expand the earpink down in the bigger ear- it looks cut off abruptly by the white.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 23:47, March 26, 2019 (UTC)
Still working? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:49,3/31/2019
I'd like an extension of possible, or if I could withdraw and reupload later. My mom broke her ankle and I've been helping my parents move. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith23:13 Sun Mar 31 2019
That'd be fine. But to clarify, does this also include the reservations on Dappletail's other images? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:21,4/2/2019
I would be fine with that; the set does belong to Breezey and circumstances like what she explained are way beyond her control. I think we definitely should start being a bit more lenient when it comes to instances like Breezey's; it's not her fault that she is unable to upload right now and we shouldn't be holding that against her. —Jayce(05:36, 4/02/2019)
Wow! I love it! -Texas
Texas, please don't comment with non-critique. Can you smooth the shading a little bit? ✧Winter✧ 15:41, 4/12/2019
Of course, no rush. Please take your time. But are you still working on this? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:43,4/22/2019
Reuploaded. I think my schedule will be stable for a bit. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith1:35 Tue Apr 30 2019
Thrushpelt (TC) - Redone
I'm not really happy with this one but I tried. OA was Atelda. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 15:45, April 26, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Tweaked the colouring and removed waste. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 16:22, April 26, 2019 (UTC)
Shading is leaking away from the lineart near where the tail touches the body. Can you define the light on < this leg as well and smooth out the shading on the opposite leg?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 22:49, April 26, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Messed around with the shading hopefully it looks better. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 10:42, April 27, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Changed the eyes again. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 11:17, April 27, 2019 (UTC)
Which way is your light coming from? It hits the left of the face but the right of the legs and tail Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 15:56, April 27, 2019 (UTC)
if its a white flash, shouldnt the white be reduced? Burntclaw 16:38, April 27, 2019 (UTC)
Shading is still leaking near the tail tip. I can provide a redline if needed?Av Out of sight and out of mind () 21:59, April 27, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - It's alright, I think I got the shading. I reduced the white flash to something like Ravenpaw's and flipped the shading on the face. Hopefully, this is better c: — ☆ paper · finches ★ 11:56, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
can you smooth out the shading on the main body? Burntclaw 14:07, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
The shading’s meant to be a bit rough to stimulate fur. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 15:18, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
I think it needs to be smoothed out. And to add, the light source is confusing on the tail. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 15:31,4/28/2019
Given the source, I'm not sure shading on the back is needed either.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:13, 4/28/2019
Re-uploaded - Okay, I smoothed most of the shading on the body and tried to make my source more obvious - the light should be directly in front of them so I think there would be back and belly shading? If my shading's still dodgy I'd appreciate a redline. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 22:32, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
If it's coming from the front, there would be less belly shading towards that front belly area by the shoulder. Ellie life is an illusion 22:37, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Thanks! How's this? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 23:07, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
Could you add light to the front of the body since thats where your light is coming from unless I understood wrong? Ellie life is an illusion 23:11, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
Where exactly do I need to add light? Like the chest area? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 23:21, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
The chest and face and possibly that --> leg, I think. As since its from the front, the light should be on the --> side of those areas I suggested. Ellie life is an illusion 23:21, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
There really needn’t be shading on the back, either. Light would be there.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:24, 4/28/2019
Whiten the white flash? It looks gray.Av Out of sight and out of mind () 01:44, April 29, 2019 (UTC)
If its coming from the front near the face, I think there's be shading there since the face kinda casts a shadow over that Ellie life is an illusion 03:07, April 29, 2019 (UTC)
This source has been used in the past, and while some shading can be allotted under the chin and just to the side of the head for head shadow, it never reaches down the whole spine. Having it all the way down, but also having it on the belly of the cat, is near impossible.—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 03:19, 4/29/2019
So say, I erase some of the back and belly shading would that make more sense? — ☆ paper · finches ★ 14:20, April 29, 2019 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - How's this? I reduced the shading on the top of the body and the bottom. The white should also be lighter - I had to put it above the shading layer. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 17:50, April 29, 2019 (UTC)
Bubbling Stream (H) - Redone
There we go. This looks much better. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:36 Sun Apr 28
Could you lighten the shading a touch overall, but moreso on the white? Just clashes a little currently imo —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:13, 4/28/2019
Her eyes need to be blue per Shadowstar's Life --Eggheart!🐥A True Warrior 19:48, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
Can you add some more light to the <-- foreleg Ellie life is an illusion 19:49, April 28, 2019 (UTC)
Reuploaded Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•20:52 Sun Apr 28
Can you define the ear pink some? It seems to blend with the ginger color there a bit too well Ellie life is an illusion 03:08, April 29, 2019 (UTC)