Talk: Charart/Tweak Page

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Tweaking

Alderheart (MC) - Tweaked

OA was me, tweaked to match the stripes better. I had a hard time with the stripes, so any further suggestions for them are welcome. I'd also like permission to fix the shading a little bit as it's kind of sloppy and doesn't really have a lot of depth. —Ivy ☆ 03:14, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

^Permission granted for the shading Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:31, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. So sorry that it took me so long to reupload; I completely forgot about this. —Ivy ☆ 13:14, May 13, 2020 (UTC)

Spiderleg (W) - Tweaked

OA is me, tweaked to recede haunch shading and lighten it some ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 14:28, May 6, 2020 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading could be receded more —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 22:06, 5/06/2020

Re-Up! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 13:01, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe fix up the light source on the haunch, tail and <--- foreleg? Shading seems a bit overblurred and the light source isn't as clearly defined too; also there are areas where it appears shading is leaking onto other areas as if it's overblurred Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 15:36, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Re-Up! not sure about this- might change it later? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 17:33, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

I'm really not sure why the shading was added back to cover the haunch so extremely; the tweak was voted in for removing shading from the haunch, because there was too much, and we're back to even more than the og. Fixing it in other ways, per Vec, wouldn't result in doing the opposite of the tweak reasoning.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 23:18, 5/10/2020

Re-Up! hope this is better? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 00:13, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Compared to the set, he now looks too light. Can you darken him more to match better? --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 00:10, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

The shading is still very blotchy too Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:31, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Re-Up! better? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 23:26, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) - Tweaked

OA is me, tweaked to fix shading and eye color. I just redid the shading. --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 01:14, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth the tail shading some? Looks much better overall.—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 14:24, 5/07/2020

Reuploaded Thank you! I'm pretty happy with it too :) --Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:21, May 7, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add a little more depth to the chest shading, and smooth out the back leg shading near the knee area some as well? — max ^{it is the real thing,} (21:18, 08/5/2020)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:46, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the top of the back leg shading anymore, its still quite abrupt imo — max ^{it is the real thing,} (00:31, 10/5/2020)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 22:58, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth the haunch, top shoulder and tail shading a bit more? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:32, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded Av ^{Out of sight and out of mind} () 23:29, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Berrynose (Re) ~ Tweaked

OA is me, tweaking to match Alt warrior. Might define the shading or smth?? ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 23:31, May 12, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead and define the shading. Removing the texture made it awfully flat. —Jayce(23:36, 5/12/2020)​​​

Re-Up! ~ Pretty witty gay every day ~ 02:11, May 13, 2020 (UTC)