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Gray Sky Before Dawn (PH) - Redone

Gray.ph OA was Bramble with a redo by Iceheart.   Shepard   ( 01:40, 4/09/2016 )

Could you add more or define the mud? VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 12:14, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

This is really nitpicky, I think (?) but, the stripe are a little dark for a pale grey tabby? Silver tabbies have darker stripes like this, so could you possibly lighten the stripes to be more grey instead of black/dark grey? ferk was here 16:01, 04/9/2016

Re-uploaded. Millie, Reedtail, and Palefoot both have darker stripes, so I don't see why this image can't. Neither of them are cited with dark gray stripes, yet they have them. So, I'm sorry, but based on the fact that three other sets of images have these kinds of stripes, I don't think I'm required to change them.   Shepard   ( 20:04, 4/09/2016 )

Hmm. I forgot about them. Sorry about that Jayce. While I'm here... Can you define the overall shading a few ticks? Especially the tail, front legs, and head. I really love this *-* ferk was here 20:07, 04/9/2016

Re-uploaded.   Shepard   ( 22:36, 4/09/2016 )

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 12:11, 4/11/2016 )

Windstar (Star) ~ Tweaked

Windstar.star i'll like,.... fix this up later when i'm a lot more awake thna i am now david 🌈 01:56, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

I know you're already going to fix a few things... but could you define the shading basically everywhere? I'm having such a hard time seeing it.   Shepard   ( 08:30, 4/09/2016 )

Should she not have more stripes since she is not a pointed tabby? Sorry if this sounds rude or was already pointed out. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 12:12, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

ok, then tell me where in the books it says windstar isn't a pointed tabby. or any kind of tabby other than having narrow stripes. david 🌈 13:10, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded had to alter the source on the front legs too, it didn't make sense as it was. david 🌈 14:38, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Yes but it doesn't say anywhere that she is a pointed tabbie ether. I just think making her a pointed tabbie is jumping the gun a bit. She is just a thin striped tabbie and she should stay as thins in her description. VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 18:01, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

i'm allowed to make her any kind of tabby i want as long as the stripes are thin? which hey are? david 🌈 18:06, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Ok, I'm cool with that just wanted to check! VelvetmoonPersonne n'échappe à mon regard! 18:10, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 12:11, 4/11/2016 )

Tigerstar (Ki) - Redone

File:Tigerstar.kit.png Redone to match other images. ferk was here 16:00, 04/9/2016

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 12:11, 4/11/2016 )

Windstar (Q) - Tweaked

Windstar.queen Tweaked for thinner stripes, OA was Beebs. ferk was here 16:44, 04/9/2016

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 12:11, 4/11/2016 )

Stumpytail (A) - Redone

Stumpytail.apprentice No idea if the shading is too light. Can't really see it with the light my computer has. Appledash the light of honor 00:17, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, it's too light, define it please, quite a bit ferk was here 00:23, 04/11/2016

Re-uploaded: Better? Appledash the light of honor 00:36, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

Please crop the image; there's way too much excessive space on the top of the image and it should be cropped to the lineart. Also smudge or blur the ear pink- the transition seems a bit too abrupt.   Shepard   ( 12:11, 4/11/2016 )

the shading could be darkened some more as well as smoothed out. — MinkclawRiver is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:02, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 18:54, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

Could you try to make the pale parts visible? I know they're under shading on your image, but I can't really see them at all. – Ivy 01:29, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

I'm not exactly sure what you want me to do. I can't change the color of the pale parts, because that wouldn't be matching the original image. Did you want me to lighten the shading some more? Appledash the light of honor 11:37, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Tried to make them more visible without changing the color. Appledash the light of honor 19:32, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

his base is slightly darker than the other images, and I think some of his lighter belly is leaking onto the leg. david 🌈 19:41, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Can't believe I didn't correctly colorpick the base! Is this better? Appledash the light of honor 00:20, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink transition from the ear to the pelt looks like it ends too abruptly. Did you smudge/blur it to make it look softer/more fuzzy?   Shepard   ( 01:36, 4/13/2016 )

Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 01:48, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash the light of honor 16:27, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Windstar (L) ~ Tweaked

Windstar.leader some kind of effort was attempted (ill fix up the legs soon) david 🌈 18:33, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded fixed legs david 🌈 19:09, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

no idea if I'm allowed to comment, but shouldn't this match her other images. Like the early settler image has stripes all over, but this one does not??? — MinkclawRiver is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:06, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

Well she's being tweaked to have narrow stripes, so he isn't required to match any of the images. They need to be tweaked to match Windstar. Appledash the light of honor 19:33, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

on the right leg the ticked tabby stripes need to be higher on her leg to match the other one? — MinkclawRiver is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:28, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

why? she's sitting, so you can't even see most of the leg. david 🌈 16:46, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash the light of honor 16:27, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Stumpytail (Ki) - Tweaked

Stumpytail.kit Tweaked for shorter tail, OA is Berry. ferk was here 01:26, 04/13/2016

24 hours. Appledash the light of honor 16:27, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Tweaked

Stumpytail.warrior Tweaked for shorter tail, OA is Twee. ferk was here 01:26, 04/13/2016

24 hours. Appledash the light of honor 16:27, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

Blossom (Ro) ~ Tweaked

Blossom.rogue david 🌈 21:45, April 14, 2016 (UTC)

can I get a comment or an archive david 🌈 13:36, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

sorry about that.   Shepard   ( 13:39, 4/17/2016 )

Blossom (ES) ~ Tweaked

Blossom.es david 🌈 13:47, April 17, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:51, April 19, 2016 (UTC)

Stumpytail (Ro) - Tweaked

Stumpytail.rogue Tweaked for shorter tail, OA is Hawky. ferk was here 20:44, 04/18/2016

24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:53, April 20, 2016 (UTC)

Poolcloud (E) ~ Tweaked

Poolcloud.elder david 🌈 13:19, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the gray a tad; when I first saw this, I thought she was pure white. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:58, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

She's supposed to be pale gray-and-white, not just normal gray-and-white. The shade is fine.   Shepard   ( 14:01, 5/03/2016 )

i'd appreciate either a comment or an archive. david 🌈 15:19, May 5, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 19:25, 5/05/2016 )

Volepaw (ShC) (App) ~ Tweaked

Volepaw (ShC).apprentice Tweaked for leaking shading on the haunch, and I think I got it all spooky a black scaredy cat! 21:35, 5/05/2016

24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:24, May 7, 2016 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo) ~ Tweaked

Jingo.loner david 🌈 15:30, May 8, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 10:50, 5/10/2016 )

Gorseclaw (TC) (Star) - Tweaked

Gorseclaw (TC).star OA is beau ❀ mei ❀ the hollow crown 18:23, May 7, 2016 (UTC)

define the ear pink? Appledash the light of honor 00:58, May 8, 2016 (UTC)

re-up ❀ mei ❀ the hollow crown 20:41, May 9, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 17:35, 5/11/2016 )

Blossom(Lo) ~ Tweaked

Blossom.loner Needed to be tweaked to look more tortoiseshell; added some more ginger spooky a black scaredy cat! 02:04, 5/07/2016

I don't see any ginger. david 🌈 13:55, May 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Should be more visible now spooky a black scaredy cat! 23:56, 5/07/2016

It doesn't look that ginger ... can you change the color or something? Appledash the light of honor 01:00, May 8, 2016 (UTC)

The color has to match the other images, and they've already been tweaked.   Shepard   ( 01:01, 5/08/2016 )

Reuploaded Tried to color-pick the ginger better spooky a black scaredy cat! 16:25, 5/08/2016

the hex is c95a1e david 🌈 16:32, May 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded ty spooky a black scaredy cat! 12:47, 5/09/2016

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 17:35, 5/11/2016 )

Windstar (Ki) ~ Tweaked

Windstar.kit i did tweak this so lmao...but I'll work on trying to make the shading look better in the next upload. david 🌈 15:02, May 10, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded david 🌈 17:31, May 11, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours. – Ivy 18:40, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Q) ~ Tweaked

Poolcloud.queen Apparently the others needed lightening, so I guess this does too. I was the OA of the new blank. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:42, May 10, 2016 (UTC)

I'm having trouble making out the difference between the white and the gray; I think the shading's a bit too dark and thick, but that could just be my eyes.   Shepard   ( 17:34, 5/11/2016 )

eyelashes as well david 🌈 17:38, May 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:30, May 12, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours. – Ivy 18:40, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

Lilystar (Le) - Redone

Lilystar.leader I'm alive i promise. OA was Leaf-storm, tweaked for blotchy, source-less shading. ferk was here 20:46, 05/9/2016

Was the eye style altered besides taking the eyelashes off? It doesn't look the same, and unless you asked, the eyes need to stay the same.   Shepard   ( 10:48, 5/10/2016 )

The shading still looks a little blotchy, maybe you can smooth it or lighten it? Appledash the light of honor 17:07, May 10, 2016 (UTC)

Jayce she's a solid so I can redo it? Characters with a solid pelt style may either be tweaked or redone, depending on the tweaker's discretion. As it is a one solid color, there is not much to keep if the tweaker so decides to redo it. Besides, they were flat so it looked unnatural. Anyways, Reuploaded ferk was here 20:18, 05/10/2016

Uh, you probably should have asked first... redoing a tweaked image has always required permission, and I don't think it's fair when we've always required permission in the past. I don't know who added that, but I don't think it's right if it's not nominated for a redo..considering people can and have been warned in the past for doing so. imo the image could be tweaked and if you wanted to redo it, you should have nominated it for doing so in the first place.   Shepard   ( 00:09, 5/11/2016 )

also if it's redone it should have "redone" and not tweaked. Appledash the light of honor 00:28, May 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I figured it was ok since it said so in the guidlines. Suppose I should know better but <shrug>. at least I know now for next time?? ferk was here 01:38, 05/11/2016

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 11:02, 5/18/2016 )

Mossyfoot (W) ~ Tweaked

Mossyfoot.warrior david 🌈 12:39, May 17, 2016 (UTC)

minor thing but could you add a little bit of light to the front paw that is closest to us? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:11,5/18/2016

reuploaded david 🌈 19:14, May 19, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 11:49, 5/21/2016 )

Brightheart (Alt. W) - Tweaked

Brightheart.warrior.alt Last OA was Paleh. Gave her claw marks across her muzzle; same layer as her regular warrior ScarletwindGo Beyond Plus Ultra!! 03:28, May 19, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 11:49, 5/21/2016 )

Brightheart (W) - Tweaked

Brightheart.warrior OA was me. Gave her claw marks across her muzzle ScarletwindGo Beyond Plus Ultra!! 03:28, May 19, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light/shading on the legs? It looks kinda flat.   Shepard   ( 19:51, 5/19/2016 )

Re-uploaded ScarletwindGo Beyond Plus Ultra!! 03:27, May 22, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 16:32, 5/23/2016 )

Sneezecloud (Alt Ki) - Redone

Sneezecloud.kit.alt OA was Dawnleaf with a redo by me and then a shading tweak by Rowan. I redid it again after that, and now I'm stuck redoing it again because of that blasted tortie thing.   Shepard   ( 11:50, 5/21/2016 )

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 16:32, 5/23/2016 )

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Tweaked

Mossyfoot.apprentice david 🌈 19:34, May 21, 2016 (UTC)

24 hours.   Shepard   ( 16:32, 5/23/2016 )

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