Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 146

Shadowkit (Ki) ~ Redone

File:Shadowkit.kit.png david ^🌈 02:10, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(04:04, 5/28/2018)

Crookedstar (De) ~ Tweaked

OA was Pikachushinx. Tweaked to add dorsal stripe. Needletail🐾^{Came inlike aWrecking ball} 04:11, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 07:48, May 28, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (De) ~ Tweaked

I hate stripes. Needletail🐾^{Came inlike aWrecking ball} 04:11, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 07:49, May 28, 2018 (UTC)

Flowerstar (Star) ~ Tweaked

i don't wanna do la hw someone help me ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<00:24, 5/22/2018>

for placement to match the other images, you'll need to remove the ginger patch on the < shoulder, and have the patch of ginger on the chest reach upwards more —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 14:00, 5/22/2018

Still working?—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 20:27, 5/25/2018

re-up sorry i had been dragged into the vortex that is projects ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<15:51, 5/27/2018>

24 hours. —Jayce(23:03, 5/28/2018)

Birdwing (KP) ~ Redone

this looks so weird lmao—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 03:18, 5/27/2018

Could you define/tweak the shading and highlights? This is looking pretty flat right now. —Jayce(04:30, 5/27/2018)

I'm not sure how I would tweak the shading or highlights without making the shading pure black or ruining it.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 04:48, 5/27/2018

I was given premission to redo it.^^—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 05:54, 5/27/2018

24 hours. —Jayce(23:03, 5/28/2018)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked

OA was Hawkmask121. Tweaked by Jayce. Tweaked to match color to Birchstar's. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:47, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the facial shading a tad? Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 06:15, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 14:20, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(23:03, 5/28/2018)

Clovertail (Alt. Q. 2) ~ Tweaked

OA was Bbun. Tweaked by Jayce. Tweaked to match color to Birchstar's. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 04:47, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the shading on the white parts? Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 06:15, May 27, 2018 (UTC)

Personally, I can see the shading on the white parts just fine.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 08:01, 5/27/2018

24 hours. —Jayce(23:03, 5/28/2018)

Heavystep (E) ~ Tweaked

OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:14, 5/19/2018 )

This should be the base of Birchstar's leader. Needletail 🐾^#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what else I can do. The shading on this is much darker than the apprentice, so it seems too dark, but the lightest color on this (like the face) does match Birchstar's leader (If anything it's too light) ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (05:27, 5/20/2018 )

The color I have compared to this is very different.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 09:30, 5/20/2018

Define the shading. —Jayce(14:58, 5/20/2018)

Reuploaded Idk what to do Broken, the color matches Birchstar ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:46, 5/21/2018 )

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ Needletail 🐾^#Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think I've matched the color the best I can, unless someone really thinks it could match better ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:43, 5/22/2018 )

A bit late, but I feel this could be a tad bit lighter. —Jayce(03:22, 5/27/2018)

Reuploaded but it's too light to match Birchstar now and it doesn't look like it matches the apprentice either ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (14:51, 5/27/2018 )

Reuploaded Ignore that ^ I made it lighter, I think it matches better? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (20:18, 5/28/2018 )

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 09:39, 5/30/2018

Heavystep (A) ~ Tweaked

OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (23:14, 5/19/2018 )

This one seems lighter than the other images. Needletail 🐾^#Litten 05:04, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes it seems that way. The elder was darker than the other ones before I think because of the shading. I colorpicked the base color of both and the apprentice is actually a little darker than the elder. So should I leave it since the base color is basically the same, or darken it because overall the image looks lighter? I'm not sure Actually, I'm not going to darken it because the color of this is the same as Birchstar ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (05:16, 5/20/2018 )

I believe he should match- so maybe make it darker. Needletail 🐾^#Litten 05:18, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Is it the same color base as birch's leader? Needletail 🐾^#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (05:28, 5/20/2018 )

Define the shading. The color tweak now makes it look flat. —Jayce(14:57, 5/20/2018)

Reuploaded ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:46, 5/21/2018 )

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ Needletail 🐾^#Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Same as above ^ ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:44, 5/22/2018 )

it could stand to be tweaked some more, it's still too different. david ^🌈 20:22, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Can you be more specific? If you mean the color, I can assure you that it couldn't match Birchstar any better (It just looks darker than before because I defined shading) ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (03:51, 5/24/2018 )

Could you actually define the overall shading? I'm still finding it extremely hard to see. —Jayce(03:21, 5/27/2018)

Reuploaded Can you see it now? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (14:52, 5/27/2018 )

I can; tweak the color on this one too. I had forgotten to mention that on the elder, hence why you tweaked one and not the other. —Jayce(15:03, 5/27/2018)

I would just like to ask.. why? I tweaked it to match Birchstar and it does. If you colorpick the lightest spot on this and Birchstar, it's the same ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (21:02, 5/27/2018 )

I did colorpick and used the colors that Cosmo links, and I'm still finding that Birchstar's images are lighter than what you have. —Jayce(00:52, 5/28/2018)

Reuploaded I think it's because I had to define the shading, because I know it was the same color before that ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (20:20, 5/28/2018 )

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 09:39, 5/30/2018

Owlclaw (A) - Redone

all colors are from the warrior. —Jayce(01:16, 5/28/2018)

Define the shading. Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 04:06, May 28, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(04:16, 5/28/2018)

Can you maybe define the shading on the pager parts? Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 00:41, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

I can see it just fine? —Jayce(01:15, 5/29/2018)

24 hours. —Jayce(18:28, 5/30/2018)

Ashfur (TC) (A) ~ Redone

OA is Raelic, redone to match. I believe I can post this since I haven't got a reply from Sun and today is when the reservation ends? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:54,5/28/2018

Oh shoot, I realized I have the file name wrong >.< Can someone rename this - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:55,5/28/2018

You can't reupload over File:Ashfur (TC).apprentice.png?? Also, this looks much better! You also are welcome to post, yes. —Jayce(03:57, 5/28/2018)

Thank you~ I just reuploaded over the correct file name. It was just that I accidentally uploaded the image with the incorrect name, so I guess someone would have to delete the old one. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:00,5/28/2018

Nah, you're all good to just reupload. It preserves file history for the previous artists anyways. —Jayce(04:03, 5/28/2018)

Define the shading a bit? Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 04:07, May 28, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Could someone delete File:Ashfur.apprentice.png? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:25,5/28/2018

There's some waste outside <- front paw, and maybe blur/smooth the spots on the back. Very nice job matching the other images!! ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (20:29, 5/28/2018 )

Re-uploaded Thank you~ - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:06,5/29/2018

24 hours. —Jayce(18:28, 5/30/2018)

Mousefang (E) - Redone

—Jayce(23:10, 5/28/2018)

24 hours. —Jayce(18:28, 5/30/2018)

Heavystep (W) ~ Tweaked

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. OA was Raelic. Tweaked to match color to Birchstar's. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:17, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading slightly? Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 00:36, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:55, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(23:14, 6/01/2018)

Mousefang (Lo) - Redone

—Jayce(18:36, 5/30/2018) ( 18:36, 5/30/2018 )​

Remove some of the stripes from reaching the chest? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:03, May 30, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You probably might have issues seeing it because of the shading, but I did remove some of the stripes. —Jayce(19:26, 5/31/2018)

24 hours. —Jayce(23:14, 6/01/2018)

Mousefang (Ki) - Redone

—Jayce(18:36, 5/30/2018) ( 18:36, 5/30/2018 )​

Thicken the tail stripes? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 23:00, May 30, 2018 (UTC)

Define the leg shading? Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 00:37, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

leg shading is very visible on my screen madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Gonna be a butt here, but I'm not sure I can thicken these tail stripes? I'll give it a shot, but I'm not promising good results. —Jayce(07:45, 5/31/2018) ( 07:45, 5/31/2018 )​

I tried to tweak the stripes, and I couldn't get a result I was happy with. Sorry, but I'll keep the tail stripes how they are for now. —Jayce(19:25, 5/31/2018) ( 19:25, 5/31/2018 )​

24 hours. —Jayce(23:14, 6/01/2018)

Crookedstar (Lo) ~ Tweaked

Tweaked to add dorsal stripe. OA was me. Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 02:30, June 1, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(23:14, 6/01/2018)

Foxleap (Alt W 2) - Redone

Appledash ^{the light of honor} 01:44, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

Soften the edges of the ear pink just a bit? Woooo, you kept the older style .o. —Jayce(01:44, 5/29/2018)

Re-uploaded: Yeah, I decided I liked it more. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 02:25, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 04:13, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Appledash ^{the light of honor} 08:20, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little more on the two legs furthest from us (his right foreleg and hindleg)? —Ivy ☆ 23:11, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Appledash ^{the light of honor} 10:00, June 1, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:44, June 2, 2018 (UTC)

Ashfur (Kit) - Redone

OA was Honeyfur, it seems as if Ivystripe redid it and then Duck tweaked it and then I ruined it. All colors from Cloudy. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 02:25, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste on <-- side.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 02:31, 5/29/2018

Re-uploaded: Appledash ^{the light of honor} 02:52, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

The spots on the back should be denser. There should be more variation in spot size and shape, especially on the back, and there should be variation in terms of the darkness of the spots (as in there should be darker spots on the back. In addition, there should be some curve to your stripes: they shouldn't just be straight lines.

Shading wise, I can't see where your source is coming from. The legs tell me it's coming from --> but the face tells me otherwise. It should also be defined and the leaking on the face and legs should be fixed. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:01,5/29/2018

Re-uploaded: The back is not very visible, so I cannot do much more - it really is not visible at all. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 06:04, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

Well actually quite a portion of the back is visible, i.e. the shaded portion. I still think your spots need to be denser there to match, like the warrior image. I think you could do this by adding translucent "dots" through the spots (if you look closely you can see that this is present in his other images and I think that's what makes it look "dense"). Even if you disagree that there is a back shown I still think you should add them to match. The spots on the chest need to be less opaque and smaller. In fact they look like dots on his other images. Also, the facial stripes need to be added back, because they appear on his other images. Lastly on the other images, you can see that the stripes have less opacity than yours do right now. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:51,5/29/2018

Via opacity wise, I have the file for the star and every single color is at the same opacity. So I am not sure what you want to do about that. Also, can I ask what you mean by "translucent dots"? Like, what would I have to do? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 09:55, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

I apologize for my poor word choice; it's quite difficult to describe so I'll do my best to explain.

If you look closely on the warrior image, there are a lot of tiny freckles scattered throughout the image, which gives the pattern an overall dense appearance. Currently all of your spots are roughly the same size, but if you look at his other images you can see quite a variation there (a lot, actually) with different opacities. And speaking of opacity, if you color picked from the star, I can see that they are at the same opacity, but my comparisons are based mainly on the warrior image, which is what I matched. If you look at the warrior image, it's clear that the stripes are much less opaque than the spots. I hope this clarifies. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:48,5/29/2018

Oh, I am matching the StarClan version. Should I match the warrior version instead of the StarClan? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 11:03, May 29, 2018 (UTC)

Whichever came first; but I'd say that the colors and patterns on the warrior and star match relatively well, just that the opacity of the leg stripes is visibly different. But again, I did not make the star image, Jayce can disagree if I'm wrong, because I'm basing my comments on surface observations. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:27,5/29/2018

The warrior came first, and I agree with Fox about the leg stripes^ ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (19:44, 5/29/2018 )

I gave Icy the file for the StarClan, due to me not having the warrior one. All colors are the same, due to me having the warrior file at one point in time. The only thing that might be different are the leg stripes, but it's way too minor here to make a difference. Layer opacity doesn't work the same on every image, so you'd probably have to tweak that, Icy. Plus, as it being a different side than the warrior, the StarClan has some creative freedom that the rest of these images do not have. —Jayce(19:49, 5/29/2018)

Re-uploaded: Ehhhh Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:43, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading ? Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 21:49, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the leg stripes just a little tiny bit? —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 22:09, May 31, 2018 (UTC)

That looks much better! The only thing is that you should lighten the chest dapples a little, but now it matches very well.- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:03,5/31/2018

i cant tell where the light source is coming from. the face, back paw, and tail indicate it's coming from -->, the body/legs indicate the light is <-- madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

If she swaps the head shading to be on --> side, she'll be fine. This is very close to the same source I use, and I've run into this issue multiple times... although there are other kit images with this source, so I feel as long as it shows a basic 3D shape (which it does), this obsession with "proper" shading is getting to be a bit too much. —Jayce(06:49, 6/01/2018)

Re-uploaded: Thanks. Also I feel like I may have lightened the stripes on the legs too much? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 09:58, June 1, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:44, June 2, 2018 (UTC)

Mousefang (Star) - Redone

—Jayce(23:19, 6/01/2018)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:44, June 2, 2018 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Redone

—Jayce(23:19, 6/01/2018)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:44, June 2, 2018 (UTC)

Crookedstar (A) ~ Tweaked

Recent OA is Iceheart22. I may fiddle with this after.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 01:59, 5/30/2018

Define the dorsal? I can't rlly see it. Needletail🐾^{The crazycatlady} 03:58, May 30, 2018 (UTC)

User has been blocked, their comments will be disregarded. That being said, this image has gone multiple days without any other comments, so this will be archived. —Jayce(16:58, 6/03/2018)

Holly (Q) ~ Tweaked

david ^🌈 02:12, June 4, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 05:23, 6/05/2018

Palebird (Q) ~ Redone

david ^🌈 07:21, June 7, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 16:51, 6/08/2018

Sandynose (W) ~ Redone

this looks so much better.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:28, 6/07/2018

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 16:51, 6/08/2018

Sandynose (KP) ~ Redone

OA is Cosmo.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:28, 6/07/2018

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 16:51, 6/08/2018

Palebird (Star) ~ Redone

dedicated to the little man. david ^🌈 23:28, June 8, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 14:50, 6/10/2018

Sandynose (Lo) - Redone

redone for artists choice. madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 14:50, 6/10/2018

Littlekit (YS) (K) - Redone

Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 05:17, June 2, 2018 (UTC)

darken the markings a bit? they sorta blend in with the shading madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

This is so cute! Define the tail shading a little.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 06:44, 6/02/2018

can you define the earpink a smidge? david ^🌈 05:00, June 3, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 19:46, 6/05/2018

Yes I am, ugh I’m just so busy and irritated and tired and I’ll try to get to this tomorrow, I promise. I’ll try. I’m so sorry. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 02:34, June 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 04:35, June 6, 2018 (UTC)

Very nice, could you smudge/blend the shading on the chest a little? It appears a bit bold to me. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:06, June 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 01:43, June 8, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 01:56, June 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ^✣ICouldn't_{SayIt To Myself ✣} 18:23, June 9, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 04:07, 6/11/2018

Sandynose(A) - Redone

damn this sucks lol. I am the OA - redone because artists choice. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 19:53, June 9, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 04:07, 6/11/2018

Sandynose (Ki) ~ Redone

OA is cosmo.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 14:44, 6/10/2018

Could you make the pupils more noticeable? I can't tell if they're there ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (00:04, 6/11/2018 )

Fixed.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:46, 6/11/2018

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 15:34, 6/13/2018

Jake (Ki) ~ Tweaked

OA was Shinx. Tweaked to darken to match Firestar. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:49, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

Color seems a little off compared to the kittypet; I feel like the kittypet is somewhat redder than this. Also, did you modify the chest? It looks hard edged. I think you should somehow smudge it a bit.

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:05,6/11/2018

The chest is hard-edged, but to be fair, there are highlights on the kittypet, and this shade is around the color that the rogue is.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:48, 6/11/2018

Reups I didn't modify the chest. I noticed the chest was a bit hard-edged when I was erasing/isolating that part from the tweaked layer, but I did go over it again and smudged it a bit. I hope that helps? Maybe it's also because of how stark the two colors are as compared to the original idk. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:00, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 15:34, 6/13/2018

Jake (Lo) ~ Tweaked

OA was Burntclaw. Tweaked to darken to match Firestar. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 05:49, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

See above comment (except the chest is fine on this image)

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:05,6/11/2018

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 16:00, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 15:34, 6/13/2018

Palebird (Alt.Q) ~ Redone

david ^🌈 22:08, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 15:34, 6/13/2018

Flowerstar (L) ~ Tweaked

tweaked for placement issues and earpink color not matching the set, also ended up fixing blurry lineart —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 20:22, 6/12/2018

Can you shrink/remove the ginger patch from the belly? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 00:07, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 00:23, 6/13/2018

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 02:59, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Palebird (W) - Tweaked

the only one who I'm going to listen to for white placement tweaking is David, since this is based off of their cat. —Jayce(04:22, 6/13/2018) ( 04:22, 6/13/2018 )​ ( 04:22, 6/13/2018 )​

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:25, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Gray Wing (L) ~ Tweaked

—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 19:36, 6/13/2018

The tear looks too big compared to the star/early settler + there's waste around > ear ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:15, 6/14/2018 )

Fixed.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 04:27, 6/14/2018

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:25, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Star) - Redone

Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{19:58 Wed Jun 13} 19:58, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Jumper (R) ~ Redone

—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 21:48, 6/13/2018

There shouldn't be black on the chest I don't think ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:24, 6/14/2018 )

Reuploaded —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 04:37, 6/14/2018

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Crookedstar (D) - Tweaked

dorsal stripe. Most recent OA was Shinx. madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Waste around <- front leg and <- back leg ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:27, 6/14/2018 )

reups there was a few more patches of waste. surprised it didn't get pointed out during approval madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Spiderleg (Ki) - Redone

madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Speck of waste on -> side of head ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:29, 6/14/2018 )

reups didn't see waste, but there was some blurry lineart for some reason madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt R) ~ Tweaked

—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 03:08, 6/14/2018

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Q) - Redone

Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{20:18 Wed Jun 13}

The eye color looks different from the star's.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 20:20, 6/13/2018

There's more space in the StarClan image to add color; I think it's fine. —Jayce(20:22, 6/13/2018)

I took it from the rogue for both, which was first in the set. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{20:23 Wed Jun 13}

The stripes on < leg on the star look thinner than the ones here ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:21, 6/14/2018 )

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{22:29 Thu Jun 14}

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:24, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) - Tweaked

Tweaked to remove white from face, most recent OA is Ivystripe. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:42, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I know this isn't what it's up for, but could you perhaps add a slight amount of light to the tail? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:25, 6/14/2018

Re-uploaded. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:24, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Barley (Ro) - Redone

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 21:25, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:24, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (D) - Redone

Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:05, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:24, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Skystar (L) ~ Tweaked

—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 19:36, 6/13/2018

same as millie, could you thicken the lineart just a little in a few places? david ^🌈 21:33, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:13, 6/15/2018

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:19, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Houndleap (W) ~ Tweaked

OA was me. Tweaked to add <--- ear tip back. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 02:19, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I know it isn't what it's up for but is it possible to soften the shading on the closest foreleg somewhat? david ^🌈 21:32, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I see it too, and I tried? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:54, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:19, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) ~ Redone

Redone to match. Again, look at this shading. How wonderful it is ughhh Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 03:53, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good! Would you add a bit of depth to the eyes, and perhaps make the shading a liiiittle less reddish? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:37, 6/14/2018 )

Reups Thanks haha Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 13:49, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the pale parts^^ Also, I think there wouldn't be quite so many spots on the tail, to match the other images c: —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:24, 6/14/2018

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-why-can-I-not-be-happy-with-this-ups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:46, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:19, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Palebird (Ki) ~ Redone

david ^🌈 04:56, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 13:19, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Princess (KP) ~ Tweaked

—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:31, 6/15/2018

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 19:26, 6/16/2018

Willowshine (MCA) ~ Tweaked

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:41, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 00:54, 6/17/2018

Willowshine (Ki) ~ Tweaked

—Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 23:41, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 00:54, 6/17/2018

Millie (W) ~ Tweaked

—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 15:56, 6/14/2018

can you maybe thicken the lineart on the tear just a bit? david ^🌈 21:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 13:09, 6/15/2018

I think the tear should be smaller, it looks like a tiny nick on the elder ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (19:46, 6/15/2018 )

I think it's the angle.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 20:01, 6/15/2018

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 21:07, 6/17/2018

Snipe (Ro) ~ Tweaked

tried to keep the black as accurate to the dark grey areas as possible. david ^🌈 23:28, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I don't think it was nominated for this, but do you mind defining the shading overall, especially on the legs? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:48, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded just didn't want to touch it unless someone pointed it out first. david ^🌈 01:42, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 21:07, 6/17/2018

Princess (Ki) - Tweaked

brown paw. OAs: spooky, bbun, and paleclaw madie ^{the wicked witch of the west}

Why was the paw changed to brown? (I wasn't around when it was nominated) ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (19:52, 6/15/2018 )

Because it didn't match the other images in the set, each of which should have a brown paw. The kittypet is first in this set, and it has a brown paw. —Jayce(06:21, 6/16/2018)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 21:07, 6/17/2018

Jumper (L) ~ Tweaked

—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 16:31, 6/15/2018

I think there's shading leaking from the lower back lineart (near the haunch) and along the tail. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:04, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 01:24, 6/16/2018

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 21:07, 6/17/2018

Gorseclaw (TC) (K) ~ Tweaked

—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 21:38, 6/16/2018

There's some waste by the back paw ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (00:43, 6/17/2018 )

Reuploaded —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 00:49, 6/17/2018

24 hours. —Patchfeather^{Hangar 18, I know too much} 14:05, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (Star) - Redone

The shading looks very...weird, so I will probably redo it. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 00:21, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the spots a bit. Would you like the file for one of his other chararts? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:47, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, that would be excellent. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 03:44, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Appledash ^{the light of honor} 00:10, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the spots more, expand shading, I don't think the tailtip should be completely brown, and the earpink and nose should be lighter to match kit (original) ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (00:41, 6/17/2018 )

Re-uploaded: The tail tip is completely brown in his other images. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 13:02, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws, tail, and chin/face area? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 14:52, 6/18/2018

Re-uploaded: Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:43, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (A) ~ Redone

Hey everyone this is your host Vec and here's her latest rendition of "I can't do stripes" Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 20:53, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Don't worry, I can't do stripes either. Can you smooth out the shading? ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<22:38, 6/17/2018>

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:48, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Princess (Q) ~ Tweaked

—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 21:20, 6/17/2018

I think the shading is leaking along the belly fluff lineart Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:29, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 00:11, 6/19/2018

Maybe smooth the belly shading just a tad? Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{18:33 Tue Jun 19}

Reuploaded tried my best, don't have the file though —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 19:22, 6/19/2018

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Ki) ~ Redone

Please let me know if I missed any cream or brown spots ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:28, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Fiddled with the shading a bit. Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 01:48, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

can you dull down the cream just a bit to match the warrior and the others? david ^🌈 22:36, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 22:59, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Leafpool (K) ~ Tweaked

—spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 14:40, 6/18/2018

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Tweaked

File:Bramblestar.deputy.png Just tweaked to get that piece of shading. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:40, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (MC) - Redone

I'll get the torn ear in a minute. Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{18:20 Tue Jun 19}

Reuploaded Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{18:32 Tue Jun 19}

Again to turn herbs layer back on Sun ^{Man, that man is nonstop♣}•_{19:04 Tue Jun 19}

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Lo) ~ Redone

This . . . is not Cherrytail. This is her stunt-double who has decided she will fill in for Cherrytail. This pattern is also impossible for me. ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<02:18, 6/17/2018>

The ginger color isn't as orangey as the other images, and there's waste around the image^^ The shoulder ginger would also be a little more broken up, as per the KP, and perhaps try to brighten the white —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 02:23, 6/17/2018

re-up gonna tweak that shading later ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<22:38, 6/17/2018>

Could you define the shading on the paws and shoulder? —spooky ^{is that... a furry cat?!?} 14:53, 6/18/2018

re-up ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<23:58, 6/20/2018>

The paws seem a little too gray.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 00:02, 6/21/2018

re-up ♥ Star _{red and black ♥}<00:04, 6/21/2018>

24 hours. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 02:07, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) ~ Tweaked

OA was Berry. Tweaked by Hawkmask121. Tweaked to bring up the white more onto the shoulder to match the apprentice I think? Vec ^{I am Iron Man! 👾} 19:29, June 21, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours.—Broken_Foot^{⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐} 03:20, 6/24/2018