Talk: World/Archive 17

Revision as of 02:53, 6 January 2012

FA December 2011

Last discussion took a while, so I'm starting this discussion earlier. As suggested last time, BloodClan seems like the best choice., but I'm open to other suggestions. Opinions, anyone? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:27, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I liked the sounds of LeopardClan :) Swee tfl ower 12:24, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still in support of BloodClan. xD Its longer than LeopardClan, and...I nominated it. :P ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:23, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm in favor of BloodClan. Especially since I pretty much promised that last time. XD Anyone else? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 02:29, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, BloodClan's pretty good. I support BloodClan. User:OwlXGlitter4EVER/Sig 09:01, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is everyone against what I suggest? :P Just kidding. Ok, I'll go with BloodClan. Hopefully LeopardClan next month x3. Swee tfl ower 12:08, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, it'll probably be BloodClan, then. One more day for opinions, and either Mistystar or I will put the vote up. Also, let's try not to reserve articles for the next month already. We should be focused on this month's FA. I realize I am guilty as charged here as I did that last time, but I'll strive not to let that happen again. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 01:12, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:14, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! Wow, I never thought I'd see the day with 4 votes up at the same time in PW! Even if only for a minute. XD ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 04:30, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Join Request~FerretclawLover

I can edit HERE too?! Well i'm going to join here as well :) FerretclawLover 16:54, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great, I'll add you in! Welcome to Project World! Read the Guidelines for any questions. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:56, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome to the project! Swee tfl ower01:13 Sat Dec 17

Join Request ~ Dazzlewing

Mmm, I need to join another project. This looks ideal. :) So, may I join? Daz zy 09:13, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! Make sure to look at the Guidelines and I hope you turn out to be a valuable member of the project! I'll add you in. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 20:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

The Owl Tree ~ Silver Nomination Declined

Well, I added some refs and yeah. I'm pretty sure this fits the guidelines. Any who, comments? Swee tfl ower23:31 Mon Dec 26

I'm sorry, Sweet, but this article needs a lot of work. It follows the Guidelines, but I'm pretty sure the history needs major expanding. There are only two real references to cite anything, and there's even a Template:Cite reference. This will have to be declined. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Join Request ~ Moonflight Of SkyClan

I would love to join! I have read all of the books and know I can help you guys! User:Moonflight Of SkyClan/Sig

I made a new section. Swee tfl ower22:14 Sun Dec 18

And we would love to have you! :D Make sure to look at the Guidelines before nominating any pages, and welcome to Project World! ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:18, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome to the project! Swee tfl ower17:22 Wed Dec 21

Thank you! =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig

Category: Clans

I would like to suggest that the be renamed as Category:Clans/Groups. In my opinion, this would better categorize, and fit in with the Guidelines more. Fitting in with the Guidelines is important to be able to directly find any PW article under the category. Comments? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 05:51, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

In addition, all the other PW Categories fit the Guidelines, so I'm pretty sure this is needed. I'd just like to consult with fellow members of PW first. ;) ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 05:53, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. I don't really like the fact that there is a / between clans and groups, is there a better word that can cover both things? ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}23:41, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

I don't think so... I was just thinking Clans/Groups. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:48, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

That's okay, it was just.. kinda.. bugging me.

No, if you have a better idea, I'm all ears, but I certainly can't think of anything. Please sign with your signature. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. If there are no objections, this category will be renamed. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:52, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'll go about renaming it. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 04:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And I'll delete the page. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 04:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Everything's been deleted/moved, so this will now be archived. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:15, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

FA January 2012

Since PC has started discussion on this, we might as well do too. We have many completed articles, so there are a lot of choices to choose from. Recently, this project has been pretty inactive, so we haven't particularly worked on anything. Suggestions? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

LeopardClan? Swee tfl ower00:11 Tue Dec 6

I think we need a break from nominating Clans now. :P Our last two have been Clans. Prophecies and Omens looks amazing right now, so I would highly suggest that. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darnn! But I'm ok with that. Swee tfl ower00:32 Tue Dec 6

Also, Prophecies and Omens seems like a "new year" type thing to nominate, so yeah... XD ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:37, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Prophecies and Omens is great! I was thinking about that too. I'm sure LeopardClan would be featured next month, I was hoping to see it become FA too. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}05:57, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

I support Prophecies and Omens as well. :D If no one comments, we can put up the vote in a few days. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:16, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but lets see if anyone has anything else to suggest. Also, DJCandyBud, I know you weren't here when I said this so I don't blame you, but let's please try not to reserve any articles for feature next month already, ok? We should be focused on this month and not reserve any articles. Everyone should have a chance to discuss what they think the next FA should be, so we shouldn't put dibs on anything already. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 01:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay, I understand. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}08:22, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

CBV? Still open for comments though. :3 ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 01:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! Comments are still welcomed. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 04:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Join Request ~ Mistypebble

Hi! I was wondering if I could join? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 06:17, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry I didn't add you in sooner. Of course you can join! I'll add you in, and make sure to look at the Guidelines before nominating any pages. Welcome to the project! ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 21:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome to the project! Swee tfl ower21:59 Wed Dec 28

Thank you! ^-^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:10, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome to PW Misty! ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}01:57, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Yay! Welcome Misty! :D -- Stoneclaw 17:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Leaving

I've decided to leave this wiki....if you want to know why, look at my userpage. ❋Rai ney 10:19, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Aw! Bye Rainwillow :( Swee tfl ower19:03 Thu Dec 29

( ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}00:07, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

All the best, Rainy! I'll remove you from the project. PW won't forget all that you've done for it. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:54, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Joining

I'd like to join this project, if possible. Just DanceGonna be okay...

Of course! PW would love to have you. Take a look at the Guidelines before nominating pages, and I'll add you in. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 02:05, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! Just DanceGonna be okay...

Moonshine78999 - Join Request

Hi I am Moonshine78999. I would love to join :)—.neha^{it's that gloom boy season.}14:25, December 31, 2011 (UTC)Moonshine

Made a new heading for you. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}00:50, Sun, Jan, 1, 2012

Great! I'll add you in. Remember to look at the Guidelines before nominating pages, and I'm sure you'll be a valuable member of this project. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 02:07, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tunnelers - Silver Nomination Declined

I expanded the history, added cites, and added different sections. I also got rid of the "Qualifications" section, as it seemed to little to be a section. I also wasn't quite sure what categories should be added...Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 07:56, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I added a "See Also" section leading to The Tunnels. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 08:13, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

This will have to be declined for now. It doesn't follow the Guidelines for Ranks and Positions. Sorry, Twilightheart. :( But I'm sure if you rearrange the page a bit and add some more info and cites, you can quickly nominate it for silver again, ok? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 21:02, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cow - Silver Nomination

Mmm, I'm proud of this article. I hope this falls under the guidlines. Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}00:09, Sat, Dec, 10, 2011

Nice job! I'm so proud when users actually work on pages to nominate them for the project. =) It needs a little more work, though. Can you expand the Introduction? Also, the Description section looks good, but it needs to be more of a research paper based on facts, not on what the cats think they look like. For help, see Rat, Sheep, or Wolf. The stuff you have in the description now can be scattered throughout the history. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 01:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the ~~history~~ description, I'll get onto expanding the intro. Does the introduction need to have facts too? I've seen other creature article with facts in the introduction. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}08:03, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

No, the intro doesn't have to have facts, but it could. Like right now, the intro sentence would work. It would just need a little more expanding. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 19:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Is this better for the intro? ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}06:01, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

Yes, that's fine. Is Scribd a valid reference? It sounds like a place where anyone can make a Presentation about a topic. Also, Wiki Answers is NOT a trusted source to reference to. Instead, I highly recommend this website: http://animaldiversity.ummz.umich.edu/site/accounts/information/Bos_taurus.html. We have used it on pretty much all the silver Creature Articles, and I would like it if this article used it as well. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 02:00, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Something like this better? I know the description needs expanding. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}23:04, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Yes, sources look a lot better. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Sunset. Swee tfl ower17:15 Sat Dec 17

Did cows appear in Sunset, because i'm not sure if they did or did you mean Sunrise? ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}05:48, Tue, Dec, 20, 2011

Weren't the cows also told to be brown or so? If they weren't, I believe the image should have black and white cows, it just makes more sense. Stoneclaw 00:39, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I guess that's an ok idea... I don't really have an opinion about it. Stoneclaw, can you find a good black and white cow picture that's an exact square? If so, put the link on, and I'll see if it's ok. Also, I'm sure Sweetflower meant Sunrise, as cows aren't meant at all in Sunset. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is the best one I could find... [1]

Oops, bad link, [2]

It's not a square. It's 375x500. The image needs to be a square to fit into the template. Also, please sign with your signature. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:20, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, you know what? There's lots of grass on the bottom. I'll crop it. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:25, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh, I forgot to sign. Dx Stoneclaw 03:28, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

~~Is it up to me to add the new picture to the page. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}06:13, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011~~

Expanded Sunrise ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}03:20, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

The Description does still need expanding. The other descriptions of the creature pages are 2-4 detailed paragraphs. ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:42, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Squirrelflame fro the link, that helped me a lot. Now I love this article. Expanded description. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}01:04, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Oh my gosh, this looks amazing now! I cut the references down a little. If everything in the paragraph is cited by the same source, you can just cite at the end of the paragraph. ;) Other than that, the Description looks great. Is it possible to expand the Relation to cats more? If not, it's fine. :) ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 01:09, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if I can. since they don't have very many apperances, and when they do appear they don't give much of a giveaway on their nature to cats. I'll try though. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}00:05, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Go ahead and try. If it's not possible, leave a message on the talk page, and we'll see about CBVing it. =) ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the Relation to Clan Cats by, one short paragraph. Otherwise, there's nothing else I can really do because of their short appearances. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}23:58, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Looks great! The first time I've said this in a while: CBV? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:39, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 02:52, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Rockpile ~ Silver Nomination

I've expanded the article from one small paragraph in each history section to...5 huge paragraphs in each book, so I'm proud of it. xD I also found a reference for the top description. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:30, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

And I've added a description and references for it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this looks amazing! I can tell you've put a lot of work into it. ;) Has the Rockpile been mentioned in The Rescue or Beyond the Code? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 03:17, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

They aren't mentioned by name in The Rescue, and the pictures don't prove anything. Can someone with Beyond the Code check? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:50, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I have BTC and i could check for you. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}10:02, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

That would be great! Thanks so much. =) ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:59, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The rockpile is not named in BTC, and the pictures don't prove anything :/ so it would be the same as The Rescue, I'm assuming. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{^{I do enjoy fun...8D}}02:01, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Thanks a lot, DJ. Yes, it'll stand the same as The Rescue. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 03:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good then! Any other comments? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 04:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? ☀S q u i r r e l F l a m e 2 9☀ ^{Defying the Darkness} 00:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)