Talk: World/Archive 30

The broken nest - Gold Nomination[]

Re-nominating for gold status. --Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 21:49, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

CBV? —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 17:30, February 26, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 05:28, March 15, 2020 (UTC)

Horse - Gold Nomination[]

--Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 03:48, February 23, 2020 (UTC)

CBV? —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 17:30, February 26, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 05:28, March 15, 2020 (UTC)

Exile page[]

So many characters have been banished over the books, do you think there should a page spefically explaining this event? If no one has time to write it up, I'll be able to do it myself. Mellowix (talk) 19:23, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Request[]

Could I join this project? Jayfeather1000 (talk) 01:07, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Of course! I've added you in, make sure to read the guidelines, and welcome to the project! — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:48, 23/1/2020)

Battle against BloodClan - Gold Nomination[]

This was almost a complete rewrite because of the general style of the article? Also, the Downgraded doc suggests adding a legacy section - would love to add one, but, I'm drawing blanks for what to write for it? (Same with a strategy section too, but, that one I feel almost isn't needed?) — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:48, 23/1/2020)

I'm quite late, but for legacy section, perhaps mention how it's remembered in the modern-day Clans and the handful of times it was (probably) mentioned, etc. Strategy section can be nulled imo, I don't see a whole lot of point to it. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 17:30, February 26, 2020 (UTC)

updated love having very little motivation — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (04:28, 03/3/2020)

CBV? —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 05:32, March 15, 2020 (UTC)

Battle against the Sisters ~ Silver Nomination[]

And with that, I'm never picking up SqH again. ♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<02:11, 4/01/2020>

Is pretty underlinked. Most of the characters, PW articles - all of it.
There is several instances of this; the comma should come before the ref.
Throughout, there's a lot of double referencing. All of that goes to the same [23]; it only needs the one, and then add another when the wording calls to reference to something different. No need to keep citing it within itself.
I don't really think having a 'Characters' section for Mistystar and Harestar is relevant, with how little content it does have.
I think a good bit of the quotes can be merged into the characters sections, as well as the chapter 10 one into the premise.—spooky ^{is that...}^{a furry cat?!?} 02:22, 4/01/2020

updated ♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<22:44, 4/03/2020>

poke ♥ S t a r _{red _and} _black _♥<04:34, 4/11/2020>

lmao sorry star, CBV? —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 04:56, April 11, 2020 (UTC)

Archiving — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (01:20, 20/4/2020)

Join[]

Um, hi. The page says that I can request to join in the talk page, so may I join? I enjoy working with the different aspects of the warriors world, and I don’t like the fact that so many aren’t covered much on the wiki. Autumnfrost547 20:23, April 1, 2020 (UTC)

Of course! I've added you in, be sure to read the guidelines, and welcome to the project! If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask :D — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (21:48, 01/4/2020)

Sunningrocks - Gold nomination[]

Downgraded to bronze for a whole lotta reasons. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:00, 23/4/2020)

CBV? Sorry this took so long max lol —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 04:42, May 22, 2020 (UTC)

Archived. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 02:08, June 16, 2020 (UTC)

Place of No Stars Identifier (Spoilers for TBC Book #5)[]

So with the release of book 5's title, the Place of No Stars, the article of the place itself will need to be renamed for disambiguation. Happy to hear all suggestions for what the The Place of No Stars (identifier) should be; going to put The Place of No Stars (residence) as a suggestion (thanks David!). Thoughts? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (21:14, 21/5/2020)

I agree it should be moved to that; makes the most sense. --Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind () 21:20, May 21, 2020 (UTC)

I agree with above. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 04:21, May 22, 2020 (UTC)

Above works best, concurred.

—Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 04:42, May 22, 2020 (UTC)

Any further comments before this is implemented? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (09:56, 15/6/2020)

yes! it's not of critique, don't worry haha- I can help out with re-linking pages to the residence page instead of the disambig page? -Hopewish ^{a dream is a wish your heart makes} 18:40, June 15, 2020 (UTC)

The majority of the work will most likely be done by a mass edit since it’s so massive, but feel free to catch the stuff it missed since that’s bound to happen ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 18:48, June 15, 2020 (UTC)

Seeing how we're all in agreement, I'll be archiving this. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 02:08, June 16, 2020 (UTC)

Join[]

Can I join? ~Coral flame ^{暗黒 ^絶望}03:51, June 13, 2020 (UTC)

Of course! I've added you in, be sure to read the guidelines, and welcome to the project! If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask :D — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (09:56, 15/6/2020)

Carrionplace - Gold Nomination[]

Fixed up issues from Downgrade PDF; plus added in history/neatened it up a whole bunch. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (05:43, 21/6/2020)

CBV? (Only doing this as its almost been a month :< ) — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (04:05, 17/7/2020)

hi[]

can i join the project? i'm new to the wiki so sorry if something is wrong.

Person Who Ships Moonbli (talk) 05:32, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

Beaver - Gold Nomination[]

Downgraded from Silver; expanded TFA section + cleaned up other areas such as cites. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (09:13, 27/7/2020)

Joining[]

Hi, can I join this project? I have nothing to do so I need some editing business. ~ Fawn ^Happy ^Times() --236stars 08:46, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Quotes on Battle with BloodClan[]

Seeing the quotes on Battle against BloodClan makes me wonder if all PW articles were to have quotes in their descriptions. It's the only PW Article with quotes implemented into the text body and not just at the bottom quotes tab; is this something all articles should receive? —Echo belle ♡ ^{we cast off tomorrow!} (22:55, 8/26/2020)

"It's the only PW Article with quotes implemented into the text body" it isn't? Battle for ShadowClan (VoS), Battle of the border, Battle against the Sisters, Battle against the badgers (TNP), and The Sisters have it. It's more of a recent style addition but to say it's the only one is just blatantly false. It's not a requirement for an article to have it though, but it isn't doing anything bad by having them there. Max also put quite a lot of work into the Battle against BloodClan, so it looks quite rude that the quotes were simply removed without even being consulted.

If the maker of an article wants to have them there, they're allowed to do so and I encourage them since it, in my opinion, makes the article a bit nicer. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 23:10, August 26, 2020 (UTC)

All I did was ask a question, and the wiki is free to edit on. I was just trying to ask if it was something we should implement into every article since I agree it looks nicer that way. I apologize if anyone saw this question as an attack on them. —Echo belle ♡ ^{we cast off tomorrow!} (23:17, 8/26/2020)

All right, so the answer is clearly directed at me. I went through a whole 42 articles of Events, and only 4 articles of those events have quotes. Once I looked at the Guidelines for articles, the guidelines had a set section for quotes. Nothing about it stated any quotes in the article.

I actually find it somewhat of a rude response. I did not even know that Max wrote the article for that. I was simply editing it because I saw grammar mistakes and redundancy, and as I have been an active contributor of PW who never saw quotes in articles like that, I removed them. I apologize if anyone saw that as offensive, but since it is not seen that often, that is why I removed them, since it seemed they better belonged in the Quotes section than on the sections themselves.

In addition, I also write the Battle against the Badgers in Twilight. I did not add those quotes. Someone else did. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 23:21, August 26, 2020 (UTC)

If anything, Thunder was irked; I don't find their answer rude, just firm and a bit tense, and correcting your stance that none of the other articles have quotes. They are limited in number, yes, but they do exist. But then again, Max is PW deputy, and they did say the quotes were fine. There's nothing wrong with them there, and it is a relatively new style for them to be added, so you were unaware. Which is fine.

PW is often an overlooked project and it has been slow to refine its content, which is most likely the reason the others do no have quotes on them. Which, in addition to the lack of updated guidelines, which I know is a problem throughout the wiki, but that is a valid point Icy has brought up. But it probably would've been better if you asked earlier, either on Discord, here, or on Max's talk page maybe, instead of jumping the gun and assuming the quotes were unwarranted. But I can see your thought process, Icy.

As to answer Echo's original question, should all of them have quotes throughout the article, in a way, yes imo. They do supplement the article throughout and immerse the reader, but I wouldn't say it's a requirement. Moreso a supplement, and they shouldn't be removed if they are there in the first place. Maybe to replace the quote for a better one, sure, but not removed. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 23:36, August 26, 2020 (UTC)

Regardless of intent, I don't quite appreciate being met with such a tense response when I literally suggested that we should implement them into existing articles. I wasn't questioning the validity of them in the slightest. If need be, I'd love to help out with implementing quotes into current and future PW articles if the manpower is needed, though. —Echo belle ♡ ^{we cast off tomorrow!} (23:43, 8/26/2020)

Again, I was unaware of who wrote the article, so if I offended anyone by changing where the quotes were, I apologize. However, quotes on World articles do sound like a good idea, as long as there is a balance between what is on the sections and what is in the quote section on itself - as long as either a completely revamped guidelines or at least an altered guideline section. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 23:44, August 26, 2020 (UTC)

The Sisters ~ Silver Nomination[]

Forgot I wrote this lol

—Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 22:22, March 26, 2020 (UTC)

CBV? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (21:22, 02/4/2020)

So not to suck; but, could you add any further information/appearances from the more recent books - such as Tree's Roots and possibly VoS? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (23:11, 13/4/2020)

Took me a while but I got that done lmao.

—Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 04:21, September 9, 2020 (UTC)

CBV? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:40, 22/9/2020)

Dog - Silver Nomination[]

~Ripple ☆ 20:08, June 14, 2020 (UTC)

Make sure to check over for any out-of-universe language such as "In the prologue". Also make sure the order of sections complies with how Project Character lays them out, as it should be the same formatting.

I'm also of the opinion that some of sections with two paragraphs that are single sentences, could be combined as well. Some of those sections could also possibly use some expanding, such as Rise of Scourge because the dogs in that manga played more of a role, from memory.

You can also remove the "Inuse" template as well. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (09:55, 15/6/2020)

updated. i checked TRoS's article and i don't see anymore dog appearances. --~Ripple ☆ 22:02, June 15, 2020 (UTC)

I'd recommend combing through the article again, as some of the oou language is still prevalent. Also, as listed on the project's main page - this article is in need of an expansion, and I believe some sections, most notably A Dangerous Path could use a serious look at due to the plot of the book.

I'd also recommend looking through the actual books themselves instead of looking at the book summaries - as some, like TRoS, are themselves, in need of updates and such to match with current standards. Also double-check links and such, as this article could use some more linkage as well (from moving the sections down/around). — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (09:15, 16/6/2020)

updated. ~Ripple ☆ 17:16, July 5, 2020 (UTC)

Pretty much all of my previous comments stand, and there shouldn't really be any {{CS}} on the article as it should have finished sections for a nomination. In short, the majority of the article needs expansion still and its also still underlinked. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (04:05, 17/7/2020)

Still working, Ripple? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (00:27, 11/9/2020)

Warrior Cats website ~ Silver Nomination[]

A little project of mine. Since the website is wildly different compared to the prior one, I figured it deserved its own reference article. I couldn't exactly remember when the website was first published except sometime in January, so if anyone can find a better reference, that's be great! I also maybe went a little overboard with the backup links, but with the website's tendency to delete stuff in the past, I wanted to make sure we had things documented. I also tried to cover everything they had to offer, but if I missed anything, let me know! Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 04:31, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

CBV? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:40, 22/9/2020)

Natural disasters ~ Silver Nomination[]

I completely revamped the page; I expanded, updated and added information from the books. I did my best to elaborate on the signs that lead to the disaster, what happened, who was affected, and what happened afterwards. Sometimes disasters can have effects outside of the physical destruction, such as prey being scarce, and I did my best to include those. I also added the images and I wasn't sure if those were better off to be included throughout the article or not.

I wasn't sure what to do with Cats of the Clans or TUG since those just breeze over prior disasters (like Mudclaw's death). I also included "space phenomenons" to better include the eclipseand the shooting stars, seemed like a good place to put them. Let me know if I missed any disasters, particularly in OotS and AVoS as I can't remember what else happened in those series. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:23, September 12, 2020 (UTC)

CBV? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:40, 22/9/2020)

Join[]

May I join please? —Sak ura ✧.* () Leopardpelt71 22:52, September 14, 2020 (UTC)

I've added you in! Welcome to the project - make sure you give the guidelines a read, and if you need a hand, feel free to ask any questions :D — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:45, 22/9/2020)

Dodge's group ~ Silver Nomination[]

Page was started, but not finished. Added the history section, added the description, and added quotes to finish it off. Added more known residents. Juniperclaw (talk) 05:44, October 4, 2020 (UTC)

That second paragraph in the description section, to me reads more like a little bit of the history. I think you could condense some of the information there up into the first paragraph and just cite to examples of how they treat outsiders from the group. Kind of like BloodClan's page, for example? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (05:15, 24/10/2020)

I think I got what you meant, not sure though? 05:52, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Stick's group ~ Silver Nomination[]

Page was started, but not finished. Added history section, added description, and added more quotes to finish it. Not sure if anything else needs to be added? Also added known and past residents. Similar to Dodge's group nom. Juniperclaw (talk) 05:44, October 4, 2020 (UTC)

Same as above, as I think you could just state their views on outsider cats and groups instead, to keep it nice and concise. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (05:15, 24/10/2020)

Same as above! 05:52, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Join request[]

Hi! Can I join this project? :) —Sleek fang^{The future is ours to decide}(15:38, 10/30/2020)

I've added you in! Be sure to read the guidelines, and welcome to Project World! —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 02:41, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

The rogues (SatS) - Silver nomination[]

I’m also planning on doing Journey to find SkyClan (TAQ) and Journey to the mountains (PoT). —Sleek fang^{The future is ours to decide}(16:30, 10/31/2020)

Can you cite the introductory sentence and expand the description beyond a single sentence please? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (17:36, 31/10/2020)

I cited it and expanded the description as much as I could; there’s not much to go off of here. —Sleek fang^{The future is ours to decide}(18:31, 10/31/2020)

Had a better look over this, now that it's not like 5 am for me lol.

Can you change the wording of the description so that it isn't exactly how the book states? I think another important thing you could add is that the leader clearly states that they don't know what the warrior code is. I also removed the cite from the infobox for the leader, as no other Clan/group pages have that in their infoboxes. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:18, 01/11/2020)

I’ve changed the wording in both cases. I tried to clearly state that the leader is asking them what the code is because he’s never heard of it. —Sleek fang^{The future is ours to decide}(19:36, 11/02/2020)

Join[]

Hey! Can I join this project? —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage()}

I've added you in! Be sure to read the guidelines, and welcome to Project World! — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:37, 18/12/2020)

Join Request[]

Hi! Can I join? Wolfstar ^{The Greatest Leader of ThunderClan} 03:40, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

I've added you in! Be sure to read the guidelines, and welcome to Project World! — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:37, 18/12/2020)

Journey to find SkyClan (FQ) rename?[]

Noticed this, and gave it a little bit of thought. Considering in Firestar's Quest', Firestar and Sandstorm moreso rebuild SkyClan instead of finding it; should this be renamed to Journey to rebuild SkyClan? Subsequently, the other Journey to find SkyClan would be renamed to the singular page as well, without the book identifier. Thoughts? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (21:49, 29/11/2020)

Makes sense to me. I agree that they should both be changed. —Sleek fang^{The future is ours to decide}(21:50, 11/29/2020)

Agreed, they are rebuilding SkyClan, not finding it. ~Coral flame ^{暗黒 ^絶望}21:51, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

Agreed. —Sak ura ✧.* (17:52, 1 December 2020 (UTC))

Agreeing, and this will also need to be taken out of the disambig page as well. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind (18:59, 12/01/2020)

Any further comments? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:37, 18/12/2020)

Warrior ceremony ~ Gold Nomination[]

I feel like this should have a gold nomination. I fixed a cite. —Sak ura ✧.* () 19:36, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Star, I would personally recommend working on this more than fixing a single cite. At first glance, its an article that's in need of some updates to fall in line with more our newer content. But, a Gold nomination should be an article that you've put all the hard work into, not single little fixes like this. Give me a day, or so, and I can leave some better feedback on what this article could have done to it, but I'm currently restricted to mobile on holiday. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (04:18, 17/10/2020)

Are you still planning on working on this Starry? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:37, 18/12/2020)

I could work on it if that's ok? —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(16:21, 18 December 2020 (UTC))}

I am not working on this —Sak ura ✧.* (16:47, 18 December 2020 (UTC))

If Star that Shimmers on Water doesn't plan on working on it, then you're free to finish it up, Doestrike. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 00:45, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

I'm probably not gonna be working on this; I haven't really touched it at all, and I don't foresee myself doing that. --Doestrike (talk) 15:33, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Battle against BloodClan (GV) - Silver Nomination[]

— m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (10:17, 02/12/2020)

Comments? —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 00:45, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

Location article revamp[]

So I completely forgot I had this idea, but I was messing around here with ideas for a new layout for the location specific articles. I thought maybe we could give some of our older articles, many of which have been downgraded due to their age and issues, a face lift with a newer layout that matches some of our character-centric stuff.

So, what are the projects thoughts on doing this? This is of course a mock-up, but the basic idea is that we have a main page with cites in a summarized history of the article in all the important arcs it appears in, and then we have the Pagename/History tab like our character pages. I also added in the appearances section, but that I'm not 100% about as technically everything is listed in the maps, but I dunno. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (05:56, 25/12/2020)

Agreed. These articles definitely need major upgrades to reflect our current standards, and what you have is fitting to that. We can most certainly improve these pages to be better. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind (06:08, 12/25/2020)

Worked on another couple examples of varying length and importance - Barley's farm and the Bonehill. The latter shows cites in the history, which I think for the purpose of PW location articles, would be beneficial as they do differ from PC articles and such. This would mean not every article will have to be done from the ground up, as a few are short enough not to be split. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (20:35, 26/12/2020)

For larger articles, especially the ones regarding the old forest, this sounds like a fantastic idea. I think the book mentions are fine if they actually appear/are mentioned in said book instead of being cited to the map. I also like having the cites throughout the page on the main article, as I think that is a key difference between PC and PW that should be kept. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 06:30, 6 January 2021 (UTC)

I agree with this. The articles could use an upgrade. —Sak ura ✧.* () 06:31, 6 January 2021 (UTC)

What I've wanted to say as already been said here, but agreed. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 05:21, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

I agree as well. ~Ripple ☆ 00:40, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

Any further comments, or suggestions before we proceed further? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:14, 18/1/2021)

Highstones/Moonstone split[]

I recall having a conversation at one point with someone about splitting these pages as with newer books and such, its clear that the two locations can be counted as separate. It would also make the history clean up a lot easier, and make it more central to each place as well as writing up the description sections. Thoughts on this one? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (05:56, 25/12/2020)

I agree with this. The Moonstone is just as an important place as Highstones and has enough information/appearances to count as a separate page. It would also help clean up the Highstones page. Av ^{Out of} ^{sight and} ^{out of} ^mind (06:09, 12/25/2020)

As per above. User:Star that Shimmers on Water/Sig2

Especially in Graystripe's Vow, it's pretty clear that the two locations are different places. —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(16:14, 25 December 2020 (UTC))}

The Moonstone is located...in the Highstones? I'm not sure, but yes regardless the two are considered different, or more like, they're two indivisual things in the warriors' heads...The history wouldn't be as mixed up in the two places, and it's clear they're counted as two different things. ~Coral flame ^{暗黒 ^絶望}00:09, 30 December 2020 (UTC)~

Sorry, that's what I meant, i worded that pretty poorly. —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(03:27, 30 December 2020 (UTC))}

Splitting the pages sounds like a lovely idea, especially since time has passed and the two do have extensive histories now I feel. Especially regarding GV. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 06:25, 6 January 2021 (UTC)

Concurred. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 05:21, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Any further comments? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:14, 18/1/2021)

Join[]

Could I join this project? -Lavender ^{^{A light}} ^{^{in the}} ^{^dark} 17:51, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Thundersnake - Silver Nomination[]

Started by Hurricanestar, finished by me and added a few cites, also finished up the history. ♡ Dharma ♡ «7:49, 1/18/21»

A couple little things:

Just a very minor thing the link for Silverpaths - could you make that [[Silverpath|Silverpaths]]?
If applicable, add a main quote, or at the very minimum, a quote to the history section?
As for the history section, can you also add some citations as PW articles should have them regardless, and per the lean towards adding such in an above discussion.
Also, the wording for the first sentences could be changed to read more in-universe, if that makes sense? Instead of what it currently is, maybe have it as "Ajax and Tigerheart find a Thundersnake, as the former explains to Tigerheart to jump in it before it closes."
That first paragraph is also very repetitive when it comes to the usage of names, maybe play around with that too.

— m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:10, 18/1/2021)

UpDaTeD ♡ Dharma ♡ «8:29, 1/18/21»

Could you add a cite to the last sentence in the history section? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (02:18, 20/1/2021)

Me is thinking that you can decapitalize (what a word) Lake, and add a comma after "After this experience" (2nd paragraph, Tigerheart's Shadow history)? —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(02:22, 20 January 2021 (UTC))}

Sorry, updated. ♡ Dharma ♡ «6:48, 1/27/21»

I haven't read Tigerheart's Shadow, but the verbiage used in the description on this page seems a little out of universe, such as calling things stations and carriages. I think those words could be removed, and that whole section could be written to properly convey series terms and whatnot. Also, the cite for the first two setences is the same page, and only needs to be used at the end of the second sentence. Twolegs and Twoleg den need linking at the first instances too. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (08:47, 27/1/2021)

Updated. ♡ Dharma ♡ «7:16, 1/29/21»

CBV? (so sorry Sun for the wait on this ;-;) — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (01:37, 27/2/2021)

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This is way overdue, but can i join? I forgot to ask before i posted here earlier. ♡ Dharma ♡ «2:20, 2/1/21»

Welcome, I've added you in! Be sure to read over the project guidelines and if you have any questions regarding the new formatting and such, don't be afraid to ask! — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (01:40, 27/2/2021)

Join[]

Hi! May I join this project? Hailsnow (talk) 11:59, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

Welcome, I've added you in! Be sure to read over the project guidelines and if you have any questions regarding the new formatting and such, don't be afraid to ask! — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (01:40, 27/2/2021)

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Hewo! Can I join this project? :> — Lucky ^{【Come to mine den!】}

Welcome, I've added you in! Be sure to read over the project guidelines and if you have any questions regarding the new formatting and such, don't be afraid to ask! — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (01:40, 27/2/2021)

Destruction of the SkyClan forest territory - Silver Nomination[]

Hi I finally finished this up. Not super familiar with world article standards so feedback is welcome. Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 02:13, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

I think the Summary and Description sections are well written. Nice job on those!
In the Characters section:
- For Cloudstar, the last cite is a book cite ([1]).
- For Redstar, the second cite is from an unknown book ([17]).
- Fawnstep's section needs citing.

—Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(23:18, 5 May 2021 (UTC))}

More of a comment. I'm quite a fan of implementing images onto World article subsections like you've done here. It's a nice touch and makes the page far more visually appealing, and might be something worth adding to the style guide. Excellent work Eggheart! —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 23:09, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

Updated! And thank you :) Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 00:44, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

This looks fantastic Egg, well done! One little thing, though it may be more of a aesthetic thing than anything; but Redstar's image, does it sit nicer when placed underneath the quote and changed to 200px? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (02:02, 09/5/2021)

Fixed! I agree that it looks a little better Eggheart!🐥^{A True Warrior} 20:36, 11 May 2021 (UTC)

Looks fantastic, Eggheart! CBV? —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 16:01, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Warrior Cats: Ultimate Edition ~ Silver Nomination[]

Hi I've been playing Roblox. I think I have everything, but honestly every time I hop into the game and run around, I find something new. Also thanks to Max for helping me during the release day and speed-ran to get that Sage badge. Let me know if any of the images are bad quality, I can try to get better angles and such; it took me a while to get the hang of it. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 04:40, 10 May 2021 (UTC)

Excellent work Vec! I can see you put a lot of time and effort into this. CBV? —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 16:09, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Join Request[]

Hi! I would love to join this project - may I be added? (: HalcyonDazee _{My Talk} 18:31, 24 July 2021 (UTC)

Of course! Be sure to read over the project guidelines and if you have any questions regarding the new formatting and such, feel free to ask! —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 01:43, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

Battle of the rebels ~ Silver Nomination[]

Forgot I finished this. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 05:54, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

I feel as though the bookspoiler could maybe be removed, given DW has since been released? Also, how do you feel about adding quotes to the Character sections? — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (02:20, 20/1/2021)

Idk if ur asking Thunder specifically, but this has quotes for character sections, and imo it makes the article better. —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(20:05, 20 January 2021 (UTC))}

"Battle of the rebels" does not make much sense. Perhaps rename it to Battle against the impostor? Also, capitalize Clanmate and Clan - there are instances in the article where they are not capitalized. It is also not "follow suite," it is "follow suit."

"The rebels consisted of ShadowClan, SkyClan, and several exiled cats as well as spies from ThunderClan, RiverClan, and WindClan." I would remove the "and" before "several exiled cats" - change it to "SkyClan, several exiled cats, as well as spies [...]" Edit: "as well" is not even needed. Just change "[...] SkyClan, several exiled cats, and spies].

Past and present tense changes in the "Aftermath." First, you have Bramblestar's section written in past and present. For example, "After possessing the corpse of ThunderClan's leader, Bramblestar, the impostor began issuing harsh punishments towards cats who he claimed had broken the notions of the warrior code." Then, the next sentence is "Several cats see a noticeable difference in his personality and demeanor. Suspicion grows after the impostor begins exiling cats and the revelation that Rootspring is able to see the true Bramblestar's ghost," in present tense. Then it switches to past tense again, and present in the next paragraph. Make sure the tense is consistent.

In general the article still has a problem with past and present tense. "Bristlefrost wonders if any new grudges were planted that day, and watches in horror as she sees the multitude of bodies who had perished in the fighting, knowing that although the battle was finished, it didn't feel like a better time, not while the true Bramblestar was still missing.[13]" ...change it to "it does not feel like a better time, not while the true Bramblestar is still missing."

Again here: "Lionblaze and Harestar then get into a fight. Although the two seemed evenly matched, Harestar's exhaustion from fighting before Lionblaze gave him a disadvantage." The first sentence seems choppy - I am sure there are better ways to reword it, and again you have the same issue of past - present tense.

"The impostor says his order again, and claims that he is their leader, they must do as he commands." Perhaps "repeat" is better than "says his order again."

"The alliance of ThunderClan, WindClan, and RiverClan marches onto ShadowClan territory." Into ShadowClan territory.

"Enraged, he demands Leafstar exile him." Change this to "he demands that Leafstar exile him," or "he orders Leafstar to exile him."

Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:55, 4 May 2021 (UTC)

I would like to add something else: I genuinely think this article needs to be renamed. "Battle of the []" is usually referred to locations, such as Battle of the Bulge, Battle of the Somme, Battle of Nagashino, Battle of Little Bighorn, etc. "Battle of the rebels" makes it sound like the rebels are being battled against. Since Bramblestar's impostor is the one being fought against, it really should be renamed to Battle against the impostor. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:58, 4 May 2021 (UTC)

Like Icy stated above, "Battle of the rebels" is very misleading on what it means. I second that it should be "Battle against the imposter" or something similar. —Echo belle ♡ ^{we cast off tomorrow!} (17:59, 5/05/2021)

Thanks for catching all that, I appreciate it. I've gone through what's been mentioned and fixed them, but I'm sure there's other problems which I will be dealing with later on. On the topic of the page's name, while I don't think it's entirely incorrect (the rebels were being fought against by the alliance of Clans), I concur a more appropriate name would suit it better. Though, I don't believe "Battle against the impostor" is best it seems a bit misleading as well, for the same reasons that were stated above. I think perhaps something like "Battle for ShadowClan" would be more acceptable, since the alliances of Clans were there to drive out ShadowClan, while the rebels were there to stop that from happening. I would love to hear other ideas if there's any, but I believe "Battle for ShadowClan" would be a more consistent title given the circumstances in the book. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 23:04, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

I do think Battle for ShadowClan is a good name, as there's also that skirmish where a band of rebels attack Bramblestar on TC territory (how Stemleaf dies), which by the way, I thought this page was describing that battle based on the title until I looked at the article myself. Battle of the impostor can be misleading as well, because like I said above, there was also that skirmish that heavily included the impostor. So yeah, I like "Battle for ShadowClan". —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(23:15, 6 May 2021 (UTC))}

For critiques:

Couple of linking things
- Clans can be linked to General Clan information.
- Cats can be linked.
- ThunderClan can be linked.
Cites 15 ([15]) and 2 ([2]) are book cites.
In all of the quotes, the apostrophes are different (they look like this "’" instead of this "'").

—Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(00:27, 7 May 2021 (UTC))}

Battle for ShadowClan might be good but there are more than one battle for ShadowClan in the books (Into the Wild comes to mind, and I have not read AVoS in a while, but I believe Darktail attacked ShadowClan's camp a few times, no? Correct me if I am wrong. I also believe there are more, but I cannot remember at the moment.) So, if we were to name it Battle for ShadowClan, it should probably be Battle for ShadowClan (VoS) unless we want to rename it to something more specific. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:28, 7 May 2021 (UTC)

I think Battle for ShadowClan (VoS) would be the wisest option, because I do believe you're right in that there were a few attacks on ShadowClan's camp before that (like Into the Wild, and a few times in AVoS I believe, and probably some other times I've forgotten). Using VoS as a distinguisher I think is specific enough given it was the only "battle" in that book as well. —Hrafnsmál ^The^{^raven's}^{^{^call}} 19:15, 8 May 2021 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan, then. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 20:35, 8 May 2021 (UTC)

Just adding that I think Battle for ShadowClan (VoS) works well, given what Thunder has stated. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (02:05, 09/5/2021)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 03:56, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

Join request[]

Hello I would like to join. Is that fine? Ice Shard le Icewing (talk) 15:04, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

I don't think this is ever going to be accepted- Ice Shard

Sorry this is late! I'll go ahead and add you as a member :) Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 03:56, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

Lights in the Mist (title) ~ Silver Nomination[]

Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 03:56, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 18:38, 22 May 2022 (UTC)

Scent markings[]

I honestly had no idea this page existed. I don't really think it's needed? Beyond any major edits since 2013, content that's covered here is already covered in the border page since borders are marked with scent marks. Seems like it crosses over heavily. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:28, 25 May 2022 (UTC)

Yeah I agree, no one's made any major edits in a while and it's already pretty much covered on the border page. I'm down for nuking it. —Døe strike^{chapsrubpage(20:54, 25 May 2022 (UTC))}

Nuke it, its just repeat information that is better listed elsewhere. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (04:47, 28/5/2022)

Archiving. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:58, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

Camp ~ Silver Nomination[]

Recently spruced this up and filled out each camp section with more details from recent books. I got what I could find, though sometimes it's nothing more than a few details or none at all. I also added most of the pictures back in 2019. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 18:33, 22 May 2022 (UTC)

Ignore this if you can't because I love this page and I can't think of much else, but is there possibly something from the books that could be used as a main quote? My only thought would be something from Into the Wild, but other than that nothing else springs to mind. — m ax ^{it is the real thing,} (04:49, 28/5/2022)

Reups How's that? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:59, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:59, 12 June 2022 (UTC)

Border ~ Silver Nomination[]

Updated cites, added information for SkyClan, StarClan/Dark Forest, and the Tribe. Gave the page some love. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:59, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:59, 12 June 2022 (UTC)

Battles ~ Silver Nomination[]

Added sections for Dawn of the Clans, AVoS, TBC, some of the SEs, novellas, and graphic novels, added the maps, and a list of cats who died in battles. Gave the whole page some love. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:59, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:59, 12 June 2022 (UTC)

Battle against Ashfur ~ Silver Nomination[]

Included the number of deaths from Ashfur overall but that can be removed when an Ashfur's tyranny page gets made eventually maybe. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:59, 12 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾}

Battle for ShadowClan (ITW) ~ Silver Nomination[]

For the battle in EFS and ITW, ties into Tyranny of Brokenstar Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:59, 12 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

"Other Disasters" Category[]

With One Eye's oppression becoming a page, I'm guessing the wiki will make more of them in future. If so, I think they could get their own unique category. I feel like they're too hidden under "Other disasters" and the name doesn't best describe them. I propose we call this category, 'Atrocities', for pages explaining violent events caused by animals against one another. (I say 'Animal' specifically, as there's a chance a page for Sharptooth or the Rat leader's slaughters might be created) Rilly mains (talk) 23:14, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for moving this to PW ^^ I was actually thinking of the same thing since I've been adding new events. If we look into what's in the category now--Brokenstar's tyranny, Mudclaw's rebellion, the shadowclan-skyclan conflict, One Eye's thing, the Kin's campaign, ShadowClan's and SkyClan's fall--I think the better word would probably be "conflicts", or "major conflicts"? Atrocities make it sound like cruelty, savagery, brutality. Like the worsts things to have ever happened. And while these events listed are bad things, they really seem like power struggles (both taking power and losing power) than things no one can imagine.

However, those two events you mentioned would make great articles ^^ The thing about wikis is that anyone is free to create and edit content providing they cite their information. Since PW is pretty slow and we have limited editors, if creating those articles is something you're interested in, feel free to make them! Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 23:37, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

I agree with Vec here. "Conflicts" would definitely be a better name than "atrocities". KittyLover22 (talk) 00:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

Wanna add that this was discussed by numerous editors during the Gathering (Discord meeting) and we agreed that "atrocities" sounded too harsh but "conflicts" would be better. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 16:00, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

Gonna go ahead and rename the category since this was largely discussed at the Gathering. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

Fire (TR) ~ Silver Nomination[]

nothing happened here but it led to so many significant things Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

Fire (RS) ~ Silver Nomination[]

On a fire roll Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

The sickness (TBS) ~ Silver Nomination[]

Spoke with Max and Thunder about the title and we all agreed that it's fine but if anyone else has any better ideas, I'm open to hearing them ^^ Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

One Eye's oppression ~ Silver Nomination[]

not a new book, sorry Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 19:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

Founding of the Clans ~ Silver Nomination[]

Eggheart started the page, wrote the top sections, and Gray Wing's section. It was a stub so I went ahead and completed the page. Figured it would also be interesting to add the beginnings of some of the Clan culture, like deputies, medicine cats, the warrior code, etc. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:38, 4 July 2022 (UTC)

Join Request[]

Can I join this project? I thought that I might as well join this project as well just to see vec cbving themself :p To ma to () 03:39, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi! Welcome. I'll add you in as a member and make sure to read our guidelines before participating. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 00:31, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

join request[]

may i join?Catperson21 the Kitsune (talk) 18:15, 29 June 2022 (UTC)

Hey, welcome! I'll add you in as a member and make sure to read the guidelines before participating! Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:41, 29 June 2022 (UTC)

Founding of the Clans ~ Silver Nomination[]

Eggheart started the page, wrote the top sections, and Gray Wing's section. It was a stub so I went ahead and completed the page. Figured it would also be interesting to add the beginnings of some of the Clan culture, like deputies, medicine cats, the warrior code, etc. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 15:03, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

CBV? Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 01:38, 4 July 2022 (UTC)

Join Request[]

Can I join this project? I thought that I might as well join this project as well just to see vec cbving themself :p To ma to () 03:39, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi! Welcome. I'll add you in as a member and make sure to read our guidelines before participating. Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 00:31, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

join request[]

may i join?Catperson21 the Kitsune (talk) 18:15, 29 June 2022 (UTC)

Hey, welcome! I'll add you in as a member and make sure to read the guidelines before participating! Vec ^{I am Iron Man!} ^{^👾} 22:41, 29 June 2022 (UTC)